Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFY199QTFQQWDW0317KQBT

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Duration:
54.0s
Cost:
$0.002234
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after midnight carried a chill that seeped straight through Rory’s jacket. She clutched the silver chain of the pendant at her throat, the smooth, thumbnail-sized stone warm against her skin despite the cold. It hadn’t stopped its low, gentle thrum since she’d passed through the park gates, a silent, insistent heartbeat guiding her steps. *Dymas*, the note had said. *The Grove at the witching hour. Come alone.* No signature, just the pendant left in her delivery bag with the scrawled message. Stupid. This was monumentally stupid. Eva would have locked her in the flat if she’d known. But after Evan, after running, Rory had promised herself she wouldn’t be governed by fear anymore. Only by logic. The logic here was flimsy: an artifact with unknown properties, a mysterious summons to a place that, according to the tales Silas muttered over his whiskey, didn’t obey normal rules. But the pendant’s warmth was a fact. Its pull was a fact. And her own gnawing curiosity, the part of her that had always bucked against the pre-law textbooks and her father’s expectations, was the most undeniable fact of all. She found the standing stones exactly where the old maps had hinted. They weren’t grand, like Stonehenge, but ancient, gnarled oaks that had grown in a perfect circle, their trunks so thick and twisted they seemed to have petrified into stone. They marked a boundary. The air shimmered faintly between two of them, like heat haze on a summer road. Taking a deep breath, Rory stepped through. The change was immediate. The city's distant hum, the faint scent of exhaust, the chill of the English night—all vanished. The air in the Fae Grove was thick and still, carrying a perfume of loam and night-blooming flowers. It was warmer, unnaturally so. Above, the sky was a deep, velvety purple, dotted with unfamiliar constellations that gleamed with a cold, sharp light. Wildflowers, vivid blues and blood-reds, bloomed in chaotic profusion around her ankles, though it was late autumn. The silence was the first wrong thing. It wasn’t a peaceful quiet; it was a listening silence, heavy and expectant. She stood in the center of the clearing, turning slowly. "Hello?" Her voice was swallowed by the oppressive stillness, leaving no echo. The pendant pulsed against her collarbone, a little warmer now. She was here. Now what? A twig snapped to her left. Rory froze, her heart kicking against her ribs. She stared into the darkness between the trees that ringed the clearing. Nothing moved. It was probably just an animal. A fox. A badger. Richmond Park was full of them. She forced herself to breathe, to summon that cool-headed logic she prided herself on. *Assess the situation. You are in an unknown location with unknown properties. You were summoned by an unknown party. Maintain position, observe.* She observed. The flowers seemed to sway, though there was no breeze. A soft rustling sound started, like silk brushing against silk. It came from everywhere and nowhere. Rory’s eyes darted around the edge of the grove, trying to pin down the source. Shadows pooled deeper between the ancient oaks, shifting in ways that felt deliberate. She caught a flicker of movement in her peripheral vision—a tall, slender shape slipping behind a tree. She snapped her head around. Nothing. Just the twisted bark and the clinging darkness. "Hello?" she called again, her voice tighter this time. "Dymas? Is that you?" The rustling stopped. The silence that rushed back in was even heavier, charged now with a sharp, predatory attention. She was being watched. The certainty of it crawled up her spine. This wasn't curiosity anymore. This was a trap. Evan’s face flashed in her mind—not the charming smiles of the beginning, but the cold, possessive glare of the end. The feeling was the same: the gut-deep knowledge of being prey. *Think, Rory. Out of the box. Always out of the box.* She focused on the pendant. Its warmth was a constant, a point of reference. It pulsed in a slow, steady rhythm. *Thump-thump. Thump-thump.* Was it her heartbeat? No. It was slower. More deliberate. She held the crimson stone in her palm, its faint inner glow casting a tiny red light on her fingers. The rustling started again, closer now. It was accompanied by a low, rhythmic clicking, like long nails tapping on stone. It seemed to circle her, just beyond the ring of flowers. Rory turned with it, keeping whatever was making the sound in front of her. Her breath fogged in the warm air, a paradox that made her head spin. Time moved differently here. How long had she been standing here? Five minutes? An hour? A sense of vertigo washed over her. She could be stuck here for days while only minutes passed in London. No one would even know where to look. Another flicker of movement, this time to her right. She saw it clearly for a fraction of a second: a pale, elongated limb, too thin and too many-jointed to be human, withdrawing into the shadows. It wasn't an animal. The click-clack sound was right behind her now. She spun around. Empty space. Her composure cracked. A cold sweat broke out on her forehead. She was breathing too fast, on the verge of hyperventilating. *They’re playing with you.