| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1334 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1334 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "normalcy" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "the last thing" | | 17 | "complex" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 35 | | totalWords | 1327 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones. Midnight. Come alone. Answers await." | | 1 | "Get a grip, Rory," | | 2 | "It’s a park. There are foxes. Rats. Pigeons with a death wish." | | 3 | "You are not alone." | | 4 | "Think, Carter. Think." | | 5 | "Aurora." | | 6 | "“Auuu… rooo… raaa…”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1313 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Eva | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | English | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 26.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the whole city was holding it" | | 1 | "seemed farther away than they had a moment ago, the paths between them narrowing, the oak trunks leaning in to watch" | | 2 | "seemed impossible it was made by any human hand" | | 3 | "not quite a word" |
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| 49.28% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.507 | | wordCount | 1327 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the ambient warmth of her skin, but a distinct, pulsing heat" | | 1 | "not at her, but at the stone she was pinned against" |
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| 90.91% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "screamed that this" | | 1 | "was that the" | | 2 | "afraid that any" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 33.17 | | std | 22.2 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 68 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 57 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 57 | | 39 | 4 |
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| 89.19% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "were pressed" | | 2 | "been were" | | 3 | "was elongated" | | 4 | "was pinned" | | 5 | "was made" |
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| 38.97% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was scrambling" | | 2 | "was herding" | | 3 | "wasn’t coming" | | 4 | "was coming" |
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| 99.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Answers await.* After the things she’d seen lately—the shifting shadows that were more than just tricks of the light, the whispers that weren’t the wind—‘answers’ was a word with a powerful pull." | | 1 | "It raised a limb—an arm that had too many bends in it—and pointed past her, not at her, but at the stone she was pinned against." |
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| 86.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1329 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "dense, flower-scented air." |
| | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.04890895410082769 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01580135440180587 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 10.05 | | std | 7.2 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 31.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.29545454545454547 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the hum." | | 1 | "Just the dark trunks of" | | 2 | "Then the shimmer returned, and" | | 3 | "Slowly, afraid that any sudden" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 58.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her leather jacket" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 2 | "She found the familiar clearing," | | 3 | "It became thicker, sweeter, heavy" | | 4 | "She was here for answers," | | 5 | "It had done that before," | | 6 | "she called out, her voice" | | 7 | "It didn’t echo." | | 8 | "It just died." | | 9 | "She stopped, holding her breath," | | 10 | "It came from behind her." | | 11 | "She spun around, heart hammering" | | 12 | "*It’s a park." | | 13 | "She moved toward the centre" | | 14 | "It was there and then" | | 15 | "She froze, every muscle locking." | | 16 | "She didn’t breathe." | | 17 | "She just stared at the" | | 18 | "She didn’t want to look." | | 19 | "She had to look." |
| | ratio | 0.403 | |
| 39.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air in Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter’s boots crunched softly" | | 2 | "She pulled her leather jacket" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 4 | "The text from the blocked" | | 5 | "*The standing stones." | | 6 | "Answers await.* After the things" | | 7 | "She found the familiar clearing," | | 8 | "The Fae Grove." | | 9 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 10 | "Aurora stepped between two of" | | 11 | "The air changed instantly." | | 12 | "It became thicker, sweeter, heavy" | | 13 | "The oppressive silence of the" | | 14 | "The wrongness was immediate, a" | | 15 | "She was here for answers," | | 16 | "The deep crimson gemstone was" | | 17 | "It had done that before," | | 18 | "she called out, her voice" | | 19 | "It didn’t echo." |
| | ratio | 0.84 | |
| 42.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Even if every instinct screamed" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 81.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It became thicker, sweeter, heavy with the scent of blooming wildflowers that had no business existing in an English autumn." | | 1 | "It was there and then it wasn’t, so fast she could almost believe she’d imagined the long, spindly limb, the suggestion of a head that was too narrow." | | 2 | "She whipped around, stumbling back, her boots crushing a patch of glowing blue flowers that released a cloud of sickly-sweet pollen." | | 3 | "It had no discernible features, only a suggestion of a faceless head that tilted, regarding her." | | 4 | "The clicking from the shimmering thing mutated, forming a sound that was almost, but not quite, a word." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |