Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFWRCBTTJETME51V0KNW6M

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Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.000268
Provider:
Clarifai

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The night air in Richmond Park tasted ofdamp earth and decaying leaves, thick and heavy as it clung to Aurora’s skin. She’d left the warm glow of Silas’ bar behind, the muffled laughter and clinking glasses a distant memory. The path winding through the ancient oaks felt unnaturally quiet, the usual nocturnal rustlings of foxes and owls replaced by a profound, unsettling stillness. Her breath misted in the cold air, visible for a second before vanishing into the darkness. She pulled her coat tighter, the fabric rough against her palms, and quickened her pace, the crunch of her boots on the gravel path the only sound breaking the oppressive silence. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into grotesque shapes, their bark like cracked leather under the weak moonlight. Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat echoing the sudden, inexplicable chill that had settled over her. She’d come here because the pendant, the Heartstone, had pulsed against her skin as she walked from the bar. Not a strong pulse, just a faint, insistent warmth, like a warning whispered against her flesh. She’d dismissed it initially, attributing it to nerves or the lingering effects of too much wine. But now, standing beneath the gnarled branches, the feeling of being watched was no longer a whisper; it was a weight pressing down on her shoulders, making the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end. She’d been sent here. By whom? The pendant’s warmth had been a beacon, a signal she couldn’t ignore. Her friend Eva had spoken in hushed tones about the Grove, about the thin places where the Fae bled through. Aurora had laughed it off, a skeptical smile playing on her lips. But the pendant’s insistent warmth, the way it seemed to thrum in time with her own erratic heartbeat, had overridden her disbelief. She’d come alone, trusting the pendant’s guidance, trusting that whoever sent her knew what they were doing. Now, doubt clawed at her resolve, a cold, wet thing in her gut. She reached the heart of the Grove, a small, circular clearing bathed in moonlight. The air here felt different, thicker, charged with an energy that made her skin prickle. The wildflowers, usually vibrant, seemed muted, their colors drained to shades of grey and silver under the pale light. Shadows pooled in the corners, deepening into impenetrable blackness. Aurora took a step forward, her foot catching on a root she hadn’t seen. She stumbled, catching herself against the rough bark of an oak, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The pendant, resting against her chest beneath her coat, felt suddenly cold, then warm again, a confusing contradiction. A sound, faint but unmistakable, cut through the silence. It was like the tearing of silk, distant and muffled, yet somehow close. Aurora froze, her eyes scanning the shadows. Nothing moved. The trees stood sentinel, their branches swaying gently in a breeze that wasn’t there. The sound came again, a soft, wet tearing, like fabric being pulled apart. Her mind raced, trying to rationalize it. A fox? A bird? But the sound was too deliberate, too... human. Or something else. Something not of this world. She forced herself to breathe, counting slowly to ten. The pendant pulsed again, a stronger warmth this time, radiating from her chest. It was a beacon, but also a warning. She took another step, her eyes fixed on the deepest shadows near the standing stones. The air felt thick, viscous, like breathing through syrup. She could feel unseen eyes upon her, watching her every move, judging her presence. The wrongness wasn’t just in the air; it was in the very fabric of the place, a subtle distortion of reality that made her stomach churn. A movement caught the corner of her eye. She snapped her head around, heart pounding. A shadow detached itself from the trunk of a nearby oak, shifting unnaturally. It was tall, impossibly tall, its form blurred and indistinct, like smoke given shape. Aurora held her breath, her hand drifting towards the small, worn knife tucked into her belt. The shadow flowed towards her, not walking, but flowing, like water finding its path. She didn’t run. She couldn’t. The pendant’s warmth intensified, a fierce, protective heat against her skin, a lifeline in the growing darkness. The shadow coalesced, revealing nothing more than deeper darkness, a void that seemed to absorb the moonlight. It was gone as quickly as it appeared, leaving only the oppressive silence and the pounding of her own heart. The tearing sound returned, louder this time, echoing through the clearing. Aurora stumbled back, her back hitting the rough bark of the oak she’d been leaning against. The pendant burned against her chest, a fierce, painful warmth. She looked down at it, her fingers trembling as she touched the cool, crimson gem. It pulsed, a steady, insistent rhythm, matching the frantic beat of her heart. It was a sign, a warning. She was not alone. The Grove wasn’t just a place; it was a threshold, and she had crossed it. The Fae were here, watching, waiting. The wrongness wasn’t just a feeling; it was a presence, a tangible force that made the air taste of iron and decay. The pendant’s glow dimmed slightly, as if acknowledging the danger, then flared again, a defiant spark in the encroaching darkness. Aurora Carter, cool-headed and intelligent, stood alone in the heart of the Fae Grove, the ancient oaks whispering secrets she couldn’t understand, and the only sound the tearing of something unseen, something ancient, tearing the veil between worlds.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
