Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFJQCERFQWT7FDBTSA2JH4

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Duration:
55.0s
Cost:
$0.000975
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after sunset held a different kind of cold. It wasn’t just the autumn chill; it was a thin, sharp stillness that seeped through Rory’s jacket. She stood at the edge of the tree line, her breath a pale ghost in the moonlight, and looked at the instructions Eva had scrawled on a napkin from the Golden Empress. *Find the big twisted oak west of Pen Ponds. Walk north from its shadow for two hundred paces. You’ll feel it before you see it.* Eva, typically, had been cryptic, frantic. She’d pressed the napkin into Rory’s hand after her shift, her eyes wide. “He says it’s important, Rory. He says you have to go tonight. It’s about the pendant.” *He.* Dymas. The name was just a whisper, a shape in the dark of her new London life. He was the one who’d left the Heartstone for her at the bar, its silver chain coiled like a sleeping serpent on the polished wood. She hadn’t asked for it. She wore it now, a secret weight against her sternum, the deep crimson stone cool and inert beneath her shirt. She found the oak, a gnarled sentinel with branches that clawed at the star-pricked sky. Two hundred paces north. The counting was a mantra that kept the creeping unease at bay. One ninety-eight, one ninety-nine, two hundred. She stopped. Nothing looked different. Same bracken, same skeletal trees. But the air *did* change. It grew thicker, sweeter, carrying a scent of damp earth and blooming jasmine that had no business existing in October. A subtle pressure built in her ears, like descending in an aeroplane. She took another step forward. And the world shifted. It wasn’t a visual tearing, more a softening of reality’s edges. The trees ahead seemed to step back, creating a clearing she was certain hadn’t been there a moment before. Moonlight, which had been weak and diffuse, now fell in a concentrated silver column, illuminating a circle of ancient, moss-clad standing stones. They weren’t granite or slate, but living, petrified oak, their surfaces whorled with patterns that seemed to move if she didn’t look directly at them. The Fae Grove. Eva’s words echoed: *He’ll meet you there.* Rory crossed the threshold between the stones. The silence was absolute, a velvet blanket smothering the distant hum of London. The wildflowers were wrong. Foxgloves as tall as her waist, their bell-shaped heads a poisonous purple, trembled without any wind. White blossoms glowed with their own inner light, casting shifting, phantom shadows across the grass. It was beautiful. It was utterly wrong. She walked to the centre of the clearing, the soft moss silencing her footsteps. The reason she’d come—answers, a meeting, a way to understand the weight around her neck—felt flimsy now, a child’s excuse in a place that respected no mortal logic. She touched the pendant through her shirt. It was cold. A sound. Not from the Grove, but from the woods beyond the stones she’d entered through. A rustle. Too heavy for a fox, too deliberate for the wind. Rory went very still, her cool-headed intelligence switching to a high, sharp alert. She turned slowly, scanning the dark lattice of trees. Nothing. She let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. Her mind, trained for quick out-of-the-box thinking, offered rationalizations. A deer. A park warden. Her own nerves, frayed by Eva’s urgency and the unnatural beauty of the place. Then, a whisper. It didn’t come from a direction; it seemed to coalesce in the air around her, a sibilant sigh that threaded through the flower-scents. *“…alone…”* Her hand flew to the pendant. It was warm. A faint, rhythmic pulse beat against her palm, like a tiny, captured heart. The glow from the stone seeped through the fabric of her shirt, a faint crimson smudge in the moonlight. “Hello?” Her voice was small, swallowed by the Grove. “Dymas?” No answer. But the rustle came again, closer now, from her left. She spun. A shadow detached itself from the deeper shadow of an oak stone, flitting between two foxgloves. It was low to the ground, a skittering shape the size of a large dog, but it moved with a horrible, jointless fluidity. It was there, and then it was gone, lost in the mosaic of light and dark. The pulse of the Heartstone quickened. It wasn’t a guide; it was an alarm. Another whisper, this one from her right. *“…pretty chain…”* The voice was multi-layered, a chorus of dry leaves and breaking stems. It was fascinated. Hungry. Rory took a step back towards the entrance. The standing stones seemed to have closed ranks. The gap she’d come through was still there, but the path beyond looked longer, the woods beyond impossibly distant, as if viewed through the wrong end of a telescope. The time