Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFXP5XHFP7VK98GT406XV3

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Duration:
11.6s
Cost:
$0.000271
Provider:
Clarifai

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the Grovetasted like wet earth and something older, something that clung to the skin like a second breath. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as her friends called her, pushed through the ancient oaks, their gnarled branches scraping the hood of her coat. The standing stones, weathered and moss-covered, marked the boundary where the familiar world bled into the Fae. She’d come for the pendant, the Heartstone, given to her by a stranger whose face she couldn’t quite recall. It had pulsed faintly against her chest since she’d left the Golden Empress, a low, insistent warmth that felt less like comfort and more like a warning. The night was thick, suffocating. The usual sounds of the city – distant traffic, the hum of London – were absent here. Instead, a low, rhythmic thrum vibrated in her bones, like the pulse of a distant heart. She paused, listening. The wind sighed through the oaks, but it wasn’t the wind. It sounded… wrong. Like the sigh of a thousand dry leaves, each one whispering a name she didn’t recognize. She shivered, not from cold, but from the sheer wrongness of it. She’d been here before, briefly, years ago, when she was just Rory, a kid tagging along with Eva. Back then, it had felt like a magical playground. Now, it felt like a trap. The pendant in her pocket pulsed again, stronger this time, a faint crimson glow seeping through the silver chain. It was near a Hel portal, she knew. The pendant always warned her. But why was it so insistent now? Why did the air feel thick enough to chew? She moved deeper, the path winding between the oaks. The wildflowers, blooming year-round, seemed unnaturally vibrant, their colors too sharp, too alive. A flicker of movement caught her eye at the edge of vision. She spun, heart hammering. Nothing. Just shadows coalescing and dissolving. She told herself it was fatigue, the stress of her job, the lingering fear from Evan. But the fear wasn’t lingering; it was blooming, a cold flower unfurling in her chest. The thrum grew louder, a low drone that vibrated through the soles of her boots. It wasn’t natural. It was the sound of something large, something ancient, moving just beyond the veil. She pressed herself against the rough bark of an oak, breathing shallowly. The scent of the Grove was changing. It wasn’t just earth and moss anymore. There was a metallic tang, like blood drying on stone, and something else – ozone, the smell of magic being torn open. She reached the heart of the Grove, a small clearing where the stones formed a rough circle. The air here was stiller, heavier. The thrum was a constant, low roar now. She knelt, her fingers trembling as she pulled the pendant from her pocket. It pulsed violently, a bright crimson light that illuminated the moss-covered stones. The glow wasn’t just warmth; it was heat, radiating enough to make the air shimmer. A cold certainty settled in her gut. She wasn’t alone. The wrongness wasn’t just in the air; it was *here*. The Fae were watching. They always watched. She remembered Eva’s stories, the warnings whispered in Cardiff pubs. The Fae weren’t benevolent. They were hungry. And the pendant, the Heartstone, was a beacon. A beacon for something far worse than hunger. She scrambled to her feet, the sound of her own breathing loud in the oppressive silence. The thrum intensified, a physical pressure against her eardrums. She turned to flee, but the path behind her was swallowed by shadows that seemed to shift and writhe. The stones around her felt like eyes, watching her retreat. The wildflowers weren’t just blooming; they were moving, their stems bending towards her, their petals unfurling like grasping hands. The pendant’s glow flared, blindingly bright, casting long, distorted shadows that danced like living things. It wasn’t just a warning; it was a call. A call to the Hel portal. And the Hel portal was opening. She could feel the fabric of reality thinning, like ice cracking underfoot. The thrum became a scream, a sound that vibrated in her skull, threatening to shatter her bones. She stumbled back, tripping over a root. The world tilted. The stones weren’t stones anymore; they were faces, ancient and cruel, leering down at her. The air crackled with energy, smelling of ozone and blood. The thrum was a roar now, a sound that promised pain, madness, or worse. She clutched the pendant, its heat searing her palm, a desperate anchor in the chaos. The Fae were coming. They were here. And the Hel portal was wide open. The only question was, would she be consumed, or would she find a way to close it? The answer wasn’t in the Grove anymore; it was in the pendant’s pulse, a frantic, desperate rhythm that echoed her own racing heart. The horror wasn’t just in the shadows; it was in the very air, thick and alive, waiting to swallow her whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount834
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount834
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count2
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"rhythmic"
4"vibrated"
5"pulse"
6"flicker"
7"beacon"
8"oppressive"
9"silence"
10"could feel"
11"searing"
12"echoed"
13"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords834
ratio0.001
matches
0"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount834
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Fae"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Hel"
discoveredNames
Grovetasted1
Carter1
Rory2
Fae4
Heartstone2
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Eva2
Hel4
Evan1
Grove3
Cardiff1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"London"
2"Hel"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"quite recall"
1"felt like a magical playground"
2"felt like a trap"
3"seemed unnaturally vibrant their colors too sharp, too alive"
4"shadows that seemed to shift and writhe"
5"felt like eyes, watching her retreat"
80.10% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.199
wordCount834
matches
0"not from cold, but from the sheer wrongness of it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
2.70% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean75.82
std12.09
cv0.159
sampleLengths
0107
183
281
375
480
571
660
773
865
964
1075
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"being torn"
1"was swallowed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was blooming"
1"were watching"
2"were moving"
3"was opening"
4"were coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount8
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences76
ratio0.132
matches
0"The usual sounds of the city – distant traffic, the hum of London – were absent here."