67.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"very"
4"quickly"
5"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"profound"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"oppressive"
count2
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count2
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count3
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count6
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count2
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"sentinel"
count1
18
word"raced"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
20
word"stomach"
count1
21
word"churn"
count1
22
word"pounding"
count2
23
word"tangible"
count1
highlights
0"profound"
1"quickened"
2"oppressive"
3"silence"
4"loomed"
5"echoing"
6"chill"
7"pulsed"
8"pulse"
9"warmth"
10"whisper"
11"weight"
12"beacon"
13"resolve"
14"charged"
15"silk"
16"scanning"
17"sentinel"
18"raced"
19"could feel"
20"stomach"
21"churn"
22"pounding"
23"tangible"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords933
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount921
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora8
Heartstone1
Eva1
Grove4
Fae3
Carter1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
20.69% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed muted their colors drained to shades of grey and silver under the pale light"
1"void that seemed to absorb the moonlight"
2"as if acknowledging the danger, then flared again, a defiant spark in the encroaching darkness"
92.82% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.072
wordCount933
matches
0"not walking, but flowing, like water finding its path"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
22.67% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs8
mean116.63
std26.75
cv0.229
sampleLengths
0110
1128
2102
3107
485
594
6131
7176
90.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"been sent"
1"being pulled"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs145
matches
0"were doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences69
ratio0.058
matches
0"But now, standing beneath the gnarled branches, the feeling of being watched was no longer a whisper; it was a weight pressing down on her shoulders, making the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end."
1"The wrongness wasn’t just in the air; it was in the very fabric of the place, a subtle distortion of reality that made her stomach churn."
2"The Grove wasn’t just a place; it was a threshold, and she had crossed it."
3"The wrongness wasn’t just a feeling; it was a presence, a tangible force that made the air taste of iron and decay."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03854389721627409
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013918629550321198
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean13.52
std7.72
cv0.571
sampleLengths
021
118
224
316
431
520
619
719
816
916
1038
114
122
1312
1420
1512
1622
1717
1813
1914
2015
2119
229
2314
2418
2518
269
2713
287
292
3014
3113
327
332
342
357
361
373
385
399
4013
418
4215
439
4414
4526
468
477
4813
4914
36.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.21739130434782608
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences63
matches
0"She’d left the warm glow"
1"Her breath misted in the"
2"She pulled her coat tighter,"
3"She’d come here because the"
4"She’d dismissed it initially, attributing"
5"She’d been sent here."
6"Her friend Eva had spoken"
7"She’d come alone, trusting the"
8"She reached the heart of"
9"She stumbled, catching herself against"
10"It was like the tearing"
11"Her mind raced, trying to"
12"She forced herself to breathe,"
13"It was a beacon, but"
14"She took another step, her"
15"She could feel unseen eyes"
16"She snapped her head around,"
17"It was tall, impossibly tall,"
18"She didn’t run."
19"It was gone as quickly"
ratio0.381
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences63
matches
0"The night air in Richmond"
1"She’d left the warm glow"
2"The path winding through the"
3"Her breath misted in the"
4"She pulled her coat tighter,"
5"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
6"Aurora’s heart hammered against her"
7"She’d come here because the"
8"She’d dismissed it initially, attributing"
9"She’d been sent here."
10"The pendant’s warmth had been"
11"Her friend Eva had spoken"
12"Aurora had laughed it off,"
13"She’d come alone, trusting the"
14"She reached the heart of"
15"The air here felt different,"
16"The wildflowers, usually vibrant, seemed"
17"Shadows pooled in the corners,"
18"Aurora took a step forward,"
19"She stumbled, catching herself against"
ratio0.905
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Now, doubt clawed at her"
ratio0.016
15.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat echoing the sudden, inexplicable chill that had settled over her."
1"But now, standing beneath the gnarled branches, the feeling of being watched was no longer a whisper; it was a weight pressing down on her shoulders, making the…"
2"She’d come alone, trusting the pendant’s guidance, trusting that whoever sent her knew what they were doing."
3"She stumbled, catching herself against the rough bark of an oak, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps."
4"The trees stood sentinel, their branches swaying gently in a breeze that wasn’t there."
5"The shadow coalesced, revealing nothing more than deeper darkness, a void that seemed to absorb the moonlight."
6"Aurora stumbled back, her back hitting the rough bark of the oak she’d been leaning against."
7"The pendant’s glow dimmed slightly, as if acknowledging the danger, then flared again, a defiant spark in the encroaching darkness."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.3834%