Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFNSGVM0899DG6EM5VK5ZB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.001700
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pulled her hood up against the chill as she stepped off the path and into the shadowed grove. The faint crunch of dry leaves beneath her boots was the only sound in the stillness. She paused just inside the ring of ancient oaks, where moonlight filtered down through the dense canopy in dappled patches. The Heartstone pendant resting against her chest felt warm, almost alive, its crimson depths pulsing faintly with a soft, inner glow. She didn’t want to be here. Not tonight, not ever, really. But Eva had been insistent, her voice trembling over the phone earlier that evening. *"It’s urgent, Rory. You have to go to the Grove. Tonight. Bring the pendant."* The conversation had ended abruptly, leaving Aurora with more questions than answers. Now, standing in the eerie quiet of the Fae-touched clearing, she wished she’d pressed Eva for more details. The Grove looked different at night. The wildflowers that usually bloomed in riotous colors seemed muted, their petals closed like fists. The air was thicker here, heavier, laden with a scent she couldn’t quite place—something earthy and sweet, like decaying fruit. She adjusted the strap of her bag and took a cautious step forward, the Heartstone’s warmth a small comfort against the creeping unease that gnawed at the edges of her mind. "Eva?" she called softly, her voice swallowed by the trees. No response. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows. Nothing moved, but the sensation of being watched prickled the back of her neck, raising the fine hairs there. She shook it off, attributing it to nerves. Still, her hand drifted instinctively to the pendant, her fingers brushing the smooth stone. The Grove’s strange time dilation was unnerving at the best of times. She could spend hours here and emerge to find only minutes had passed in the outside world—or the opposite. Time didn’t flow here; it lurched and staggered unpredictably. She checked her phone, but the screen was blank, the battery dead. Of course. Tech always failed in places like this. She moved deeper into the clearing, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth. The faint glow of the Heartstone was enough to light her way, casting flickering shadows that danced at the edges of her vision. She kept her pace steady, her breathing even, though her heart thudded loudly in her chest. "Eva?" she called again, louder this time. Still nothing. Then she heard it—a soft, rhythmic sound, like footsteps echoing faintly from somewhere behind her. She froze, her breath catching in her throat. Slowly, she turned, scanning the darkness. The standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled bark catching the moonlight in strange patterns. There was no one there. "Just the wind," she muttered, though the air was still. She forced herself to keep moving, her fingers tightening around the pendant. The warmth from the stone seemed to intensify, a reassuring presence against her palm. The Grove was unnaturally quiet now, as though holding its breath. Even the rustle of leaves was absent. Aurora’s footsteps sounded impossibly loud, each crunch of twigs and leaves echoing unnaturally. She glanced over her shoulder again, her pulse quickening. *Just keep moving.* She reached the center of the clearing, where a shallow pool of water reflected the moonlight like a shattered mirror. Eva had told her to come here, but there was no sign of her—or anyone else. Aurora knelt by the pool, her reflection staring back at her with wide, wary eyes. The Heartstone’s glow rippled across the water’s surface, its crimson light deepening. Then she heard it again—the footsteps. Closer this time. She straightened abruptly, her gaze darting around the clearing. "Eva?" Her voice wavered, betraying her fear. The footsteps paused, as though in response. Her breath came in shallow gasps now, her chest tight. The warmth from the pendant was almost scorching against her skin. A low, guttural sound reached her ears, barely audible but unmistakable. It wasn’t human. Aurora backed away from the pool, her eyes fixed on the shadows between the trees. Her mind raced through possibilities—wild animals, the Fae, something worse. The Grove was a liminal space, a place where the boundaries between worlds blurred. Anything could be here. The footsteps resumed, slow and deliberate, circling her. She turned, trying to track the sound, but it seemed to come from every direction at once. Her fingers clenched around the pendant, its pulse quickening in tandem with her heartbeat. "Who’s there?" she demanded, her voice stronger than she felt. No answer. Just the footsteps, closer now, and that low, growling sound that sent a shiver down her spine. She caught movement out of the corner of her eye—a flicker of shadow darting between the trees. She spun toward it, her heart pounding, but there was nothing there. The air grew colder, the scent of decay sharper. Aurora’s breath fogged in front of her face as she backed toward the edge of the clearing, her eyes never leaving the shadows. The trees seemed to press in around her, their branches twisting into grotesque shapes. She stumbled over a root, catching herself just before she fell. The footsteps stopped, and for a moment, there was silence. Then, a whisper. Her name, spoken in a voice that wasn’t Eva’s—or anyone’s she recognized. It was rasping, guttural, the sound of something inhuman trying to mimic speech. "Aurora..." She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the uneven ground. The Heartstone swung wildly against her chest, its glow a beacon in the dark. The trees seemed to close in around her, their branches clawing at her hoodie as she dashed past. The whispers followed her, echoing through the grove in disjointed fragments. "Come back..." "We see you..." She didn’t look back. She couldn’t. Her lungs burned with the effort, her legs aching as she pushed herself harder. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled forms a lifeline. If she could just reach them— Something caught her ankle, sending her sprawling into the damp leaves. She scrambled to her feet, her hands slick with mud, and pulled herself upright. The whispers were louder now, overlapping in a cacophony of voices. She stumbled forward, her vision blurring, the Heartstone’s warmth searing against her skin. Then, finally, she burst through the ring of standing stones and into the cool night air beyond. The whispers ceased abruptly, replaced by the distant hum of traffic and the rustle of wind through the trees. She collapsed against a tree trunk, gasping for breath, her trembling fingers clutching the pendant. The Grove was silent behind her, its shadows still and unmoving. Aurora glanced down at the Heartstone, its crimson depths glowing faintly. Whatever was in there—whatever had been watching her—she couldn’t shake the feeling that it wasn’t done with her. Not yet. She pushed herself upright, her legs still unsteady, and started down the path toward the city lights. The night was young, but she already knew sleep wouldn’t come easily. She’d have answers tomorrow—and a stern word for Eva. For now, all she wanted was to get as far from the Grove as possible. But even as she walked, the whispers lingered in her mind, faint and insidious, like the echo of a nightmare she couldn’t quite forget. The Heartstone pulsed once, a warning or a promise, and Aurora quickened her pace, the shadows at her back stretching long and dark in the moonlight.
created_at"2026-02-17T09:43:42.402787+00:00" 2/17/2026, 9:43:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she called softly [softly]"
1"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
84.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsms42
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"almost alive"
count1
2
word"depths"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count4
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"lurched"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count7
8
word"echoing"
count3
9
word"loomed"
count2
10
word"sentinels"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"wavered"
count1
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count2
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count1
20
word"beacon"
count1
21
word"cacophony"
count1
22
word"searing"
count1
23
word"echo"
count1
24
word"pulsed"
count1
25
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"almost alive"
2"depths"
3"warmth"
4"scanning"
5"lurched"
6"rhythmic"
7"footsteps"
8"echoing"
9"loomed"
10"sentinels"
11"pulse"
12"shattered"
13"wavered"
14"raced"
15"down her spine"
16"flicker"
17"pounding"
18"silence"
19"whisper"
20"beacon"
21"cacophony"
22"searing"
23"echo"
24"pulsed"
25"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
86.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords17
totalWords1239
ratio0.014
matches
0"\"It’s urgent, Rory. You have to go to the Grove. Tonight. Bring the pendant.\""
1"Just keep moving."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1211
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone8
Eva5
Aurora8
Fae-touched1
Grove6
Fae2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Fae-touched"
5"Fae"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed muted their petals closed like fists"
1"quite place—something earthy and sweet, like decaying fruit"
2"as though holding its breath"
3"quite forget"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1239
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
60.34% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean49.56
std17.9
cv0.361
sampleLengths
077
169
272
363
461
562
650
736
843
963
1053
1157
1249
1348
1467
1529
1654
172
183
1936
2049
2151
2242
2353
2450
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was rasping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences105
ratio0.114
matches
0"The air was thicker here, heavier, laden with a scent she couldn’t quite place—something earthy and sweet, like decaying fruit."