1"But the fear wasn’t lingering; it was blooming, a cold flower unfurling in her chest."
2"There was a metallic tang, like blood drying on stone, and something else – ozone, the smell of magic being torn open."
3"The glow wasn’t just warmth; it was heat, radiating enough to make the air shimmer."
4"The wrongness wasn’t just in the air; it was *here*."
5"The wildflowers weren’t just blooming; they were moving, their stems bending towards her, their petals unfurling like grasping hands."
6"It wasn’t just a warning; it was a call."
7"The stones weren’t stones anymore; they were faces, ancient and cruel, leering down at her."
8"The answer wasn’t in the Grove anymore; it was in the pendant’s pulse, a frantic, desperate rhythm that echoed her own racing heart."
9"The horror wasn’t just in the shadows; it was in the very air, thick and alive, waiting to swallow her whole."
95.13% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount834
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.045563549160671464
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008393285371702638
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean10.97
std6.14
cv0.56
sampleLengths
021
123
217
319
427
55
617
716
83
911
102
111
1216
1312
1418
159
166
1719
188
195
207
219
229
2313
2412
254
261
275
2816
2915
3015
313
3214
3312
347
357
3622
3717
386
398
4013
4112
4215
437
443
4510
464
473
4810
494
34.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2236842105263158
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners17
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, a low, rhythmic thrum"
1"Just shadows coalescing and dissolving."
ratio0.027
72.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences73
matches
0"She’d come for the pendant,"
1"It had pulsed faintly against"
2"She paused, listening."
3"She shivered, not from cold,"
4"She’d been here before, briefly,"
5"It was near a Hel"
6"She moved deeper, the path"
7"She spun, heart hammering."
8"She told herself it was"
9"It wasn’t natural."
10"It was the sound of"
11"She pressed herself against the"
12"It wasn’t just earth and"
13"She reached the heart of"
14"She knelt, her fingers trembling"
15"It pulsed violently, a bright"
16"She wasn’t alone."
17"They always watched."
18"She remembered Eva’s stories, the"
19"They were hungry."
ratio0.37
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The air in the Grovetasted"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"The standing stones, weathered and"
3"She’d come for the pendant,"
4"It had pulsed faintly against"
5"The night was thick, suffocating."
6"The usual sounds of the"
7"She paused, listening."
8"The wind sighed through the"
9"She shivered, not from cold,"
10"She’d been here before, briefly,"
11"The pendant in her pocket"
12"It was near a Hel"
13"The pendant always warned her."
14"She moved deeper, the path"
15"The wildflowers, blooming year-round, seemed"
16"A flicker of movement caught"
17"She spun, heart hammering."
18"She told herself it was"
19"The thrum grew louder, a"
ratio0.836
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Now, it felt like a"
ratio0.014
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air in the Grovetasted like wet earth and something older, something that clung to the skin like a second breath."
1"It had pulsed faintly against her chest since she’d left the Golden Empress, a low, insistent warmth that felt less like comfort and more like a warning."
2"It pulsed violently, a bright crimson light that illuminated the moss-covered stones."
3"The wildflowers weren’t just blooming; they were moving, their stems bending towards her, their petals unfurling like grasping hands."
4"The pendant’s glow flared, blindingly bright, casting long, distorted shadows that danced like living things."
5"The answer wasn’t in the Grove anymore; it was in the pendant’s pulse, a frantic, desperate rhythm that echoed her own racing heart."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.7317%