"The stone seemed to throb beneath her touch, and for a moment she thought she saw something move within its crimson depths - a flicker of shadow, a flash of light."
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"It leaned against the oak's massive trunk as if someone had placed it there deliberately, and as Aurora approached she could see her own reflection staring back at her - pale-faced, wide-eyed, the Heartstone pendant a splash of crimson at her throat."
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"The face was similar - same dark hair, same blue eyes - but there was something wrong about it."
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"The glass seemed to ripple again, and this time she didn't see another face but something else entirely - a glimpse of a place she'd never been, all twisted trees and bleeding skies."
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"The laugh came again, closer this time, and with it came the unmistakable scent of flowers - not the wildflowers that grew in the grove, but something else."
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"She turned to run, but her feet caught on something - a root, perhaps, or maybe nothing at all - and she fell hard, the breath knocked from her lungs."
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"The darkness of the grove pressed in around Aurora like a physical weight, the ancient oaks looming overhead with branches that seemed to reach for her like ske…"
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"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her chest, its crimson surface pulsing with a faint, steady warmth that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat."
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"She'd been drawn here by its pull, by the insistent tug that had grown stronger with each passing hour until she could no longer ignore it."
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"It leaned against the oak's massive trunk as if someone had placed it there deliberately, and as Aurora approached she could see her own reflection staring back…"
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"The image lasted only a second before dissolving back into her own reflection, but it was enough to make her stumble backward, her hand flying to her mouth."
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"Something that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up and her pulse race in her throat."
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"But her fingers wouldn't cooperate, clumsy and numb, and when she finally managed to get the chain over her head, the Heartstone remained fixed to her chest as …"
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"The laugh came again, closer this time, and with it came the unmistakable scent of flowers - not the wildflowers that grew in the grove, but something else."
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"And in the center of them all stood the mirror-image of herself, smiling that too-wide smile, her eyes bright with something that wasn't quite madness but somet…"
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"The standing stones now formed a perfect circle around her, their surfaces glowing with an inner light, and the path she'd taken in had vanished, leaving only u…"
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"The figures began to move then, flowing between the stones like smoke, their whispers rising to a deafening chorus."
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"Couldn't block out the presence that pressed in on all sides, ancient and hungry and so very, very close."