Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFBQDEFGF66C39B25FG0VJ

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Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.001946
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SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon crow cast its sickly light over the damp pavement, a beacon for the lost and the looking. Rory shouldered the heavy door of The Raven’s Nest open, the familiar scent of old wood, spilled ale, and Silas’s particular brand of lemon polish washing over her. It was a smell that had come to mean safety. It was her slow night, the deliveries for Yu-Fei having tapered off hours ago, and the silence of her flat above the bar had begun to feel less like peace and more like a vacuum. Down here, there was at least the low hum of life. A few regulars hunched over their glasses, the soft clack of a game of darts from the back, the low thrum of some forgotten blues record spinning on Silas’s antique player. She slid onto her usual stool at the far end of the polished mahogany, the one with a clear view of both exits and the street through the smudged front window. Silas was at the other end, polishing a glass with a slow, deliberate motion that spoke of a lifetime of measured movements. He gave her a slow, almost imperceptible nod, his hazel eyes missing nothing. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the low light as he set the glass down and began to make his way toward her, the faint, familiar hitch in his step a quiet percussion to the music. Before he could reach her, the door swung open again, letting in a burst of chilly night air and the distant wail of a siren. A man stood silhouetted against the light of the street, and something about the hesitant way he took a step inside, the slight squint as his eyes adjusted to the gloom, made Rory’s skin prickle. It was a posture from another life. Then he stepped fully into the light of a wall sconce, and the past sucker-punched her in the gut. Evan. But not the Evan she remembered. The boy she’d known had been all sharp angles and restless energy, a live wire with a quick, disarming smile that never quite reached his eyes. This man was softer, blurred at the edges. His hair, once a chaotic mess of dark curls, was shorter, tamer, threaded with the first hints of silver at the temples. There were new lines around his eyes, the kind carved by worry or disappointment, not laughter. He wore a sensible woollen coat, buttoned neatly, and his hands were shoved into the pockets as he scanned the room. He looked like a faded photograph of someone she’d once loved. His gaze swept over the dart players, the old men at the bar, and then landed on her. It took a second. A flicker of confusion, then a dawning, stunned recognition that mirrored her own. His mouth fell open slightly. “Laila?” he breathed, the old pet name a ghost in the quiet bar. Rory felt the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist twitch, a phantom pain from a long-ago fall from a tree he’d dared her to climb. She hadn’t been Laila in a long, long time. Silas had stopped his approach, his posture shifting from bartender to sentinel. He stood perfectly still behind the bar, a watchful statue, his eyes fixed on Evan. Rory gave a tiny, almost invisible shake of her head. *Stand down.* “Evan,” she said. Her voice was calm, cooler than she felt. It was the voice she used for difficult customers, for dodgy traffic, for packing a bag in the dead of night. “Fancy meeting you in a place like this. I thought you hated ‘dingy old pubs’.” He flinched almost imperceptibly at the echo of his own past judgment, then managed a weak smile. “People change.” He took a few tentative steps closer, stopping a prudent distance from her stool. “God, it’s really you. I heard you’d moved to London, but…” He trailed off, his eyes doing a quick inventory of her: the black hair, the worn leather jacket, the fact that she was sitting in this shadowy Soho bar like she owned the stool. “You look… well.” “I am well,” she said, and it was mostly true. She turned back to the bar, signalling to Silas that it was okay. After a beat, he resumed his journey, his limp more pronounced. He stopped in front of her. “The usual, Rory?” Silas asked, his voice a low rumble. He pointedly did not look at Evan. “Please, Si.” Evan’s eyebrows shot up at the familiar nickname, at the easy dynamic between her and this imposing, grey-streaked man. Silas poured two fingers of a good Scotch into a heavy-bottomed glass and slid it to her without a word before retreating to his end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy while maintaining his vigil. “Rory?” Evan repeated softly. He pulled out the stool next to her, the wood groaning in protest. “That’s new.” “It’s not,” she said, taking a sip. The whisky burned a clean, honest path down her throat. “It just wasn’t for you.” The words hung between them, blunt and heavy. He absorbed the blow, nodding slowly as he looked down at his own hands resting on the bar. “Fair enough.” He signaled to Silas for a pint. The silence stretched, filled with five years of absences, of words hurled and doors slammed, of frantic, whispered phone calls to Eva and a one-way train ticket clutched in a sweaty palm. “You look different,” he said finally, unable to bear the quiet. “So do you.” She turned to face him properly now. “The silver suits you. Makes you look distinguished.” He gave a short, humourless laugh. “Stress, more likely. Accountancy will do that to a man.” He said it like a confession, like he was admitting to a shameful disease. Rory almost smiled. Evan, an accountant. The boy who’d reviled his father’s steady, colourless jobing across Asia, of writing a novel, of living on his own terms. The ambition had been one of the things she’d loved, before it curdled into a different kind of entitlement. “It’s a steady job,” she said, noncommittally. “It is.” He accepted his pint from a stone-faced Silas. “Pays the mortgage. Lets me take the wife to Portugal for a week in the summer.” The word *wife* landed between them with a dull, leaden thud. She hadn’t known. Eva, her loyal intelligence operative, had apparently deemed that piece of information irrelevant to Rory’s new life. She felt a surge of gratitude for her friend. “Congratulations,” she said, and was surprised to find she meant it. She hoped, for the unnamed wife’s sake, that the steady job and the holidays in Portugal had sanded down his rougher edges. She hoped the hands that now clutched a pint glass had learned gentleness. “Yeah, thanks. Her name’s Chloe. She’s a primary school teacher.” He was watching her closely, looking for a reaction—a flinch, a sign of jealousy, anything. Rory just took another sip of whisky. “Sounds nice.” The conversation was like walking through a minefield in the dark. Every innocuous topic—the weather, London’s traffic, the cost of a pint—was booby-trapped with the explosives of their shared history. They talked in circles, two diplomats from opposing nations, carefully avoiding the disputed territories. He asked about her parents. She gave bland updates. She asked about his family. He offered polished, practised answers. The people they were now were making polite, awkward conversation. But the ghosts of the people they had been were screaming in the space between them. He finally gestured around the bar with his glass. “So, this is your local? Not really your scene, is it? I remember you liked those bright places with the big windows. All light and plants.” “I remember you liked dark rooms and drawn curtains,” she countered quietly. He had the decency to look ashamed. “I was an idiot.” “Yes,” she agreed softly. “You were.” The admission, and her acceptance of it, seemed to crack something open in him. The careful, accountant demeanour faltered. He looked tired. “I looked for you, you know. After. I went to your dad’s. He wouldn’t even come to the door. Just told me through the letterbox to piss off and never come back.” He attempted a smile. “He had a hell of a vocabulary for a barrister.” “He meant it,” Rory said, her father’s protective fury a warm memory. “I know.” Evan swirled the dregs of his beer. “I’m… God, Laila—Rory—I don’t even know how to say it. I’m so sorry. For all of it. The shouting. The… the grabbing. The horrible things I said. I wasn’t in control of myself. I was a different person.” The apology was here. The one she’d sometimes wondered if she’d ever get. It was five years too late, and it landed not with a sense of closure, but with a profound and weary sadness. It was an apology from a stranger about a boy who no longer existed, addressed to a girl who was also gone. “I know you were,” she said. “And I’m a different person too.” She finished her whisky, the glass making a final, decisive click on the wood. “That’s why I left. To make sure of it.” He nodded, his eyes glistening in the dim light. He looked like he might say more, might try to bridge the uncrossable distance between the ‘then’ and ‘now’, but the words wouldn’t come. There was too much wreckage. Some things couldn’t be rebuilt; they could only be marked on a map and avoided. He pulled out his wallet, left a tenner on the bar for his pint, and stood up. The movement was hesitant, awkward. “It was… it was really good to see you, Rory. Really. I’m glad you’re… you’re well.” “You too, Evan. Give my best to Chloe.” He gave a jerky nod, pulled his sensible coat tighter around him, and walked out of the Raven’s Nest, leaving the ghost of their past sitting at the bar. The green neon light flashed once across the closing door. Silas materialized again, picking up the empty whisky glass and the ten-pound note. He didn’t ask. He simply wiped down the space where Evan had been sitting, erasing the physical evidence of his presence. “Another?” he asked, his voice low. Rory looked at her reflection in the dark mirror behind the bottles. She saw the woman she’d built herself into, piece by careful piece. She saw the straight black hair, the steady blue eyes, the scar on her wrist. She saw resilience. “No,” she said, sliding off the stool. “I’m good.” She climbed the stairs to her flat, the sounds of the bar fading below her. The silence upstairs was no longer a vacuum. It was just silence. Hers. And for the first time in a long time, it felt entirely, completely peaceful.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Evan repeated softly [softly]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"she countered quietly [quietly]"
3"she agreed softly [softly]"
4"He looked like [like]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.595
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
69.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1832
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count4
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"really"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
5"carefully"
6"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1832
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"sentinel"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"imposing"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"measured"
4"gloom"
5"chaotic"
6"scanned"
7"flicker"
8"sentinel"
9"echo"
10"imposing"
11"sense of"
12"profound"
13"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences121
matches
0"A flicker of confusion"
1"was surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1817
ratio0.002
matches
0"Stand down."
1"wife"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1523
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Silas10
Yu-Fei1
Rory9
Evan9
Laila1
Soho1
Scotch1
Eva2
Asia1
Portugal1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Laila"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Asia"
2"Portugal"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a faded photograph of someone"
1"operative, had apparently deemed that piece o"
2"looked like he might say more, might try"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.55
wordCount1817
matches
0"not with a sense of closure, but with a profound"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"deemed that piece"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean36.34
std24.74
cv0.681
sampleLengths
058
177
2105
367
419
51
6110
740
813
935
1039
1147
1281
1340
1417
152
1657
1719
1830
1959
2011
2118
2230
2346
247
2526
2640
2746
2825
299
3044
3145
3235
3312
3411
356
3668
3712
3847
3957
4035
4153
4238
438
4439
4534
466
4742
489
4942
99.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"were shoved"
1"was surprised"
55.70% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs231
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was admitting"
2"was watching"
3"were making"
4"were screaming"
80.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences137
ratio0.022
matches
0"“Yeah, thanks. Her name’s Chloe. She’s a primary school teacher.” He was watching her closely, looking for a reaction—a flinch, a sign of jealousy, anything."
1"Every innocuous topic—the weather, London’s traffic, the cost of a pint—was booby-trapped with the explosives of their shared history."
2"Some things couldn’t be rebuilt; they could only be marked on a map and avoided."
81.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1544
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"past sucker-punched her"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
2"imposing, grey-streaked man."
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.04015544041450777
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.016191709844559584
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean13.26
std9.24
cv0.697
sampleLengths
020
128
210
335
411
531
631
722
813
939
1025
1135
127
1319
141
156
1626
178
1822
1916
2021
2111
2218
234
2413
255
2613
2726
289
2912
3015
3110
322
333
348
3521
3615
3717
3816
3945
403
4110
4213
4311
446
4510
467
472
4819
4938
40.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.30656934306569344
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners42
28.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Then he stepped fully into"
ratio0.009
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences116
matches
0"It was a smell that"
1"It was her slow night,"
2"She slid onto her usual"
3"He gave her a slow,"
4"It was a posture from"
5"His hair, once a chaotic"
6"He wore a sensible woollen"
7"He looked like a faded"
8"His gaze swept over the"
9"It took a second."
10"His mouth fell open slightly."
11"he breathed, the old pet"
12"She hadn’t been Laila in"
13"He stood perfectly still behind"
14"Her voice was calm, cooler"
15"It was the voice she"
16"He flinched almost imperceptibly at"
17"He took a few tentative"
18"He trailed off, his eyes"
19"she said, and it was"
ratio0.569
3.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences116
matches
0"The green neon crow cast"
1"Rory shouldered the heavy door"
2"It was a smell that"
3"It was her slow night,"
4"She slid onto her usual"
5"Silas was at the other"
6"He gave her a slow,"
7"The silver signet ring on"
8"A man stood silhouetted against"
9"It was a posture from"
10"The boy she’d known had"
11"This man was softer, blurred"
12"His hair, once a chaotic"
13"He wore a sensible woollen"
14"He looked like a faded"
15"His gaze swept over the"
16"It took a second."
17"A flicker of confusion, then"
18"His mouth fell open slightly."
19"he breathed, the old pet"
ratio0.914
43.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Before he could reach her,"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas was at the other end, polishing a glass with a slow, deliberate motion that spoke of a lifetime of measured movements."
1"A flicker of confusion, then a dawning, stunned recognition that mirrored her own."
2"The boy who’d reviled his father’s steady, colourless jobing across Asia, of writing a novel, of living on his own terms."
5.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas asked, his voice a low rumble"
1"he said finally, unable to bear the quiet"
2"she said, noncommittally"
3"Rory said, her father’s protective fury a warm memory"
4"She finished, the glass making a final, decisive click on the wood"
5"he asked, his voice low"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"Evan repeated softly (repeat)"
2"she agreed softly (agree)"
3"He looked like (look)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.19
74.2923%