Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFXYE6YWR8C02PPMHRDV2D

Run Details

Duration:
5m 34s
Cost:
$0.001293
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after sunset held a damp, earthy chill that seeped through Aurora’s jacket. She walked with purposeful steps, the beam of her phone’s flashlight cutting a narrow path through the dark. The usual night sounds—the distant hum of London, the rustle of foxes in the undergrowth—felt muffled, swallowed by a thick, listening silence. She’d come because the pendant had grown warm against her chest, a persistent, pulsing heat that began the moment she’d stepped off the bus. A lodestone pulling her toward its north. She found the standing stones not by sight, but by a sudden drop in temperature. One moment she was in the park, the next she was passing between two massive, lichen-crusted oaks that shouldn’t have been there, their trunks twisted into shapes that hurt the eyes to follow for too long. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s place. Inside the boundary, her phone light flickered and died. Not a battery death—a full, silent extinguishing. Rory swallowed, pocketing the useless device. The darkness wasn’t absolute. A soft, sourceless luminescence, like trapped moonlight, clung to the curling fronds of ferns and the petals of the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the dark. Year-round blooms, the codex had said. She saw them now: foxgloves with bells too deep a purple, night-blooming jasmine that smelled cloyingly sweet, and white wood anemones that seemed to turn, slowly, to follow her passage. She came here for answers. The pendant, a deep crimson tear against her grey jumper, was a mystery shoved into her life. Dymas. An unknown benefactor. A key, or a beacon? She needed to understand why it had chosen her, a runaway law student turned dumpling delivery girl. She’d hoped the Grove, a place between worlds, might offer clarity. Isolde was rarely here, Eva had said. It was a quiet place to think. Only now, it wasn’t quiet. It was the silence that was wrong first. The complete absence of insect chirp, owl hoot, or scuttling creature. Then came the sounds that replaced it. Not loud, but *misplaced*. A faint, rhythmic *scritch-scritch-scritch*, like a bone needle dragging across dry bark, coming from no direction and every direction. The soft, wet crunch of a footstep on loam, directly behind her. She spun, heart hammering against the warm stone at her sternum, but there was nothing, only the gently swaying anemones. “Hello?” Her voice, usually cool and measured, sounded small, swallowed by the dense air. The *scritching* stopped. In its place, a low, whispered sigh filtered through the leaves overhead, forming words that were almost English. *“…stay…”* Rory’s hand went to the pendant. It was hot now, not just warm. A comforting heat, but also a warning. She began to walk backward, toward where she thought the stone gateway stood. Her heel caught on a root and she stumbled, throwing out a hand to steady herself against an oak trunk. The bark was wrong. It was smooth and slightly damp, like skin cool with sweat. She snatched her hand back, wiping it furiously on her jeans. At the edge of her vision, between a thicket of hawthorn, something shifted. Not an animal. It was a suggestion of a shape, tall and too thin, limbs jointed at impossible angles. It was the grey of dead bark and stood so still it might have been a tree, except that Rory was certain it hadn’t been there a second before. She froze, her breath a white plume in the unnatural chill. Don’t run, she told herself. Running is for prey. Her father’s courtroom calm, her mother’s pragmatic Welsh sensibility—both useless here. This required a different kind of thinking. Out-of-the-box. Survive first, analyze later. She forced herself to look away, to scan the grove slowly. Direct attention was a trigger, Eva had once mumbled after too much wine. Don’t look at them full-on. See them sideways. Sideways, the grove was a nightmare of subtle movement. Shadows between trees deepened and swam. Flowers closed their blooms with a sound like tiny sighs. The whispering returned, layered now, a chorus of faint, hungry voices. *“…lost…”* *“…pretty chain…”* *“…warm blood…”* The pendant throbbed in time with her heartbeat. A crimson pulse lit the hollow at her throat, casting a tiny, bloody light on the ground before her. In its glow, she saw her own footprints. And beside them, another set. Long, narrow, with toes that were too many and too pointed. They hadn’t been there when she walked in. They were between her and the gateway. A panic, cold and sharp, lanced through her gut. It was the feeling of a door locking, of a trap closing. The feeling she’d had in Evan’s flat, realizing the charming smile had vanished, leaving only cold calculation. But this was worse. Evan was human. This… this was other. The thin grey figure by the hawthorn was gone. Rory’s eyes darted, her mind working furiously. The rules. Every place like this had rules. The codex said time moved differently. An hour could be a minute. A minute could be a day. How long had she been here? The sky through the canopy showed no moon, no stars, just a velvety, oppressive black. *Scritch-scritch-scritch.* Closer. She backed toward a large standing stone, putting the solid, ancient rock at her back. The wrongness intensified. The air grew thicker, harder to breathe, tasting of ozone and decaying petals. From the corner of her left eye, she saw a flicker of movement high up. She tilted her head, just a fraction. It was in the trees. Not one, but several. They clung to the branches like enormous, spidery lichen, limbs wrapped around boughs, heads cocked at sharp angles. They had no faces, only smooth, bark-like skin where features should be. But she could feel them watching. The weight of their attention was a physical pressure on her skin. The Heartstone’s glow brightened, casting a wider circle of crimson light around her feet. The things in the trees recoiled, just slightly, a unison rustle of displeasure. The pendant didn’t like them. It was a piece of another world, too. Dymas. Was it Fae? Or something that opposed whatever these creatures were? “Okay,” Rory whispered to herself, her voice a thread of sound. “Think. They don’t like the light. But it’s not driving them away.” The whispering coalesced into a single voice, dry as fallen leaves. “The stone is not yours, little thief. It calls. It hungers. Give it.” The words slithered into her ears, carrying with them an image: her own hands, lifting the silver chain over her head, offering the pulsing gem into the waiting darkness. A deep, aching loneliness and a yawning, eternal hunger accompanied the image. It was a compulsion, woven into the words themselves. Rory clenched her jaw, her fingers tightening around the pendant until the silver edges bit into her palm. The pain was clean, sharp, anchoring. She focused on it. On the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a childhood trophy from a fall. A real memory. A human memory. Cardiff. Her mother’s worried face. The smell of antiseptic. “No,” she said, the word leaving her lips as a puff of defiance. A hiss, sibilant and angry, rippled through the grove. The *scritching* became a frenzied scraping. The long-toed footprints in the moss began to multiply, circling her, getting closer with each phantom step. They were trying to herd her. Away from the stones, deeper into the Grove. Where time might stretch and thin, and she could be lost for a hundred years. Her back against the standing stone, she had a moment of perfect, terrified clarity. They feared the Heartstone’s light, but were not repelled by it. They wanted it. They couldn’t take it; she had to give it. And they were using the Grove itself against her, bending the silence and the shadows into weapons. The only way out was the way in. But the gateway was behind a wall of invisible, whispering menace. Rory did the only thing she could think of. She stopped trying to see them sideways. She looked down at the pendant in her fist, its light bleeding through her fingers. She focused all her will, all her fear, all her stubborn Carter refusal to be bullied, into a single, silent command at the artifact: *Brighter.* For a second, nothing. Then, a wave of heat, not burning but intense, flowed up her arm. The deep crimson light erupted, not as a beam, but as a shockwave. It burst from between her fingers in a silent, expanding ring of bloody illumination. For a fleeting second, the Grove was frozen in its stark glare. She saw them clearly—three, four, five of the bark-skinned figures, not just in the trees but standing amongst the flowers, their elongated forms now crisp and real. They had no eyes, but she felt their shock. The light wasn’t just light; it was a sound, a high, pure note that vibrated in her teeth and made the very air shiver. The creatures recoiled, shrieking with that dry, leaf-rustle sound. They didn’t vanish, but they blurred, retreating into the deeper shadows between the worlds. The path to the standing stone gateway was clear. Rory didn’t hesitate. She ran, the pendant blazing like a tiny star against her chest, lighting her way. The wildflowers whipped at her ankles, trying to tangle her. The whispers rose to a furious, buzzing roar in her mind. *THIEF! LOST! STAY!* She hit the space between the two great oaks at a sprint. The cold snap was like plunging into a winter river. Sound rushed back—a distant plane, a dog barking, the wind in normal trees. Her phone, in her pocket, buzzed to life with a backlog of notifications. She stumbled onto the ordinary grass of Richmond Park, gasping, the adrenaline making her knees weak. She turned back. Just trees. Dark, ordinary trees. No unnatural glow, no whispering. But around her neck, the Heartstone pendant still pulsed with a gentle, residual warmth. And when she looked at her palm, four small, perfect crescents were etched into her skin by the silver chain, mirroring the old scar on her wrist. A new mark. A receipt. She had come for answers. All she’d gotten was a confirmation: she was not alone, and the thing she carried was a key that unlocked more than doors. It attracted the locksmiths. And some of them were hungry. She walked quickly toward the distant park gate, the normal night air feeling fragile as glass, knowing with a cold certainty that the things in the Grove didn’t need footprints to follow. They had her scent now. And the pendant’s light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count2
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count1
19
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"beacon"
4"rhythmic"
5"measured"
6"comforting"
7"throbbed"
8"pulse"
9"oppressive"
10"flicker"
11"could feel"
12"weight"
13"perfect"
14"fleeting"
15"stark"
16"vibrated"
17"pulsed"
18"warmth"
19"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences180
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences180
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords15
totalWords1775
ratio0.008
matches
0"misplaced"
1"scritch-scritch-scritch"
2"scritching"
3"“…stay…”"
4"“…lost…”"
5"“…pretty chain…”"
6"“…warm blood…”"
7"Scritch-scritch-scritch."
8"scritching"
9"Brighter."
10"THIEF! LOST! STAY!"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1741
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Aurora1
London1
Fae2
Grove6
Eva2
English1
Rory8
Welsh1
Evan2
Closer1
Heartstone3
Carter1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Heartstone"
4"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Aurora"
3"London"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences122
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.38
wordCount1775
matches
0"not by sight, but by a sudden drop in temperature"
1"Not loud, but *misplaced*"
2"Not one, but several"
3"not burning but intense, flowed up her arm"
4"not as a beam, but as a shockwave"
5"not just in the trees but standing amongst the flowers, their elongated forms now cris"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean41.28
std27.45
cv0.665
sampleLengths
088
156
288
373
45
581
614
722
879
9104
1032
1136
121
132
142
1559
167
1749
1863
191
201
2153
2257
2352
2423
2524
2650
2758
2813
2932
3029
3154
3219
3356
3444
3572
3623
379
3842
3948
4029
4146
4279
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences180
matches
0"was gone"
1"was frozen"
2"were etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs278
matches
0"was passing"
1"were trying"
2"were using"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences182
ratio0.038
matches
0"The usual night sounds—the distant hum of London, the rustle of foxes in the undergrowth—felt muffled, swallowed by a thick, listening silence."
1"Not a battery death—a full, silent extinguishing."
2"Her father’s courtroom calm, her mother’s pragmatic Welsh sensibility—both useless here."
3"They couldn’t take it; she had to give it."
4"She saw them clearly—three, four, five of the bark-skinned figures, not just in the trees but standing amongst the flowers, their elongated forms now crisp and real."
5"The light wasn’t just light; it was a sound, a high, pure note that vibrated in her teeth and made the very air shiver."
6"Sound rushed back—a distant plane, a dog barking, the wind in normal trees."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1761
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"massive, lichen-crusted oaks"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.031232254400908575
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.01249290176036343
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean9.75
std6.92
cv0.71
sampleLengths
017
118
222
324
47
515
636
73
82
99
107
116
124
1326
146
1530
165
1717
181
193
205
2117
2211
237
247
255
268
2711
287
294
3019
3112
3220
3314
343
3518
361
376
387
397
4013
4120
424
4311
4411
4513
463
4716
4829
4911
40.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.3131868131868132
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences162
matches
0"Only now, it wasn’t quiet."
1"Then came the sounds that"
2"Away from the stones, deeper"
3"Then, a wave of heat,"
4"Dark, ordinary trees."
ratio0.031
84.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences162
matches
0"She walked with purposeful steps,"
1"She’d come because the pendant"
2"She found the standing stones"
3"She saw them now: foxgloves"
4"She came here for answers."
5"She needed to understand why"
6"She’d hoped the Grove, a"
7"It was a quiet place"
8"It was the silence that"
9"She spun, heart hammering against"
10"Her voice, usually cool and"
11"It was hot now, not"
12"She began to walk backward,"
13"Her heel caught on a"
14"It was smooth and slightly"
15"She snatched her hand back,"
16"It was a suggestion of"
17"It was the grey of"
18"She froze, her breath a"
19"Her father’s courtroom calm, her"
ratio0.34
80.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences162
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She walked with purposeful steps,"
2"The usual night sounds—the distant"
3"She’d come because the pendant"
4"A lodestone pulling her toward"
5"She found the standing stones"
6"The Fae Grove."
7"Rory swallowed, pocketing the useless"
8"The darkness wasn’t absolute."
9"A soft, sourceless luminescence, like"
10"Year-round blooms, the codex had"
11"She saw them now: foxgloves"
12"She came here for answers."
13"The pendant, a deep crimson"
14"An unknown benefactor."
15"A key, or a beacon?"
16"She needed to understand why"
17"She’d hoped the Grove, a"
18"Isolde was rarely here, Eva"
19"It was a quiet place"
ratio0.759
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences75
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She’d come because the pendant had grown warm against her chest, a persistent, pulsing heat that began the moment she’d stepped off the bus."
1"One moment she was in the park, the next she was passing between two massive, lichen-crusted oaks that shouldn’t have been there, their trunks twisted into shap…"
2"A soft, sourceless luminescence, like trapped moonlight, clung to the curling fronds of ferns and the petals of the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the da…"
3"She saw them now: foxgloves with bells too deep a purple, night-blooming jasmine that smelled cloyingly sweet, and white wood anemones that seemed to turn, slow…"
4"The words slithered into her ears, carrying with them an image: her own hands, lifting the silver chain over her head, offering the pulsing gem into the waiting…"
5"She ran, the pendant blazing like a tiny star against her chest, lighting her way."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory whispered, her voice a thread of sound"
1"she said, the word leaving her lips as a puff of defiance"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.222
78.9658%