Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFCN2WYVVSE4YVCSM42AMB

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Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.002686
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Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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AI
The neon green glow from the sign cast strange shadows across the bar, painting everything in that particular shade of luminescence that made the world feel like a photograph someone had taken years ago and never quite threw away. Aurora Carter—Rory, to the handful of people who still called her that—wiped down the counter for the third time that evening, though it hardly needed it. The Raven's Nest didn't get busy until later, when the theatre crowds spilled out into the Soho streets and the lonely came looking for company that asked no questions. She'd just finished her shift, technically. But Silas was in the back doing accounts, and the flat upstairs felt too quiet tonight, too full of the particular silence that came from being alone with thoughts she didn't want to examine too closely. The door opened. She didn't look up immediately—muscle memory from years of deliveries, of dropping off orders at flats where people never quite met your eyes. But something in the quality of the silence that followed made her raise her head. The woman standing just inside the entrance wore a cashmere coat the color of champagne, her blonde hair pulled back in a style that cost more than Rory's weekly wages. She was scanning the room with the careful assessment of someone looking for someone specific, and when her gaze found the bar—and Rory—something shifted across her face. It took a full three seconds for Rory to place her. Three seconds of studying the architecture of cheekbones that seemed sharper than she remembered, the careful makeup that softened whatever lay beneath, the way she held herself like someone had taught her to take up space. Then the memory surfaced, inconvenient and sharp: Cardiff, a cramped flat with damp walls, the two of them sprawled across a secondhand sofa watching films on a laptop that constantly buffered. Teaching each other the words to songs they'd both pretend they'd forgotten by morning. "Emma," Rory said. The name came out strange in her own ears, like a word in a language she'd stopped speaking. EmmaWhitmore—Emma Davies, back then, before she'd married up and shed the old name like dead skin—crossed the room in four measured steps and stopped at the bar. Up close, she smelled of something expensive and unobtrusive, the kind of perfume that announced wealth without ever saying its name. "Rory." Emma's voice was careful, the way people spoke to animals they weren't sure wouldn't bite. "I wasn't sure you'd be here. I asked around—someone said you worked here, but I didn't—" She stopped. "You look different." "You came to find me." It wasn't a question. Rory leaned against the counter, feeling the familiar grain of the wood through her palms, grounding herself in the small reality of it. Emma Whitmore, née Davies, standing in The Raven's Nest in Soho, looking like she'd stepped out of a magazine while Rory stood there in her work polo with grease stains on her fingers from the delivery bike chain she'd had to fix that afternoon. "I heard you were in London." Emma's eyes kept moving, cataloging: the maps on the walls, the old photographs, the way the light fell. "I was in the area. I thought—" She laughed, a small, brittle sound. "I don't know what I thought. That maybe you'd be glad to see me?" The question hung between them. Rory remembered the last time she'd seen Emma—three days before she'd fled Cardiff, before Evan, before all of it. They'd sat in that same cramped flat, and Emma had said, You could stay. You could stay and wait it out. And Rory had looked at her and understood that Emma couldn't comprehend why anyone would choose to leave everything they'd ever known, and Emma had looked at Rory and couldn't understand why she wouldn't just go back, just apologize, just make it work. They'd been seventeen. They hadn't spoken since. "I'm glad," Rory said, because it was easier than saying anything else. "Do you want a drink?" Emma slid onto a stool, her coat rustling. "Wine. White. Whatever you have." Rory poured a glass of house white—nothing expensive, nothing that would pair with whatever Emma was used to—and set it in front of her. Their fingers brushed briefly, and Emma pulled back like she'd been burned. "How did you find me?" Rory asked. "People talk. You know how it is." Emma took a sip, made a face that she quickly smoothed over. "You're not hard to find, if you know where to look. Living above a bar in Soho. Working deliveries." She said it without judgment, or at least without letting the judgment reach her eyes. "It's not what I expected." "What did you expect?" Emma turned the glass in her hands, watching the light catch the liquid. "I don't know. I suppose I thought—" She stopped. Started again. "When you left, everyone said things. That you'd gone to London to be with someone. That you'd got yourself into trouble. That you'd just cracked, finally, and run away like everyone always knew you would." The words landed like small, precise incisions. Rory felt them open something she'd spent years stitching shut. "And what did you think?" "I thought you were brave." Emma met her eyes then, and