| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 94.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 834 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 834 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 834 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 834 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.48 | | worstName | "Fae" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Hel" | | discoveredNames | | Grovetasted | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Hel | 4 | | Evan | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite recall" | | 1 | "felt like a magical playground" | | 2 | "felt like a trap" | | 3 | "seemed unnaturally vibrant their colors too sharp, too alive" | | 4 | "shadows that seemed to shift and writhe" | | 5 | "felt like eyes, watching her retreat" |
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| 80.10% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.199 | | wordCount | 834 | | matches | | 0 | "not from cold, but from the sheer wrongness of it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.70% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 11 | | mean | 75.82 | | std | 12.09 | | cv | 0.159 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 73 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 75 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "being torn" | | 1 | "was swallowed" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "was blooming" | | 1 | "were watching" | | 2 | "were moving" | | 3 | "was opening" | | 4 | "were coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 8 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual sounds of the city – distant traffic, the hum of London – were absent here." | | 1 | "But the fear wasn’t lingering; it was blooming, a cold flower unfurling in her chest." | | 2 | "There was a metallic tang, like blood drying on stone, and something else – ozone, the smell of magic being torn open." | | 3 | "The glow wasn’t just warmth; it was heat, radiating enough to make the air shimmer." | | 4 | "The wrongness wasn’t just in the air; it was *here*." | | 5 | "The wildflowers weren’t just blooming; they were moving, their stems bending towards her, their petals unfurling like grasping hands." | | 6 | "It wasn’t just a warning; it was a call." | | 7 | "The stones weren’t stones anymore; they were faces, ancient and cruel, leering down at her." | | 8 | "The answer wasn’t in the Grove anymore; it was in the pendant’s pulse, a frantic, desperate rhythm that echoed her own racing heart." | | 9 | "The horror wasn’t just in the shadows; it was in the very air, thick and alive, waiting to swallow her whole." |
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| 95.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 834 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.045563549160671464 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008393285371702638 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 10.97 | | std | 6.14 | | cv | 0.56 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 34.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.2236842105263158 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 91.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a low, rhythmic thrum" | | 1 | "Just shadows coalescing and dissolving." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 72.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come for the pendant," | | 1 | "It had pulsed faintly against" | | 2 | "She paused, listening." | | 3 | "She shivered, not from cold," | | 4 | "She’d been here before, briefly," | | 5 | "It was near a Hel" | | 6 | "She moved deeper, the path" | | 7 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 8 | "She told herself it was" | | 9 | "It wasn’t natural." | | 10 | "It was the sound of" | | 11 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 12 | "It wasn’t just earth and" | | 13 | "She reached the heart of" | | 14 | "She knelt, her fingers trembling" | | 15 | "It pulsed violently, a bright" | | 16 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 17 | "They always watched." | | 18 | "She remembered Eva’s stories, the" | | 19 | "They were hungry." |
| | ratio | 0.37 | |
| 42.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grovetasted" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, or Rory, as" | | 2 | "The standing stones, weathered and" | | 3 | "She’d come for the pendant," | | 4 | "It had pulsed faintly against" | | 5 | "The night was thick, suffocating." | | 6 | "The usual sounds of the" | | 7 | "She paused, listening." | | 8 | "The wind sighed through the" | | 9 | "She shivered, not from cold," | | 10 | "She’d been here before, briefly," | | 11 | "The pendant in her pocket" | | 12 | "It was near a Hel" | | 13 | "The pendant always warned her." | | 14 | "She moved deeper, the path" | | 15 | "The wildflowers, blooming year-round, seemed" | | 16 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 17 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 18 | "She told herself it was" | | 19 | "The thrum grew louder, a" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 68.49% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grovetasted like wet earth and something older, something that clung to the skin like a second breath." | | 1 | "It had pulsed faintly against her chest since she’d left the Golden Empress, a low, insistent warmth that felt less like comfort and more like a warning." | | 2 | "It pulsed violently, a bright crimson light that illuminated the moss-covered stones." | | 3 | "The wildflowers weren’t just blooming; they were moving, their stems bending towards her, their petals unfurling like grasping hands." | | 4 | "The pendant’s glow flared, blindingly bright, casting long, distorted shadows that danced like living things." | | 5 | "The answer wasn’t in the Grove anymore; it was in the pendant’s pulse, a frantic, desperate rhythm that echoed her own racing heart." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |