Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFSWABE7AZCXCX2RYE8FDF

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Duration:
48.7s
Cost:
$0.001559
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The moonlight filtered through the dense canopy of Richmond Park, casting fractured patterns on the path beneath Aurora's feet. She adjusted the silver chain of her pendant, the crimson gemstone warm against her skin. The Heartstone pulsed faintly, a steady rhythm that quickened as she approached the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove. Her breath misted in the crisp night air, and she shoved her hands deeper into her jacket pockets, the worn leather creaking softly. "Right," she muttered under her breath. "Just grab the thing and get out. Easy. Probably." The standing stones loomed before her, their gnarled surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to twist and writhe when she looked at them too long. Aurora hesitated, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows between the oaks. The air felt heavier here, charged with an almost electric tension that prickled the back of her neck. She stepped through the threshold, the Heartstone flaring briefly before settling back into its steady glow. The grove was unnaturally still. No rustle of leaves, no distant chirp of crickets—just silence, thick and oppressive. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their vibrant hues oddly muted in the moonlight. Rory glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—watching her from the shadows. The path behind her was empty, but the feeling of being watched lingered, a cold weight settling in her stomach. She pressed on, her footsteps muffled by the soft earth. The grove was smaller than she remembered, the clearing barely large enough to hold the ancient oak tree at its center. The tree's twisted branches reached skyward, their gnarled forms casting eerie shadows that seemed to stretch and shift as she approached. The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger this time, and Rory felt a faint pull in her chest, as if the pendant were guiding her toward something. "Alright," she whispered, more to herself than anything else. "What am I looking for?" The whispers started softly, barely audible at first. At first, she thought it was the wind, but the air was utterly still. The voices—if they could be called that—were a disjointed murmur, rising and falling in pitch like a conversation just out of earshot. Rory froze, her hand instinctively clutching the pendant. The whispers grew louder, more insistent, and she spun around, her heart pounding in her chest. "Who's there?" she called, her voice sharper than she intended. The whispers stopped abruptly, leaving her in a silence so complete it felt deafening. Her pulse roared in her ears, and she exhaled slowly, trying to steady herself. "You're imagining things," she muttered under her breath. "Just nerves. Get it together, Rory." She turned back to the oak tree, her resolve hardening. The Heartstone's warmth intensified, its glow casting faint crimson light on the ground at her feet. She knelt, brushing aside a patch of wildflowers to reveal a small, intricately carved wooden box buried beneath the soil. The surface of the box was covered in the same twisting symbols as the standing stones, and Rory hesitated before reaching for it. As her fingers brushed the wood, the whispers returned, louder this time. They sounded closer—too close. Rory yanked her hand back, her breath catching in her throat. The shadows around her seemed to deepen, pooling at the edges of her vision. She scrambled to her feet, clutching the pendant tightly as she scanned the clearing. "Show yourself," she demanded, her voice trembling despite her best efforts. The whispers coalesced into laughter—cold, mocking laughter that echoed through the grove. Rory's stomach dropped, and she took a step back, her boot crunching on the dry leaves. The shadows shifted, and she caught a flicker of movement out of the corner of her eye. She spun around, her heart slamming against her ribs, but there was nothing there. "Okay," she breathed, forcing herself to stay calm. "This is not happening. You’re just tired. You’re imagining this." The laughter intensified, overlapping and distorting until it was a cacophony that made her ears ring. Rory clapped her hands over her ears, stumbling backward as the shadows seemed to close in around her. The Heartstone burned against her skin, its crimson glow flickering wildly. She squeezed her eyes shut, willing herself to focus. "Stop it," she hissed through gritted teeth. "You’re not real." The laughter stopped instantly, replaced by a deafening silence. Rory dared to open her eyes, her hands slowly lowering from her ears. The clearing was empty, the shadows retreating as if they had never been there. Her breath came in ragged gasps, and she leaned against the oak tree for support, her legs trembling beneath her. The Heartstone's glow had returned to its steady pulse, its warmth a comforting anchor in the eerie stillness. Rory glanced down at the box, still partially buried in the soil. She crouched cautiously, her fingers trembling as she brushed away the dirt. The symbols on the box seemed to pulse faintly, matching the rhythm of the pendant. She hesitated, then reached for it again. This time, the box came free easily, its surface smooth and cool beneath her fingers. The whispers didn’t return, but the feeling of being watched persisted, a creeping sensation that made her skin crawl. Rory shoved the box into her jacket pocket, her eyes darting around the clearing. She needed to get out of here—now. She turned toward the path, her steps quickening as she made her way back to the standing stones. The whispers started again, softer this time, almost melodic. Rory ignored them, her focus entirely on the boundary ahead. The trees seemed to close in around her, their twisted branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. She broke into a jog, her boots thudding against the soft earth. The standing stones loomed into view, their ancient forms a welcome sight. Rory didn’t slow down, her breath coming in short gasps as she crossed the threshold. The whispers faded instantly, replaced by the distant chirp of crickets and the rustle of leaves in the breeze. She stumbled to a stop, doubling over as she tried to catch her breath. The Heartstone’s warmth subsided, its glow fading back to a faint pulse. Rory straightened, glancing over her shoulder at the grove. The trees stood silent and still, their shadows unmoving. She exhaled shakily, her hand clutching the box in her pocket. "Never again," she muttered, turning her back on the grove. "Next time, someone else can be the errand girl." The path back to Richmond Park stretched ahead, bathed in the soft glow of moonlight. Rory adjusted her jacket, the box a heavy weight against her side. She glanced down at the pendant, its crimson gemstone flickering faintly. The feeling of being watched lingered, a cold shiver running down her spine. She quickened her pace, her footsteps hurried as she left the grove behind, the whispers—real or imagined—still echoing in her mind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"utterly"
2"slowly"
3"tightly"
4"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"quickened"
count2
3
word"loomed"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"stomach"
count2
13
word"footsteps"
count2
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count4
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count3
18
word"scanned"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
21
word"cacophony"
count1
22
word"comforting"
count1
23
word"down her spine"
count1
24
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"pulsed"
2"quickened"
3"loomed"
4"etched"
5"scanning"
6"charged"
7"electric"
8"tension"
9"silence"
10"oppressive"
11"weight"
12"stomach"
13"footsteps"
14"pounding"
15"pulse"
16"resolve"
17"warmth"
18"scanned"
19"echoed"
20"flicker"
21"cacophony"
22"comforting"
23"down her spine"
24"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
17.86% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1150
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1094
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Aurora2
Heartstone7
Fae1
Grove1
Rory14
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.86
windowScore1
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"symbols that seemed to twist and writhe when she looked at them too long"
1"shadows that seemed to stretch and shift as she approached"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1150
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
98.39% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean47.92
std23.69
cv0.494
sampleLengths
081
115
271
364
477
514
668
710
842
969
1055
1111
1259
1318
1454
1510
1656
1764
1855
1965
2060
2141
2219
2372
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs203
matches
0"were guiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"No rustle of leaves, no distant chirp of crickets—just silence, thick and oppressive."
1"Rory glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—watching her from the shadows."
2"The voices—if they could be called that—were a disjointed murmur, rising and falling in pitch like a conversation just out of earshot."
3"They sounded closer—too close."
4"The whispers coalesced into laughter—cold, mocking laughter that echoed through the grove."
5"She needed to get out of here—now."
6"She quickened her pace, her footsteps hurried as she left the grove behind, the whispers—real or imagined—still echoing in her mind."
94.01% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1105
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.044343891402714934
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.02262443438914027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
89.64% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean13.37
std5
cv0.374
sampleLengths
019
115
224
323
46
59
625
712
818
916
105
1113
1212
1314
1420
1510
1621
1721
1825
199
205
218
2214
2322
248
2516
2610
2714
2814
298
306
3110
3216
3320
3423
3512
364
3711
3814
3914
4011
4112
4216
4317
4414
458
4610
4716
4818
4911
46.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2558139534883721
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences80
matches
0"She adjusted the silver chain"
1"Her breath misted in the"
2"she muttered under her breath"
3"She stepped through the threshold,"
4"She pressed on, her footsteps"
5"she whispered, more to herself"
6"she called, her voice sharper"
7"Her pulse roared in her"
8"she muttered under her breath"
9"She turned back to the"
10"She knelt, brushing aside a"
11"They sounded closer—too close."
12"She scrambled to her feet,"
13"she demanded, her voice trembling"
14"She spun around, her heart"
15"she breathed, forcing herself to"
16"She squeezed her eyes shut,"
17"she hissed through gritted teeth"
18"Her breath came in ragged"
19"She crouched cautiously, her fingers"
ratio0.363
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences80
matches
0"The moonlight filtered through the"
1"She adjusted the silver chain"
2"The Heartstone pulsed faintly, a"
3"Her breath misted in the"
4"she muttered under her breath"
5"The standing stones loomed before"
6"Aurora hesitated, her bright blue"
7"The air felt heavier here,"
8"She stepped through the threshold,"
9"The grove was unnaturally still."
10"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their"
11"Rory glanced over her shoulder,"
12"The path behind her was"
13"She pressed on, her footsteps"
14"The grove was smaller than"
15"The tree's twisted branches reached"
16"The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger"
17"she whispered, more to herself"
18"The whispers started softly, barely"
19"The voices—if they could be"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed faintly, a steady rhythm that quickened as she approached the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove."
1"The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger this time, and Rory felt a faint pull in her chest, as if the pendant were guiding her toward something."
2"The laughter intensified, overlapping and distorting until it was a cacophony that made her ears ring."
3"The whispers didn’t return, but the feeling of being watched persisted, a creeping sensation that made her skin crawl."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she whispered, more to herself than anything else"
1"she called, her voice sharper than she intended"
2"she demanded, her voice trembling despite her best efforts"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"she hissed (hiss)"
6"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.875
effectiveRatio0.875
68.5544%