Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFT718DPE2B23WCWPW1C62

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7.2s
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park tasted different after dark, carrying the damp chill of the Thames and the sweet, cloying scent of rotting leaves. Rory pulled her leather jacket tighter, the familiar weight doing little to ward off the unease pooling in her stomach. She’d made this delivery for Yu-Fei a dozen times before, a sealed, fragrant package for the reclusive client who only ever requested after-hours drop-offs at the specific coordinates she’d been given. But it had never felt like this. The park was too quiet, the silence thick and watchful. Her phone’s GPS had flickered and died five minutes ago, the screen glitching into static before going black. A low battery, she’d told herself, though she’d charged it fully before leaving the flat above Silas’s bar. Now, navigating by the weak light of a half-moon veiled by fast-moving clouds, she relied on memory. The path seemed to have shifted, familiar trees now looming like silent, judging sentinels. Then she saw them: the standing stones. Three ancient oaks, their trunks gnarled and impossibly thick, forming a rough triangle in a small clearing she was certain hadn’t been here on her last trip. This was the place. The coordinates were right, but the geometry was all wrong. The air within the grove was several degrees warmer, carrying the intoxicating perfume of night-blooming jasmine and other flowers she couldn’t name. Wildflowers, their petals pale and luminous in the gloom, carpeted the ground, blooming with a vigor that defied the late autumn chill. The Fae Grove. Eva had whispered stories about places like this, pockets where the world wore thin. Rory had always dismissed them as her friend’s fanciful nonsense. A prickle of heat against her collarbone made her jump. Her hand flew to the source—the Heartstone pendant. The deep crimson gem was warm to the touch, pulsing with a soft, rhythmic heat she’d never felt before. It wasn’t a comforting warmth; it felt like a warning, a tiny panicked heart beating against her own. She took a hesitant step into the clearing, the crunch of her boots on the path outside giving way to an unsettling silence. The sound of her own breathing seemed loud, too loud, in the hushed air. “Hello?” she called out, her voice swallowed by the dense foliage. “Delivery for Isolde?” There was no answer. Only the gentle rustle of leaves in a wind she couldn’t feel. She set the insulated bag down at the base of the central oak stone, as per instructions. Her task was complete. She should leave. Now. But as she straightened up, a sound froze her in place. It was a faint, melodic humming, a tune without a clear source that seemed to weave through the trees themselves. It was beautiful and ancient, and it made the fine hairs on her arms stand on end. It was coming from everywhere and nowhere at all. She turned slowly, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows between the trees. Nothing moved. The flowers seemed to sway, though the air was utterly still. A twig snapped to her left. She spun toward the sound, her heart hammering against her ribs. “Is someone there?” The humming stopped. The silence that followed was deeper, heavier than before. It was a listening silence. *Get out*, a voice in her head screamed, the same cool, logical part of her that had devised her escape from Evan. This was not a place for logic. This was a place for stories, and in stories, people who wandered into fairy rings didn’t come back, or came back wrong. She took a step back toward the path, but the tree line seemed to have receded, the darkness between the trunks now impenetrable. The path she’d come in on was gone, swallowed by a wall of thorny brambles that definitely hadn’t been there a moment ago. A cold dread, sharper than any fear she’d felt in a Cardiff courtroom or a London alley, began to seep into her bones. There it was again. Movement. A flicker of something pale and slender darting behind a tree at the edge of her vision. It was too tall to be an animal, too fluid. She caught a glimpse of what might have been a long, pale hand, fingers too slender, before it vanished. “I’ve left your food,” she said, forcing her voice to remain steady. She was Rory Carter. She was cool-headed. She solved problems. “I’m just going to go now.” The only answer was a soft, sighing laugh that seemed to ripple through the leaves above her. It was a sound of gentle, mockery. The Heartstone burned against her skin, its pulse frantic. The faint inner glow of the crimson gem cast a tiny, bloody light on the silver chain. It was reacting to something. Something close. A shadow detached itself from the base of one of the oak stones. It wasn’t a trick of the light; it uncurled, rising to a height that dwarfed her own five-foot-six frame. It had the shape of a man, but its proportions were subtly off—limbs too long, shoulders too narrow. It stood perfectly still, observing her from the deeper darkness it inhabited. Rory’s breath hitched. She couldn’t move. Every instinct told her to run, but her feet were rooted to the spot, as if the wildflowers had grown around her ankles. She could feel a presence behind her now, too, a cold spot in the warm air. She was surrounded. The thing in the shadows took a single, silent step forward. A sliver of moonlight caught the side of its face. It was beautiful, achingly so, with sharp cheekbones and lips curved into a faint, cruel smile. But its eyes… where eyes should have been were only pools of deeper shadow, empty and hungry. It wasn’t human. It was something else. Something that belonged in Eva’s stories. The humming started again, this time from right beside her ear. She flinched, but there was nothing there. The sound was inside her head, a maddening, lovely melody that promised secrets and forgetting. It promised to make the fear go away if she would just stop fighting. If she would just stay. *No.* The thought was a spike of pure will. She clutched the warm pendant, the heat a anchor in the shifting wrongness of the grove. She thought of her father’s earnest lectures on the law, her mother’s patient corrections of her Welsh grammar, the solid, real world of arguments and deadlines and part-time jobs. With a gasp that tore from her throat, she wrenched one foot free, stumbling backward. The thing in the shadows tilted its head, its smile widening, revealing needle-sharp teeth. It didn’t move to stop her. It didn’t need to. The thorns were still there. The path was still gone. She was trapped. The grove had her. Time itself felt syrupy and slow, an hour stretching into what might have been a lifetime. The beautiful, terrifying creature took another step, its movement utterly silent on the flower-strewn ground. It raised one of those long, pale hands, not in threat, but in invitation. And Aurora Carter, who prided herself on her quick, out-of-the-box thinking, could think of absolutely nothing at all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count2
