Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFSS3SKDXSV8VEEAX50HFQ

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Duration:
26.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The darkness of the grove pressed in around Aurora like a physical weight, the ancient oaks looming overhead with branches that seemed to reach for her like skeletal fingers. She'd been here before, but never at night. Never when the shadows pooled so thick between the standing stones that they might as well have been portals to another world. Her footsteps crunched on the carpet of fallen leaves as she made her way toward the center of the clearing. The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her chest, its crimson surface pulsing with a faint, steady warmth that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat. She'd been drawn here by its pull, by the insistent tug that had grown stronger with each passing hour until she could no longer ignore it. The grove was supposed to be safe. A sanctuary between worlds, Isolde had called it once, her voice soft with reverence. But tonight, something felt wrong. The air tasted metallic on Aurora's tongue, like old blood or rust, and the usual chorus of night insects had fallen silent, leaving only the whisper of wind through leaves and the distant hoot of an owl. She paused at the edge of the clearing, her breath misting in the cool air. The standing stones rose before her in a rough circle, their surfaces worn smooth by centuries of wind and rain. At their center stood a single ancient oak, its trunk gnarled and twisted, roots snaking across the ground like veins. The pendant grew warmer against her skin, and Aurora took a step forward. Then another. The ground beneath her feet felt spongy, almost alive, and she could have sworn she felt something shift and wriggle just below the surface. "Hello?" Her voice sounded small in the vast darkness, swallowed by the trees. "Is someone there?" No answer came, but the pendant's pulse quickened, its warmth spreading through her chest like liquid fire. Aurora reached up to touch it, her fingers brushing against the cool silver chain. The stone seemed to throb beneath her touch, and for a moment she thought she saw something move within its crimson depths - a flicker of shadow, a flash of light. She took another step forward, then froze. There, at the base of the central oak, something glittered in the moonlight. Glass, perhaps. Or crystal. Aurora moved closer, her heart hammering against her ribs. It was a mirror. An old, ornate thing, its silver backing tarnished with age, its surface cloudy and warped. It leaned against the oak's massive trunk as if someone had placed it there deliberately, and as Aurora approached she could see her own reflection staring back at her - pale-faced, wide-eyed, the Heartstone pendant a splash of crimson at her throat. She reached out to touch the mirror's surface, her fingers hovering just above the glass. The moment they made contact, a jolt ran up her arm, sharp and electric. The reflection rippled like water, and for just an instant, Aurora saw something else looking back at her. Not herself. Not quite. The face was similar - same dark hair, same blue eyes - but there was something wrong about it. The smile was too wide, the eyes too bright, and when it spoke, its voice was a perfect echo of her own, but wrong in a way she couldn't quite place. "Looking for something, Rory?" The words sent ice through her veins. No one called her Rory anymore. Not since... not since Evan. The name was a ghost from a past she'd tried to leave behind, and hearing it now, in this place, made her skin crawl. "Who's there?" She whirled around, searching the darkness, but saw only shadows and trees. When she turned back to the mirror, her own reflection had returned, calm and steady, showing no sign of the other face she'd glimpsed. The pendant burned against her chest, and Aurora realized she was trembling. She should leave. She should run, get out of this place before whatever was happening here could touch her. But the pull of the Heartstone was too strong, drawing her forward like a lodestone. She took a step closer to the mirror, then another. The glass seemed to ripple again, and this time she didn't see another face but something else entirely - a glimpse of a place she'd never been, all twisted trees and bleeding skies. The image lasted only a second before dissolving back into her own reflection, but it was enough to make her stumble backward, her hand flying to her mouth. "What is this place?" she whispered, more to herself than to anything else. The grove had always been a threshold, a place between worlds, but this... this was something else. Something older. Something that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up and her pulse race in her throat. The pendant's warmth had become almost painful now, and Aurora fumbled at the clasp at the back of her neck, desperate to remove it. But her fingers wouldn't cooperate, clumsy and numb, and when she finally managed to get the chain over her head, the Heartstone remained fixed to her chest as if it had grown there, its crimson surface pulsing with an angry light. "No," she breathed, pressing her hands against the stone, trying to force it away. "No, this isn't happening, this isn't—" A sound cut through the night then, freezing the words in her throat. A laugh. Soft and musical and utterly inhuman, echoing from somewhere among the standing stones. Aurora's head snapped up, her eyes scanning the darkness, but she saw nothing. No one. The laugh came again, closer this time, and with it came the unmistakable scent of flowers - not the wildflowers that grew in the grove, but something else. Something cloying and sweet, like perfume left to rot. Aurora backed away from the mirror, her heart thundering in her ears. The Heartstone burned against her skin, its heat spreading through her body like fever, and she could feel something else now. A presence. Watching. Waiting. She turned to run, but her feet caught on something - a root, perhaps, or maybe nothing at all - and she fell hard, the breath knocked from her lungs. Pain lanced through her palms as she caught herself on the ground, and when she looked down she saw that her hands were wet with something dark and viscous. Blood. Or something like it. The laugh came again, closer still, and this time it was joined by other sounds. Whispers. Footsteps. The rustle of fabric against bark. Aurora pushed herself to her feet, her eyes wide and wild in the darkness, and when she turned back to the mirror she saw them. Figures. Dozens of them, standing among the standing stones, their faces hidden in shadow. They moved with a strange, fluid grace, their forms flickering at the edges like images on an old film reel. And in the center of them all stood the mirror-image of herself, smiling that too-wide smile, her eyes bright with something that wasn't quite madness but something close. "Stay with us, Rory," the reflection said, its voice sweet as poisoned honey. "We've been waiting for you." Aurora screamed then, a raw sound of pure terror, and turned to run. But the grove had changed while she wasn't looking. The standing stones now formed a perfect circle around her, their surfaces glowing with an inner light, and the path she'd taken in had vanished, leaving only unbroken wall of ancient oak. The figures began to move then, flowing between the stones like smoke, their whispers rising to a deafening chorus. Aurora pressed her hands to her ears, her eyes squeezed shut, but she couldn't block them out. Couldn't block out the presence that pressed in on all sides, ancient and hungry and so very, very close. The Heartstone burned against her chest, its heat unbearable now, and Aurora fell to her knees, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The whispers grew louder, the figures closer, and through the haze of pain and terror she heard the mirror-image speak again, its voice cutting through the chaos like a knife. "Welcome home, sister."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She whirled around [around]"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
85.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"utterly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"looming"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"almost alive"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count2
15
word"echo"
count1
16
word"race"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"scanning"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"looming"
2"footsteps"
3"warmth"
4"sanctuary"
5"whisper"
6"almost alive"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"throb"
10"depths"
11"flicker"
12"crystal"
13"electric"
14"perfect"
15"echo"
16"race"
17"echoing"
18"scanning"
19"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
48.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"managed to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1371
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1338
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora15
Heartstone6
Isolde1
Rory1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.939
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"branches that seemed to reach for her like skeletal fingers"
1"quite place"
2"quite madness but something close"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.729
wordCount1371
matches
0"not the wildflowers that grew in the grove, but something else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"saw that her"
90.84% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean42.84
std20.05
cv0.468
sampleLengths
059
171
263
355
439
516
662
733
861
947
104
1150
124
1342
1438
1546
1671
1752
1865
1920
2043
2137
2237
2359
245
2548
2662
2718
2854
2955
3052
313
93.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"been drawn"
1"was supposed"
2"was joined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was happening"
1"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences96
ratio0.063
matches
0"The stone seemed to throb beneath her touch, and for a moment she thought she saw something move within its crimson depths - a flicker of shadow, a flash of light."
1"It leaned against the oak's massive trunk as if someone had placed it there deliberately, and as Aurora approached she could see her own reflection staring back at her - pale-faced, wide-eyed, the Heartstone pendant a splash of crimson at her throat."
2"The face was similar - same dark hair, same blue eyes - but there was something wrong about it."
3"The glass seemed to ripple again, and this time she didn't see another face but something else entirely - a glimpse of a place she'd never been, all twisted trees and bleeding skies."
4"The laugh came again, closer this time, and with it came the unmistakable scent of flowers - not the wildflowers that grew in the grove, but something else."
5"She turned to run, but her feet caught on something - a root, perhaps, or maybe nothing at all - and she fell hard, the breath knocked from her lungs."
91.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1335
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"similar - same dark hair,"
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.04269662921348315
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00599250936329588
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean14.28
std10.25
cv0.718
sampleLengths
029
18
222
320
425
526
67
714
85
937
1015
1120
1220
1313
142
1524
1613
173
1817
1914
2031
217
2213
232
242
259
264
2715
2842
2915
3014
3118
322
332
3419
3531
364
377
386
392
403
4124
4214
4324
4412
453
4616
4715
4810
4933
56.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.40625
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences75
matches
0"She'd been here before, but"
1"Her footsteps crunched on the"
2"She'd been drawn here by"
3"She paused at the edge"
4"Her voice sounded small in"
5"She took another step forward,"
6"It was a mirror."
7"It leaned against the oak's"
8"She reached out to touch"
9"She whirled around, searching the"
10"She should leave."
11"She should run, get out"
12"She took a step closer"
13"she whispered, more to herself"
14"she breathed, pressing her hands"
15"She turned to run, but"
16"They moved with a strange,"
ratio0.227
53.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences75
matches
0"The darkness of the grove"
1"She'd been here before, but"
2"Her footsteps crunched on the"
3"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy"
4"She'd been drawn here by"
5"The grove was supposed to"
6"A sanctuary between worlds, Isolde"
7"The air tasted metallic on"
8"She paused at the edge"
9"The standing stones rose before"
10"The pendant grew warmer against"
11"The ground beneath her feet"
12"Her voice sounded small in"
13"Aurora reached up to touch"
14"The stone seemed to throb"
15"She took another step forward,"
16"There, at the base of"
17"Aurora moved closer, her heart"
18"It was a mirror."
19"An old, ornate thing, its"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The darkness of the grove pressed in around Aurora like a physical weight, the ancient oaks looming overhead with branches that seemed to reach for her like ske…"
1"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her chest, its crimson surface pulsing with a faint, steady warmth that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat."
2"She'd been drawn here by its pull, by the insistent tug that had grown stronger with each passing hour until she could no longer ignore it."
3"It leaned against the oak's massive trunk as if someone had placed it there deliberately, and as Aurora approached she could see her own reflection staring back…"
4"The image lasted only a second before dissolving back into her own reflection, but it was enough to make her stumble backward, her hand flying to her mouth."
5"Something that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up and her pulse race in her throat."
6"But her fingers wouldn't cooperate, clumsy and numb, and when she finally managed to get the chain over her head, the Heartstone remained fixed to her chest as …"
7"The laugh came again, closer this time, and with it came the unmistakable scent of flowers - not the wildflowers that grew in the grove, but something else."
8"And in the center of them all stood the mirror-image of herself, smiling that too-wide smile, her eyes bright with something that wasn't quite madness but somet…"
9"The standing stones now formed a perfect circle around her, their surfaces glowing with an inner light, and the path she'd taken in had vanished, leaving only u…"
10"The figures began to move then, flowing between the stones like smoke, their whispers rising to a deafening chorus."
11"Couldn't block out the presence that pressed in on all sides, ancient and hungry and so very, very close."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, more to herself than to anything else"
1"the reflection said, its voice sweet as poisoned honey"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.4
67.1228%