Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFX36NZTTY3G66TWAQQY55

Run Details

Duration:
43.7s
Cost:
$0.001811
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood. Rory leaned against the bar, tracing the crescent scar on her wrist with her thumb as she waited for Silas to finish pouring a Guinness. The green neon glow from the sign outside cast long shadows across the bottles behind him. She'd come straight from her last delivery shift, the scent of sesame oil still clinging to her jacket. The bar was quiet for a Thursday—just a few regulars nursing their drinks and an old jazz record spinning softly in the corner. The door creaked open behind her. A draft curled through the room, carrying with it the damp London air and something else—a familiar citrus cologne that made Rory's shoulders tense before she even turned around. "Christ. Rory Carter?" That voice. Deeper than she remembered, rougher around the edges, but unmistakable. She turned slowly, her fingers tightening around her glass. Evan stood three feet away, his dark coat dripping rainwater onto the floorboards. He'd filled out since university—his shoulders broader, his jaw sharper. But it was his eyes that startled her most. The boy she'd known had worn his emotions like open wounds. The man before her now had a gaze as unreadable as the bar's tinted windows. "Didn't peg you for a pub crawler," she said, forcing her voice light. He laughed, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Didn't peg you for staying in London." He slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that his knee brushed her leg. She didn't move away. Silas appeared with her drink—a whiskey neat—and raised an eyebrow at Evan. "New friend?" "Old," Evan said before she could answer. He tapped the bar. "Glenfiddich, if you've got it. Eighteen year." Silas's gaze flickered to Rory, who gave the barest nod. He limped toward the premium shelf without another word. Evan turned his glass between his palms. "You look good." "You look different." He smirked. "That a compliment?" "A statement." She studied him—the new scar above his eyebrow, the way his left pinky twitched against his glass. Old tells overwritten by new ones. "What are you doing here, Evan?" "Meeting a client." He nodded toward the back booth where a man in a pinstripe suit was pretending not to watch them. "Got into private security after—" He stopped abruptly. "After you left Cardiff," she finished for him. The silence between them thickened. The jazz record skipped, the needle catching on a scratch. Evan exhaled through his nose. "I heard about your dad." Her throat tightened. "Three years too late." "I tried calling." "You changed your number." He had the decency to wince. "I needed a clean break." "From me." "From everything." His fingers twitched toward hers before pulling back. "I wasn't... good, back then." Rory swallowed a bitter laugh. That was one way to put it. The shouting matches. The broken dishes. The way he'd grab her wrist too tight when he'd been drinking. She rubbed her scar absently. Silas returned with Evan's drink, his signet ring glinting as he set it down. "Everything alright here?" "Peachy," Rory said. Evan knocked back half his scotch in one go. "We were just catching up." The pinstriped man coughed pointedly from his booth. Evan ignored him. "You still writing?" he asked suddenly. Rory blinked. Of all the things... "Poetry? No." "Shame. You were brilliant." She stared at him. The Evan she'd known had mocked her notebooks, called her verses "pretentious drivel." Now he was looking at her with something like regret. "What happened to you?" The question slipped out before she could stop it. He swirled his drink, watching the amber liquid cling to the sides. "Grew up, I guess." The needle skipped again. Someone laughed too loud by the dartboard. Evan's client stood abruptly, tossing bills onto his table. "Blackwood. We're leaving." Evan didn't move. "Give me five minutes." "Now." Rory watched the way Evan's jaw worked, the way his shoulders tensed—then relaxed into obedience. He drained his glass and stood, pulling a card from his coat. "If you ever need anything." He slid it toward her. "Legitimate offer." She didn't touch it. "I deliver dumplings, Evan. What would I need from a bodyguard?" His smile didn't reach his eyes. "You'd be surprised." He left without looking back, his coat swirling around his ankles. The door shut with a soft click. Silas materialized beside her, wiping a glass with a rag. "Trouble?" Rory finally picked up Evan's card. Blackwood Security, it read. Director of Operations. She flipped it over. On the back, in his cramped handwriting: *I'm sorry.* The needle settled back into the music. Rory tucked the card into her pocket and finished her whiskey in one burning swallow. "Just ghosts," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stopped abruptly [abruptly]"
1"he asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.1
81.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount797
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount797
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"familiar"
2"unreadable"
3"eyebrow"
4"flickered"
5"silence"
6"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords790
ratio0.003
matches
0"I'm sorry."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount644
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas5
Guinness1
Thursday1
London1
Rory9
Evan13
Old1
Security1
Operations1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Old"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.491
windowScore0.333
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like regret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount790
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean15.8
std12.44
cv0.787
sampleLengths
051
141
235
33
421
558
613
734
814
918
1019
1110
123
135
1431
1530
168
1715
1810
197
203
214
2211
232
2415
2535
2617
273
2814
2911
306
318
324
3327
3413
3516
3611
3712
387
391
4027
4112
4215
439
4418
4511
4613
4713
4822
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was pretending"
1"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences101
ratio0.059
matches
0"The bar was quiet for a Thursday—just a few regulars nursing their drinks and an old jazz record spinning softly in the corner."
1"A draft curled through the room, carrying with it the damp London air and something else—a familiar citrus cologne that made Rory's shoulders tense before she even turned around."
2"He'd filled out since university—his shoulders broader, his jaw sharper."
3"Silas appeared with her drink—a whiskey neat—and raised an eyebrow at Evan."
4"\"A statement.\" She studied him—the new scar above his eyebrow, the way his left pinky twitched against his glass."
5"Rory watched the way Evan's jaw worked, the way his shoulders tensed—then relaxed into obedience."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount651
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03379416282642089
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01228878648233487
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean7.82
std5.71
cv0.73
sampleLengths
010
125
216
318
423
56
629
73
82
910
109
1113
1210
139
1411
1515
1613
178
1822
194
2012
212
227
234
247
2510
269
277
283
293
302
313
3219
336
346
3522
368
378
385
3910
405
415
423
434
443
454
466
475
482
4910
62.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4158415841584158
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences70
matches
0"She'd come straight from her"
1"She turned slowly, her fingers"
2"He'd filled out since university—his"
3"she said, forcing her voice"
4"He laughed, but it didn't"
5"He slid onto the stool"
6"She didn't move away."
7"He tapped the bar."
8"He limped toward the premium"
9"She studied him—the new scar"
10"He nodded toward the back"
11"He stopped abruptly"
12"she finished for him"
13"Her throat tightened."
14"He had the decency to"
15"His fingers twitched toward hers"
16"She rubbed her scar absently."
17"he asked suddenly"
18"She stared at him."
19"He swirled his drink, watching"
ratio0.371
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences70
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
1"Rory leaned against the bar,"
2"The green neon glow from"
3"She'd come straight from her"
4"The bar was quiet for"
5"The door creaked open behind"
6"A draft curled through the"
7"She turned slowly, her fingers"
8"Evan stood three feet away,"
9"He'd filled out since university—his"
10"The boy she'd known had"
11"The man before her now"
12"she said, forcing her voice"
13"He laughed, but it didn't"
14"He slid onto the stool"
15"She didn't move away."
16"Silas appeared with her drink—a"
17"Evan said before she could"
18"He tapped the bar."
19"Silas's gaze flickered to Rory,"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A draft curled through the room, carrying with it the damp London air and something else—a familiar citrus cologne that made Rory's shoulders tense before she e…"
1"Silas's gaze flickered to Rory, who gave the barest nod."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.7619%