Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFH1FZSNYH77D9A7P9CR3G

Run Details

Duration:
14.6s
Cost:
$0.000351
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the Grove hung thick and still, a silence so profound it seemed to press against Aurora’s eardrums, amplifying the frantic drumming of her own pulse. She’d parked the rental car on the narrow, overgrown track that wound through Richmond Park, the headlights cutting a harsh, temporary path through the encroaching darkness. The ancient oaks, their branches like skeletal fingers, loomed overhead, their leaves whispering secrets only the wind should know. She’d come here, driven by a desperate need to find something, anything, that might break the suffocating grip of her past. Evan’s shadow still clung to her, a cold weight in her chest, and the pendant, cool and heavy against her skin, felt like the only anchor she had left. The Grove itself was a pocket of impossible calm. The standing stones, weathered and moss-covered, marked the boundary where the mundane world bled into the Fae realm. Aurora had studied the maps, the cryptic notes Eva had scribbled, but nothing could have prepared her for the sheer, unnatural stillness. The wildflowers, usually vibrant and insistent, lay dormant, their colors muted under the oppressive twilight. A single, pale moon, obscured by a veil of cloud, cast long, distorted shadows that danced just beyond the reach of her flashlight beam. She’d walked for nearly an hour, the path winding deeper into the heart of the Grove. The air grew colder, carrying the faint, cloying scent of damp earth and something else – something ancient and faintly metallic, like old blood. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches brushing against her shoulders with a deliberate, unsettling touch. She’d flinched, her hand instinctively going to the pendant, feeling its faint, internal warmth. It pulsed, a slow, steady rhythm that matched her own erratic heartbeat. *Hel portal,* Eva had warned. *Be careful.* Aurora stopped, leaning against the rough bark of an oak. The silence was no longer peaceful; it was a vacuum, sucking the sound of her own breathing into its depths. She closed her eyes, trying to center herself, to push back the creeping dread that was coiling in her stomach. *Focus, Rory. Think.* The pendant’s warmth intensified, a sharp, almost painful throb against her skin. She opened her eyes, scanning the darkness. Nothing moved. Not a leaf stirred. The shadows seemed to thicken, pooling in the hollows between the trees, taking on impossible shapes that dissolved the moment she focused on them. A sound, faint but unmistakable, cut through the silence. It was the scrape of something heavy against stone, distant but growing closer. Aurora froze, her breath catching in her throat. She pressed herself flat against the tree, her heart hammering against her ribs. *Just the wind,* she told herself, but the sound wasn’t wind. It was deliberate, purposeful. She strained to hear, her ears straining against the unnatural quiet. Another sound joined it – a low, guttural murmur, like stones grinding together, muffled by the earth. *No,* she thought, a cold sweat breaking out on her forehead. *This isn’t right.* She fumbled for her phone, the familiar weight of it a small comfort. The screen illuminated her face, revealing wide, terrified eyes. She dialed Eva’s number, her fingers trembling. It rang… and rang… and went to voicemail. *Eva, it’s Rory. Something’s wrong. I’m in the Grove. Call me back, please.* She ended the call, the silence that followed was deafening. The pendant’s pulse quickened, a frantic, desperate beat against her wrist. *Hel portal,* it seemed to scream. *You’re too close.* Aurora took a step back, her foot catching on a root. She stumbled, her hand flying out to grab a low-hanging branch. The rough bark scraped against her palm, leaving a stinging welt. She hissed, pulling her hand back. The scrape of stone and the guttural murmur grew louder, closer. She could almost *feel* the presence now, a cold, oppressive weight settling around her like a shroud. The air grew colder still, carrying the metallic tang stronger, sharper. She could smell the faint, sweet decay of something long dead. She turned, her flashlight beam sweeping the darkness. The shadows seemed to recoil, but only for a moment. A shape, indistinct and massive, moved just beyond the circle of light. It was too tall, too angular, shifting like smoke. Aurora held her breath, her body rigid with fear. The pendant burned against her skin, its warmth a stark contrast to the chill in the air. *Run,* a primal instinct screamed. *Get out.* But the Grove held her. The path she’d come by was swallowed by darkness, the way out obscured by the unnatural stillness. The presence was here, undeniable now, a silent watcher in the shadows. The scrape of stone became a scraping of claws. The murmur became a low, resonant chant. Aurora pressed herself tighter against the tree, the rough bark digging into her back. The pendant’s pulse was a frantic drumbeat, a warning she couldn’t ignore. *Hel portal,* it echoed in her mind. *You’ve crossed the threshold. There is no turning back.