Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFG6CPBH34JFXWH25JEFWC

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Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.001201
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon sign outside glowed a sickly green, casting long, distorted shadows across the rain-slicked pavement of the Soho street. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the world was sepia-toned and hushed. The scent of old wood, spilled whisky, and lemon polish hung in the air, a permanent fixture like the maps pinned to the walls. Aurora Carter sat at her usual spot at the end of the bar, her back to a corner where she could watch the door and the rest of the room. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist absently with her thumb, a childhood habit resurfaced. In her hand was a glass of Talisker, neat, a recent and expensive concession to Silas’s influence. He was polishing a tumbler at the other end, his movements economical, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light with each slow circle of the cloth. His slight limp was more pronounced tonight, a damp ache in the knee, she guessed. The bar was quiet for a Thursday; a couple murmured in a booth, a lone man nursed a pint by the fireplace, his eyes fixed on nothing. The bell above the door jangled, a sharp sound in the quiet. A gust of wet, chill air swept in, followed by a man shrugging out of a damp trench coat. He was tall, broad in the shoulders, his hair darkened by the rain. He hung his coat on a peg and turned, scanning the room with a practiced, weary gaze. Rory’s breath hitched. The glass stopped halfway to her lips. It was Evan. But it wasn’t. Not the Evan she remembered. The man who stood there, brushing rainwater from sleeves that were tailored and expensive, had the same bone structure, the same set of the jaw, but everything else was… reprocessed. The boyish softness was gone, carved away into angles and a tight, controlled expression. His eyes, which she remembered as being a warm, forgetful brown, now scanned the room like cold lenses, assessing threat and value. He’d filled out, the lanky frame of their university days replaced by solid muscle that strained subtly against his shirt. He looked like a photograph left in the sun too long, the colors all wrong, the image warped. His gaze passed over her, then snapped back. For a second, the cold lens cracked. Surprise, then a swift, calculating blankness. He offered a smile that didn’t reach his eyes and started towards the bar. Silas, ever observant, had paused his polishing. He caught Rory’s eye, a single, almost imperceptible lift of his brow. *You know this one?* it asked. *Do you want me to know him?* She gave a tiny, sharp shake of her head. Silas nodded once and resumed his work, his presence receding into the background, becoming part of the furniture. A spymaster’s retirement. “Rory,” Evan said, his voice deeper, smoother than she remembered. It had lost its Cardiff lilt, sanded down into something neutrally metropolitan. He stopped a polite distance away, not presuming to sit. “Christ. Aurora Carter. I thought it was you.” “Evan.” Her own voice was steady, cool. She was grateful for the Talisker, for the solidity of the bar under her palms. “Small world.” “Isn’t it just?” He finally slid onto the stool beside her, not next to her, but one over. A buffer stool. A diplomatic demilitarized zone. He gestured to Silas. “Gin and tonic, please. Hendrick’s, if you have it.” Silas gave a nod and turned to the bottles. The request was a statement. The Evan she’d known drank cheap lager or, on a daring night, rum and coke. “You’re in London,” Evan said, stating the obvious as he turned back to her. “I am. You too, apparently.” “Five years now. Finance.” He said it like a password, granting access to a certain tier of understanding. “And you? Last I heard, you were set for the bar. Your father’s dream.” The mention of her father, the barrister, was a deliberate probe. She saw it in the way his eyes focused on her face, looking for tells. “Plans change,” she said, lifting her glass. “I deliver Chinese food.” He blinked. Then he laughed, a short, sharp bark that sounded genuine for the first time. “You’re joking.” “Part-time. For a place in Chinatown. It pays the rent on the flat upstairs.” She tilted her head towards the ceiling. His smile faded, replaced by that analytical look. He was trying to square the Aurora Carter he’d known—sharp, ambitious, top of their cohort—with a woman who delivered prawn crackers and sweet and sour pork on a scooter. He was trying to find the angle, the con. He couldn’t comprehend a lateral move that wasn’t a calculated step on a ladder. “That’s… a choice.” “It is,” she agreed pleasantly. Silas set the gin and tonic before him with a quiet clink. Evan took a sip, his eyes never leaving her. “You look different,” he said. “So do you.” “You cut your hair.” She ran a hand through her straight, black hair, now shoulder-length where it had once fallen to the middle of her back. “It got in the way.” “I liked it long.” “I didn’t.” The silence that fell was thick, charged with the ghosts of old arguments, of possessiveness masquerading as preference. He looked away first, studying the array of bottles behind the bar. “I heard about your mum. Jennifer. I’m sorry. She was a good woman.” The mention of her mother, who had died two years after Rory fled Cardiff, was a lower blow. It bypassed her defenses, aimed for the soft, grieving core she kept buried. “Thank you,” she managed, her voice tighter. “And your father? Brendan still terrorizing witnesses in Cardiff Crown Court?” “Retired. Moved to Connemara. He fishes.” “Fishes,” Evan repeated, as if it were a word in a foreign language. He took another, longer drink. “Christ, Rory. What happened?” The question hung there, simple and devastating. *What happened to you? What happened to us? What happened to the future we were supposed to have?