| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 752 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 752 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "thundered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 743 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "come to the stones" | | 1 | "between" | | 2 | "inside" | | 3 | "wrong" | | 4 | "Not real. Not real." | | 5 | "shifted" | | 6 | "You." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 736 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Eva | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.889 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 743 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 18.58 | | std | 18.55 | | cv | 0.999 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "The faint pulse of warmth against her collarbone reminded her of the Heartstone's presence—its deep crimson glow barely visible beneath her shirt." | | 1 | "But that dream, the one that had rattled her awake at three in the morning, the one with the voice that wasn't a voice—*come to the stones*—had left her with a quiet, gnawing certainty that she needed to be here." | | 2 | "She checked her phone—no signal, not that she’d expected one here." | | 3 | "The display flickered; the time jumped from 11:37 to 11:42 in the span of a blink." | | 4 | "The air thickened, tasting of loam and something faintly metallic—blood or iron, she couldn’t tell." | | 5 | "Then—laughter." | | 6 | "Not from the stones, not from the trees—from *inside* them." | | 7 | "She had seen things in the Grove before—glimpses of movement, flickers of light—but nothing like this." | | 8 | "The shape took a step forward—no, not a step." | | 9 | "Then—a breath against the back of her neck." | | 10 | "Aurora whirled, fists raised, ready to strike at—" |
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| 92.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 745 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04832214765100671 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01476510067114094 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 8.95 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.792 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 50.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3614457831325301 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the stones, the unnatural" | | 1 | "Then a sound." | | 2 | "Just the night playing tricks." | | 3 | "Then—a breath against the back" | | 4 | "Then, from everywhere and nowhere" |
| | ratio | 0.072 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have come." | | 1 | "She checked her phone—no signal," | | 2 | "Her spine prickled." | | 3 | "She spun, flashlight jerking wildly" | | 4 | "she muttered, forcing her shoulders" | | 5 | "It was just the woods." | | 6 | "Her stomach turned to ice." | | 7 | "She had seen things in" | | 8 | "Her fingers trembled around the" | | 9 | "It *shifted*, blurring from one" | | 10 | "Her foot caught on a" | | 11 | "Her pulse still thundered in" | | 12 | "She didn't run." | | 13 | "She whispered the only question" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 90.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air in Richmond" | | 1 | "Brambles caught at her jeans," | | 2 | "The faint pulse of warmth" | | 3 | "She shouldn't have come." | | 4 | "The thought whispered through her" | | 5 | "The restaurant shift had ended" | | 6 | "The first oak came into" | | 7 | "The Fae Grove." | | 8 | "Aurora exhaled, watching her breath" | | 9 | "She checked her phone—no signal," | | 10 | "The display flickered; the time" | | 11 | "Time moved wrong in this" | | 12 | "The air thickened, tasting of" | | 13 | "The wildflowers Eva had once" | | 14 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" | | 15 | "A whisper of fabric, the" | | 16 | "Her spine prickled." | | 17 | "She spun, flashlight jerking wildly" | | 18 | "she muttered, forcing her shoulders" | | 19 | "It was just the woods." |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the laughter were" | | 1 | "Even in the dark, she" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "But that dream, the one that had rattled her awake at three in the morning, the one with the voice that wasn't a voice—*come to the stones*—had left her with a …" | | 1 | "A whisper of fabric, the lightest crunch of a footstep in grass that shouldn't have been able to hide anything taller than a buttercup." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |