Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFQSWH853F6Q3GVDR86S69

Run Details

Duration:
2m 34s
Cost:
$0.001749
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign hummed softly above the door, casting an otherworldly glow on the damp Soho pavement. *The Raven’s Nest*. Rory pushed the heavy door open, the familiar scent of old wood, spilled ale, and Silas’s particular brand of lemon polish washing over her. It was a smell that had come to mean safety. The bar was quiet for a Thursday. A few regulars hunched over their drinks, islands of solitude in the dim light. The maps and grainy photographs on the walls seemed to lean in, listening to the low murmur of conversation. Behind the bar, Silas was polishing a glass with a slow, methodical rhythm, his silver signet ring catching the light with each pass. He gave her a slight, almost imperceptible nod, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. His limp was more pronounced tonight; the damp weather always made the old knee injury ache. She slid onto her usual stool at the far end, the one with a clear view of both exits. A habit she’d picked up, one Silas had quietly encouraged. “The usual, Rory?” he asked, his voice a low rumble. “Please, Si. Tough day.” He nodded, reaching for a bottle of a decent single malt without needing to look. He poured two fingers into a clean tumbler and pushed it across the polished wood. His movements were economical, precise, the ghost of the field agent he’d once been. As he turned to put the bottle away, the door opened again, bringing with it a gust of cool night air and the sound of London traffic. Rory took a sip, letting the whisky burn a warm path down her throat. She stared at the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a pale little moon against her skin. A relic from a time when accidents were simple and the biggest worry was explaining a broken vase to her mother. A man’s voice, hesitant and oddly familiar, cut through her thoughts. “Excuse me, is this seat taken?” She looked up, ready to offer a polite, dismissive shake of her head, and the words died in her throat. It was Evan. But it wasn’t. Not the Evan she remembered. The man standing before her was a faded photograph of the one she’d known. His once-athletic frame had softened, gone slightly paunchy beneath a cheap, ill-fitting suit. His hair, which he’d always been so vain about, was thinning at the crown. Lines of stress were carved deep around his mouth and eyes. He looked… diminished. Worn down by years she hadn’t been there to see. He was staring at her with a mix of shock and dawning recognition. “Laila?” he breathed, the old pet name sounding foreign and clumsy on his tongue now. He’d always called her that, a name he’d chosen himself, saying ‘Aurora’ was too much of a mouthful. She’d hated it, but had let it slide, one of a thousand small concessions. “Rory,” she corrected, her voice cooler than she intended. “It’s Rory.” She saw the flinch, the tiny wound the correction inflicted. Good. “Rory. Right. God, it’s… it’s been years.” He hovered awkwardly, his hands fluttering as if unsure what to do with themselves. Silas had stopped polishing his glass. He was watching them, his expression unreadable, but his posture had shifted subtly. He was no longer just a bartender; he was a sentinel. “It has,” Rory said. She didn’t offer the stool. She didn’t offer anything. He took the silence as an invitation and sat down anyway, the wood groaning under his weight. He smelled of stale cigarette smoke and cheap aftershave, a far cry from the expensive cologne he used to wear. “I can’t believe it’s you,” he said, shaking his head. “What are you doing in London? Last I heard, you were in Cardiff. Pre-Law, right? Following in your dad’s footsteps.” The past felt like a physical weight pressing on her chest. “Plans change.” “Yeah,” he said, a hollow laugh escaping him. “Tell me about it.” He signaled to Silas for a pint of whatever was on tap. When it arrived, he took a long, grateful pull. “So. What do you do now? You look… good.” His eyes scanned her, and she felt a familiar, unwelcome prickle of assessment. She was dressed in her delivery gear—dark jeans, a comfortable jumper, practical boots. She looked capable. She looked like she could run if she had to. “I deliver food,” she said flatly. He blinked, as if waiting for the punchline. “You… deliver food? For a living?” The disbelief was tinged with a condescension that was so intrinsically *him* that for a moment, the years melted away and she was twenty again, sitting across from him in a café, listening to him pick apart her career choices. “It pays the rent. The flat’s just upstairs.” She gestured vaguely toward the ceiling. His eyes widened. “You live *here*? Above a pub?” He said it like she’d told him she lived in a sewer. The Evan she’d known had been obsessed with image, with the right postcode, the right car, the right friends. This place, with its worn charm and secret histories, would have been his idea of hell. “It’s a bar. And it’s quiet.” She took another sip of whisky, her bright blue eyes fixed on him over the rim of the glass. “What about you, Evan? Still in finance? Driving the Beamer?” The question hung in the air, sharp and pointed. He looked down into his pint, his shoulders slumping. The bravado drained out of him, leaving behind something raw and defeated. “The firm… there were cutbacks. After the crash. I’m in sales now. Office supplies. It’s… it’s a living.” He couldn’t meet her gaze. “Sold the car.” The silence stretched between them, thick with everything unsaid. The memories of slammed doors, of cruel words meant to wound, of the constant, exhausting effort to mould herself into someone he wouldn’t be ashamed of. The frantic, terrified phone call to Eva. The train ticket to London bought with trembling hands. The relief of disappearing into a city where he would never think to look for her. He finally looked up, his eyes searching her face. “You just… left. You changed your number. Blocked me everywhere. I didn’t… I never got to apologize.” The word ‘apologize’ felt too small, too flimsy a bridge to span the chasm he’d created. “Some things don’t need an apology, Evan. They just need to be over.” “I was a bastard,” he said, the words rushing out as if he’d been rehearsing them for years. “I know I was. I was jealous, and insecure, and I took it all out on you. I thought… I thought if I could make you feel small, you’d never leave.” He gave a bitter, choked laugh. “Turns out that’s not how it works.” Rory said nothing. She just watched him, this ghost from a life she’d worked hard to escape. The anger was still there, a cold, hard stone in her gut, but it was covered in layers of time and distance. Now, looking at this broken man in his cheap suit, she mostly felt a profound, weary sadness. “I heard you were happy,” he mumbled into his beer. “I asked around, once. Someone said you’d moved on. That you were doing well.” “I am,” she said, and for the first time, she meant it. The delivery job, the flat above the bar, the quiet mentorship of Silas—it was a life she had built herself, brick by careful brick. It was hers. He finished his pint and set the glass down with a finality. He looked older than his years, weighed down by regrets he’d carried for far too long. “I should go,” he said, not moving. Rory just nodded. He stood up, fumbling for his wallet. Silas, from his post at the other end of the bar, shook his head once. “On the house,” he said, his voice leaving no room for argument. Evan looked startled, then grateful. “Thanks.” He turned back to Rory. “It was… good to see you, Aurora. Really.” He used her full name, a peace offering. “Take care of yourself, Evan.” He gave a jerky nod and walked out, the door swinging shut behind him, sealing the bar back into its hushed, amber-lit world. The silence he left behind was different now, charged with the echoes of a past finally laid to rest. Rory turned her glass slowly on the bar, watching the light play in the amber liquid. Silas limped over and refilled it without a word. He didn’t ask. He just waited. After a long moment, she looked up at him, her expression clear. “He’s nobody,” she said, and it was the truth. Silas gave her another of his slow, understanding nods. “I know,” he said. And that was the end of it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
38.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"He’d always [always]"
1"He hovered awkwardly [awkwardly]"
2"she said flatly [flatly]"
3"the years melted away [away]"
4"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
5"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.73
leniency1
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.222
86.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"comfortable"
count1
10
word"tinged"
count1
11
word"charm"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"familiar"
2"methodical"
3"unreadable"
4"sentinel"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"footsteps"
8"scanned"
9"comfortable"
10"tinged"
11"charm"
12"profound"
13"charged"
14"echoes"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1477
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"him"
2"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1212
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Silas9
Thursday1
London2
Evan4
Good1
Eva1
Rory7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a physical weight pressing on"
1"looked like she could run if she had to"
2"as if waiting for the punchline"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1477
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36.02
std23.5
cv0.652
sampleLengths
055
194
229
310
44
571
652
717
820
93
1073
1160
1222
1321
1430
1513
1667
1713
1881
196
2054
2114
2256
2335
2456
2567
2626
2729
2862
2956
3024
3139
3235
333
3434
3527
365
3742
3831
3921
4020
89.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences108
matches
0"were carved"
1"was dressed"
2"was tinged"
3"been obsessed"
4"was covered"
44.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs214
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was explaining"
2"was thinning"
3"was staring"
4"was watching"
46.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences119
ratio0.034
matches
0"His limp was more pronounced tonight; the damp weather always made the old knee injury ache."
1"He was no longer just a bartender; he was a sentinel."
2"She was dressed in her delivery gear—dark jeans, a comfortable jumper, practical boots."
3"The delivery job, the flat above the bar, the quiet mentorship of Silas—it was a life she had built herself, brick by careful brick."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cheap, ill-fitting suit."
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.0387409200968523
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011299435028248588
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean12.41
std7.36
cv0.593
sampleLengths
018
13
224
310
47
514
619
723
815
916
1019
1110
1210
134
1415
1515
1614
1727
1814
1917
2021
2111
226
2320
243
253
265
2714
2813
2914
3011
312
321
3310
3413
3515
3618
3714
389
3912
401
4121
426
4313
4411
454
465
474
4817
4920
37.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.31932773109243695
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences102
matches
0"It was a smell that"
1"He gave her a slight,"
2"His limp was more pronounced"
3"She slid onto her usual"
4"he asked, his voice a"
5"He nodded, reaching for a"
6"He poured two fingers into"
7"His movements were economical, precise,"
8"She stared at the crescent-shaped"
9"She looked up, ready to"
10"It was Evan."
11"His once-athletic frame had softened,"
12"His hair, which he’d always"
13"He was staring at her"
14"he breathed, the old pet"
15"He’d always called her that,"
16"She’d hated it, but had"
17"she corrected, her voice cooler"
18"She saw the flinch, the"
19"He hovered awkwardly, his hands"
ratio0.578
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences102
matches
0"The green neon sign hummed"
1"*The Raven’s Nest*."
2"Rory pushed the heavy door"
3"It was a smell that"
4"The bar was quiet for"
5"The maps and grainy photographs"
6"He gave her a slight,"
7"His limp was more pronounced"
8"She slid onto her usual"
9"A habit she’d picked up,"
10"he asked, his voice a"
11"He nodded, reaching for a"
12"He poured two fingers into"
13"His movements were economical, precise,"
14"Rory took a sip, letting"
15"She stared at the crescent-shaped"
16"A relic from a time"
17"A man’s voice, hesitant and"
18"She looked up, ready to"
19"It was Evan."
ratio0.902
49.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"Now, looking at this broken"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
32.41% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he asked, his voice a low rumble"
1"she corrected, her voice cooler than she intended"
2"he said, a hollow laugh escaping him"
3"he said, not moving"
4"he said, his voice leaving no room for argument"
41.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"He’d always (would)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
3"he mumbled (mumble)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.216
70.9315%