Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFCVTBWWZ2XQ4AVC8GD3Z7

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.162585

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had just stopped when Aurora pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest, shaking droplets from her delivery bag. The familiar smell of old wood and whiskey wrapped around her like a blanket, and she nodded to Silas behind the bar. He was polishing glasses with his usual methodical precision, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the green glow from the neon sign that bled through the front window. "Rough night out there?" Silas asked, not looking up from his work. "Could be worse." Aurora set the bag on the bar and rolled her shoulders. "Mrs. Chen's order took me halfway across London in that downpour." "You're dripping on my floor." "Your floor's seen worse." She grabbed a bar towel and dabbed at her face, then froze. In the mirror behind the bottles, she caught sight of a figure hunched over a table in the corner. The man's shoulders were broader now, his hair cut short instead of the artistic mess she remembered, but she knew that particular way he held his whiskey glass—two fingers underneath, thumb on the rim, like he was afraid it might escape. "Christ," she breathed. Silas followed her gaze. "Friend of yours?" "Used to be." The words came out harder than she intended. She ran a hand through her wet hair, aware suddenly of how she must look—delivery uniform damp and clinging, mascara probably smudged despite its waterproof promises. Not that it mattered. Not anymore. "Want me to ask him to leave?" "No." Aurora straightened her shoulders. "No, it's fine." She walked over before she could think better of it, each step measured and deliberate on the worn wooden floor. He looked up when she was three feet away, and his face went through a series of expressions—surprise, something that might have been joy, then careful neutrality. "Rory." He set down his glass. "I didn't know you were in London." "Three years now." She remained standing, hands loose at her sides. "Mind if I sit?" "Please." He gestured to the chair across from him, and she noticed a wedding band that hadn't been there before. "You look... different." "So do you, Marcus." The name felt strange in her mouth after so long. "Married, I see." He glanced at his ring like he'd forgotten it was there. "Two years last month. Sarah. She's a pediatric nurse." "That's nice." Aurora settled into the chair, aware of Silas watching from the bar. The old maps on the walls seemed to press closer in the dim light. "Still painting?" "Not really. I'm in finance now. Derivatives trading." He took a sip of whiskey. "The money's good." "I'm sure it is." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of unspoken history thick between them. The last time she'd seen him, they'd been twenty-two, drunk on cheap wine and possibility in her tiny Cardiff flat. He'd had paint under his fingernails and dreams of gallery shows in Paris. She'd been halfway through her law degree, already feeling the walls closing in. "I heard about you and Evan," Marcus said finally. "I'm sorry." Aurora's hand went unconsciously to the crescent scar on her left wrist, hidden under her sleeve. "Old news." "Still. I should have—" He stopped, jaw working. "I should have said something. Back then. We all knew he was..." "It's done." She kept her voice level, but her fingers found the edge of the table, gripping hard. "Eva helped me get out. That's all that matters." "Is that why you're here? In London?" "Among other reasons." She watched him fidget with his glass. The Marcus she'd known never fidgeted. He'd been all graceful movements and easy confidence, the kind of person who made you believe anything was possible if you just wanted it enough. "How's your mother?" "Good. Still teaching at the university. She asks about you sometimes." "Tell her I said hello." "I will." He leaned forward slightly. "Rory, I need to tell you something. About that night—" "Don't." The word came out sharp enough to cut. "Whatever you were going to say, just don't." "You don't even know what—" "I know enough." Aurora stood, the chair scraping against the floor. "It was good to see you, Marcus. Really. But we're not those people anymore." "Maybe that's the problem." His voice had an edge now, something raw underneath the polished exterior. "Maybe we gave up too easily." "Gave up?" She laughed, but there was no humor in it. "You think I gave up? I survived. There's a difference." "Is there? Look at us. I'm pushing numbers around a screen all day, coming home to a house in Clapham that looks like every other house on the street. You're—" He gestured vaguely at her uniform. "Is this really what you wanted?" "What I wanted stopped mattering a long time ago." Aurora pulled her delivery bag over her shoulder. "But at least I'm not pretending otherwise." Marcus flinched like she'd slapped him. "That's not fair." "No?" She tilted her head, studying him. The expensive haircut, the tailored shirt, the watch that probably cost more than she made in six months. All of it carefully constructed to hide the artist who used to stay up until dawn, covered in oils and turpentine, talking about how color could change the world. "When's the last time you picked up a brush?" "I don't have time—" "You have time. You just choose to spend it differently." She softened slightly, seeing the pain flash across his face. "And that's okay, Marcus. We all make choices. But don't sit there with your derivatives and your pediatric nurse and your house in Clapham and tell me I'm the one who gave up." He was quiet for a long moment, turning his glass in circles on the scarred wooden table. When he spoke again, his voice was barely above a whisper. "I loved you, you know. Back then." "I know." Aurora's throat felt tight. "But back then was a different world." She turned to go, but his hand shot out, catching her wrist—the scarred one. His thumb brushed over the raised line of tissue through her sleeve, and they both froze. "I'm sorry," he said, and she knew he wasn't talking about grabbing her. "For all of it. For not being braver. For choosing the easy path. For showing up here tonight and reminding you of things better left buried." Aurora gently extracted her wrist from his grip. "We were kids, Marcus. Kids make mistakes." "Do you ever think about what might have been? If we'd made different choices?" She looked at him for a long moment, this stranger wearing her friend's face. Behind the bar, Silas had stopped pretending to polish glasses and was watching openly, ready to intervene if needed. The black-and-white photographs on the walls stared down at them, frozen moments from other people's lives, other people's choices. "Every day," she admitted. "But thinking about it doesn't change anything." Marcus nodded slowly, understanding finally dawning in his eyes. "Take care of yourself, Rory." "You too." She walked back to the bar, her footsteps steady despite the tremor in her hands. Silas poured her a whiskey without asking, and she knocked it back in one burning swallow. "Old boyfriend?" he asked mildly. "Old friend." Aurora set the glass down carefully. "Just someone I used to know." "Ah." Silas refilled her glass. "Those are the worst kind." She looked back once as she headed for the stairs to her flat. Marcus was still sitting at the table, staring at his wedding ring like it held answers to questions he'd never learned to ask. The green neon from the sign painted his face in shades of regret, and for a moment she saw him as he'd been—young and fearless and full of impossible dreams. Then she blinked, and he was just another stranger in a Soho bar, carrying the weight of choices that couldn't be undone. The stairs creaked under her feet as she climbed to her flat, each step taking her further from the past and the people they used to be. Outside, the rain had started again, drumming against the windows like fingers tapping out a rhythm of what if, what if, what if. But Aurora had learned long ago not to listen to the rain.
total_cost0.162585