1"She could spend hours here and emerge to find only minutes had passed in the outside world—or the opposite."
2"Time didn’t flow here; it lurched and staggered unpredictably."
3"Then she heard it—a soft, rhythmic sound, like footsteps echoing faintly from somewhere behind her."
4"Eva had told her to come here, but there was no sign of her—or anyone else."
5"Then she heard it again—the footsteps."
6"Her mind raced through possibilities—wild animals, the Fae, something worse."
7"She caught movement out of the corner of her eye—a flicker of shadow darting between the trees."
8"Her name, spoken in a voice that wasn’t Eva’s—or anyone’s she recognized."
9"If she could just reach them—"
10"Whatever was in there—whatever had been watching her—she couldn’t shake the feeling that it wasn’t done with her."
11"She’d have answers tomorrow—and a stern word for Eva."
92.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1223
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.0482420278004906
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.018806214227309895
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.8
std6.1
cv0.517
sampleLengths
020
116
220
321
46
55
614
726
818
96
1015
1120
1231
1310
142
1510
1619
178
1814
1912
2019
219
2212
232
247
2514
2623
2716
287
292
3015
318
326
3316
345
3510
3612
3714
3811
397
4013
419
423
4320
4416
4515
4612
476
483
499
43.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences96
matches
0"Then she heard it—a soft,"
1"Slowly, she turned, scanning the"
2"Even the rustle of leaves"
3"*Just keep moving.*"
4"Then she heard it again—the"
5"Just the footsteps, closer now,"
6"Then, a whisper."
7"Then, finally, she burst through"
ratio0.083
65.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences96
matches
0"She paused just inside the"
1"She didn’t want to be"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"she called softly, her voice"
4"She glanced around, her bright"
5"She shook it off, attributing"
6"She could spend hours here"
7"She checked her phone, but"
8"She moved deeper into the"
9"She kept her pace steady,"
10"she called again, louder this"
11"She froze, her breath catching"
12"she muttered, though the air"
13"She forced herself to keep"
14"She glanced over her shoulder"
15"She reached the center of"
16"She straightened abruptly, her gaze"
17"Her voice wavered, betraying her"
18"Her breath came in shallow"
19"It wasn’t human."
ratio0.385
48.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences96
matches
0"Aurora Carter pulled her hood"
1"The faint crunch of dry"
2"She paused just inside the"
3"The Heartstone pendant resting against"
4"She didn’t want to be"
5"The conversation had ended abruptly,"
6"The Grove looked different at"
7"The wildflowers that usually bloomed"
8"The air was thicker here,"
9"She adjusted the strap of"
10"she called softly, her voice"
11"She glanced around, her bright"
12"Nothing moved, but the sensation"
13"She shook it off, attributing"
14"The Grove’s strange time dilation"
15"She could spend hours here"
16"Time didn’t flow here; it"
17"She checked her phone, but"
18"Tech always failed in places"
19"She moved deeper into the"
ratio0.823
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"Now, standing in the eerie"
1"If she could just reach"
ratio0.021
78.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of her bag and took a cautious step forward, the Heartstone’s warmth a small comfort against the creeping unease that gnawed at the edges…"
1"Nothing moved, but the sensation of being watched prickled the back of her neck, raising the fine hairs there."
2"The faint glow of the Heartstone was enough to light her way, casting flickering shadows that danced at the edges of her vision."
3"She forced herself to keep moving, her fingers tightening around the pendant."
4"Her name, spoken in a voice that wasn’t Eva’s—or anyone’s she recognized."
5"She stumbled forward, her vision blurring, the Heartstone’s warmth searing against her skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she muttered, though the air was still"
1"she demanded, her voice stronger than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.444
73.2307%