Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFBGMZAZZF4XW4QB7YF30D

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.001266
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign hummed a low, steady note into the damp Soho evening, casting a sickly glow on the pavement below. *The Raven’s Nest*. Rory pushed through the heavy door, the weight of her delivery bag—still faintly smelling of sesame oil and five-spice—slung across her body. The familiar cloak of dimness inside was a relief. It smelled of old wood, polish, and the ghost of a thousand cigarettes, a scent that had seeped into the bones of the place long before the smoking ban. She wasn’t here for a delivery. Yu-Fei had closed up early for a family thing. Rory was here because the silence of her flat above the bar had begun to vibrate, filled with the phantom echoes of Evan’s voice and the hollow ring of her father’s expectations. The bar’s murmur was better. She slid onto a stool at the far end, away from the handful of early evening regulars nursing pints. The maps on the wall beside her showed coastlines that no longer existed, borders drawn and redrawn by dead men. She traced the line of the Welsh coast with her eyes, not letting herself think of Cardiff. “Whiskey. Whatever’s open,” she said to the broad back of the man at the taps. He moved with a deliberate, slightly uneven rhythm, the faint hitch in his step as he turned familiar. When he faced her, the glass in his capable hand, it wasn’t the usual part-time kid. It was Silas. His hazel eyes, usually scanning the room with detached calm, fixed on her. For a fraction of a second, something in them flickered—a rapid recalculation, like a satellite locking onto a new signal. He set the glass down with a soft *click* on the polished wood. “Aurora Carter,” he said. His voice was the same, a low rumble that carried without effort. “Or is it Rory these days?” “Rory,” she confirmed, her own voice sounding strangely thin in the thick air. She wrapped her fingers around the cool glass. “You’re behind the bar.” “Jenny called in sick. Seems the universe wanted me to be here tonight.” His gaze didn’t waver. He leaned his forearms on the bar, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. It was an old-fashioned gesture, one that invited confidence. From him, it felt like an interrogation technique. “Last I heard, you were buried in torts and precedents at Cardiff. Top of your class, your father said.” Rory took a sip of whiskey. It burned a clean, honest path down her throat. “Last I heard, you were retired.” “I am. This is retirement.” He gestured vaguely at the room. “Owning a bar is peaceful. No one tries to kill you over the correct change.” He said it lightly, but his eyes were still doing that assessing thing, taking in her worn sneakers, the functional black trousers, the faint line of the crescent scar on her left wrist where it rested on the bar. “You didn’t answer.” “I left.” The two words hung there, simple and utterly inadequate. “Cardiff?” “Law.” Silas was silent for a long moment. He pulled a cloth from beneath the bar and began wiping an already-clean section, his movements economical. “Your father’s heart must have broken.” “Among other things.” She couldn’t keep the brittleness out of her voice. She remembered Silas from a handful of tense, polite dinners—a friend of her father’s from his own university days, a man with a quiet, watchful presence that made her adolescent self instinctively wary. He’d asked her questions then, too. Not about school, but about what she *read*, what she thought about the news stories flashing on the television. He’d listened to her answers more carefully than her father ever had. “So you came to London,” Silas stated. “I came to London.” “To do what?” She met his eyes then. “I deliver takeaway for a Sichuan place in Chinatown. I live upstairs.” She nodded toward the ceiling. His eyebrows lifted a millimeter, the only sign of surprise. The cloth stilled. “I see.” “Do you?” The question was out before she could stop it, sharp with a challenge she hadn’t known she was holding. Silas considered her. He didn’t look offended. He looked interested. “The Aurora Carter I knew was a strategist. She played chess, not checkers. She could argue a prosecutor into a corner before she was sixteen. That girl doesn’t vanish. She adapts.” His eyes drifted to the delivery bag. “She uses her skills in different terrain.” A cold knot tightened in Rory’s stomach. He saw too much. It was why her father had liked him, and why she had feared him. “The terrain got complicated,” she said, looking down into the amber liquid in her glass. “Evan,” Silas said, the name a soft, precise detonation in the space between them. Her head snapped up. “How do you—?” “Your mother called me. After you left Cardiff. She was worried. She said you’d cut contact with everyone, but you’d mentioned an old friend of mine in London once. She asked me to… keep an eye out.” He said it plainly, without apology. “I didn’t look for you. That’s not my business unless you make it so. But I own the building. I know who rents my flat.” The humiliation was a hot wave, followed by a sharper spike of anger. They’d been talking about her. Plotting. Her mother’s gentle worry, Silas’s professional vigilance. It was a net she thought she’d escaped. “So this is what? A welfare check? Report back to Jennifer that her wayward daughter is drinking in a Soho bar instead of arguing in a court?” “This is two people who haven’t seen each other in years, talking in a bar,” he corrected, his voice calm. “The welfare check was six months ago, when you signed the lease. You seemed competent. Determined. A little haunted. You paid your deposit in cash and asked about the locks. I approved the application.” She deflated, the anger leaking away into a weary confusion. He’d known. All this time, he’d known she was here, just above his head, and he’d said nothing. Done nothing. “Why didn’t you say something?” “Why would I? You’d made a choice. A hard one, from the sound of it. You wanted a clean start. The least I could do was not be the ghost of your old life waiting in the lobby.” He finally poured a small whiskey for himself. “But since you’ve walked into my bar… how is the new terrain?” The laugh that escaped her was short and bitter. “It’s flat. And it pays in cash. And no one expects me to be brilliant. They just expect the food to be hot.” “And that’s enough?” “It has to be.” He studied her, his head tilted slightly. The grey streaks in his auburn hair were more pronounced under the bar lights. “You were always good at seeing the board, Aurora. All the pieces, all the moves ahead. It must be strange, only looking as far as the next street corner.” His words found the raw, hidden place. The constant, low-grade boredom of survival. The mind that used to dissect legal philosophies and historical paradoxes now mostly calculated tip percentages and bike routes. The terrifying freedom of it, which felt too much like falling. “It’s quiet,” she whispered, admitting it to the polished wood. “Quiet can be good. It lets you hear yourself think.” He paused. “But it can also get very loud.” She knew exactly what he meant. The quiet in her flat was already deafening. “Your father doesn’t know you’re here,” Silas said. It wasn’t a question. “No. And I’d prefer to keep it that way.” “He’s your father. He loves you. He’s also a barrister. He understands evidence, not retreat.” Silas sipped his drink. “He thinks you failed. You know you retreated. There’s a world of difference between those two things, but only one of you is living with it.” The weight of time, of the person she was supposed to be, pressed down on her. The cool, clever student was gone, replaced by this wary woman with a delivery bag and secrets. Silas saw both of them, the before and the after, and he didn’t flinch from either. There was no pity in his gaze, only a weary, knowing recognition. He’d changed too, she realized. The old knee injury, the limp—they were just the visible parts. The real retirement was in his eyes, the decision to tend a bar and watch the world from its shadows. “I’m not who I was,” she said, finally. “No,” he agreed. “But you’re not just who you seem to be, either. That’s often the way of it.” He pushed away from the bar, his signet ring scraping lightly on the wood. “The flat’s yours as long as you need it. The job at the Empress seems to suit you. But if you ever get tired of only seeing the next street corner… this old raven’s nest has a few maps left on the walls. Some of them even show interesting places.” He gave her a slow, barely-there nod, then moved down the bar to take an order from a new customer, his limp a soft, rhythmic tap against the floor. The conversation was over. Rory finished her whiskey, the warmth now sitting solidly in her chest. She looked at the maps again, the obsolete coastlines. She thought of her father’s disappointment, her mother’s worry, Evan’s towering rage, all reduced to distant coordinates on a chart she no longer used. She was here, in the quiet, in the dim light, a piece moved to a completely different board. She left a note under her glass—exact change, plus a tip—and slipped off the stool. As she passed him, Silas didn’t look up from the pint he was pulling, but his hand, the one with the ring, lifted slightly in a gesture that was neither farewell nor greeting, but simple acknowledgment. She pushed back out into the neon-green evening, the weight of the unseen years a little different now. Not lighter. Just more familiar.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He pushed away [away]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.46
leniency0.92
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.08
73.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1702
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"lightly"
count2
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
2"utterly"
3"carefully"
4"very"
5"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1702
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"determined"
count1
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"echoes"
4"traced"
5"scanning"
6"flickered"
7"stomach"
8"determined"
9"calculated"
10"rhythmic"
11"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1687
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"click"
2"read"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1124
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Evan2
Welsh1
Cardiff1
Silas11
Rory5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Evan"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Welsh"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an interrogation technique"
81.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.186
wordCount1687
matches
0"Not about school, but about what she *read*, what she thought about the news stori"
1"neither farewell nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean35.15
std26.45
cv0.753
sampleLengths
085
152
256
333
419
546
622
725
872
921
1068
1111
121
131
1430
1582
167
174
183
1922
2015
2121
2255
2340
2414
257
2668
2761
2854
2935
3058
3132
323
334
3450
3543
3610
3719
3814
3912
409
4145
4297
438
4483
4533
4663
4774
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was holding"
1"was pulling"
31.25% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences128
ratio0.039
matches
0"Rory pushed through the heavy door, the weight of her delivery bag—still faintly smelling of sesame oil and five-spice—slung across her body."
1"For a fraction of a second, something in them flickered—a rapid recalculation, like a satellite locking onto a new signal."
2"She remembered Silas from a handful of tense, polite dinners—a friend of her father’s from his own university days, a man with a quiet, watchful presence that made her adolescent self instinctively wary."
3"The old knee injury, the limp—they were just the visible parts."
4"She left a note under her glass—exact change, plus a tip—and slipped off the stool."
85.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1139
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"usual part-time kid."
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.046532045654082525
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.0228270412642669
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean13.18
std10.49
cv0.796
sampleLengths
022
13
222
39
429
56
69
732
85
919
1020
1117
1215
1318
1416
153
1613
1720
1813
194
2012
216
2213
238
244
2517
2619
279
288
2919
306
319
326
3311
3454
353
3611
371
381
397
4017
416
4212
4333
446
4519
4612
477
484
493
48.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners44
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Just more familiar."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences93
matches
0"It smelled of old wood,"
1"She wasn’t here for a"
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"She traced the line of"
4"she said to the broad"
5"He moved with a deliberate,"
6"It was Silas."
7"His hazel eyes, usually scanning"
8"He set the glass down"
9"His voice was the same,"
10"she confirmed, her own voice"
11"She wrapped her fingers around"
12"His gaze didn’t waver"
13"He leaned his forearms on"
14"It was an old-fashioned gesture,"
15"It burned a clean, honest"
16"He gestured vaguely at the"
17"He said it lightly, but"
18"He pulled a cloth from"
19"She couldn’t keep the brittleness"
ratio0.581
3.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences93
matches
0"The green neon sign hummed"
1"*The Raven’s Nest*."
2"Rory pushed through the heavy"
3"The familiar cloak of dimness"
4"It smelled of old wood,"
5"She wasn’t here for a"
6"Yu-Fei had closed up early"
7"Rory was here because the"
8"The bar’s murmur was better."
9"She slid onto a stool"
10"The maps on the wall"
11"She traced the line of"
12"she said to the broad"
13"He moved with a deliberate,"
14"It was Silas."
15"His hazel eyes, usually scanning"
16"He set the glass down"
17"His voice was the same,"
18"she confirmed, her own voice"
19"She wrapped her fingers around"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She remembered Silas from a handful of tense, polite dinners—a friend of her father’s from his own university days, a man with a quiet, watchful presence that m…"
1"The mind that used to dissect legal philosophies and historical paradoxes now mostly calculated tip percentages and bike routes."
2"The terrifying freedom of it, which felt too much like falling."
3"As she passed him, Silas didn’t look up from the pint he was pulling, but his hand, the one with the ring, lifted slightly in a gesture that was neither farewel…"
16.30% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she confirmed, her own voice sounding strangely thin in the thick air"
1"He said, but his eyes were still doing that assessing thing, taking in her worn sneakers, the functional black trousers, the faint line of the crescent scar on her left wrist where it rested on the bar"
2"he corrected, his voice calm"
3"she said, finally"
4"He pushed away, his signet ring scraping lightly on the wood"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she confirmed (confirm)"
1"Silas stated (state)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.26
leniency0.52
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.2
75.0197%