* The shape coalesced, not into a single entity, but into a shifting mass of darkness and shadow, moving with a purpose that chilled her to the bone. It wasn’t human. It wasn’t even *alive* in the way she understood life. It was… *other*. The air crackled with an unseen energy, a static charge that made her hair stand on end. The silence shattered, replaced by a low, vibrating hum that resonated in her bones. The wildflowers, dormant moments before, suddenly stirred, their petals unfurling with unnatural speed, releasing a cloud of pollen that stung her eyes and made her cough. Aurora stumbled backwards, tripping over a root. She fell hard, the breath knocked from her lungs. The world spun, the Grove tilting dangerously. She scrambled to her knees, her hand instinctively going to her wrist, clutching the pendant. It burned now, a white-hot agony that threatened to sear her skin. The presence was upon her, a cold, heavy pressure pressing down, suffocating. She could feel its gaze, a thousand unseen eyes watching her, judging her. The murmur grew louder, a chorus of whispers that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, weaving a tapestry of dread that wrapped around her mind. *Think, Rory. Think!* She forced her mind to focus, pushing against the overwhelming fear. The pendant’s glow intensified, a fierce, crimson light that seemed to fight against the encroaching darkness. It pulsed, not just with warmth, but with a desperate, protective energy. *Hel portal,* it screamed. *You are the key. You are the bridge.* The whispers coalesced into a single, chilling voice, deep and resonant, speaking in a language she didn’t understand, but the meaning was clear: *You belong here now. You cannot leave.* Aurora pushed herself up, her body trembling violently. The Grove was no longer a place of hidden beauty; it was a prison, a gateway to something ancient and terrifying. The presence was closer, its weight pressing down, suffocating. She could feel the pull, a magnetic force drawing her towards the heart of the Grove, towards the standing stones where the veil was thinnest. The pendant’s light flared, a beacon in the oppressive darkness, but it was also a beacon for the thing that hunted her. She turned, her flashlight beam cutting through the gloom, searching for a way out, for any sign of the path she’d come by. But the Grove had changed. The trees seemed taller, the shadows deeper, the air thick with an unseen menace. The way she’d come was gone, replaced by a wall of impenetrable darkness. The only way was forward, towards the heart of the Grove, towards the Hel portal the pendant warned of. The presence was upon her, its cold breath on her neck, its whispers a suffocating shroud. Aurora took a step, then another, her heart a frantic drumbeat in her ears. The pendant’s light guided her, a fragile, crimson flame against the overwhelming darkness. The Grove held its breath, waiting. The silence was absolute, broken only by the frantic pulse of the pendant and the frantic beat of her own heart. She was no longer just Rory Carter, the quick-thinking delivery driver. She was a trespasser in a realm of ancient, terrible power, and the only thing that mattered was surviving the next breath, the next heartbeat, in the heart of the Fae Grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsms45
found
0
word"silence"
count6
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count4
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"oppressive"
count3
6
word"warmth"
count4
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"chilled"
count1
18
word"shattered"
count1
19
word"resonated"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count2
21
word"tapestry"
count1
22
word"chilling"
count1
23
word"magnetic"
count1
24
word"beacon"
count2
25
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"profound"
2"pulse"
3"loomed"
4"weight"
5"oppressive"
6"warmth"
7"pulsed"
8"depths"
9"stomach"
10"throb"
11"scanning"
12"familiar"
13"quickened"
14"stark"
15"chill"
16"echoed"
17"chilled"
18"shattered"
19"resonated"
20"could feel"
21"tapestry"
22"chilling"
23"magnetic"
24"beacon"
25"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences116
matches
0"d with fear"
1"t with warmth"
56.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans20
markdownWords69
totalWords1393
ratio0.05
matches
0"Hel portal,"
1"Be careful."
2"Focus, Rory. Think."
3"Just the wind,"
4"No,"
5"This isn’t right."
6"Eva, it’s Rory. Something’s wrong. I’m in the Grove. Call me back, please."
7"Hel portal,"
8"You’re too close."
9"feel"
10"Run,"
11"Get out."
12"Hel portal,"
13"You’ve crossed the threshold. There is no turning back."
14"alive"
15"other"
16"Think, Rory. Think!"
17"Hel portal,"
18"You are the key. You are the bridge."
19"You belong here now. You cannot leave."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1393
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove12
Aurora10
Richmond1
Park1
Fae2
Eva4
Rory4
Hel5
Carter1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
37.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like the only anchor she had left"
1"whispers that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, weaving a tapestry of dread that wrapped around her mind"
2"light that seemed to fight against the encroaching darkness"
3"seemed taller the shadows deeper, the air thick with an unseen menace"
56.42% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.436
wordCount1393
matches
0"not into a single entity, but into a shifting mass of darkness"
1"not just with warmth, but with a desperate, protective energy"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean92.87
std11.47
cv0.124
sampleLengths
0123
188
290
3102
4100
580
689
772
892
9100
10101
1184
1285
1390
1497
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was coiling"
1"was deafening"
2"was surviving"
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences116
ratio0.034
matches
0"The air grew colder, carrying the faint, cloying scent of damp earth and something else – something ancient and faintly metallic, like old blood."
1"The silence was no longer peaceful; it was a vacuum, sucking the sound of her own breathing into its depths."
2"Another sound joined it – a low, guttural murmur, like stones grinding together, muffled by the earth."
3"The Grove was no longer a place of hidden beauty; it was a prison, a gateway to something ancient and terrifying."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1395
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"insistent, lay dormant, their"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01003584229390681
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean12.01
std7.38
cv0.614
sampleLengths
028
126
219
321
429
59
618
722
815
924
1016
1124
1217
1314
1412
155
162
1710
1820
1920
202
2113
227
232
244
2524
269
2713
288
2913
3011
314
3211
3317
3411
353
3613
379
387
392
402
414
423
432
444
4514
4611
476
483
4911
31.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.23275862068965517
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners27
31.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"*Just the wind,* she told"
ratio0.009
84.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences106
matches
0"She’d parked the rental car"
1"She’d come here, driven by"
2"She’d walked for nearly an"
3"She’d flinched, her hand instinctively"
4"It pulsed, a slow, steady"
5"She closed her eyes, trying"
6"She opened her eyes, scanning"
7"It was the scrape of"
8"She pressed herself flat against"
9"It was deliberate, purposeful."
10"She strained to hear, her"
11"She fumbled for her phone,"
12"She dialed Eva’s number, her"
13"I’m in the Grove."
14"*You’re too close.*"
15"She stumbled, her hand flying"
16"She hissed, pulling her hand"
17"She could almost *feel* the"
18"She could smell the faint,"
19"She turned, her flashlight beam"
ratio0.34
11.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences106
matches
0"The air in the Grove"
1"She’d parked the rental car"
2"The ancient oaks, their branches"
3"She’d come here, driven by"
4"Evan’s shadow still clung to"
5"The Grove itself was a"
6"The standing stones, weathered and"
7"Aurora had studied the maps,"
8"The wildflowers, usually vibrant and"
9"A single, pale moon, obscured"
10"She’d walked for nearly an"
11"The air grew colder, carrying"
12"The trees seemed to lean"
13"She’d flinched, her hand instinctively"
14"It pulsed, a slow, steady"
15"*Hel portal,* Eva had warned."
16"Aurora stopped, leaning against the"
17"The silence was no longer"
18"She closed her eyes, trying"
19"She opened her eyes, scanning"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"She’d come here, driven by a desperate need to find something, anything, that might break the suffocating grip of her past."
1"A single, pale moon, obscured by a veil of cloud, cast long, distorted shadows that danced just beyond the reach of her flashlight beam."
2"It pulsed, a slow, steady rhythm that matched her own erratic heartbeat."
3"She closed her eyes, trying to center herself, to push back the creeping dread that was coiling in her stomach."
4"The shadows seemed to thicken, pooling in the hollows between the trees, taking on impossible shapes that dissolved the moment she focused on them."
5"The shape coalesced, not into a single entity, but into a shifting mass of darkness and shadow, moving with a purpose that chilled her to the bone."
6"The air crackled with an unseen energy, a static charge that made her hair stand on end."
7"The silence shattered, replaced by a low, vibrating hum that resonated in her bones."
8"The wildflowers, dormant moments before, suddenly stirred, their petals unfurling with unnatural speed, releasing a cloud of pollen that stung her eyes and made…"
9"She scrambled to her knees, her hand instinctively going to her wrist, clutching the pendant."
10"It burned now, a white-hot agony that threatened to sear her skin."
11"The murmur grew louder, a chorus of whispers that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, weaving a tapestry of dread that wrapped around her mind."
12"The pendant’s glow intensified, a fierce, crimson light that seemed to fight against the encroaching darkness."
13"She was a trespasser in a realm of ancient, terrible power, and the only thing that mattered was surviving the next breath, the next heartbeat, in the heart of …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
70.9131%