* The weight of time pressed down on the buffered stool between them. She could smell his cologne now, something aquatic and expensive, overlaying the faint, familiar scent of his skin. It was disorienting. “Life happened, Evan. You of all people should know that plans… deviate.” She kept her tone light, but she saw him flinch, just a micro-expression around his eyes. He knew she wasn’t just talking about career paths. “I suppose they do.” He spun his glass slowly on the coaster. “I think about those days sometimes. University. The law library. That awful flat with the radiator that banged all night.” “You said it had character.” “I was an idiot.” Another silence. The man by the fireplace coughed. Rain pattered against the window. “You left,” he said, finally voicing the core of it. Not *you left Cardiff*, or *you left your degree*. Just *you left*. The accusation was stripped bare. “I did.” “You didn’t say goodbye.” “Would it have made a difference?” She met his gaze then, her bright blue eyes steady. She saw the boy he was for a fleeting second, buried under the layers of the polished, hard man he’d become. She saw the confusion, the hurt that had curdled, over years, into this cold, resentful curiosity. He looked down at his hands. They were strong, clean, with neatly trimmed nails. No trace of the ink stains or bitten cuticles of his student self. “Probably not. But it would have been… civil.” “We weren’t very civil towards the end, if you recall.” “I recall arguments. Passionate ones. That’s what happens when two people care.” “Is that what it was?” Her voice was a whisper now. “Caring?” His jaw tightened. The lens was back, sealing the crack. “It felt like it to me. Maybe I was wrong. Maybe you were just biding your time.” He finished his drink, the ice cubes clattering. “This delivery job. Is there a… someone? Waiting upstairs?” The question was invasive, proprietary. An old ghost flexing its muscle. She thought of the quiet of her flat, the stack of books by her bed, the peace she had carved out for herself, inch by bloody inch. “There’s just me.” He seemed to take some small, bitter satisfaction from that. As if her solitude validated his narrative of her flight as an error, a retreat from the intensity he’d offered. He signaled Silas for another gin. “You should have stayed,” he said, almost to himself. “You would have been brilliant. We would have been brilliant.” The unspoken regret filled the space between them, heavier than the rain. Regret for what was, for what wasn’t, for what could never be now. He regretted the loss of the partner he’d envisioned, the accessory to the life he was building. She doubted he regretted the raised voices, the controlling comments, the way he’d tried to trim her edges to fit his frame. He’d become a man who bought Hendrick’s gin, who assessed a room for exits and advantages upon entering. The boy who loved her, however poorly, was gone. Perhaps he had never existed at all. Silas brought the fresh drink, his hazel eyes meeting Rory’s for a fraction of a second. A silent offer: a word, a gesture, and this man would be dealt with. She gave a minute, almost invisible shake of her head. This was hers to finish. Evan’s phone buzzed on the bar, lighting up with a notification. He glanced at it, his posture shifting immediately to alert attention. “I have to go. Meeting.” “Of course.” He stood, pulled a crisp twenty from a money clip and laid it on the bar. He hesitated, looking at her as if trying to memorize this new version, this anomaly in his ordered world. “It was… remarkable seeing you, Rory.” “You too, Evan.” He didn’t move to hug her, to kiss her cheek. The buffer stool remained an impassable gulf. He simply nodded, collected his trench coat, and walked back out into the London night, the green neon staining his retreating form for a moment before the door swung shut. The silence he left behind was different. It felt cleaned, somehow. Resolved. Rory lifted her Talisker, finished the last amber mouthful, the peat smoke burning a clean path down her throat. She set the glass down with a definitive click. Silas drifted over, collecting Evan’s empty glass and the money. “Friend of yours?” he asked, his tone neutral. “Once,” she said. “A long time ago.” “He carries a weight,” Silas observed, wiping the spot where the glass had been. “Don’t we all?” Silas allowed a faint smile. “Some learn to put it down.” He looked at her empty glass. “Another?” “No,” Rory said, sliding off the stool. The encounter had left a strange, hollow energy in her limbs. “I think I’ll call it a night.” She climbed the narrow stairs at the back of the bar to her flat, each step taking her further from the ghost in the trench coat. Closing her own door behind her, she leaned against it, listening to the faint sound of jazz filtering up from below. The rain whispered against her window. The face of the man at the bar, cold and reconstituted, superimposed itself for a moment over the passionate, possessive boy she’d once known. Then it faded, leaving only the quiet, solid reality of the room around her. He was a relic. She was not. The weight of time, she realized, was only heavy if you insisted on carrying it all by yourself.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she agreed pleasantly [pleasantly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.033
94.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1939
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1939
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"structure"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"fleeting"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"intensity"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"remarkable"
count1
17
word"resolved"
count1
18
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"chill"
2"scanning"
3"structure"
4"scanned"
5"calculating"
6"lilt"
7"calculated"
8"silence"
9"charged"
10"weight"
11"familiar"
12"fleeting"
13"whisper"
14"intensity"
15"unspoken"
16"remarkable"
17"resolved"
18"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences142
matches
0"was grateful"
72.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences142
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"happened to"
2"seemed to"
3"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords38
totalWords1934
ratio0.02
matches
0"You know this one?"
1"Do you want me to know him?"
2"What happened to you? What happened to us? What happened to the future we were supposed to have?"
3"you left Cardiff"
4"you left your degree"
5"you left"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"His slight limp was more pronounced tonight, a damp ache in the knee, she guessed."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1615
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter2
Talisker3
Silas11
Thursday1
Evan9
Rory6
Cardiff3
Aurora2
Hendrick1
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Talisker"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Aurora"
6"Hendrick"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a photograph left in the sun"
1"as if trying to memorize this new version, this anomaly in his ordered world"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.517
wordCount1934
matches
0"not next to her, but one over"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences179
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean29.75
std27.18
cv0.913
sampleLengths
0101
190
261
310
43
5112
635
762
840
924
1038
1129
1214
135
1432
1537
1618
1721
1863
195
2026
213
224
2327
244
252
2643
2738
2811
296
3022
3158
3237
3332
345
354
3613
3727
382
394
4053
4135
4210
4312
4412
4544
4641
4736
4819
4998
95.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences142
matches
0"were tailored"
1"was gone"
2"were supposed"
3"was gone"
81.80% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs282
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was trying"
2"was trying"
3"was disorienting"
4"was building"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences179
ratio0.011
matches
0"The bar was quiet for a Thursday; a couple murmured in a booth, a lone man nursed a pint by the fireplace, his eyes fixed on nothing."
1"He was trying to square the Aurora Carter he’d known—sharp, ambitious, top of their cohort—with a woman who delivered prawn crackers and sweet and sour pork on a scooter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1620
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.025308641975308643
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.009259259259259259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean10.8
std7.14
cv0.661
sampleLengths
020
110
224
330
417
517
631
715
827
912
1019
1113
1217
133
147
153
163
175
1829
191
2014
2122
2220
2318
248
257
266
2714
287
2912
306
3116
3218
333
3410
3512
3610
378
387
3915
402
4118
423
434
444
459
469
475
4815
4914
46.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.329608938547486
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners59
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences136
matches
0"Then he laughed, a short,"
1"Just *you left*."
2"Perhaps he had never existed"
3"Then it faded, leaving only"
ratio0.029
22.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount67
totalSentences136
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"He was polishing a tumbler"
2"His slight limp was more"
3"He was tall, broad in"
4"He hung his coat on"
5"It was Evan."
6"His eyes, which she remembered"
7"He’d filled out, the lanky"
8"He looked like a photograph"
9"His gaze passed over her,"
10"He offered a smile that"
11"He caught Rory’s eye, a"
12"*You know this one?* it"
13"It had lost its Cardiff"
14"He stopped a polite distance"
15"Her own voice was steady,"
16"She was grateful for the"
17"He finally slid onto the"
18"He gestured to Silas."
19"He said it like a"
ratio0.493
29.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences136
matches
0"The neon sign outside glowed"
1"The scent of old wood,"
2"Aurora Carter sat at her"
3"She traced the crescent scar"
4"He was polishing a tumbler"
5"His slight limp was more"
6"The bar was quiet for"
7"The bell above the door"
8"A gust of wet, chill"
9"He was tall, broad in"
10"He hung his coat on"
11"Rory’s breath hitched."
12"The glass stopped halfway to"
13"It was Evan."
14"The man who stood there,"
15"The boyish softness was gone,"
16"His eyes, which she remembered"
17"He’d filled out, the lanky"
18"He looked like a photograph"
19"His gaze passed over her,"
ratio0.86
36.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"As if her solitude validated"
ratio0.007
57.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The man who stood there, brushing rainwater from sleeves that were tailored and expensive, had the same bone structure, the same set of the jaw, but everything …"
1"He’d filled out, the lanky frame of their university days replaced by solid muscle that strained subtly against his shirt."
2"He was trying to square the Aurora Carter he’d known—sharp, ambitious, top of their cohort—with a woman who delivered prawn crackers and sweet and sour pork on …"
3"He couldn’t comprehend a lateral move that wasn’t a calculated step on a ladder."
4"The silence that fell was thick, charged with the ghosts of old arguments, of possessiveness masquerading as preference."
5"She saw the confusion, the hurt that had curdled, over years, into this cold, resentful curiosity."
6"As if her solitude validated his narrative of her flight as an error, a retreat from the intensity he’d offered."
7"He hesitated, looking at her as if trying to memorize this new version, this anomaly in his ordered world."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Evan said, his voice deeper, smoother than she remembered"
1"she managed, her voice tighter"
2"Evan repeated, as if it were a word in a foreign language"
3"He finished, the ice cubes clattering"
4"he said, almost to himself"
5"he asked, his tone neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she agreed pleasantly (agree)"
1"Evan repeated (repeat)"
2"Silas observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.433
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.1
82.5622%