Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFDTCA3QVTQCRSG9EQY8X2

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Duration:
8.3s
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Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest pulsed with the low, familiar throb of its own heartbeat. Green neon bled into the Soho night, casting long, distorted shadows across the worn mahogany bar and the rows of dusty bottles that lined the back wall. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as she’d been known in another life, pushed open the heavy oak door, the scent of stale beer, aged wood, and something faintly metallic – perhaps the lingering ghost of Silas’s old trade – hitting her like a physical wave. She’d been here once, decades ago, when the world had felt larger, less complicated. Now, the bar seemed smaller, more intimate, yet somehow more imposing. She scanned the room, her sharp blue eyes missing nothing, landing finally on the figure silhouetted against the amber glow of the back bar. Silas Blackwood. The name, like the man, was etched into the fabric of her memory, a constant, unwelcome reminder of who she’d been and who she’d become. He stood with his usual quiet authority, one hand resting lightly on the polished surface of the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair neatly combed, the faint silver glint of his signet ring catching the light. A slight, almost imperceptible limp marred the otherwise perfect posture of his six-foot-one frame. He turned, his hazel eyes, sharp and assessing, locking onto hers. The recognition was instant, a jolt of electricity that made her stomach clench. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low rumble that seemed to vibrate through the floorboards. The nickname, used after all these years, felt like a physical blow. She’d shed it, along with the life it represented, long ago. “Long time, no see.” She forced a smile, the ghost of her old self flickering for a second before being extinguished by the weight of the years and the choices she’d made. “Silas. You look… well.” The words were clipped, defensive. She’d changed, yes, but not into someone who welcomed the past with open arms. He didn’t flinch. “Time does that to everyone, doesn’t it? Makes us all strangers in our own skin.” He pushed off the bar, his movement fluid despite the limp, and walked towards her. The scent of his expensive, slightly musky cologne mingled with the bar’s atmosphere. “You’ve changed too, Rory. More than just the hair.” His gaze drifted down, lingering on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a relic from a childhood accident she’d long ago stopped mentioning. “Still carrying that little souvenir?” The scar was a constant, a physical anchor to a past she’d tried so hard to leave behind. She pulled her sleeve down, a gesture automatic and defensive. “It’s just a scar, Silas. Like the limp. Reminders of things best forgotten.” The lie hung in the air between them, thick and palpable. He nodded, understanding the unspoken words. “Evan didn’t break you, did he?” The question was blunt, direct, cutting through the carefully constructed facade she’d built around herself. The name of her abusive ex-husband, the reason she’d fled Cardiff and the life she’d been forced to abandon, hung unspoken but heavy in the silence. She flinched, the memory of his fists, his cruel words, flooding back. “He tried,” she whispered, the admission a bitter pill. “But I… I got away.” The truth was simpler, less dramatic, but no less painful. She’d escaped, yes, but the escape had cost her everything she’d ever known, everything she’d ever wanted to be. Silas’s expression softened, just for a second, a flicker of the old concern she’d known. “I heard. Cardiff. The barrister’s daughter. Pre-Law. You were brilliant, Rory. Top of your class.” He paused, studying her face, the sharp intelligence still there beneath the guarded exterior. “What happened? The law? The barrister? Evan?” She took a step back, the bar stool scraping against the floor. The weight of her choices, the life she’d abandoned, pressed down on her. “Life happened, Silas. Things change. People change.” She gestured vaguely around the bar, the neon sign casting a sickly green glow on her face. “This is where I am now. Delivering food. Living above a bar. Not exactly the barrister’s daughter, is it?” He chuckled, a low, knowing sound. “No, it’s not. But you’re still Rory, aren’t you? The one who could solve any problem with a quick, out-of-the-box thought?” He leaned in slightly, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. “I heard about the delivery job. Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress. That’s… different. From the law.” “It pays the rent,” she said, the words hollow. “And it keeps me out of trouble.” The truth was, the anonymity of the streets, the simple, physical labor, was a welcome contrast to the suffocating weight of her past life. The constant pressure of expectations, the fear of Evan, the suffocating respectability of her father’s world – it had all felt like a prison. This, this was freedom, however precarious. Silas’s gaze held hers, searching, understanding the unspoken relief in her words. “Freedom has a price, Rory. Sometimes it’s more than we can bear.” He gestured towards the bar. “Sit. Let’s talk. Properly. For a while.” She hesitated, the pull of old familiarity warring with the fear of what might be revealed. The bar was crowded now, the low hum of conversation a constant background noise. The hidden room behind the bookshelf, a relic of his old life, beckoned with the promise of privacy, but the public space felt safer, less revealing. She nodded, sinking onto the stool beside him, the worn leather cool beneath her fingers. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow on her face, illuminating the subtle lines of fatigue and the faint shadow of the scar on her wrist. The past, it seemed, had a way of finding you, no matter how far you ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
79.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount966
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount966
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"imposing"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count3
13
word"constructed"
count1
14
word"facade"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"familiar"
2"throb"
3"imposing"
4"scanned"
5"etched"
6"reminder"
7"glint"
8"perfect"
9"stomach"
10"weight"
11"palpable"
12"unspoken"
13"constructed"
14"facade"
15"silence"
16"flicker"
17"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords964
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount786
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Rory1
Silas4
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed smaller more intimate, yet somehow more imposing"
1"rumble that seemed to vibrate through the floorboards"
2"felt like a physical blow"
3"felt like a prison"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount964
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
72.89% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean68.86
std27.89
cv0.405
sampleLengths
0133
1100
242
351
485
552
653
755
851
968
1053
1170
1236
13115
70.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences51
matches
0"been known"
1"was etched"
2"being extinguished"
3"were clipped"
4"been forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
42.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences57
ratio0.035
matches
0"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as she’d been known in another life, pushed open the heavy oak door, the scent of stale beer, aged wood, and something faintly metallic – perhaps the lingering ghost of Silas’s old trade – hitting her like a physical wave."
1"The constant pressure of expectations, the fear of Evan, the suffocating respectability of her father’s world – it had all felt like a prison."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount787
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.029224904701397714
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012706480304955527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean16.91
std9.11
cv0.539
sampleLengths
013
127
244
314
411
524
62
725
835
914
1011
1113
1215
1312
1411
154
1628
179
1814
193
2030
2113
2234
235
2418
2510
2624
276
2821
2926
3012
319
3215
3319
3415
3529
367
3712
3813
3924
4019
416
4232
4315
449
4531
4624
476
4812
4917
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences50
matches
0"She’d been here once, decades"
1"She scanned the room, her"
2"He stood with his usual"
3"He turned, his hazel eyes,"
4"he said, his voice a"
5"She’d shed it, along with"
6"She forced a smile, the"
7"She’d changed, yes, but not"
8"He didn’t flinch."
9"He pushed off the bar,"
10"His gaze drifted down, lingering"
11"She pulled her sleeve down,"
12"He nodded, understanding the unspoken"
13"She flinched, the memory of"
14"she whispered, the admission a"
15"She’d escaped, yes, but the"
16"He paused, studying her face,"
17"She took a step back,"
18"She gestured vaguely around the"
19"He chuckled, a low, knowing"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences50
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest pulsed with"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"She’d been here once, decades"
3"She scanned the room, her"
4"The name, like the man,"
5"He stood with his usual"
6"A slight, almost imperceptible limp"
7"He turned, his hazel eyes,"
8"The recognition was instant, a"
9"he said, his voice a"
10"The nickname, used after all"
11"She’d shed it, along with"
12"She forced a smile, the"
13"The words were clipped, defensive"
14"She’d changed, yes, but not"
15"He didn’t flinch."
16"He pushed off the bar,"
17"The scent of his expensive,"
18"His gaze drifted down, lingering"
19"The scar was a constant,"
ratio0.96
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Now, the bar seemed smaller,"
ratio0.02
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Green neon bled into the Soho night, casting long, distorted shadows across the worn mahogany bar and the rows of dusty bottles that lined the back wall."
1"The recognition was instant, a jolt of electricity that made her stomach clench."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He leaned, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.1
77.4694%