Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFBRR62GJVX9ZZ6AJ5YQ32

Run Details

Duration:
44.0s
Cost:
$0.001706
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park hung heavy with mist as Aurora Carter stepped off the gravel path. The moonlight cast pale streaks across her face, illuminating her bright blue eyes and catching the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. The pendant pulsed faintly, a warmth against her skin that had drawn her here, though she couldn’t quite say why. She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist absently, a nervous habit she’d had since childhood. The stones rose before her, ancient and weathered, their surfaces etched with symbols she didn’t recognize. The oaks loomed like sentinels, their twisted branches clawing at the sky. Beyond them, the grove beckoned—a clearing bathed in an unnatural glow, where wildflowers bloomed despite the chill of late autumn. Rory hesitated at the boundary, her breath visible in the cold air. She shouldn’t be here. Not at night. Not alone. But the pendant’s warmth had grown insistent, almost urgent, and curiosity had always been her weakness. She stepped between the stones, the air shifting abruptly as she crossed the threshold. The mist thickened, muffling the sounds of the park until even her footsteps seemed swallowed by the silence. The temperature dropped sharply, and Rory pulled her jacket tighter, the fabric skimming over her shoulder-length black hair. The wildflowers swayed gently, though there was no wind, their petals unnaturally vibrant in the moonlight. A rustle came from the shadows to her left. Rory froze, her gaze darting toward the sound. Nothing moved, but the feeling of being watched prickled at the back of her neck. She shook it off, chiding herself. Just the wind, she thought, though she knew better. There was no wind here. The pendant’s warmth flared suddenly, its crimson gemstone glowing faintly. Rory touched it instinctively, the pulse steady against her fingertips. She stepped deeper into the grove, her eyes scanning the trees for movement. The shadows seemed to shift as she walked, flickering at the edges of her vision. She paused, her breath catching, and stared harder. Nothing. Just the trees and the flowers. A whisper brushed past her ear, so faint she might have imagined it. She turned sharply, her heart pounding. The clearing was empty, but the whisper came again, a word she couldn’t quite make out. Her chest tightened, and she forced herself to keep moving, her steps deliberate now. The pendant’s warmth grew hotter, almost uncomfortable, and she resisted the urge to pull it off. The grove stretched on, impossibly vast, the trees seeming to close in behind her. She glanced back, but the path was gone, swallowed by shadows. Her pulse quickened. She hadn’t walked that far. The rational part of her brain screamed to turn back, but her feet kept moving, drawn by something she couldn’t name. A low hum filled the air, vibrating through her bones. Rory stopped, her hands clenched at her sides. The sound was everywhere and nowhere, a steady thrum that made her skin crawl. She thought of Silas’s bar, the faint buzz of neon lights and the comforting clink of glasses. This was nothing like that. This was alive, a living sound that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant. “Hello?” she called, her voice trembling despite her best efforts. The grove swallowed the word, leaving only silence. She swallowed hard, her throat dry, and took another step forward. The whisper came again, louder this time. “Laila.” She froze, her blood turning to ice. No one had called her that name in years—not since her father had slipped it into her bedtime stories, a private joke between them. She hadn’t thought of it in ages. The pendant flared brighter, its glow casting faint shadows on the ground. She stared at the trees ahead, her breaths shallow. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt. The grove gave no answer. The air grew colder still, her breath frosting in front of her face. She turned slowly, her eyes scanning the shadows. The trees seemed closer now, their branches twisting unnaturally. She blinked, and for a moment, she thought she saw figures moving between them—tall and slender, their forms flickering like smoke. When she looked again, they were gone. The hum deepened, resonating in her chest. She pressed a hand to her sternum, the pendant burning against her skin. Her legs trembled, but she forced herself to stay rooted, her mind racing. Think, Rory. Out of the box. Always out of the box. The whisper came again, closer this time. “Laila.” She spun toward the sound, her heart hammering. “Stop it!” she shouted, her voice echoing strangely in the grove. The silence that followed was deafening, the hum cutting off abruptly. The pendant’s warmth faded, leaving her skin cold and clammy. She gripped it tightly, her knuckles white. Movement caught her eye—a flicker of light in the distance. She squinted, her pulse quickening. The light was faint, but it wasn’t moonlight. It was warm, golden, and it beckoned to her like a beacon. She hesitated, her instinct screaming to run, but her feet moved of their own accord, carrying her toward the light. The shadows thickened as she walked, the trees closing in around her. The whispers returned, soft and urgent, but she couldn’t make out the words. Her breath came in short gasps, the air growing thinner. The pendant remained cold against her chest, its glow extinguished. She clutched it anyway, a lifeline in the suffocating darkness. The light grew brighter, revealing a figure standing in the center of the clearing. Rory stopped dead, her blood running cold. The figure was tall and impossibly slender, its features blurred as though seen through a haze. It turned toward her, and she felt its gaze like a physical weight, pressing down on her chest. “You shouldn’t be here,” it said, its voice echoing with a resonance that made her ears ache. Its words were English, but they carried an accent she couldn’t place—something ancient and otherworldly. Rory opened her mouth to speak, but no sound came out. Her throat tightened, her lungs burning for air. The figure stepped closer, its movements smooth and unnerving. She tried to back away, but her legs wouldn’t obey. The whispers grew louder, a cacophony of voices she couldn’t understand. The figure reached out, its hand hovering inches from her face. The pendant flared suddenly, its warmth returning in a rush. The figure recoiled, its form flickering like a damaged film. The shadows around them seemed to shudder, the grove itself recoiling from the pendant’s light. Rory stumbled back, her legs finally responding. The whispers turned to screams, the hum returning with a deafening intensity. She turned and ran, her feet pounding against the ground. The trees blurred past her, their branches clawing at her jacket. She didn’t look back, didn’t stop, until she burst through the standing stones and into the park beyond. The mist cleared abruptly, the sounds of the city returning in a rush. Rory collapsed against a tree, her chest heaving, the pendant pulsing steadily against her skin. She clutched it tightly, its warmth grounding her. The grove loomed behind her, silent and still, its secrets hidden once more. She exhaled shakily, her hands trembling. Whatever had drawn her here, she wasn’t ready to face it. Not yet. She straightened slowly, her legs still unsteady, and turned toward the path that led back to Silas’s bar. The grove watched her go, its shadows shifting faintly in the moonlight.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
64.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"tightly"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"gently"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
4"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsms42
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count7
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count2
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"pulse"
count4
9
word"scanning"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count4
11
word"pounding"
count2
12
word"quickened"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count2
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"beacon"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"resonance"
count1
21
word"otherworldly"
count1
22
word"cacophony"
count1
23
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"etched"
3"loomed"
4"sentinels"
5"chill"
6"footsteps"
7"silence"
8"pulse"
9"scanning"
10"whisper"
11"pounding"
12"quickened"
13"comforting"
14"trembled"
15"racing"
16"echoing"
17"flicker"
18"beacon"
19"weight"
20"resonance"
21"otherworldly"
22"cacophony"
23"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1249
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1238
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora1
Carter1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory10
Silas2
English1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Pendant"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
22.45% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite say why"
1"seemed swallowed by the silence"
2"quite make out"
3"sound that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant"
4"seemed closer now, their branches twisting unnaturally"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1249
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
58.02% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean52.04
std18.37
cv0.353
sampleLengths
079
185
266
352
463
565
654
769
829
98
1059
1173
1244
138
1447
1555
1655
1755
1832
1949
2046
2158
2249
2349
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"was gone"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs236
matches
0"was deafening"
17.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences114
ratio0.044
matches
0"Beyond them, the grove beckoned—a clearing bathed in an unnatural glow, where wildflowers bloomed despite the chill of late autumn."
1"No one had called her that name in years—not since her father had slipped it into her bedtime stories, a private joke between them."
2"She blinked, and for a moment, she thought she saw figures moving between them—tall and slender, their forms flickering like smoke."
3"Movement caught her eye—a flicker of light in the distance."
4"Its words were English, but they carried an accent she couldn’t place—something ancient and otherworldly."
94.94% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1245
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04417670682730924
lyAdverbCount27
lyAdverbRatio0.021686746987951807
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean10.96
std5.02
cv0.458
sampleLengths
017
125
220
317
416
512
620
712
84
93
102
1116
1214
1318
1418
1516
169
178
1815
196
209
215
2210
2310
2413
2515
268
271
286
2913
306
3116
3214
3316
3414
3511
363
375
3821
3910
408
4114
4217
435
4415
4510
468
4711
487
491
36.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.22807017543859648
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners26
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"Just the wind, she thought,"
1"Just the trees and the"
2"Always out of the box."
ratio0.028
71.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences108
matches
0"She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
1"She shouldn’t be here."
2"She stepped between the stones,"
3"She shook it off, chiding"
4"She stepped deeper into the"
5"She paused, her breath catching,"
6"She turned sharply, her heart"
7"Her chest tightened, and she"
8"She glanced back, but the"
9"Her pulse quickened."
10"She hadn’t walked that far."
11"She thought of Silas’s bar,"
12"she called, her voice trembling"
13"She swallowed hard, her throat"
14"She froze, her blood turning"
15"She hadn’t thought of it"
16"She stared at the trees"
17"she demanded, her voice steadier"
18"She turned slowly, her eyes"
19"She blinked, and for a"
ratio0.37
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences108
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"The moonlight cast pale streaks"
2"The pendant pulsed faintly, a"
3"She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
4"The stones rose before her,"
5"The oaks loomed like sentinels,"
6"Rory hesitated at the boundary,"
7"She shouldn’t be here."
8"She stepped between the stones,"
9"The mist thickened, muffling the"
10"The temperature dropped sharply, and"
11"The wildflowers swayed gently, though"
12"A rustle came from the"
13"Rory froze, her gaze darting"
14"Nothing moved, but the feeling"
15"She shook it off, chiding"
16"The pendant’s warmth flared suddenly,"
17"Rory touched it instinctively, the"
18"She stepped deeper into the"
19"The shadows seemed to shift"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The moonlight cast pale streaks across her face, illuminating her bright blue eyes and catching the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck."
1"She blinked, and for a moment, she thought she saw figures moving between them—tall and slender, their forms flickering like smoke."
2"Rory collapsed against a tree, her chest heaving, the pendant pulsing steadily against her skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called, her voice trembling despite her best efforts"
1"she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt"
2"she shouted, her voice echoing strangely in the grove"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
71.8514%