| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 760 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 760 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "lurching" | | 4 | "raced" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 744 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 723 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Eva | 7 | | Meet | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Walking | 1 | | Look | 1 | | Were | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Were" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.878 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 744 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 17.3 | | std | 14.51 | | cv | 0.839 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 9 |
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| 93.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "was closed" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "Were gone." |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.159 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant rested cool and heavy against her collarbone—no telltale warmth yet, but then, she wasn't close enough to the Grove." | | 1 | "Silas had been adamant: \"Don't go alone. Not when the veil's this thin.\" But Eva had texted that cryptic, urgent message—Meet me at the Grove." | | 2 | "Now—and Rory knew better than to ignore it." | | 3 | "The park was closed at this hour; no one should be wandering this deep." | | 4 | "That didn't make sense; the Grove was supposed to be brighter near the boundary, the wildflowers glowing under starlight." | | 5 | "Another sound—a wet, sliding noise, too deliberate for an animal." | | 6 | "Eva wouldn't—" | | 7 | "The face—if it was a face—was a blur of shifting shadows beneath a tangle of black hair." | | 8 | "She risked a glance back—" | | 9 | "Its fingers grazed her wrist—ice-cold—before she rolled and came up sprinting again." | | 10 | "And then, up ahead—the oak standing stones." | | 11 | "A crescent-shaped scar—just like the one from her childhood—glowed an angry red where the creature had touched her." | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed once, twice—then went dark." | | 13 | "And the stones behind her—" |
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| 91.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 739 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.05006765899864682 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014884979702300407 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 8.45 | | std | 5.94 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 63.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4090909090909091 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "At least, she shouldn't be." | | 1 | "Just wind, then." | | 2 | "Instead, the trunks here seemed" | | 3 | "Just branches rustling in the" | | 4 | "Slowly, Rory turned." |
| | ratio | 0.067 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 1 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 2 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 3 | "It was getting darker." | | 4 | "She swallowed and kept walking." | | 5 | "She spun toward it." | | 6 | "Her phone buzzed suddenly in" | | 7 | "She stared at the message." | | 8 | "Her breath hitched." | | 9 | "They hadn't been that close" | | 10 | "Its limbs bent at unnatural" | | 11 | "it said, in Eva's voice" | | 12 | "She stumbled, caught herself, eyes" | | 13 | "She risked a glance back—" | | 14 | "She threw herself sideways." | | 15 | "Its fingers grazed her wrist—ice—cold—before" | | 16 | "She lunged for the nearest" | | 17 | "Her wrist ached." | | 18 | "She looked down." |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 86.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant rested cool" | | 3 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 4 | "Silas had been adamant: But" | | 5 | "Eva didn'tt use all caps" | | 6 | "A twig snapped somewhere to" | | 7 | "The park was closed at" | | 8 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 9 | "The tree cover thickened as" | | 10 | "It was getting darker." | | 11 | "That didn't make sense; the" | | 12 | "Another sound—a wet, sliding noise," | | 13 | "Rory's hand flew to her" | | 14 | "She swallowed and kept walking." | | 15 | "Something flickered at the corner" | | 16 | "A shape, too tall to" | | 17 | "She spun toward it." | | 18 | "Her phone buzzed suddenly in" | | 19 | "Eva's name flashed on the" |
| | ratio | 0.747 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Now—and Rory knew better than" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |