Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFQXWPF60JYV5DPN1TEMCH

Run Details

Duration:
2m 17s
Cost:
$0.001862
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in The Raven’s Nest was thick with the scent of aged whiskey, damp wool, and the ghost of a thousand conversations. It was Rory’s favourite kind of weather, contained within four walls. She traced the cool, smooth rim of her glass, her thumb finding the familiar, slightly serrated edge of a chip. From her usual stool at the end of the bar, she had a clear view of the door and the green neon glow that bled from the sign outside, casting the patrons in a sickly, otherworldly light. Silas moved behind the counter with a veteran’s economy, his limp a soft, rhythmic scrape against the floorboards, a sound as much a part of the place as the low hum of the cooler. The door swung open, letting in a sharp gust of rainy London air and a new customer. A man, tall, shrugging off a coat that looked too expensive for the neighbourhood. He hesitated for a moment, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, scanning the room as if looking for someone. Or perhaps just looking for a place to land. They swept past her, then snapped back. Something in his posture shifted, a subtle straightening of the spine, a hitch in his breath she felt more than heard across the room. “Aurora?” The voice was deeper, sanded down by time and what sounded like a pack-a-day habit, but the cadence was unmistakable. It was a voice from a different life, one that belonged to sun-bleached afternoons in Cardiff, to stolen pints behind the rugby grounds, to whispered secrets in a university library that always smelled of dust and desperation. She turned slowly, letting him come into focus. Evan. The years had been generous in a brutal, architectural way. The boyish softness had been planed away, leaving a harder, sharper man. His suit was a severe, dark grey, tailored to perfection, a stark contrast to the worn jeans and band t-shirts he used to live in. His hair was shorter, ruthlessly styled, but his eyes were the same—a deep, restless brown that had once made her feel like the most fascinating creature on earth. Now, they just looked tired. “Evan.” Her own voice was calm, a flat stone dropped into still water. She kept her hands on her glass, the small crescent scar on her left wrist hidden beneath the cuff of her sweater. He closed the distance between them, his movements stiff, as if he’d forgotten how to be casual. “My god. I… I heard you’d moved to London. I didn’t think…” He trailed off, his gaze doing a quick, appraising tour of her. The simple sweater, the jeans, the fact that she was sitting alone in a dim Soho bar on a Tuesday night. She could see the calculations flickering behind his eyes, comparing the reality to whatever story he’d been telling himself. “Small world,” she said, because it was the only thing that felt safe to say. “Can I…” He gestured to the empty stool beside her. It wasn’t really a question. He was already sliding onto it, the fine wool of his trousers whispering against the worn leather. He signalled to Silas, who was polishing a glass with a slow, deliberate motion, his hazel eyes missing nothing. “Scotch. Neat. Whatever’s best.” Silas gave a curt nod, his gaze flicking to Rory. A silent question. She gave a minute shake of her head. She was fine. An awkward silence descended, thick and heavy. The jukebox in the corner clicked over to a mournful Tom Waits song, the piano notes falling like rain against the window. “You look well,” Evan said finally, the words sounding rote, something you say to an acquaintance at a dreadful work function. “You too.” She took a sip of her drink. “The suit’s new.” He looked down at himself as if surprised by what he was wearing. “City life. You have to play the part.” He accepted the glass of amber liquid Silas placed before him with a quiet thanks. “What are you… I mean, what brings you to a place like this?” “I live upstairs,” she said simply. His eyebrows lifted. “Here?” “It’s cheap. And quiet. Mostly.” He absorbed this, his fingers tightening around his glass. “I pictured you in a high-rise. Some modern thing with floor-to-ceiling windows. Partner at some stuffy firm by now. That was always the plan, wasn’t it? Pre-Law Aurora Carter, terror of the moot court.” The name ‘Aurora’ sounded foreign and overly formal coming from him. He’d only ever called her Rory. She looked past him, at a faded black-and-white photograph on the wall of a woman laughing on a bridge, her head thrown back in a moment of pure, uncomplicated joy. “Plans change.” “Clearly.” He took a long drink of his scotch, wincing slightly as it went down. “So what do you do? If you’re not terrifying junior barristers.” “I deliver food. For a Chinese restaurant.” The statement hung in the air between them, stark and ridiculous. He blinked, and for a second, the polished City banker vanished, and the boy she’d known was right there, confused and a little hurt. “You’re joking.” “It pays the rent. The bike’s good exercise.” She offered a thin smile. “It’s a living.” He shook his head, a slow, disbelieving motion. “Aurora. All that potential. The grades, the drive… you were the smartest person I knew. And you’re riding a bicycle around London with noodles in a bag.” There was no malice in it, just a profound, bewildered disappointment. “And you?” she asked, her tone light, deflecting. “Playing the part seems to be going well. Investment banking?” “Private equity,” he corrected automatically, and she saw the slightest flush of embarrassment on his neck. He’d always hated people who defined themselves by their jobs. “It’s… it’s money. A lot of it. It’s not exactly changing the world.” “We wanted to change the world?” she asked, genuinely curious. She remembered wanting to get a first-class degree. She remembered wanting to make her father proud. She remembered wanting to be anywhere Evan wasn’t, in the terrified, frantic months after she left. “I thought we did,” he said softly, his eyes on the rows of bottles behind the bar. “I thought we were going to be different. You were going to take on unjust laws, and I was going to… I don’t know, write the great Welsh novel or something. Not shuffle numbers for billionaires.” He drained his glass and signalled Silas for another. The silence returned, but this time it was charged, filled with the ghosts of their younger, more hopeful selves. “Why did you leave, Rory?” he asked, the old nickname slipping out unbidden. He wasn’t looking at her. He was studying his hands, the way they lay flat on the polished wood of the bar. “I mean, really. You just vanished. One day you were there, the next… poof. No note. Your number disconnected. Your mum wouldn’t tell me anything. It was like you’d been erased.” She felt the old, familiar knot tighten in her stomach. The fear, the shame, the desperate need to run. She flexed the fingers of her left hand, the scar on her wrist a pale reminder of a different, simpler pain. She could lie. She could give him one of the easy, packaged stories she’d perfected for nosy neighbours or well-meaning co-workers. A great job opportunity. A fresh start. But the weight of the years in this quiet, confessional space felt too heavy for a lie. “I needed to breathe,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “You were… the air got too thin, Evan.” He finally turned to look at her, and she saw the understanding dawn in his eyes. Not the full, ugly truth—the slammed doors, the cruel words that felt like physical blows, the way he’d isolate her from her friends, the constant, grinding anxiety of never knowing which version of him would walk through the door—but a shadow have known. “Oh,” he said. The word was a sigh, an exhalation of all the air in the room. He looked down at his fresh drink as if he’d forgotten he’d ordered it. “I was… I was a mess back then. I know that. The pressure from my dad, the fear of failing… I took it all out on you. I’m… Christ, I’m so sorry, Rory.” It was the first time he’d ever said it. The apology was a decade too late, a salve on a scar that had long since healed into tough, numb tissue. It didn’t fix anything. It didn’t give her back those lost years. But it was real. She could hear the regret in it, the weight of the man he’d become looking back at the boy he’d been with a kind of horrified pity. “It was a long time ago,” she said. “Not that long.” He finally took a drink from his second glass. “I looked for you, you know. For ages.” “I didn’t want to be found.” He nodded, accepting this final verdict. They sat in silence for a long while, two strangers bound by a shared, painful history, listening to the rain and the sad, sweet music. The past was a country they could both remember, but neither of them could ever visit again. He had become this sharp, prosperous stranger in a beautiful suit, haunted by the ghost of the artist he’d meant to be. She had become this quiet woman in a borrowed life, delivering noodles and living above a bar, the ghost of the lawyer she’d never wanted to become. He finished his drink and pulled out his wallet, laying a fifty-pound note on the bar. “For mine,” he said to Silas, then gestured to her empty glass. “And hers.” He stood up, the movement awkward. He looked older than he had when he walked in. “It was good to see you, Aurora,” he said, the formal name fitting the man he was now. “You too, Evan.” He gave her a last, long look, a final snapshot for the archives, then turned and walked out into the rain, the green neon light swallowing him whole. The door sighed shut behind him, sealing the bar back into its own timeless atmosphere. Rory looked down at her hands, at the pale crescent moon on her wrist. She picked up her refreshed glass and took a slow sip. The ice had melted, watering the whiskey down. It tasted like time. It tasted like letting go.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.09% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Evan said finally [finally]"
1"she said simply [simply]"
2"he corrected automatically [automatically]"
3"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
80.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1766
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"softly"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1766
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"stark"
count2
7
word"fascinating"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"potential"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"otherworldly"
3"rhythmic"
4"gloom"
5"scanning"
6"stark"
7"fascinating"
8"silence"
9"potential"
10"profound"
11"charged"
12"stomach"
13"reminder"
14"weight"
15"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1752
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1396
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory4
London1
Cardiff1
Soho1
Tuesday1
Silas6
Tom1
Waits1
City1
Evan3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Tom"
3"Waits"
4"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
62.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if looking for someone"
1"sounded like a pack-a-day habit, but the c"
2"felt like physical blows, the way he’d"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1752
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean40.74
std30.03
cv0.737
sampleLengths
0125
190
21
357
489
535
681
715
855
924
1029
1121
1212
1349
146
154
165
1743
1849
1926
207
2137
2216
2346
2418
2539
2642
2781
2866
2985
3020
3159
3264
3373
348
3520
366
3797
3846
3918
403
4143
4242
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"been planed"
49.17% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was polishing"
2"was wearing"
3"wasn’t looking"
4"was studying"
97.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences125
ratio0.016
matches
0"His hair was shorter, ruthlessly styled, but his eyes were the same—a deep, restless brown that had once made her feel like the most fascinating creature on earth."
1"Not the full, ugly truth—the slammed doors, the cruel words that felt like physical blows, the way he’d isolate her from her friends, the constant, grinding anxiety of never knowing which version of him would walk through the door—but a shadow have known."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1416
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.03389830508474576
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.013418079096045197
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean14.02
std9.46
cv0.675
sampleLengths
023
111
220
337
434
517
614
719
89
97
1024
111
1220
1337
148
151
1610
1712
1825
1928
205
2113
2222
2317
2424
2521
2619
2715
2810
295
3017
3119
324
3310
343
358
363
377
3822
3921
409
413
4213
4323
4413
456
463
471
485
499
37.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.296
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount69
totalSentences101
matches
0"It was Rory’s favourite kind"
1"She traced the cool, smooth"
2"He hesitated for a moment,"
3"They swept past her, then"
4"It was a voice from"
5"She turned slowly, letting him"
6"His suit was a severe,"
7"His hair was shorter, ruthlessly"
8"Her own voice was calm,"
9"She kept her hands on"
10"He closed the distance between"
11"He trailed off, his gaze"
12"She could see the calculations"
13"she said, because it was"
14"He gestured to the empty"
15"It wasn’t really a question."
16"He was already sliding onto"
17"He signalled to Silas, who"
18"She gave a minute shake"
19"She was fine."
ratio0.683
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences101
matches
0"The air in The Raven’s"
1"It was Rory’s favourite kind"
2"She traced the cool, smooth"
3"Silas moved behind the counter"
4"The door swung open, letting"
5"A man, tall, shrugging off"
6"He hesitated for a moment,"
7"They swept past her, then"
8"Something in his posture shifted,"
9"The voice was deeper, sanded"
10"It was a voice from"
11"She turned slowly, letting him"
12"The years had been generous"
13"The boyish softness had been"
14"His suit was a severe,"
15"His hair was shorter, ruthlessly"
16"Her own voice was calm,"
17"She kept her hands on"
18"He closed the distance between"
19"He trailed off, his gaze"
ratio0.931
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now, they just looked tired."
ratio0.01
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"From her usual stool at the end of the bar, she had a clear view of the door and the green neon glow that bled from the sign outside, casting the patrons in a s…"
1"A man, tall, shrugging off a coat that looked too expensive for the neighbourhood."
2"He hesitated for a moment, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, scanning the room as if looking for someone."
3"He closed the distance between them, his movements stiff, as if he’d forgotten how to be casual."
4"She could see the calculations flickering behind his eyes, comparing the reality to whatever story he’d been telling himself."
5"He signalled to Silas, who was polishing a glass with a slow, deliberate motion, his hazel eyes missing nothing."
6"He’d always hated people who defined themselves by their jobs."
7"Not the full, ugly truth—the slammed doors, the cruel words that felt like physical blows, the way he’d isolate her from her friends, the constant, grinding anx…"
8"He looked down at his fresh drink as if he’d forgotten he’d ordered it."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He trailed, his gaze doing a quick, appraising tour of her"
1"she asked, her tone light, deflecting"
2"he asked, the old nickname slipping out unbidden"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he corrected automatically (correct)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.591
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.045
74.2174%