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
95.95% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Marcus said finally [finally]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"She softened slightly [slightly]"
3"he asked mildly [mildly]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.838
rawRatio0.129
effectiveRatio0.108
60.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1394
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"barely above a whisper"
5"gently"
6"slowly"
40.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Chen"
1"Marcus"
2"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1394
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"methodical"
2"measured"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"constructed"
7"whisper"
8"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1386
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount947
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Raven1
Nest1
Silas7
Cardiff1
Paris1
Marcus5
Soho1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
4"Marcus"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Paris"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.919
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1386
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean23.9
std18.92
cv0.792
sampleLengths
074
112
225
35
476
53
67
743
87
98
1047
1113
1215
1323
1417
1520
1630
1717
184
1961
2011
2118
2220
2327
247
2544
2611
275
2816
2917
305
3125
3222
3321
3442
3524
369
3763
384
3953
4035
4113
4230
4339
4415
4514
4652
4711
4814
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
81.66% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was polishing"
1"wasn't talking"
2"was watching"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences115
ratio0.043
matches
0"The man's shoulders were broader now, his hair cut short instead of the artistic mess she remembered, but she knew that particular way he held his whiskey glass—two fingers underneath, thumb on the rim, like he was afraid it might escape."
1"She ran a hand through her wet hair, aware suddenly of how she must look—delivery uniform damp and clinging, mascara probably smudged despite its waterproof promises."
2"He looked up when she was three feet away, and his face went through a series of expressions—surprise, something that might have been joy, then careful neutrality."
3"She turned to go, but his hand shot out, catching her wrist—the scarred one."
4"The green neon from the sign painted his face in shades of regret, and for a moment she saw him as he'd been—young and fearless and full of impossible dreams."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount955
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.0387434554973822
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.016753926701570682
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.05
std8.13
cv0.675
sampleLengths
021
122
231
312
414
511
65
716
819
941
103
114
123
1311
1426
154
162
177
185
193
2020
2127
226
237
2411
254
2620
273
2814
293
3011
319
3214
3314
342
3514
363
374
3815
3920
4013
4113
429
432
4416
452
468
4712
4818
499
77.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5043478260869565
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners58
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then she blinked, and he"
ratio0.014
40.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences69
matches
0"He was polishing glasses with"
1"She grabbed a bar towel"
2"She ran a hand through"
3"She walked over before she"
4"He looked up when she"
5"He set down his glass"
6"She remained standing, hands loose"
7"He gestured to the chair"
8"He glanced at his ring"
9"He took a sip of"
10"They sat in silence for"
11"He'd had paint under his"
12"She'd been halfway through her"
13"He stopped, jaw working"
14"She kept her voice level,"
15"She watched him fidget with"
16"He'd been all graceful movements"
17"He leaned forward slightly"
18"His voice had an edge"
19"She laughed, but there was"
ratio0.449
17.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences69
matches
0"The rain had just stopped"
1"The familiar smell of old"
2"He was polishing glasses with"
3"Silas asked, not looking up"
4"Aurora set the bag on"
5"She grabbed a bar towel"
6"The man's shoulders were broader"
7"Silas followed her gaze."
8"The words came out harder"
9"She ran a hand through"
10"Aurora straightened her shoulders"
11"She walked over before she"
12"He looked up when she"
13"He set down his glass"
14"She remained standing, hands loose"
15"He gestured to the chair"
16"The name felt strange in"
17"He glanced at his ring"
18"Aurora settled into the chair,"
19"The old maps on the"
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He was polishing glasses with his usual methodical precision, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the green glow from the neon sign that bled thro…"
1"He looked up when she was three feet away, and his face went through a series of expressions—surprise, something that might have been joy, then careful neutrali…"
2"He'd been all graceful movements and easy confidence, the kind of person who made you believe anything was possible if you just wanted it enough."
3"All of it carefully constructed to hide the artist who used to stay up until dawn, covered in oils and turpentine, talking about how color could change the worl…"
60.48% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Silas asked, not looking up from his work"
1"She remained, hands loose at her sides"
2"She kept, but her fingers found the edge of the table, gripping hard"
3"Aurora stood, the chair scraping against the floor"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.189
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.081
78.5271%