for a moment she looked like herself again—the girl who'd snuck out at sixteen to meet Rory behind the school gym, who'd held her hand through the worst night of her life and never once let go. "I thought you were the bravest person I'd ever known, and I hated you for it a little bit, because it made the rest of us look like cowards." Rory said nothing. The silence stretched between them, filled with the murmur of other conversations, the clink of glasses, the particular hum of a bar at eight o'clock on a Tuesday when the night hadn't quite decided what it wanted to be. "I'm sorry," Emma said finally. "For not calling. For not—" She gestured vaguely. "For all of it." "You were seventeen." "So were you." The door opened again, letting in a gust of October air and two men in suits who headed for the back corner. Rory watched them go, her mind moving in that particular way it did when she needed to think about something other than the thing directly in front of her. "I should go," Emma said. She hadn't touched her wine again. "I just—I wanted to see if you were okay. If you'd—" She paused. "If you'd become someone you'd want to be." "Did I?" Emma looked at her for a long moment. Something complicated moved behind her eyes—loss, maybe, or recognition, or the particular grief that came from seeing someone you'd known as a child and realizing they'd become someone entirely new. "You became someone," Emma said. "I'm not sure yet if she's someone you want to be. But she's real. That's more than most people manage." She left money on the counter—too much, far too much—and stood. At the door, she paused, half-turning back. "Evan died," she said. "Last year. I thought you should know." Then she was gone, swallowed by the neon glow and the London night, and Rory was alone with a glass of wine she hadn't charged for and the weight of years pressing down on her shoulders like something physical. Silas emerged from the back room eventually, his limp barely perceptible on the worn floorboards. He took one look at her face and said nothing, just poured two fingers of whiskey and slid it across the bar. "Old friend?" he asked. Rory shook her head. "Old life," she said. "Different thing." She thought about Cardiff, about Evan, about the flat with damp walls and the girl who'd held her hand through the worst night. She thought about the scar on her wrist, the small crescent from a childhood accident that had seemed like the worst thing in the world until she'd learned what other things could happen to a body. She thought about the person she'd been at seventeen, at twenty, at twenty-five, and the person she was still becoming. The whiskey burned going down. Outside, the green neon sign flickered, casting its strange light across the empty street. She'd become someone real. Maybe that was enough. Maybe that was all anyone could ever really ask.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.37% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Emma said finally [finally]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.105
92.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"scanning"
2"measured"
3"familiar"
4"charged"
5"weight"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"happen to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1394
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1129
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Emma"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory19
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Silas2
Cardiff3
Emma18
Davies2
Whitmore1
Evan2
You2
Started1
Tuesday1
October1
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Silas"
5"Emma"
6"Davies"
7"Whitmore"
8"Evan"
9"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.659
windowScore0.167
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed sharper than she remembered, the careful makeup that softened whatever lay beneath, the way she held herself like someone had taught her to take up space"
1"looked like herself again—the girl who'd"
2"quite decided what it wanted to be"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1394
matches(empty)
94.20% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"fix that afternoon"
1"understood that Emma"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean33.19
std24.92
cv0.751
sampleLengths
094
142
241
357
447
545
621
748
837
95
1071
1151
1288
137
1417
1513
1636
177
1858
194
2059
2117
225
2377
2442
2517
263
273
2851
2932
302
3138
3225
3318
3411
3539
3637
374
3810
3979
4019
4117
86.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences74
matches
0"been seventeen"
1"was used"
2"been burned"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was scanning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences92
ratio0.098
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory, to the handful of people who still called her that—wiped down the counter for the third time that evening, though it hardly needed it."
1"She didn't look up immediately—muscle memory from years of deliveries, of dropping off orders at flats where people never quite met your eyes."
2"She was scanning the room with the careful assessment of someone looking for someone specific, and when her gaze found the bar—and Rory—something shifted across her face."
3"EmmaWhitmore—Emma Davies, back then, before she'd married up and shed the old name like dead skin—crossed the room in four measured steps and stopped at the bar."
4"Rory remembered the last time she'd seen Emma—three days before she'd fled Cardiff, before Evan, before all of it."
5"Rory poured a glass of house white—nothing expensive, nothing that would pair with whatever Emma was used to—and set it in front of her."
6"\"I thought you were brave.\" Emma met her eyes then, and for a moment she looked like herself again—the girl who'd snuck out at sixteen to meet Rory behind the school gym, who'd held her hand through the worst night of her life and never once let go."
7"Something complicated moved behind her eyes—loss, maybe, or recognition, or the particular grief that came from seeing someone you'd known as a child and realizing they'd become someone entirely new."
8"She left money on the counter—too much, far too much—and stood."
93.73% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1145
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.04716157205240175
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013973799126637555
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean15.15
std12.06
cv0.796
sampleLengths
039
126
229
36
436
53
623
715
830
927
1011
1136
1231
1314
143
1518
1627
1721
1816
1918
203
215
224
2323
2444
2524
2613
2714
285
2919
3014
317
3243
333
344
3512
365
378
385
3924
4012
417
4219
4334
445
454
4613
479
482
4935
59.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.41304347826086957
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences63
matches
0"Then the memory surfaced, inconvenient"
1"Then she was gone, swallowed"
2"Maybe that was enough."
3"Maybe that was all anyone"
ratio0.063
93.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences63
matches
0"She'd just finished her shift,"
1"She didn't look up immediately—muscle"
2"She was scanning the room"
3"It took a full three"
4"It wasn't a question."
5"She laughed, a small, brittle"
6"They'd sat in that same"
7"You could stay and wait"
8"They'd been seventeen."
9"They hadn't spoken since."
10"Their fingers brushed briefly, and"
11"She said it without judgment,"
12"She gestured vaguely"
13"She hadn't touched her wine"
14"She left money on the"
15"He took one look at"
16"She thought about Cardiff, about"
17"She thought about the scar"
18"She thought about the person"
19"She'd become someone real."
ratio0.317
55.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences63
matches
0"The neon green glow from"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, to the handful"
2"The Raven's Nest didn't get"
3"She'd just finished her shift,"
4"The door opened."
5"She didn't look up immediately—muscle"
6"The woman standing just inside"
7"She was scanning the room"
8"It took a full three"
9"The name came out strange"
10"EmmaWhitmore—Emma Davies, back then, before"
11"Emma's voice was careful, the"
12"It wasn't a question."
13"Rory leaned against the counter,"
14"Emma Whitmore, née Davies, standing"
15"Emma's eyes kept moving, cataloging:"
16"She laughed, a small, brittle"
17"The question hung between them."
18"Rory remembered the last time"
19"They'd sat in that same"
ratio0.81
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The neon green glow from the sign cast strange shadows across the bar, painting everything in that particular shade of luminescence that made the world feel lik…"
1"The Raven's Nest didn't get busy until later, when the theatre crowds spilled out into the Soho streets and the lonely came looking for company that asked no qu…"
2"But Silas was in the back doing accounts, and the flat upstairs felt too quiet tonight, too full of the particular silence that came from being alone with thoug…"
3"The woman standing just inside the entrance wore a cashmere coat the color of champagne, her blonde hair pulled back in a style that cost more than Rory's weekl…"
4"Three seconds of studying the architecture of cheekbones that seemed sharper than she remembered, the careful makeup that softened whatever lay beneath, the way…"
5"Up close, she smelled of something expensive and unobtrusive, the kind of perfume that announced wealth without ever saying its name."
6"Rory leaned against the counter, feeling the familiar grain of the wood through her palms, grounding herself in the small reality of it."
7"Rory poured a glass of house white—nothing expensive, nothing that would pair with whatever Emma was used to—and set it in front of her."
8"Something complicated moved behind her eyes—loss, maybe, or recognition, or the particular grief that came from seeing someone you'd known as a child and realiz…"
9"She thought about the scar on her wrist, the small crescent from a childhood accident that had seemed like the worst thing in the world until she'd learned what…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the way people spoke (speak)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.108
78.5172%