Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFFAVBD0QGJF9E13SQ2EX4

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Duration:
28.0s
Cost:
$0.002778
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AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pendant had been warm all day. Aurora noticed it first that morning, when the silver chain brushed against her collarbone as she swung out of bed. A faint pulse of heat, barely there, like holding a cup of tea not quite hot enough to burn. She'd touched the crimson gem with her fingertip, watching the inner glow flare for a moment before settling back to its usual dim radiance. Now, standing at the edge of Richmond Park in the blue hour between dusk and dark, the pendant blazed against her chest. She'd come because she had to. Three weeks of strange dreams—images she couldn't retain upon waking, only the feeling they left behind: a pull, a hook behind her ribs, a direction. And every night, the pendant grew warmer. Every night, the dreams grew more insistent. The trees swallowed her. The path she'd walked a dozen times during daylight deliveries vanished somewhere behind her, and Aurora kept one hand pressed against the pendant as if it were a compass needle. The glow was visible through her shirt now, a faint crimson luminescence that made her feel like she was carrying a small flame against her heart. Richmond Park at night was supposed to be locked. She remembered that much from conversations with other delivery drivers—cautions about being caught after hours, about the patrols, about the penalties. But the gate had been open. Not merely unlocked. Open, as if waiting for her, the rusted iron swinging without resistance as she'd stepped through. The grass was wrong. She noticed it after perhaps ten minutes of walking, her trainers damp with dew that shouldn't have existed—Rory had checked the weather that morning, no rain forecast, clear skies—and the realization crept over her slowly. The grass beneath her feet didn't crunch. It should have, this time of year, in November, when the first frosts had already silvered the city. But the ground was soft, almost spongy, and the blades bent beneath her weight without sound. And the flowers. They shouldn't have been there. She wasn't a botanist, couldn't have named them, but she knew flowers didn't bloom in November. Couldn't. Yet they pressed against her legs as she walked—small white ones, yellow ones, clusters of blue that caught what little light remained between the trees—and their sweetness hung in the air so thickly she could taste it on her tongue. The pendant pulsed. Aurora stopped. She'd been walking for what felt like twenty minutes, maybe thirty, but when she checked her phone, the screen showed only 9:47 PM. She'd entered the park at 9:15. That was right. That was— The screen flickered. Died. Came back to life showing 9:47, then flickered again, and this time when it stabilized, the numbers read 9:15. She stared at it. Took it away from her face. Looked again. 9:15. No. No, that wasn't possible. She'd been walking for— The trees to her left moved. Not the way trees moved. Not swaying, not groaning in the wind. They moved, and the wind wasn't blowing. A shape passed between two oaks, vast and dark, and when she turned her head to look directly at it, there was nothing there. Just the trunks. Just the shadows. But at the edge of her vision, where she'd turned away, something remained. A suggestion of mass. A wrongness in the shape of the darkness. Her hand found the pendant again, and it was hot now. Not painful, but present. Warning. "Hello?" Her voice came out smaller than she'd intended. The words disappeared into the grove without echo, swallowed by the density of the air. "Is anyone there?" The silence that answered was not empty. She understood that immediately. It was the silence of something listening. Something waiting. She kept walking. The standing stones appeared between one stride and the next—one moment there was only the press of trees and the whisper of flowers, and then there they were, a ring of ancient oak rising from the earth like the ribs of something long dead. They were taller than her, those pillars of wood, and their bark was silver in the darkness, or perhaps the light was playing tricks, or perhaps— They weren't bark. She was close enough now to see, close enough to reach out and touch, and what she saw made her stop breathing for three full seconds. The surfaces of the stones weren't rough or textured or natural. They were smooth. Polished. And carved into them, in patterns that hurt her eyes when she tried to focus on them directly, were faces. Not faces. Suggestions of faces. Foreheads, noses, mouths, all elongated and wrong, all facing inward toward the center of the ring. The pendant burned. Aurora reached up and tore it from her neck, holding it in her fist like a weapon, and the gem flared brilliant crimson, so bright she had to squint against it. The light touched the standing stones, and the faces carved into them seemed to shift. Seemed to turn. Seemed to— A sound behind her. She