distortion Eva had mumbled about—*an hour inside can be minutes or days outside*. Panic, cold and slick, began to uncoil in her gut. She fought it down. Think. Observe. The flowers were watching her. Not metaphorically. The glowing white blossoms had slowly turned on their stems, their luminous faces now oriented towards her. The foxgloves leaned in, their speckled throats gaping like mouths. A soft, wet crunching sound came from directly behind her. She didn’t want to turn. She had to. She pivoted, every muscle tense. At the base of the largest oak stone, a mushroom ring she hadn’t noticed before was… melting. The red-capped fungi were sinking into a patch of black, iridescent soil that bubbled softly. From the centre of the ring, something was pushing upwards. Not a plant. It was long and pale and thin, like a finger bone stripped of flesh. It twitched, probing the air. The Heartstone was hot now, a brand against her skin. Its inner glow was no longer faint; it cast a bloody little spotlight on her collarbones. The thing in the shadows scurried again, a blur of movement at the extreme edge of her vision. When she jerked her head towards it, she saw only a trembling foxglove. But she heard the whisper, right beside her ear this time, the scent of decay suddenly overwhelming the jasmine. *“…stay… feed the Grove…”* She ran. Not with blind terror, but with a focused, desperate speed, her delivery-job legs pumping. She aimed for the stone entrance, the world narrowing to that slice of ordinary dark. The moss clung to her boots, trying to trip her. Vines she hadn’t seen snaked across her path, thorns catching on her jeans. The air thickened to syrup, resisting her. From the bubbling patch, more bone-white fingers clawed free of the earth, grasping. The skittering shadow kept pace with her, just behind the tree line, a syncopated rhythm to her frantic footsteps. *Tap-tap-scritch. Tap-tap-scritch.* The whispers became a drone, a swarm of invisible insects filling her head. *Alone alone alone pretty thing fresh blood stay stay stay…* The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the old childhood mark, began to itch furiously, as if reacting to the wrongness of the place. The entrance was twenty paces away. Ten. The space between the stones seemed to narrow, the oak edges leaning inward. She threw herself forward, a gasp tearing from her throat. As she passed between the standing stones, the world snapped back into focus with a tangible *pop*. The sweet, heavy air vanished, replaced by the familiar, damp chill of the park. The silence shattered into the rustle of normal leaves, the distant cry of a waterbird. She stumbled, fell to her knees on the cold, hard ground, gulping in breaths that tasted of car exhaust and dirt. She was back in Richmond Park. The moon was in the same position. Only minutes had passed. Shaking, she pulled the Heartstone pendant from under her shirt. It was already cooling, its fierce glow dimming to a mere ember deep within the crimson. It was just a stone again. But she knew. The Grove wasn’t just a meeting place. It was alive. And it was hungry. And something within it had seen her. Had wanted her. She looked back. There was no clearing, no standing stones, just dense, ordinary woodland. But for a second, she thought she saw a pair of pinprick lights, like distant embers, watching her from the absolute black between the trees. Then they winked out. Clutching the pendant so tightly the silver chain bit into her palm, Aurora Carter got to her feet and started walking, then running, not stopping until the lights of the road were bright and real and blessedly mundane before her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
75.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
5"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count4
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"sentinel"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count2
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"mosaic"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"pumping"
count1
15
word"tangible"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"whisper"
2"weight"
3"sentinel"
4"echoed"
5"silence"
6"velvet"
7"trembled"
8"footsteps"
9"scanning"
10"rhythmic"
11"pulse"
12"mosaic"
13"quickened"
14"pumping"
15"tangible"
16"familiar"
17"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
61.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences141
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords60
totalWords1435
ratio0.042
matches
0"Find the big twisted oak west of Pen Ponds. Walk north from its shadow for two hundred paces. You’ll feel it before you see it."
1"He."
2"did"
3"He’ll meet you there."
4"“…alone…”"
5"“…pretty chain…”"
6"an hour inside can be minutes or days outside"
7"“…stay… feed the Grove…”"
8"Tap-tap-scritch. Tap-tap-scritch."
