| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "navigating" | | 8 | "looming" | | 9 | "sentinels" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "comforting" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "scanning" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "absolutely" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1203 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1186 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | Carter | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Thames" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like this" | | 1 | "felt like a warning, a tiny panicked he" | | 2 | "seemed loud too loud, in the hushed air" | | 3 | "source that seemed to weave through the trees themselves" | | 4 | "laugh that seemed to ripple through the leaves above her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.831 | | wordCount | 1203 | | matches | | 0 | "not in threat, but in invitation" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.06% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 50.13 | | std | 22.79 | | cv | 0.455 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 119 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 18 |
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| 87.89% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "been given" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were rooted" | | 3 | "was surrounded" | | 4 | "been were" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was reacting" |
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| 32.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand flew to the source—the Heartstone pendant." | | 1 | "It wasn’t a comforting warmth; it felt like a warning, a tiny panicked heart beating against her own." | | 2 | "It wasn’t a trick of the light; it uncurled, rising to a height that dwarfed her own five-foot-six frame." | | 3 | "It had the shape of a man, but its proportions were subtly off—limbs too long, shoulders too narrow." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1200 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same cool, logical part" | | 1 | "revealing needle-sharp teeth." |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.034166666666666665 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.57 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 35.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.28846153846153844 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 68.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw them: the" | | 1 | "Only the gentle rustle of" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 50.93% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d made this delivery for" | | 1 | "Her phone’s GPS had flickered" | | 2 | "Her hand flew to the" | | 3 | "It wasn’t a comforting warmth;" | | 4 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 5 | "she called out, her voice" | | 6 | "She set the insulated bag" | | 7 | "Her task was complete." | | 8 | "She should leave." | | 9 | "It was a faint, melodic" | | 10 | "It was beautiful and ancient," | | 11 | "It was coming from everywhere" | | 12 | "She turned slowly, her bright" | | 13 | "She spun toward the sound," | | 14 | "It was a listening silence." | | 15 | "She took a step back" | | 16 | "It was too tall to" | | 17 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 18 | "she said, forcing her voice" | | 19 | "She was Rory Carter." |
| | ratio | 0.423 | |
| 42.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her leather jacket" | | 2 | "She’d made this delivery for" | | 3 | "The park was too quiet," | | 4 | "Her phone’s GPS had flickered" | | 5 | "A low battery, she’d told" | | 6 | "The path seemed to have" | | 7 | "This was the place." | | 8 | "The coordinates were right, but" | | 9 | "The air within the grove" | | 10 | "Wildflowers, their petals pale and" | | 11 | "The Fae Grove." | | 12 | "Eva had whispered stories about" | | 13 | "Rory had always dismissed them" | | 14 | "A prickle of heat against" | | 15 | "Her hand flew to the" | | 16 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 17 | "It wasn’t a comforting warmth;" | | 18 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 19 | "The sound of her own" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, navigating by the weak" | | 1 | "If she would just stay." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 81.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers, their petals pale and luminous in the gloom, carpeted the ground, blooming with a vigor that defied the late autumn chill." | | 1 | "It was a faint, melodic humming, a tune without a clear source that seemed to weave through the trees themselves." | | 2 | "It wasn’t a trick of the light; it uncurled, rising to a height that dwarfed her own five-foot-six frame." | | 3 | "The sound was inside her head, a maddening, lovely melody that promised secrets and forgetting." | | 4 | "And Aurora Carter, who prided herself on her quick, out-of-the-box thinking, could think of absolutely nothing at all." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |