| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 69.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1161 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "tightly" | | 4 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1161 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "oppressive" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "resolve" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "scanned" | | 19 | "echoed" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "cacophony" | | 22 | "comforting" | | 23 | "down her spine" | | 24 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 17.86% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1150 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.01% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1094 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 2 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.86 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to twist and writhe when she looked at them too long" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to stretch and shift as she approached" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.39% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 47.92 | | std | 23.69 | | cv | 0.494 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 69 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 72 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "No rustle of leaves, no distant chirp of crickets—just silence, thick and oppressive." | | 1 | "Rory glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—watching her from the shadows." | | 2 | "The voices—if they could be called that—were a disjointed murmur, rising and falling in pitch like a conversation just out of earshot." | | 3 | "They sounded closer—too close." | | 4 | "The whispers coalesced into laughter—cold, mocking laughter that echoed through the grove." | | 5 | "She needed to get out of here—now." | | 6 | "She quickened her pace, her footsteps hurried as she left the grove behind, the whispers—real or imagined—still echoing in her mind." |
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| 94.01% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.044343891402714934 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02262443438914027 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 89.64% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 13.37 | | std | 5 | | cv | 0.374 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 46.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.2558139534883721 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 1 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 2 | "she muttered under her breath" | | 3 | "She stepped through the threshold," | | 4 | "She pressed on, her footsteps" | | 5 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 6 | "she called, her voice sharper" | | 7 | "Her pulse roared in her" | | 8 | "she muttered under her breath" | | 9 | "She turned back to the" | | 10 | "She knelt, brushing aside a" | | 11 | "They sounded closer—too close." | | 12 | "She scrambled to her feet," | | 13 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" | | 14 | "She spun around, her heart" | | 15 | "she breathed, forcing herself to" | | 16 | "She squeezed her eyes shut," | | 17 | "she hissed through gritted teeth" | | 18 | "Her breath came in ragged" | | 19 | "She crouched cautiously, her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.363 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The moonlight filtered through the" | | 1 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulsed faintly, a" | | 3 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 4 | "she muttered under her breath" | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed before" | | 6 | "Aurora hesitated, her bright blue" | | 7 | "The air felt heavier here," | | 8 | "She stepped through the threshold," | | 9 | "The grove was unnaturally still." | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 11 | "Rory glanced over her shoulder," | | 12 | "The path behind her was" | | 13 | "She pressed on, her footsteps" | | 14 | "The grove was smaller than" | | 15 | "The tree's twisted branches reached" | | 16 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger" | | 17 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 18 | "The whispers started softly, barely" | | 19 | "The voices—if they could be" |
| | ratio | 0.963 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed faintly, a steady rhythm that quickened as she approached the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger this time, and Rory felt a faint pull in her chest, as if the pendant were guiding her toward something." | | 2 | "The laughter intensified, overlapping and distorting until it was a cacophony that made her ears ring." | | 3 | "The whispers didn’t return, but the feeling of being watched persisted, a creeping sensation that made her skin crawl." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, more to herself than anything else" | | 1 | "she called, her voice sharper than she intended" | | 2 | "she demanded, her voice trembling despite her best efforts" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "she hissed (hiss)" | | 6 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.875 | | effectiveRatio | 0.875 | |