| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 788 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 788 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "beacon" | | 5 | "potential" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "gloom" | | 17 | "scanned" | | 18 | "loomed" | | 19 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 19.70% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 786 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 786 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to press in from all sides" | | 1 | "felt like a trap" |
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| 72.77% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.272 | | wordCount | 786 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a sound, but a presence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 7 | | mean | 112.29 | | std | 12.61 | | cv | 0.112 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 126 | | 2 | 118 | | 3 | 114 | | 4 | 105 | | 5 | 93 | | 6 | 130 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Time felt distorted here; she glanced at her phone, expecting the familiar glow of midnight, but the screen showed only a blank, unresponsive void." | | 1 | "That the pendant wasn’t just a beacon; it was a leash." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 788 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, sickly green glow" | | 1 | "usual faint inner glow" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03299492385786802 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015228426395939087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 13.55 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 39.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3275862068965517 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint, sickly green" | | 1 | "Then, a warmth began to" | | 2 | "Then, it happened." |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come for the pendant." | | 1 | "It was a signal, she’d" | | 2 | "She’d heard the owls, the" | | 3 | "She spun around, heart hammering" | | 4 | "She took a step back," | | 5 | "It pulsed, growing stronger, a" | | 6 | "She stumbled back towards the" | | 7 | "He’d found her here once," | | 8 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 9 | "She could *feel* it, a" | | 10 | "She didn’t turn." | | 11 | "She could hear her own" | | 12 | "It was inside her, a" | | 13 | "She knew what she had" | | 14 | "She had to run." |
| | ratio | 0.283 | |
| 54.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The nightair in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, or Rory, as" | | 2 | "The path, barely more than" | | 3 | "The air hummed with a" | | 4 | "She’d come for the pendant." | | 5 | "The Heartstone, given to her" | | 6 | "It was a signal, she’d" | | 7 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 8 | "Time felt distorted here; she" | | 9 | "An hour had passed inside" | | 10 | "A rustle, sharp and sudden," | | 11 | "Aurora froze, her breath catching" | | 12 | "She’d heard the owls, the" | | 13 | "This was deliberate." | | 14 | "She spun around, heart hammering" | | 15 | "She took a step back," | | 16 | "The scar on her left" | | 17 | "The pendant around her neck," | | 18 | "It pulsed, growing stronger, a" | | 19 | "She stumbled back towards the" |
| | ratio | 0.811 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hummed with a low, unnatural vibration, a sound like distant, frustrated whispers that didn’t belong to the wind or the owls." | | 1 | "The Heartstone, given to her by a stranger in a rain-slicked alley, had begun to pulse with a warmth that radiated through her veins, a constant, insistent thro…" | | 2 | "She took a step back, her boot catching on a root, sending a jolt of pain up her leg." | | 3 | "The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon of pale skin against the dark, itched fiercely, a reminder of the accident that had nearly ended her childhood…" | | 4 | "The pendant’s warmth intensified, a frantic pulse against her skin, its glow flaring weakly before dying again." | | 5 | "The air thickened, charged with a static electricity that made her hair stand on end." | | 6 | "She could hear her own heartbeat, a frantic drumbeat in her ears, drowning out the whispers that had faded into a low, constant murmur." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |