Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFMA14YMZRCWSCCTFFRAS3

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Duration:
10.6s
Cost:
$0.000299
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged oak, spilled beer, and something sharper—like ozone and old secrets. Aurora Carter, alias Rory, alias Laila, pushed through the heavy oak door, the green neon sign flickering above her like a watchful eye. She’d delivered to this bar once before, but never lingered. Tonight, she was here for a different kind of cargo: a quiet corner table, a stiff gin and tonic, and the illusion of anonymity. The bar was a labyrinth of shadows, the low hum of conversation muffled by the thick air. She spotted a vacant stool at the far end of the polished mahogany bar, tucked beneath a framed sepia photograph of a foggy London street. Perfect. She slid onto the stool, the worn leather creaking softly. The bartender, a man with eyes like polished obsidian, nodded curtly. “Gin and tonic, straight up.” Aurora handed over a ten-pound note. The bartender’s movements were precise, economical. She watched him for a moment, noting the slight tremor in his left hand as he slid the glass across the bar. A veteran, probably. She took a slow sip, the cool liquid a welcome contrast to the London heat outside. The bar was her sanctuary tonight, a place to breathe before the next delivery run. Then, the door chimed again. A familiar scent, like damp wool and pipe tobacco, cut through the bar’s usual haze. Aurora’s head snapped up. Standing in the doorway, silhouetted against the neon glow, was Silas Blackwood. Silas, who’d been her mentor, her anchor, her friend—before the Prague operation, before the limp, before the silence. The man who’d taught her to read people like open books, to trust her instincts above all else. The man who’d vanished without a trace five years ago. Silas’s gaze swept the bar, landing on her with a precision that made her skin prickle. He didn’t move immediately, just stood there, the green light catching the grey streaks in his auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard framing his face. His right hand rested near the silver signet ring on his cuff. A limp, subtle but undeniable, marked his step as he finally crossed the threshold. He didn’t sit; he leaned against the bar, his back to her, his eyes fixed on the swirling amber liquid in his glass. The silence stretched, thick and heavy, filled only by the distant clink of glasses and the low murmur of the bar. Aurora felt the familiar weight of his scrutiny. She took another sip, forcing her breathing to steady. “Silas.” Her voice was low, devoid of its usual warmth. “Long time, no see.” He didn’t turn. “Rory.” His voice was gravelly, a relic from another life. “Or should I say Laila? Or Aurora?” He finally shifted, turning his head slightly, his hazel eyes locking onto hers. The hazel eyes, once so sharp, so perceptive, now held a depth of weariness she hadn’t seen before. “You’ve changed.” It wasn’t a question. “And you,” she countered, her gaze flicking to the slight hitch in his step, the way he favored his left leg. “Still carrying that old injury.” The scar on her own wrist, a crescent moon, tightened beneath her sleeve. “Or is it just the weight?” He took a slow sip of his drink, the silence stretching again. “The weight changes you, Rory. It bends you, reshapes you.” He finally slid onto the stool beside her, the leather groaning under his weight. “You look… different. More settled.” His eyes scanned her face, lingering on her black hair, her bright blue eyes. “Still the quick thinker, though. Always the quick thinker.” “Settled?” Aurora snorted, a dry sound in the quiet bar. “I deliver food for a living, Silas. I live above a bar. My biggest decision is whether to take the tube or walk in the rain.” She gestured vaguely towards the door. “You? You own a bar. You’re a Spymaster. You’re… something else.” The unspoken question hung between them: *What did you become?* Silas’s gaze dropped to the signet ring on his cuff. “I’m still here, Rory. That’s something, isn’t it?” He finally met her eyes again, the hazel reflecting the neon light. “Prague… it changed things. For everyone.” He paused, choosing his words carefully. “You left. You disappeared. I heard about Evan. I heard about Cardiff.” His voice softened slightly. “You were running, Rory. Running from something.” “Running from myself,” she admitted, the words tumbling out before she could stop them. “From the person I’d become. The person I’d let Evan make me.” She looked away, focusing on the swirling ice in her glass. “I thought… I thought I could outrun it. Outrun the guilt, the fear.” She took a deep breath, forcing herself to look back at him. “But you? You vanished. Just… gone. No note, no explanation. You left me with questions I couldn’t answer.” The unspoken regret was a physical ache in her chest. *Why didn’t you tell me?* Silas’s expression was unreadable, a mask of stone over the familiar eyes. “Sometimes, Rory, the only way to protect the people you care about is to disappear. To become someone else.” He gestured vaguely towards the bar. “This… this is my penance. My way of staying connected, without being seen.” He finally turned fully towards her, his gaze intense. “You found your way, Rory. You found yours. I… I lost mine.” The admission hung in the air, heavy and final. “Five years. That’s a long time to be gone.” “And you’re back,” she said softly, the words tasting like ash. “Why now? Why here?” The green neon sign outside seemed to pulse, casting long, distorted shadows across the bar’s worn surfaces. The weight of time, the unspoken regret, the chasm between who they were and who they’d become, pressed down on them both. The silence wasn’t awkward anymore; it was a shared understanding, a bridge built on shattered pieces. “What do you want, Silas?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “To see the ghost of your protégé? To check if the old tricks still work?” Silas Blackwood didn’t answer immediately. He simply raised his glass in a silent toast, the silver signet ring catching the neon light, a stark reminder of the man he’d been and the man he’d become. The bar, with its hidden room and its secrets, held them both now, two ghosts bound by a past they could never fully escape.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
25.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"His voice softened slightly [slightly]"
2"She looked away [away]"
3"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.645
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
71.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1071
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1071
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"weight"
count5
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count3
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"sanctuary"
2"familiar"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"warmth"
6"scanned"
7"unspoken"
8"unreadable"
9"pulse"
10"shattered"
11"whisper"
12"stark"
13"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords1069
ratio0.008
matches
0"What did you become?"
1"Why didn’t you tell me?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount815
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory1
Laila1
London2
Silas6
Blackwood2
Prague1
Aurora5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Laila"
5"Silas"
6"Blackwood"
7"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1069
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
48.07% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean76.36
std24.3
cv0.318
sampleLengths
0116
194
282
3111
431
557
645
764
863
965
1095
1189
1298
1359
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences71
ratio0.056
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged oak, spilled beer, and something sharper—like ozone and old secrets."
1"Silas, who’d been her mentor, her anchor, her friend—before the Prague operation, before the limp, before the silence."
2"He didn’t sit; he leaned against the bar, his back to her, his eyes fixed on the swirling amber liquid in his glass."
3"The silence wasn’t awkward anymore; it was a shared understanding, a bridge built on shattered pieces."
91.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount817
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.0416156670746634
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.028151774785801713
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean15.06
std7.24
cv0.481
sampleLengths
016
123
210
324
417
525
61
710
811
911
106
1122
123
1316
1415
155
1615
174
1812
1918
2018
2110
2216
2325
2412
2514
2623
2721
288
299
3010
314
323
3310
3420
3518
366
3721
3818
396
4012
4124
4219
439
4410
4532
4621
4710
4820
4912
66.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4225352112676056
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners30
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then, the door chimed again."
ratio0.016
32.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences64
matches
0"She’d delivered to this bar"
1"She spotted a vacant stool"
2"She slid onto the stool,"
3"She watched him for a"
4"She took a slow sip,"
5"He didn’t move immediately, just"
6"His right hand rested near"
7"He didn’t sit; he leaned"
8"She took another sip, forcing"
9"Her voice was low, devoid"
10"He didn’t turn."
11"His voice was gravelly, a"
12"He finally shifted, turning his"
13"It wasn’t a question"
14"she countered, her gaze flicking"
15"He took a slow sip"
16"He finally slid onto the"
17"His eyes scanned her face,"
18"She gestured vaguely towards the"
19"He finally met her eyes"
ratio0.469
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences64
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Aurora Carter, alias Rory, alias"
2"She’d delivered to this bar"
3"Tonight, she was here for"
4"The bar was a labyrinth"
5"She spotted a vacant stool"
6"She slid onto the stool,"
7"The bartender, a man with"
8"Aurora handed over a ten-pound"
9"The bartender’s movements were precise,"
10"She watched him for a"
11"A veteran, probably."
12"She took a slow sip,"
13"The bar was her sanctuary"
14"A familiar scent, like damp"
15"Aurora’s head snapped up."
16"Silas, who’d been her mentor,"
17"The man who’d taught her"
18"The man who’d vanished without"
19"Silas’s gaze swept the bar,"
ratio0.953
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas, who’d been her mentor, her anchor, her friend—before the Prague operation, before the limp, before the silence."
1"The man who’d taught her to read people like open books, to trust her instincts above all else."
2"Silas’s gaze swept the bar, landing on her with a precision that made her skin prickle."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she admitted, the words tumbling out before she could stop them"
1"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
85.48% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the leather groaning (groan)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.129
leniency0.258
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.129
73.9849%