Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFVFYS02APN5Q6XA60G7AM

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38.7s
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed faintly above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest, casting an eerie glow on the damp pavement. Rory pushed open the heavy oak door, the familiar scent of aged whiskey and polished wood wrapping around her like an old coat. The bar was quiet for a Thursday night—just a few regulars hunched over their drinks, the low murmur of conversation barely rising above the crackle of vinyl spinning on Silas’ ancient record player. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the bar, rubbing her left wrist absently, the crescent scar there catching the dim light. Silas glanced up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "Delivery run go smoothly?" he asked, setting the glass down with a soft clink. "More or less," Rory said, shrugging. "Had to outrun a dog in Camden, but the dumplings survived." Silas chuckled, pouring her a glass of ginger beer without asking. He knew she didn’t drink much these days. She wrapped her fingers around the cool glass, condensation already forming, when the door opened again. A draft curled through the bar, lifting the edges of the maps pinned to the walls. Rory didn’t look up until she heard the footsteps stop beside her. "Well," said a voice, low and rough with an edge she hadn’t heard before. "If it isn’t Aurora Carter." Her fingers tightened around the glass. She knew that voice—had known it since they were kids trading sweets behind the schoolyard. But it was different now, harder, like gravel underfoot. Slowly, she turned. Evan stood there, taller than she remembered, his once-boyish face sharpened by time and something darker. His hair was shorter, military-short, and there was a thin scar running through his left eyebrow that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him. He wore a leather jacket that looked both expensive and well-worn, the kind that didn’t come cheap. "Evan," she said, her voice steady. Too steady. Silas had gone still behind the bar, his gaze flicking between them. Rory gave him the slightest shake of her head. Not now. Evan slid onto the stool next to her, close enough that she could smell the faint hint of bergamot and gun oil clinging to him. "Didn’t think I’d find you here," he said, signaling Silas for a whiskey. Neat. Rory took a sip of her ginger beer, the sweetness suddenly cloying. "Small world." He laughed, but there was no warmth in it. "Yeah. Too small, sometimes." Silas set the whiskey in front of him, his expression carefully neutral. Evan didn’t seem to notice. His fingers—still long and elegant, she noted absently—traced the rim of the glass before lifting it to his lips. The amber liquid caught the light as he drank. "You look good," he said after a moment, his gaze raking over her. Assessing. Rory arched a brow. "You don’t." That got a real laugh out of him, sharp and surprised. "Still blunt as ever." "Still an asshole, I see." The corner of his mouth twitched. "Some things never change." But they had. That was the thing. The Evan she’d known had been all quick smiles and restless energy, the kind of boy who’d climb rooftops just to see the stars clearer. This man beside her carried himself like someone who’d learned the hard way that the world didn’t care about dreams. Silas drifted to the other end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. Rory traced the scar on her wrist. "How long has it been?" she asked, though she knew the answer. Three years, two months, fourteen days. "Long enough," Evan said, swirling the whiskey. "You left Cardiff." It wasn’t a question. She nodded anyway. "London suits you." She snorted. "Since when do you care what suits me?" His fingers stilled on the glass. "I always cared, Rory." The sound of her nickname in his voice—the old one, the one from before—sent an unexpected pang through her chest. She looked away, focusing on the row of bottles behind the bar, their colors muted in the low light. "Why are you here, Evan?" He exhaled, long and slow. "Business." "Of course." "Not the kind you’re thinking." She turned back to him. "And what am I thinking?" His eyes met hers, and for the first time, she saw something flicker there—something that might have been regret. "That I’m still the same guy who—" He cut himself off, jaw tightening. "Who what?" she pressed, though she knew. He didn’t answer. Instead, he reached into his jacket pocket and slid a small, folded piece of paper across the bar. Rory didn’t touch it. "What’s this?" "An address." She stared at him. "I’m not going anywhere with you." "It’s not for you," he said quietly. "It’s for Silas." That got her attention. Her gaze flicked to Silas, who was watching them with the sharp focus of a man who missed nothing. "What the hell are you mixed up in, Evan?" He leaned in, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his otherwise dark eyes. "The kind of trouble that follows you home," he murmured. "Tell him Prague isn’t as forgotten as he thinks." Then he was gone, tossing a handful of bills onto the bar and striding out the door before she could process the words. The neon sign buzzed again as the door swung shut behind him, casting green shadows over the empty stool. Rory unfolded the paper. The address was in Berlin. Silas appeared beside her, his limp more pronounced as he moved. "Trouble?" She handed him the note. "Seems like it." He read it, his expression hardening. "Damn." Rory studied his face—the lines deeper than she remembered, the silver in his auburn hair more pronounced. "You know what this is about?" Silas pocketed the paper. "Old ghosts." Outside, a car engine roared to life, tires screeching against wet pavement. Rory didn’t have to look to know it was Evan. Some part of her, the part that still remembered the boy he’d been, hoped he’d glance back. But the street was empty when she finally turned to look.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.05
85.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"pang"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"footsteps"
2"eyebrow"
3"warmth"
4"traced"
5"pang"
6"flicker"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1026
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount859
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Rory11
Silas9
Neat1
Assessing1
Evan6
Three1
Berlin1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Berlin"
globalScore0.86
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside her, his limp more pronounced as he moved"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1026
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean20.94
std18.36
cv0.877
sampleLengths
077
153
217
363
419
533
659
78
823
939
1014
1113
1245
1314
146
1515
165
1710
1852
1940
2010
217
223
2310
2410
2539
265
276
282
295
3010
3132
327
3325
342
352
3610
3710
3832
3937
4042
419
4212
438
447
4523
466
4739
4811
96.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"was gone"
1"been, hoped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences109
ratio0.055
matches
0"The bar was quiet for a Thursday night—just a few regulars hunched over their drinks, the low murmur of conversation barely rising above the crackle of vinyl spinning on Silas’ ancient record player."
1"She knew that voice—had known it since they were kids trading sweets behind the schoolyard."
2"His fingers—still long and elegant, she noted absently—traced the rim of the glass before lifting it to his lips."
3"The sound of her nickname in his voice—the old one, the one from before—sent an unexpected pang through her chest."
4"His eyes met hers, and for the first time, she saw something flicker there—something that might have been regret."
5"Rory studied his face—the lines deeper than she remembered, the silver in his auburn hair more pronounced."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount874
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03546910755148741
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010297482837528604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean9.41
std6.95
cv0.739
sampleLengths
021
123
233
325
414
514
66
711
811
98
1016
1116
1212
1314
145
156
1615
179
183
1916
2026
2117
226
232
2412
259
262
2725
2813
291
3012
312
329
334
3412
355
3619
379
3813
391
404
412
4211
434
445
456
464
473
484
4925
74.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45871559633027525
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Slowly, she turned."
1"Instead, he reached into his"
2"Then he was gone, tossing"
ratio0.04
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences75
matches
0"She slid onto a stool"
1"he asked, setting the glass"
2"He knew she didn’t drink"
3"She wrapped her fingers around"
4"Her fingers tightened around the"
5"She knew that voice—had known"
6"His hair was shorter, military-short,"
7"He wore a leather jacket"
8"she said, her voice steady"
9"he said, signaling Silas for"
10"He laughed, but there was"
11"His fingers—still long and elegant,"
12"he said after a moment,"
13"she asked, though she knew"
14"It wasn’t a question."
15"She nodded anyway."
16"His fingers stilled on the"
17"She looked away, focusing on"
18"He exhaled, long and slow."
19"She turned back to him."
ratio0.4
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory pushed open the heavy"
2"The bar was quiet for"
3"She slid onto a stool"
4"Silas glanced up from polishing"
5"he asked, setting the glass"
6"Rory said, shrugging"
7"Silas chuckled, pouring her a"
8"He knew she didn’t drink"
9"She wrapped her fingers around"
10"A draft curled through the"
11"Rory didn’t look up until"
12"Her fingers tightened around the"
13"She knew that voice—had known"
14"Evan stood there, taller than"
15"His hair was shorter, military-short,"
16"He wore a leather jacket"
17"she said, her voice steady"
18"Silas had gone still behind"
19"Rory gave him the slightest"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His hair was shorter, military-short, and there was a thin scar running through his left eyebrow that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him."
1"He wore a leather jacket that looked both expensive and well-worn, the kind that didn’t come cheap."
2"His eyes met hers, and for the first time, she saw something flicker there—something that might have been regret."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice steady"
1"he said, his gaze raking over her"
2"He cut, jaw tightening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she pressed (press)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.55
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.1
82.3526%