Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFFEAH87Q1QRKQKW55STRP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.001784
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was its usual self - the low murmur of conversation blending with the clink of glasses and the faint strains of Sinatra drifting from the jukebox. Aurora Carter sat in her usual corner booth, nursing a whiskey sour and pretending to study the notes from her latest freelance investigation. The green neon glow from the window cast an eerie light on the pile of documents before her. She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist absently, her mind elsewhere. The bar was quieter than usual for a Friday night, which suited Rory just fine. She'd been hoping for some solitude after a particularly grueling week tracing dead-end leads about a missing tech CEO. The case was starting to feel more like a wild goose chase than anything else. The door chimed, and she glanced up more out of habit than curiosity. The glass nearly slipped from her fingers. "Evan?" The man at the door froze, his hand still on the brass handle. Recognition flickered across his face, followed by something darker. Rory felt her stomach lurch. It had been years since she'd seen him, but the years hadn't been kind - his once athletic frame had softened, and his hairline had started to recede. But it was his eyes that shocked her most - they were harder, colder than she remembered. "Well, isn't this a coincidence," he said, sliding into the seat opposite her without invitation. His voice had lost its musical cadence, replaced by a rougher edge. "Aurora Carter, still haunting London's dive bars, I see." She forced her features into a mask of indifference. "And Evan Taylor, still presuming he's welcome wherever he goes." He barked a laugh that held no humor. "You haven't changed a bit, have you? Still that razor-sharp wit." He leaned forward, his eyes narrowing. "Still playing detective?" "Freelance investigator," she corrected, fingers tightening around her glass. "And you? Still writing... what was it? 'Groundbreaking statistical analysis for tech startups'?" His smirk faltered momentarily. "That was the plan," he admitted. "But plans change. People change." The silence that followed was heavy with unspoken words. Rory noted the faint tremor in his hands as he signaled the bartender for a drink. Old habits kicked in - she mentally catalogued the details. The slightly worn suit, the cheap watch, the nervous tic in his jaw. "You look..." she hesitated, "...different." He snorted. "Polite as ever. Could've said 'good'." "Could have," she agreed. "Would've been lying." Their old banter, once playful, now felt like a duel. The bartender delivered Evan's drink, and he took a long pull before speaking again. "So. How's life treating the great Aurora Carter?" She shrugged. "Can't complain. The work's steady. The pay's... intermittent." "And the men?" "Not your concern," she shot back, sharper than intended. He held up his hands in mock surrender. "Just making conversation." She studied him over the rim of her glass. "You're not here by accident, are you?" He froze for a split second before recovering, but Rory caught it. She always caught those tiny tells - that's what made her good at her job. "Maybe," he hedged. "Maybe I heard you frequent this place." "From whom?" "A man about town hears things." "Cut the crap, Evan." She leaned forward, her bright blue eyes boring into his. "What do you want?" He sighed, swirling the whiskey in his glass. "I'm in trouble, Rory." She raised an eyebrow. "Trouble has a funny way of finding you." "This isn't a joke," he snapped, then immediately looked apologetic. "Look, I know I... we didn't end well. But I need your help." She resisted the urge to laugh. "You come waltzing in here after... how many years? And expect me to jump to your aid?" He hesitated. "Six years. Seven months. And twelve days." The specificity caught her off guard. She masked it with a sip of her drink. "Your point?" "I haven't forgotten, Rory. Not any of it." The admission hung between them, heavy with regret and things best left unsaid. She studied his face, searching for the boy she'd once loved, but he was gone, replaced by this stranger with haunted eyes. "What kind of trouble?" she asked finally, against her better judgment. He glanced around nervously before leaning in closer. "The kind that gets people killed." Before she could respond, the door to the back room swung open, and Silas Blackwood emerged, his silver signet ring catching the light as he limped towards them. His sharp hazel eyes took in the scene with practiced efficiency. "Ms. Carter," he greeted with his usual calm authority. "Everything alright here?" She managed a tight smile. "Just catching up with an old friend." Silas's gaze flicked to Evan, assessing. "Friend, you say?" Evan shifted uncomfortably under the scrutiny. "We... we go way back." "So I gather," Silas replied dryly. "Well, if you'll excuse me, Ms. Carter, don't forget you have that... appointment tomorrow morning." She caught the emphasis and nodded. "Wouldn't miss it." As Silas retreated to the bar, Evan frowned. "What appointment?" "None of your business," Rory replied automatically. Then, relenting slightly, "Work thing." He studied her for a moment. "You trust him? Silas?" Her eyes narrowed. "More than I trust you." He flinched as if struck. "Fair enough." The silence stretched uncomfortably. Finally, Rory sighed. "Start talking, Evan. What kind of trouble are you in exactly?" He opened his mouth to respond when the bar door slammed open, making both of them jump. Three men in dark suits entered, their eyes scanning the room with predatory intensity. Evan froze, his face paling. "Don't look," he hissed. "Don't react." Too late. One of the men's gaze locked onto theirs. He said something to his companions, and they began making their way toward the booth. "Evan, what did you do?" Rory whispered urgently. "I told you," he replied, voice tight with fear. "The kind of trouble that gets people killed." As the men approached, Rory felt the familiar adrenaline surge that came with danger. Her mind raced, assessing escape routes, potential weapons, identifying threats. Old instincts kicked in. "Follow my lead," she murmured, then raised her voice. "Darling, you can't keep doing this. It's getting ridiculous." For a moment, Evan looked confused, then comprehension dawned. "I know, I know," he played along. "I'll pay you back, I swear." She stood abruptly, her drink in hand. "Not this time. We're through." As the men reached the table, she threw her drink in Evan's face. He sputtered in shock, but she was already moving, pushing past the startled men toward the door. "What the hell?" one of them growled. "Domestic dispute," Rory called back over her shoulder. "Have fun cleaning up this mess." Outside, she hurried down the alley, heart pounding. She didn't look back. Not until she reached the safety of the crowded street did she allow herself a moment to breathe. Her phone buzzed. An unknown number. The text read: "We need to talk. Alone. Tomorrow. Same place. No Silas." She stared at the screen, a mix of anger and unease churning in her gut. Part of her wanted to delete it, block the number, and pretend this never happened. The other part - the detective part - knew she was already in too deep. Whatever trouble Evan was in, she had a sinking feeling it was about to become hers too. Sighing, she glanced back at the neon sign of The Raven's Nest glowing green in the night. The weight of the past six years felt heavier than ever. Somehow, she knew nothing would ever be the same again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.46% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she asked finally [finally]"
1"Silas replied dryly [dryly]"
2"Rory replied automatically [automatically]"
3"Rory whispered urgently [urgently]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.338
leniency0.677
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.123
88.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"lurch"
count1
5
word"mask of indifference"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"churning"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"tracing"
2"flickered"
3"stomach"
4"lurch"
5"mask of indifference"
6"silence"
7"unspoken"
8"eyebrow"
9"flicked"
10"scanning"
11"intensity"
12"familiar"
13"raced"
14"potential"
15"pounding"
16"churning"
17"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
99.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences99
matches
0"y with regret"
1"t with fear"
2"looked confused"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1271
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, Rory sighed."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount926
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Sinatra1
Carter1
Friday1
Rory9
Evan8
Silas4
Blackwood1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Sinatra"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
7"Blackwood"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a duel"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1271
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean19.55
std15.61
cv0.798
sampleLengths
070
162
220
31
472
536
619
728
822
915
1048
115
128
137
1424
158
1610
173
189
1911
2016
2127
2210
232
246
2518
2612
2712
2823
2923
309
3117
328
3335
3411
3514
3639
3712
3812
399
4011
4121
429
4310
4412
4510
468
477
4818
4936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was starting"
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences141
ratio0.043
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was its usual self - the low murmur of conversation blending with the clink of glasses and the faint strains of Sinatra drifting from the jukebox."
1"It had been years since she'd seen him, but the years hadn't been kind - his once athletic frame had softened, and his hairline had started to recede."
2"But it was his eyes that shocked her most - they were harder, colder than she remembered."
3"Old habits kicked in - she mentally catalogued the details."
4"She always caught those tiny tells - that's what made her good at her job."
5"The other part - the detective part - knew she was already in too deep."
93.20% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04777415852334419
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.018458197611292075
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean9.01
std5.57
cv0.617
sampleLengths
029
123
218
313
415
519
615
713
87
91
1013
119
125
1328
1417
1515
1612
179
189
1910
208
2117
223
239
2413
254
266
275
289
2916
3010
3113
325
332
346
354
363
3710
3814
398
402
418
423
439
448
453
469
477
4812
4915
74.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.46808510638297873
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then, relenting slightly,"
1"Finally, Rory sighed."
2"Somehow, she knew nothing would"
ratio0.033
28.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences90
matches
0"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
1"She'd been hoping for some"
2"It had been years since"
3"he said, sliding into the"
4"His voice had lost its"
5"She forced her features into"
6"He barked a laugh that"
7"He leaned forward, his eyes"
8"she corrected, fingers tightening around"
9"His smirk faltered momentarily."
10"Their old banter, once playful,"
11"she shot back, sharper than"
12"He held up his hands"
13"She studied him over the"
14"He froze for a split"
15"She always caught those tiny"
16"She leaned forward, her bright"
17"He sighed, swirling the whiskey"
18"She raised an eyebrow."
19"he snapped, then immediately looked"
ratio0.478
54.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences90
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was its"
1"Aurora Carter sat in her"
2"The green neon glow from"
3"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
4"The bar was quieter than"
5"She'd been hoping for some"
6"The case was starting to"
7"The door chimed, and she"
8"The glass nearly slipped from"
9"The man at the door"
10"Recognition flickered across his face,"
11"Rory felt her stomach lurch."
12"It had been years since"
13"he said, sliding into the"
14"His voice had lost its"
15"She forced her features into"
16"He barked a laugh that"
17"He leaned forward, his eyes"
18"she corrected, fingers tightening around"
19"His smirk faltered momentarily."
ratio0.811
55.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Before she could respond, the"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But it was his eyes that shocked her most - they were harder, colder than she remembered."
1"Sighing, she glanced back at the neon sign of The Raven's Nest glowing green in the night."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He leaned, his eyes narrowing"
1"she corrected, fingers tightening around her glass"
2"he replied, voice tight with fear"
26.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she agreed (agree)"
3"he snapped (snap)"
4"he hissed (hiss)"
5"Rory whispered urgently (whisper)"
6"she murmured (murmur)"
7"them growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.615
effectiveRatio0.246
82.6543%