Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFF64CYY9VMWEY4MENVPQ5

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Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.000232
Provider:
Clarifai

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The nightair in Richmond Park tasted of damp earth and decaying leaves, thick and heavy as she pushed through the ancient oaks. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as her friends called her, felt the familiar prickle of unease crawling up her spine the moment the car’s headlights dipped below the treeline. The path, barely more than a deer trail, wound deeper into the heart of the grove, swallowed by shadows that seemed to press in from all sides. The air hummed with a low, unnatural vibration, a sound like distant, frustrated whispers that didn’t belong to the wind or the owls. She’d come for the pendant. The Heartstone, given to her by a stranger in a rain-slicked alley, had begun to pulse with a warmth that radiated through her veins, a constant, insistent throb that made her teeth ache. It was a signal, she’d convinced herself, a beacon leading her to something… important. Something hidden. But the deeper she walked, the more the grove felt like a trap. The ancient oak standing stones, weathered and moss-covered, seemed to lean in, their gnarled branches scratching the sky like skeletal fingers. Time felt distorted here; she glanced at her phone, expecting the familiar glow of midnight, but the screen showed only a blank, unresponsive void. An hour had passed inside the grove, but outside, the world moved on, oblivious. A rustle, sharp and sudden, came from the thick ferns beside the path. Aurora froze, her breath catching in her throat. She’d heard the owls, the occasional rustle of a fox, but this was different. This was deliberate. She spun around, heart hammering against her ribs, but the darkness swallowed any potential threat. Only the faint, sickly green glow of phosphorescent fungi on a decaying log broke the oppressive blackness. She took a step back, her boot catching on a root, sending a jolt of pain up her leg. The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon of pale skin against the dark, itched fiercely, a reminder of the accident that had nearly ended her childhood. The pendant around her neck, a small, crimson gem set in tarnished silver, felt suddenly cold against her skin, its usual faint inner glow extinguished. Then, a warmth began to spread from the chain, a low, resonant thrum that vibrated in her chest. It pulsed, growing stronger, a warning she couldn’t ignore. She stumbled back towards the path, her mind racing. Evan. The name echoed in her skull, a ghost from a past she’d thought buried. He’d found her here once, in this very place, before she’d fled to London. The memory was sharp, visceral, a cold dread pooling in her stomach. Was he here? Was this the pendant’s doing, drawing him to her? She pressed herself against the rough bark of an oak, trying to steady her breathing. The grove seemed to hold its breath. Then, it happened. Not a sound, but a presence. A shift in the air, a weight settling just behind her. She could *feel* it, a cold, damp thing pressing against the back of her neck, smelling faintly of wet stone and decay. She didn’t turn. She couldn’t. The scar on her wrist burned, a physical echo of the fear that had nearly killed her years ago. The pendant’s warmth intensified, a frantic pulse against her skin, its glow flaring weakly before dying again. A soft, wet snuffling sound came from the shadows ahead. Not an animal. Something larger. Something that moved with unsettling silence. Aurora’s eyes, wide and blue in the gloom, scanned the darkness, searching for any sign of movement, any hint of shape. The standing stones loomed closer, their ancient eyes seeming to watch her. The air thickened, charged with a static electricity that made her hair stand on end. She could hear her own heartbeat, a frantic drumbeat in her ears, drowning out the whispers that had faded into a low, constant murmur. The wrongness wasn’t just in the grove anymore. It was inside her, a cold certainty that she was not alone. That the pendant wasn’t just a beacon; it was a leash. And the thing behind her, the thing that had just snuffled, was the one holding it. The scar on her wrist pulsed in time with the pendant’s erratic glow, a cruel, mocking rhythm. She knew what she had to do. She had to run. But the path back was swallowed by darkness, and the grove seemed to twist and turn, leading her deeper into its heart. The only certainty was the cold weight pressing against her neck, the faint, wet snuffling growing louder, and the desperate, fading warmth of the Heartstone, her only link to the world she’d fled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount788
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount788
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"beacon"
count2
5
word"potential"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"gloom"
count1
17
word"scanned"
count1
18
word"loomed"
count1
19
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"throb"
4"beacon"
5"potential"
6"oppressive"
7"reminder"
8"vibrated"
9"pulsed"
10"racing"
11"echoed"
12"stomach"
13"weight"
14"echo"
15"silence"
16"gloom"
17"scanned"
18"loomed"
19"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
19.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords786
ratio0.001
matches
0"feel"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount786
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Rory1
Heartstone2
London1
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"shadows that seemed to press in from all sides"
1"felt like a trap"
72.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.272
wordCount786
matches
0"Not a sound, but a presence"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs7
mean112.29
std12.61
cv0.112
sampleLengths
0100
1126
2118
3114
4105
593
6130
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences58
ratio0.034
matches
0"Time felt distorted here; she glanced at her phone, expecting the familiar glow of midnight, but the screen showed only a blank, unresponsive void."
1"That the pendant wasn’t just a beacon; it was a leash."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly green glow"
1"usual faint inner glow"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03299492385786802
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015228426395939087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean13.55
std8.38
cv0.618
sampleLengths
022
128
227
323
45
533
613
71
82
913
1021
1124
1214
1313
148
1514
163
1715
1817
1919
2029
2125
2218
239
249
251
2614
2714
2812
293
309
3115
327
333
346
3511
3622
373
382
3919
4017
4110
423
432
446
4521
4612
4715
4824
498
39.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3275862068965517
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences53
matches
0"Only the faint, sickly green"
1"Then, a warmth began to"
2"Then, it happened."
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences53
matches
0"She’d come for the pendant."
1"It was a signal, she’d"
2"She’d heard the owls, the"
3"She spun around, heart hammering"
4"She took a step back,"
5"It pulsed, growing stronger, a"
6"She stumbled back towards the"
7"He’d found her here once,"
8"She pressed herself against the"
9"She could *feel* it, a"
10"She didn’t turn."
11"She could hear her own"
12"It was inside her, a"
13"She knew what she had"
14"She had to run."
ratio0.283
54.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences53
matches
0"The nightair in Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"The path, barely more than"
3"The air hummed with a"
4"She’d come for the pendant."
5"The Heartstone, given to her"
6"It was a signal, she’d"
7"The ancient oak standing stones,"
8"Time felt distorted here; she"
9"An hour had passed inside"
10"A rustle, sharp and sudden,"
11"Aurora froze, her breath catching"
12"She’d heard the owls, the"
13"This was deliberate."
14"She spun around, heart hammering"
15"She took a step back,"
16"The scar on her left"
17"The pendant around her neck,"
18"It pulsed, growing stronger, a"
19"She stumbled back towards the"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The air hummed with a low, unnatural vibration, a sound like distant, frustrated whispers that didn’t belong to the wind or the owls."
1"The Heartstone, given to her by a stranger in a rain-slicked alley, had begun to pulse with a warmth that radiated through her veins, a constant, insistent thro…"
2"She took a step back, her boot catching on a root, sending a jolt of pain up her leg."
3"The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon of pale skin against the dark, itched fiercely, a reminder of the accident that had nearly ended her childhood…"
4"The pendant’s warmth intensified, a frantic pulse against her skin, its glow flaring weakly before dying again."
5"The air thickened, charged with a static electricity that made her hair stand on end."
6"She could hear her own heartbeat, a frantic drumbeat in her ears, drowning out the whispers that had faded into a low, constant murmur."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.1261%