Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFZQBDADM02Y366DSGS2V6

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Duration:
28.8s
Cost:
$0.000802
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ModelRun

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled branches tangling against the bruised twilight sky. Aurora Carter rubbed her left thumb along the small crescent scar on her wrist as she stepped past the boundary into the Fae Grove. A prickle ran up her bare arms — the evening had been balmy when she left Silas’ bar, but here the air carried the undertone of frost. The pendant between her collarbones pulsed once, a brief flare of warmth against her skin. Her sneakers crunched on fallen leaves, the sound too loud in the unnatural stillness. Richmond Park should have been alive with rustling creatures and distant traffic noise just beyond the trees. But she’d walked far gorgeous than maps allowed, following instincts she couldn’t explain, and now even the wind held its breath. Wildflowers crowded the clearing, their petals unnervingly vibrant in the fading light. Rory crouched, brushing fingertips against a cluster of bluebells that trembled despite the absence of breeze. The flowers parted. Beneath them, the earth exhaled — a moist, fungal breath that smelled of turned soil and something metallic. She jerked her hand back. A whisper skittered across her nape, syllables just shy of forming words. Rory’s head snapped up. Her pendant throbbed again, hotter this time, as her gaze darted between the dense tree line. Nothing moved except the swaying flowers where no wind blew. "Eva?" she called, though she knew her friend wouldn’t be here. Eva had moved on months ago, chasing rumors of her vanished brother through Dresden’s underground clubs. Rory pressed the smooth stone of her pendant between finger and thumb until the heat subsided. She’d come because the message slipped under her door bore Eva’s looping handwriting: *Meet me at the Grove. Full moon. Bring the stone.* The ink had smudged under her thumb, suspiciously fresh for somethingiedad to have been delivered days prior. Another whisper, this time from her left. Rory turned slowly. Between two ancient oaks, something gleamed — a pale suggestion pressed against the dark bark. Not quite a face. Not quite not a face. The pendant seared her sternum. She blinked. The gleam was gone. A twig snapped behind her. Rory whirled, fists rising on instinct. Empty clearing. The wildflowers shivered in a circle around where she stood, petals curling inward like tiny fingers. The pendant’s chain tightened against her throat. Something wasn’t just watching. Something was *counting*. She felt it in the way her breath crystallized before her lips. In the way her scar itched as though freshly carved. She took a step back toward the standing stones—or where she thought they’d been. The trees leaned closer, their branches knitting together. The whispering coalesced behind her right ear: *Laila.* Her childhood name. The one Evan had spat before throwing her against the bathroom tiles. Rory’s knees locked. Evan was dead — she’d watched the coroner zip the body bag herself after the train incident. The bluebells began to chime. She ran. Branches clawed at her arms as she crashed through underbrush that hadn’t been there moments before. The pendant burned against her skin, its crimson glow casting monstrous shadows that scampered just beyond sight. A child’s laughter burbled up from the earth beneath her feet. Rory skidded to a stop. Ahead, the standing stones formed their archway, but the spaces between weren’t leading back to Richmond Park. Milky fog coiled through the gaps, and suspended within it— A hand. Palm up, fingers beckoning, the wrist adorned with a familiar crescent scar. The pendant shattered with a sound like breaking bone. Shards of crimson stone embedded in her palm as the Grove inhaled around her. The flowers sighed. The trees leaned in. And something wearing her face stepped forward from the fog.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount621
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount621
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"crystallized"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"trembled"
4"whisper"
5"throbbed"
6"crystallized"
7"familiar"
8"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords12
totalWords624
ratio0.019
matches
0"Meet me at the Grove. Full moon. Bring the stone."
1"counting"
2"Laila."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount612
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove3
Park2
Eva2
Dresden1
Evan2
Richmond2
Rory7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Park"
3"Dresden"
4"Richmond"
globalScore0.928
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount624
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean23.11
std18.39
cv0.796
sampleLengths
066
115
252
349
45
542
643
740
810
929
106
115
1231
134
143
1544
168
1735
185
192
2033
2111
2232
232
2412
2530
2610
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"been delivered"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs104
matches
0"was *counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences61
ratio0.098
matches
0"A prickle ran up her bare arms — the evening had been balmy when she left Silas’ bar, but here the air carried the undertone of frost."
1"Beneath them, the earth exhaled — a moist, fungal breath that smelled of turned soil and something metallic."
2"Between two ancient oaks, something gleamed — a pale suggestion pressed against the dark bark."
3"She took a step back toward the standing stones—or where she thought they’d been."
4"Evan was dead — she’d watched the coroner zip the body bag herself after the train incident."
5"Milky fog coiled through the gaps, and suspended within it—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount620
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.025806451612903226
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0064516129032258064
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean10.23
std6.24
cv0.61
sampleLengths
015
124
227
315
414
517
621
712
816
93
1018
115
1212
134
1416
1510
1611
1716
1816
1918
202
2120
227
233
2415
254
265
275
282
294
305
316
322
3316
347
354
363
3712
3810
3914
408
418
423
4312
443
4517
465
472
4816
4917
63.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4426229508196721
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her sneakers crunched on fallen"
1"She jerked her hand back."
2"Her pendant throbbed again, hotter"
3"she called, though she knew"
4"She’d come because the message"
5"She felt it in the"
6"She took a step back"
7"Her childhood name."
ratio0.143
49.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences56
matches
0"The oak standing stones loomed"
1"Aurora Carter rubbed her left"
2"A prickle ran up her"
3"The pendant between her collarbones"
4"Her sneakers crunched on fallen"
5"Richmond Park should have been"
6"Wildflowers crowded the clearing, their"
7"Rory crouched, brushing fingertips against"
8"The flowers parted."
9"She jerked her hand back."
10"A whisper skittered across her"
11"Rory’s head snapped up."
12"Her pendant throbbed again, hotter"
13"Nothing moved except the swaying"
14"she called, though she knew"
15"Eva had moved on months"
16"Rory pressed the smooth stone"
17"She’d come because the message"
18"Another whisper, this time from"
19"Rory turned slowly."
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory crouched, brushing fingertips against a cluster of bluebells that trembled despite the absence of breeze."
1"Beneath them, the earth exhaled — a moist, fungal breath that smelled of turned soil and something metallic."
2"The pendant burned against her skin, its crimson glow casting monstrous shadows that scampered just beyond sight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.8318%