9"Alone alone alone pretty thing fresh blood stay stay stay…"
10"pop"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1410
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory5
Eva5
Golden1
Empress1
Pen1
Ponds1
Dymas1
London2
Heartstone4
October1
Fae1
Grove4
Aurora1
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
3"Aurora"
4"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"London"
4"October"
5"Fae"
6"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"patterns that seemed to move if she didn’t look directly at them"
1"as if reacting to the wrongness of the place"
60.63% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.394
wordCount1435
matches
0"Not from the Grove, but from the woods beyond the stones she’d entered through"
1"Not with blind terror, but with a focused, desperate speed, her delivery-job legs pumpi"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean41
std22.37
cv0.546
sampleLengths
087
135
268
337
452
54
680
77
862
952
1050
111
1239
1327
1441
1510
1669
1714
1825
1976
2034
2123
2264
2326
2454
2561
2634
2723
2824
2930
3067
3117
3259
3343
3440
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"was gone"
1"was multi-layered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs220
matches
0"were watching"
1"were sinking"
2"was pushing"
22.98% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences143
ratio0.042
matches
0"It wasn’t just the autumn chill; it was a thin, sharp stillness that seeped through Rory’s jacket."
1"The reason she’d come—answers, a meeting, a way to understand the weight around her neck—felt flimsy now, a child’s excuse in a place that respected no mortal logic."
2"It didn’t come from a direction; it seemed to coalesce in the air around her, a sibilant sigh that threaded through the flower-scents."
3"It wasn’t a guide; it was an alarm."
4"The time distortion Eva had mumbled about—*an hour inside can be minutes or days outside*."
5"Its inner glow was no longer faint; it cast a bloody little spotlight on her collarbones."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1428
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"more bone-white fingers"
1"*Alone alone alone pretty thing"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.031512605042016806
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01050420168067227
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean10.03
std7.35
cv0.733
sampleLengths
013
117
232
39
49
57
66
713
816
92
1016
1125
125
1320
1415
154
1612
176
182
193
205
215
2220
2312
245
254
2611
2719
2822
2925
303
317
327
3313
344
3516
3615
373
384
3914
4028
417
423
432
4414
452
4610
4713
489
491
43.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.34265734265734266
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences122
matches
0"Too heavy for a fox,"
1"Then, a whisper."
2"Only minutes had passed."
3"Then they winked out."
ratio0.033
75.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences122
matches
0"It wasn’t just the autumn"
1"She stood at the edge"
2"You’ll feel it before you"
3"She’d pressed the napkin into"
4"He was the one who’d"
5"She hadn’t asked for it."
6"She wore it now, a"
7"She found the oak, a"
8"It grew thicker, sweeter, carrying"
9"She took another step forward."
10"It wasn’t a visual tearing,"
11"They weren’t granite or slate,"
12"It was beautiful."
13"It was utterly wrong."
14"She walked to the centre"
15"She touched the pendant through"
16"It was cold."
17"She turned slowly, scanning the"
18"She let out a breath"
19"Her mind, trained for quick"
ratio0.361
91.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences122
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"It wasn’t just the autumn"
2"She stood at the edge"
3"You’ll feel it before you"
4"Eva, typically, had been cryptic,"
5"She’d pressed the napkin into"
6"The name was just a"
7"He was the one who’d"
8"She hadn’t asked for it."
9"She wore it now, a"
10"She found the oak, a"
11"The counting was a mantra"
12"Nothing looked different."
13"It grew thicker, sweeter, carrying"
14"A subtle pressure built in"
15"She took another step forward."
16"It wasn’t a visual tearing,"
17"The trees ahead seemed to"
18"Moonlight, which had been weak"
19"They weren’t granite or slate,"
ratio0.738
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
78.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She found the oak, a gnarled sentinel with branches that clawed at the star-pricked sky."
1"It grew thicker, sweeter, carrying a scent of damp earth and blooming jasmine that had no business existing in October."
2"Moonlight, which had been weak and diffuse, now fell in a concentrated silver column, illuminating a circle of ancient, moss-clad standing stones."
3"The gap she’d come through was still there, but the path beyond looked longer, the woods beyond impossibly distant, as if viewed through the wrong end of a tele…"
4"The red-capped fungi were sinking into a patch of black, iridescent soil that bubbled softly."
5"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the old childhood mark, began to itch furiously, as if reacting to the wrongness of the place."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4955%