* The thought was clear and terrifying. This was a game, and she was the mouse in the maze. The clicking stopped, replaced by a soft, wet sound, like something dragging through damp earth. It was coming from the center of the clearing she had just vacated. She didn't want to look. But she had to. Slowly, she turned back. There, in the trampled flowers where she had been standing, the earth was dark and wet. Something had seeped up from below, a patch of black, viscous mud. As she watched, a single, long-fingered hand, pale as a grub and slick with the same black fluid, emerged from the muck. It flexed, fingers curling and uncurling, feeling the air. Then it slapped down onto the solid ground, digging its claw-like nails into the soil for purchase. It was pulling something else up. Rory stumbled backward, a choked sound escaping her throat. The pendant burned against her skin, its pulse frantic now, a warning drumbeat. This was wrong. This was all wrong. She hadn’t been summoned for a meeting. She had been summoned as a lure. Or a sacrifice. The dragging sound intensified. A second hand joined the first, heaving a form up from the impossible patch of earth. A head emerged, hairless, its features indistinct and blurred, like a face seen through warped glass. It had no eyes, just dark, empty sockets that turned toward her. Run. The command screamed through every nerve in her body. But her feet felt rooted to the spot, trapped by the very flowers that had seemed so beautiful moments before. The thing pulled its torso free. It was unnaturally tall and thin, its limbs moving with a stuttering, insectile grace. It began to rise, its head cocking at an angle that would have broken a human neck. The clicking sound started again, emanating from its throat. It was a language, she realized with a fresh wave of dread. It was talking. It took a step toward her, the black mud dripping from its form and sizzling as it hit the flowers, which withered instantly. Rory’s hand flew to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit from childhood. The feel of the raised flesh grounded her, a tactile memory of a simple, human injury. This was not human. This was something from the stories Silas told, the ones she’d only half-believed. The Hel-portal. The pendant warmed near a Hel-portal. She wasn't here to meet Dymas. The pendant had been a key. And she had just unlocked a door. The creature took another step, its empty sockets fixed on her. It raised one of its long, pale hands, fingers stretching out as if to touch her from across the clearing. The clicking sound formed a single, guttural word that she felt more than heard, a vibration that rattled her teeth. "Malphora." Her name. But not her name. A name from a story she didn't know. With a final surge of will, Rory tore her feet from the clinging ground, spun on her heel, and ran. She didn't look back. She crashed through the ring of flowers, heading for the shimmering boundary between the oak trees. The clicking rose behind her, not in pursuit, but in what sounded like laughter. The wrong, warm air whipped past her face. She could feel the thing’s gaze on her back, a physical pressure, a promise. She hit the shimmering barrier and fell through, back into the biting cold and the familiar, mundane darkness of Richmond Park. She collapsed onto the frosty grass, gasping, the city lights a distant, beautiful comfort. The pendant at her throat was cool and inert. But as she pushed herself up, trembling, she saw it. On the cuff of her jacket, a single, crumbling petal from a flower that shouldn't exist, already turning to black dust. And on the wind, faint but unmistakable, the sound of rhythmic, clicking laughter.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
90.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1558
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1558
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"silk"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count2
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count2
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"could feel"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"perfect"
3"shimmered"
4"chaotic"
5"silence"
6"oppressive"
7"echo"
8"pulsed"
9"silk"
10"flicker"
11"charged"
12"rhythmic"
13"sense of"
14"pulse"
15"could feel"
16"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences159
matches(empty)
97.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences159
filterMatches
0"observe"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords48
totalWords1542
ratio0.031
matches
0"Dymas"
1"The Grove at the witching hour. Come alone."
2"Assess the situation. You are in an unknown location with unknown properties. You were summoned by an unknown party. Maintain position, observe."
3"Think, Rory. Out of the box. Always out of the box."
4"Thump-thump. Thump-thump."
5"They’re playing with you."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1535
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park3
Rory10
Grove2
Evan2
Silas2
Stonehenge1
English1
Fae1
Was1
London1
Hel-portal2
Dymas2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Silas"
3"Was"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Fae"
4"London"
5"Hel-portal"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed so beautiful moments before"
1"sounded like laughter"
70.30% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.297
wordCount1542
matches
0"not the charming smiles of the beginning, but the cold, possessive glare of the end"
1"not in pursuit, but in what sounded like laughter"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean46.73
std31.68
cv0.678
sampleLengths
0102
189
267
399
437
56
674
787
813
970
1011
1153
12102
1347
143
152
1671
179
184
1982
2046
2148
2230
2361
2423
2557
2619
2751
281
2914
3076
3144
3244
94.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences159
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"were summoned"
2"was accompanied"
3"been summoned"
4"been summoned"
36.73% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was being"
1"was making"
2"was breathing"
3"was coming"
4"was pulling"
5"was talking"
71.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences161
ratio0.025
matches
0"The city's distant hum, the faint scent of exhaust, the chill of the English night—all vanished."
1"It wasn’t a peaceful quiet; it was a listening silence, heavy and expectant."
2"She caught a flicker of movement in her peripheral vision—a tall, slender shape slipping behind a tree."
3"Evan’s face flashed in her mind—not the charming smiles of the beginning, but the cold, possessive glare of the end."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1551
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"smooth, thumbnail-sized stone"
1"was right behind her"
2"single, long-fingered hand,"
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.0367504835589942
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.009026434558349452
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean9.58
std6.44
cv0.673
sampleLengths
016
122
221
35
46
516
61
74
811
916
103
1130
127
135
1428
1512
1629
174
1815
197
204
2116
2218
235
2419
2517
267
2713
2810
2912
3010
313
322
336
348
3512
362
376
382
392
406
4114
423
439
447
453
462
4710
4810
496
39.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.3167701863354037
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences142
matches
0"Only by logic."
1"Just the twisted bark and"
2"Always out of the box.*"
3"Slowly, she turned back."
4"Then it slapped down onto"
ratio0.035
65.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences142
matches
0"She clutched the silver chain"
1"It hadn’t stopped its low,"
2"Its pull was a fact."
3"She found the standing stones"
4"They weren’t grand, like Stonehenge,"
5"They marked a boundary."
6"It was warmer, unnaturally so."
7"It wasn’t a peaceful quiet;"
8"She stood in the center"
9"Her voice was swallowed by"
10"She was here."
11"She stared into the darkness"
12"It was probably just an"
13"She forced herself to breathe,"
14"You are in an unknown"
15"You were summoned by an"
16"It came from everywhere and"
17"She caught a flicker of"
18"She snapped her head around."
19"she called again, her voice"
ratio0.387
51.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences142
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She clutched the silver chain"
2"It hadn’t stopped its low,"
3"*Dymas*, the note had said."
4"*The Grove at the witching"
5"This was monumentally stupid."
6"Eva would have locked her"
7"The logic here was flimsy:"
8"Its pull was a fact."
9"She found the standing stones"
10"They weren’t grand, like Stonehenge,"
11"They marked a boundary."
12"The air shimmered faintly between"
13"The change was immediate."
14"The city's distant hum, the"
15"The air in the Fae"
16"It was warmer, unnaturally so."
17"Wildflowers, vivid blues and blood-reds,"
18"The silence was the first"
19"It wasn’t a peaceful quiet;"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.30% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park after midnight carried a chill that seeped straight through Rory’s jacket."
1"The logic here was flimsy: an artifact with unknown properties, a mysterious summons to a place that, according to the tales Silas muttered over his whiskey, di…"
2"And her own gnawing curiosity, the part of her that had always bucked against the pre-law textbooks and her father’s expectations, was the most undeniable fact …"
3"They weren’t grand, like Stonehenge, but ancient, gnarled oaks that had grown in a perfect circle, their trunks so thick and twisted they seemed to have petrifi…"
4"Above, the sky was a deep, velvety purple, dotted with unfamiliar constellations that gleamed with a cold, sharp light."
5"Shadows pooled deeper between the ancient oaks, shifting in ways that felt deliberate."
6"The silence that rushed back in was even heavier, charged now with a sharp, predatory attention."
7"Her breath fogged in the warm air, a paradox that made her head spin."
8"It was unnaturally tall and thin, its limbs moving with a stuttering, insectile grace."
9"It took a step toward her, the black mud dripping from its form and sizzling as it hit the flowers, which withered instantly."
10"It raised one of its long, pale hands, fingers stretching out as if to touch her from across the clearing."
11"The clicking sound formed a single, guttural word that she felt more than heard, a vibration that rattled her teeth."
12"On the cuff of her jacket, a single, crumbling petal from a flower that shouldn't exist, already turning to black dust."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called again, her voice tighter this time"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.1754%