spun, pendant raised, and saw nothing. Just the darkness between the trees. Just the flowers nodding in a wind she couldn't feel. But there was something else now. A smell beneath the sweetness of the blooms. Something old. Something wet. The smell of moss and decay and deep water, of places where light had never reached. "Rory." Her name, spoken from everywhere and nowhere. Not a voice, exactly. More like the idea of a voice, pressed into her mind rather than carried on the air. She didn't answer. Couldn't. Her throat had closed around something cold, and her hand shook around the pendant, and the crimson glow was brighter now, pulsing in rhythm with something that wasn't her heartbeat. "You came." The words came from inside the ring. From the darkness between the wrong-faced stones. And as she watched, a figure began to resolve from that darkness—not walking, not emerging, just becoming, like fog gathering into form—and Aurora understood with terrible clarity that it had been there all along. Waiting. Waiting for her. The pendant's heat seared her palm, and she realized with a sick lurch that it wasn't protecting her. It was leading her. It had been leading her all along. She dropped it. The crimson gem struck the grass and didn't bounce. It sank, as if the ground had opened for it, and the light it gave off began to dim even as the figure in the ring solidified into something almost human. Almost woman. Almost beautiful, if beauty could be made of edges and angles and a smile that didn't reach the eyes that were too many and too bright. "You came," the thing said again, in her voice, in her mother's voice, in the voice of everyone she'd ever loved. "Just like she knew you would." Aurora ran. She didn't remember turning. Didn't remember the path appearing beneath her feet or the flowers tearing at her jeans or the standing stones passing on either side. She ran as she'd never run before, lungs burning, heart slamming against her ribs, and behind her—behind her was a sound that wasn't footsteps but was somehow following, was somehow gaining— The park gate. She saw it through the trees, rusted iron against the darker black of the night, and she threw herself toward it, and her hands found the bars, and they were cold and solid and real, and she shoved through, and she ran until her flat was beneath her, until the door to Silas' bar was behind her, until she was up the stairs and in her apartment and had locked everything that could be locked. The pendant was gone. She checked her neck. Her hand. The floor where she'd dropped it. Gone. But her palm still burned with its heat, and when she looked down, she saw that the light had transferred. That it was in her skin now, a faint crimson glow beneath the surface, pulsing softly with every beat of her heart. In the silence of her flat, in the safe darkness of her home, Aurora Carter finally allowed herself to breathe. And somewhere in Richmond Park, in the space between one world and another, something smiled with too many teeth and waited for the hour to turn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the thing said again [again]"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
92.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"resolve"
count1
8
word"lurch"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"flickered"
4"echo"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"resolve"
8"lurch"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
61.56% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen75
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1385
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1347
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Richmond3
Park3
Aurora7
Rory1
November2
Carter1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite hot enough to burn"
1"as if waiting for her, the rusted iron swinging without resistance as she'd stepped through"
2"felt like twenty minutes, maybe thirty"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.722
wordCount1385
matches
0"Not painful, but present"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"remembered that much"
1"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean25.65
std23.24
cv0.906
sampleLengths
08
163
222
345
44
556
655
74
876
93
1062
113
122
1334
1423
1512
161
179
186
1949
2025
2116
2227
2320
243
2570
263
2761
2821
293
3051
314
3223
3334
341
3528
3634
372
3849
393
4029
413
4268
4327
442
4558
463
4775
484
4912
93.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences123
matches
0"was supposed"
1"being caught"
2"been open"
3"was gone"
59.35% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs237
matches
0"was carrying"
1"wasn't blowing"
2"was playing"
3"wasn't protecting"
4"was leading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences127
ratio0.087
matches
0"Three weeks of strange dreams—images she couldn't retain upon waking, only the feeling they left behind: a pull, a hook behind her ribs, a direction."
1"She remembered that much from conversations with other delivery drivers—cautions about being caught after hours, about the patrols, about the penalties."
