Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFNVS68GEZ15KHTHHCHR75

Run Details

Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was a dim cocoon of amber light and worn wood, the kind of place that had seen too many secrets to keep count. Rory pushed through the door, the familiar green neon sign buzzing overhead like a trapped insect. The air smelled of whiskey and old books, and she could already feel the knots in her shoulders beginning to loosen. It was late, but not late enough that the bar had filled with the usual Friday night crowd. Just a few scattered patrons hunched over their drinks, and Silas behind the bar, polishing glasses with the same methodical precision he'd always had. She slid onto a stool, the vinyl creaking beneath her. Silas looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "Evening, Rory. The usual?" "Please." She watched as he poured the bourbon, his hands steady despite the slight limp in his left leg. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light as he slid the glass toward her. "Quiet night," she observed, taking a sip. The bourbon burned pleasantly down her throat. "Until now." Silas leaned against the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light. "You look tired." "Long day." She shrugged. "Deliveries, then class. You know how it is." "I do." He nodded toward the stack of law textbooks peeking out of her bag. "Still chasing that degree?" "Reluctantly." She smiled wryly. "Dad would have a fit if I quit." "Your father always did have strong opinions about education." Silas' expression softened. "How is Brendan these days?" "The same. Still thinks I should have followed him into law." Rory swirled the bourbon in her glass. "Sometimes I wonder if he's right." "Following in your father's footsteps is one thing. Finding your own path is another." Silas' voice was gentle but firm. "You're doing just fine, Rory." "Thanks, Si." She took another sip, feeling the warmth spread through her chest. "Hey, speaking of paths—do you remember Eva?" Silas' eyebrows lifted slightly. "Your childhood friend? The one who convinced you to move to London?" "Yeah, that's her." Rory hesitated. "I ran into her today. At the restaurant." "Ah." Silas nodded, understanding in his eyes. "How was it?" "Strange." Rory set down her glass. "She's... different. Not bad different, just... changed. We used to be so close, you know? Now it's like there's this whole ocean between us." "People change." Silas' voice was matter-of-fact. "Especially after years apart." "I know." Rory picked at a loose thread on her jacket. "It's just—she's engaged now. To some guy named Liam. And she kept talking about this whole 'grown-up' life she's built. Mortgage, career, the works." "Sounds like she's doing well." "She is." Rory sighed. "And that's great. It really is. But it made me realize how far behind I feel. I'm still delivering Chinese food and studying for exams I'm not even sure I want to take." "Life isn't a race, Rory." Silas' voice was gentle. "Just because Eva's on a different path doesn't mean yours is wrong." "I know that." She leaned forward, resting her elbows on the bar. "But it's hard not to compare sometimes. We used to dream about traveling the world together, opening our own business, all that stuff. Now she's planning a wedding and I'm trying to figure out if I can afford next month's rent." "Dreams change." Silas' fingers drummed lightly on the bar. "What matters is that you're still moving forward. Still trying." "I guess." Rory's phone buzzed in her pocket. She pulled it out, glancing at the screen. "It's Eva. She wants to meet for coffee tomorrow." "Then you should go." Silas nodded toward the phone. "Old friends are worth keeping, even if the dynamic has shifted." "You're right." She tucked the phone away. "It's just—there's this weight, you know? Like all the years we didn't talk have piled up between us. I don't even know where to start." "Start with honesty." Silas' eyes met hers. "Tell her how you feel. Even if it's messy. Even if it's hard." Rory nodded slowly. "You always did know what to say, Si." "I've had a lot of practice." He smiled faintly. "Now, finish your drink. I'll call you a cab." As she sipped the last of her bourbon, Rory's mind drifted to the scar on her left wrist—that small crescent-shaped reminder of a childhood accident, of scraped knees and fearless adventures with Eva. They'd been inseparable once, two girls with matching friendship bracelets and grand plans for the future. Now, years later, they were strangers bound by memory alone. The bourbon was gone. She set the glass down and stood, shouldering her bag. "Thanks, Si. For the drink and the advice." "Anytime, Rory." He walked her to the door, his limp more pronounced in the low light. "Remember—you're exactly where you need to be." She stepped out into the cool night air, the neon sign buzzing behind her like a promise. The city stretched out before her, vast and unknowable, full of paths not yet taken. And somewhere in that sprawling labyrinth, Eva was waiting. Rory squared her shoulders and started walking, the weight of years and unspoken words settling around her like a familiar coat. Some conversations couldn't be avoided forever. Some friendships deserved a second chance. Even if they'd both changed beyond recognition.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She smiled wryly [wryly]"
1"He smiled faintly [faintly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.358
leniency0.717
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.075
72.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"reluctantly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"lightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"race"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"methodical"
2"footsteps"
3"warmth"
4"race"
5"weight"
6"reminder"
7"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords886
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount452
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Friday1
Silas5
Rory10
Eva2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.394
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount886
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean23.95
std17.39
cv0.726
sampleLengths
0105
124
237
314
417
512
619
712
817
924
1025
1120
1216
1313
1410
1530
1610
1735
185
1937
2021
2153
2219
2325
2420
2532
2620
2711
2818
2949
3010
3122
3223
3332
349
3533
367
98.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs86
matches
0"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences77
ratio0.013
matches
0"As she sipped the last of her bourbon, Rory's mind drifted to the scar on her left wrist—that small crescent-shaped reminder of a childhood accident, of scraped knees and fearless adventures with Eva."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount489
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped reminder"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.034764826175869123
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012269938650306749
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean11.51
std7.65
cv0.665
sampleLengths
026
116
221
318
424
510
610
74
819
918
107
117
1214
133
144
158
1615
174
184
198
2012
215
2218
236
2420
255
2613
277
284
2912
305
318
327
333
346
3524
366
374
3811
3924
405
414
4233
439
4412
4512
4641
479
4810
498
96.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5844155844155844
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners45
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"Just a few scattered patrons"
ratio0.026
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences39
matches
0"It was late, but not"
1"She slid onto a stool,"
2"She watched as he poured"
3"she observed, taking a sip"
4"He nodded toward the stack"
5"She smiled wryly"
6"She took another sip, feeling"
7"She leaned forward, resting her"
8"She pulled it out, glancing"
9"She tucked the phone away"
10"He smiled faintly"
11"They'd been inseparable once, two"
12"She set the glass down"
13"He walked her to the"
14"She stepped out into the"
ratio0.385
24.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences39
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was a"
1"Rory pushed through the door,"
2"The air smelled of whiskey"
3"It was late, but not"
4"She slid onto a stool,"
5"Silas looked up, his hazel"
6"She watched as he poured"
7"The silver signet ring on"
8"she observed, taking a sip"
9"The bourbon burned pleasantly down"
10"Silas leaned against the bar,"
11"He nodded toward the stack"
12"She smiled wryly"
13"Rory swirled the bourbon in"
14"She took another sip, feeling"
15"Silas nodded, understanding in his"
16"Rory set down her glass"
17"Rory picked at a loose"
18"She leaned forward, resting her"
19"Rory's phone buzzed in her"
ratio0.872
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences39
matches
0"Now, years later, they were"
1"Even if they'd both changed"
ratio0.051
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was a dim cocoon of amber light and worn wood, the kind of place that had seen too many secrets to keep count."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she observed (observe)"
1"Rory sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.075
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.075
90.2933%