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"utterly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"navigating"
count1
8
word"looming"
count1
9
word"sentinels"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"comforting"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"charged"
7"navigating"
8"looming"
9"sentinels"
10"gloom"
11"rhythmic"
12"comforting"
13"warmth"
14"scanning"
15"flicker"
16"pulse"
17"could feel"
18"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
57.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1203
ratio0.002
matches
0"Get out"
1"No."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1186
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Thames1
Yu-Fei1
Silas1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone2
Evan1
Cardiff1
London1
Rory4
Carter2
Eva2
Welsh1
Aurora1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Heartstone"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Carter"
5"Eva"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Thames"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Cardiff"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like this"
1"felt like a warning, a tiny panicked he"
2"seemed loud too loud, in the hushed air"
3"source that seemed to weave through the trees themselves"
4"laugh that seemed to ripple through the leaves above her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.831
wordCount1203
matches
0"not in threat, but in invitation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
87.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean50.13
std22.79
cv0.455
sampleLengths
092
167
2119
355
451
541
657
746
817
951
1069
1151
1228
1324
1433
1562
1648
1754
1813
1952
2054
2149
2252
2318
87.89% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"been given"
1"was gone"
2"were rooted"
3"was surrounded"
4"been were"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was coming"
1"was reacting"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences104
ratio0.038
matches
0"Her hand flew to the source—the Heartstone pendant."
1"It wasn’t a comforting warmth; it felt like a warning, a tiny panicked heart beating against her own."
2"It wasn’t a trick of the light; it uncurled, rising to a height that dwarfed her own five-foot-six frame."
3"It had the shape of a man, but its proportions were subtly off—limbs too long, shoulders too narrow."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1200
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"same cool, logical part"
1"revealing needle-sharp teeth."
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.034166666666666665
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.0125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.57
std7.16
cv0.619
sampleLengths
024
120
231
37
410
518
618
717
814
97
1027
114
1210
1322
1422
153
1614
1710
1810
198
2019
2118
2223
2314
2411
253
264
2712
2817
294
303
311
3211
3320
3417
359
3613
372
3811
396
4011
413
423
439
445
4522
467
4722
4823
4923
35.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.28846153846153844
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners30
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Then she saw them: the"
1"Only the gentle rustle of"
ratio0.021
50.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences97
matches
0"She’d made this delivery for"
1"Her phone’s GPS had flickered"
2"Her hand flew to the"
3"It wasn’t a comforting warmth;"
4"She took a hesitant step"
5"she called out, her voice"
6"She set the insulated bag"
7"Her task was complete."
8"She should leave."
9"It was a faint, melodic"
10"It was beautiful and ancient,"
11"It was coming from everywhere"
12"She turned slowly, her bright"
13"She spun toward the sound,"
14"It was a listening silence."
15"She took a step back"
16"It was too tall to"
17"She caught a glimpse of"
18"she said, forcing her voice"
19"She was Rory Carter."
ratio0.423
42.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences97
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Rory pulled her leather jacket"
2"She’d made this delivery for"
3"The park was too quiet,"
4"Her phone’s GPS had flickered"
5"A low battery, she’d told"
6"The path seemed to have"
7"This was the place."
8"The coordinates were right, but"
9"The air within the grove"
10"Wildflowers, their petals pale and"
11"The Fae Grove."
12"Eva had whispered stories about"
13"Rory had always dismissed them"
14"A prickle of heat against"
15"Her hand flew to the"
16"The deep crimson gem was"
17"It wasn’t a comforting warmth;"
18"She took a hesitant step"
19"The sound of her own"
ratio0.835
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now, navigating by the weak"
1"If she would just stay."
ratio0.021
81.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Wildflowers, their petals pale and luminous in the gloom, carpeted the ground, blooming with a vigor that defied the late autumn chill."
1"It was a faint, melodic humming, a tune without a clear source that seemed to weave through the trees themselves."
2"It wasn’t a trick of the light; it uncurled, rising to a height that dwarfed her own five-foot-six frame."
3"The sound was inside her head, a maddening, lovely melody that promised secrets and forgetting."
4"And Aurora Carter, who prided herself on her quick, out-of-the-box thinking, could think of absolutely nothing at all."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
77.2622%