2"She noticed it after perhaps ten minutes of walking, her trainers damp with dew that shouldn't have existed—Rory had checked the weather that morning, no rain forecast, clear skies—and the realization crept over her slowly."
3"Yet they pressed against her legs as she walked—small white ones, yellow ones, clusters of blue that caught what little light remained between the trees—and their sweetness hung in the air so thickly she could taste it on her tongue."
4"That was—"
5"She'd been walking for—"
6"The standing stones appeared between one stride and the next—one moment there was only the press of trees and the whisper of flowers, and then there they were, a ring of ancient oak rising from the earth like the ribs of something long dead."
7"They were taller than her, those pillars of wood, and their bark was silver in the darkness, or perhaps the light was playing tricks, or perhaps—"
8"Seemed to—"
9"And as she watched, a figure began to resolve from that darkness—not walking, not emerging, just becoming, like fog gathering into form—and Aurora understood with terrible clarity that it had been there all along."
10"She ran as she'd never run before, lungs burning, heart slamming against her ribs, and behind her—behind her was a sound that wasn't footsteps but was somehow following, was somehow gaining—"
95.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1381
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.04489500362056481
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.00941346850108617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.91
std11.41
cv1.046
sampleLengths
08
120
219
324
422
56
625
77
87
94
1030
1126
129
1321
146
153
1616
174
1835
197
2018
2116
223
235
2416
251
2640
273
282
2923
306
313
322
333
341
3519
364
376
382
391
401
414
424
436
445
457
467
4724
483
493
42.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3253968253968254
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences103
matches
0"Just the trunks."
1"Just the shadows."
2"Just the darkness between the"
3"Just the flowers nodding in"
4"More like the idea of"
5"Almost beautiful, if beauty could"
ratio0.058
91.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences103
matches
0"She'd touched the crimson gem"
1"She'd come because she had"
2"She remembered that much from"
3"She noticed it after perhaps"
4"It should have, this time"
5"They shouldn't have been there."
6"She wasn't a botanist, couldn't"
7"She'd been walking for what"
8"She'd entered the park at"
9"She stared at it."
10"She'd been walking for—"
11"They moved, and the wind"
12"Her hand found the pendant"
13"Her voice came out smaller"
14"She understood that immediately."
15"It was the silence of"
16"She kept walking."
17"They were taller than her,"
18"They weren't bark."
19"She was close enough now"
ratio0.32
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences103
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant had been"
1"Aurora noticed it first that"
2"A faint pulse of heat,"
3"She'd touched the crimson gem"
4"She'd come because she had"
5"Every night, the dreams grew"
6"The trees swallowed her."
7"The path she'd walked a"
8"The glow was visible through"
9"Richmond Park at night was"
10"She remembered that much from"
11"The grass was wrong."
12"She noticed it after perhaps"
13"The grass beneath her feet"
14"It should have, this time"
15"They shouldn't have been there."
16"She wasn't a botanist, couldn't"
17"The pendant pulsed."
18"She'd been walking for what"
19"She'd entered the park at"
ratio0.68
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Now, standing at the edge"
ratio0.01
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She'd touched the crimson gem with her fingertip, watching the inner glow flare for a moment before settling back to its usual dim radiance."
1"The path she'd walked a dozen times during daylight deliveries vanished somewhere behind her, and Aurora kept one hand pressed against the pendant as if it were…"
2"The glow was visible through her shirt now, a faint crimson luminescence that made her feel like she was carrying a small flame against her heart."
3"Open, as if waiting for her, the rusted iron swinging without resistance as she'd stepped through."
4"She noticed it after perhaps ten minutes of walking, her trainers damp with dew that shouldn't have existed—Rory had checked the weather that morning, no rain f…"
5"Her throat had closed around something cold, and her hand shook around the pendant, and the crimson glow was brighter now, pulsing in rhythm with something that…"
6"Almost beautiful, if beauty could be made of edges and angles and a smile that didn't reach the eyes that were too many and too bright."
7"She ran as she'd never run before, lungs burning, heart slamming against her ribs, and behind her—behind her was a sound that wasn't footsteps but was somehow f…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.6377%