| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called softly [softly]" | | 1 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 84.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1250 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1250 | | totalAiIsms | 42 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "almost alive" | | 2 | "depths" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "lurched" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "sentinels" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "wavered" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "down her spine" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "pounding" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "beacon" | | 21 | "cacophony" | | 22 | "searing" | | 23 | "echo" | | 24 | "pulsed" | | 25 | "quickened" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1239 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "\"It’s urgent, Rory. You have to go to the Grove. Tonight. Bring the pendant.\"" | | 1 | "Just keep moving." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1211 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 8 | | Eva | 5 | | Aurora | 8 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Fae-touched" | | 5 | "Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed muted their petals closed like fists" | | 1 | "quite place—something earthy and sweet, like decaying fruit" | | 2 | "as though holding its breath" | | 3 | "quite forget" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1239 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.34% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 49.56 | | std | 17.9 | | cv | 0.361 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thicker here, heavier, laden with a scent she couldn’t quite place—something earthy and sweet, like decaying fruit." | | 1 | "She could spend hours here and emerge to find only minutes had passed in the outside world—or the opposite." | | 2 | "Time didn’t flow here; it lurched and staggered unpredictably." | | 3 | "Then she heard it—a soft, rhythmic sound, like footsteps echoing faintly from somewhere behind her." | | 4 | "Eva had told her to come here, but there was no sign of her—or anyone else." | | 5 | "Then she heard it again—the footsteps." | | 6 | "Her mind raced through possibilities—wild animals, the Fae, something worse." | | 7 | "She caught movement out of the corner of her eye—a flicker of shadow darting between the trees." | | 8 | "Her name, spoken in a voice that wasn’t Eva’s—or anyone’s she recognized." | | 9 | "If she could just reach them—" | | 10 | "Whatever was in there—whatever had been watching her—she couldn’t shake the feeling that it wasn’t done with her." | | 11 | "She’d have answers tomorrow—and a stern word for Eva." |
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| 92.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1223 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.0482420278004906 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018806214227309895 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 11.8 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 43.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it—a soft," | | 1 | "Slowly, she turned, scanning the" | | 2 | "Even the rustle of leaves" | | 3 | "*Just keep moving.*" | | 4 | "Then she heard it again—the" | | 5 | "Just the footsteps, closer now," | | 6 | "Then, a whisper." | | 7 | "Then, finally, she burst through" |
| | ratio | 0.083 | |
| 65.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused just inside the" | | 1 | "She didn’t want to be" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "she called softly, her voice" | | 4 | "She glanced around, her bright" | | 5 | "She shook it off, attributing" | | 6 | "She could spend hours here" | | 7 | "She checked her phone, but" | | 8 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 9 | "She kept her pace steady," | | 10 | "she called again, louder this" | | 11 | "She froze, her breath catching" | | 12 | "she muttered, though the air" | | 13 | "She forced herself to keep" | | 14 | "She glanced over her shoulder" | | 15 | "She reached the center of" | | 16 | "She straightened abruptly, her gaze" | | 17 | "Her voice wavered, betraying her" | | 18 | "Her breath came in shallow" | | 19 | "It wasn’t human." |
| | ratio | 0.385 | |
| 48.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pulled her hood" | | 1 | "The faint crunch of dry" | | 2 | "She paused just inside the" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant resting against" | | 4 | "She didn’t want to be" | | 5 | "The conversation had ended abruptly," | | 6 | "The Grove looked different at" | | 7 | "The wildflowers that usually bloomed" | | 8 | "The air was thicker here," | | 9 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 10 | "she called softly, her voice" | | 11 | "She glanced around, her bright" | | 12 | "Nothing moved, but the sensation" | | 13 | "She shook it off, attributing" | | 14 | "The Grove’s strange time dilation" | | 15 | "She could spend hours here" | | 16 | "Time didn’t flow here; it" | | 17 | "She checked her phone, but" | | 18 | "Tech always failed in places" | | 19 | "She moved deeper into the" |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the eerie" | | 1 | "If she could just reach" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 78.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of her bag and took a cautious step forward, the Heartstone’s warmth a small comfort against the creeping unease that gnawed at the edges…" | | 1 | "Nothing moved, but the sensation of being watched prickled the back of her neck, raising the fine hairs there." | | 2 | "The faint glow of the Heartstone was enough to light her way, casting flickering shadows that danced at the edges of her vision." | | 3 | "She forced herself to keep moving, her fingers tightening around the pendant." | | 4 | "Her name, spoken in a voice that wasn’t Eva’s—or anyone’s she recognized." | | 5 | "She stumbled forward, her vision blurring, the Heartstone’s warmth searing against her skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, though the air was still" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice stronger than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |