Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG2DVSGC1PDKGB3ATZN58T

Run Details

Duration:
55.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quiet for a Thursday evening, the usual Soho crowd still trickling in from work. Rory sat at the end of the bar, nursing a gin and tonic that had long since gone flat. She'd come to see Silas about something - what it was, she couldn't quite remember now. The day had been long, deliveries running late, the usual chaos at the Golden Empress. Her feet ached. She was studying the intricate pattern of water rings on the dark wood when she heard it - that laugh. Deep, rumbling, with just a hint of something darker underneath. Her head snapped up. There, in the back corner booth, sat a man who looked like he'd stepped out of her worst memories. Evan. Except it wasn't Evan. The face was similar enough - the same strong jawline, the same dark hair - but everything else was wrong. Where Evan had been lean and hungry, this man was solid, powerful. Where Evan's eyes had been cold and calculating, these eyes held warmth, crinkling at the corners as he laughed again. Rory's hand tightened around her glass. The conversation she'd come to have with Silas evaporated from her mind. All she could think about was how this man's face mirrored the one that had haunted her nightmares for the past two years. "Problems with your drink?" Silas' voice came from beside her, smooth as always. She hadn't even heard him approach. She shook her head, not trusting herself to speak. Silas followed her gaze to the back booth, and something shifted in his expression. Understanding, maybe. Or recognition. "Friend of yours?" he asked, already knowing the answer. Rory swallowed hard. "Not exactly." Silas studied her for a moment, then nodded toward the booth. "That's Declan O'Malley. Used to work with me, years ago. Haven't seen him in a long time." The name meant nothing to her, but the way Silas said it - carefully, like testing the weight of each syllable - told her this was important. She watched as Declan threw his head back and laughed again, and something twisted in her chest. That laugh. It was the same laugh that used to echo through her apartment at all hours, the laugh that had turned cold and cruel in the end. "He looks like someone I used to know," she said finally, and even to her own ears, her voice sounded small. Silas was quiet for a moment. "People change, Rory. Sometimes more than we expect." She wanted to argue, to say that some things never changed, that monsters stayed monsters. But looking at Declan - really looking - she saw the differences. The way he moved, confident but not predatory. The way his hands gestured when he spoke, open and expressive instead of clenched and tight. The laugh that reached his eyes instead of stopping cold at his throat. "He was different back then," Silas continued, as if reading her thoughts. "We all were. War changes people. Makes them harder or breaks them entirely." Rory's fingers traced the rim of her glass. "What kind of war?" Silas just looked at her, and in that look she saw the weight of years, of secrets carried too long. "The kind that leaves marks you can't see." She thought about the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, the one she always told people came from a childhood accident. The one that had actually come from a night when Evan's hand had closed around her arm too tightly, when his fingers had dug in hard enough to break skin. "You know," Silas said after a moment, "sometimes running into the past is exactly what we need. A chance to see how far we've come." Rory wanted to believe him. Wanted to believe that seeing this man who looked like her nightmares made flesh could be anything other than a cruel trick of fate. But the weight of it all - the memories, the fear, the constant looking over her shoulder - sat heavy in her chest. "I didn't come here to talk about him," she said finally, forcing her gaze away from the back booth. "I need..." But the words wouldn't come. What did she need? Answers? Closure? The impossible - to go back and change everything that had happened? Silas seemed to understand. He nodded toward the hidden door behind the bookshelf. "Come on. Let's talk somewhere more private." As they moved through the bar, Rory couldn't help but glance back at Declan one more time. He was looking at his phone now, brow furrowed in concentration. For a moment, their eyes met across the room, and Rory froze. But there was no recognition in his gaze, no flash of cruel amusement. Just a quick, assessing look - the kind any man might give an attractive woman in a bar - before he turned back to his phone. Rory let out a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding. In the secret room, Silas poured two fingers of whiskey into heavy crystal glasses. The amber liquid caught the light from the single lamp, throwing warm shadows across the walls lined with books. "He really is different," Silas said, handing her a glass. "Whatever you think you know about him, whatever he reminds you of - it's not him. People change, Rory. Sometimes they become better than they were." She wanted to believe him. Wanted to believe that redemption was possible, that people could change so completely that even their shadows were different. But the weight of her own experience sat heavy in her bones. "I should go," she said, setting the untouched whiskey on the table. "I just... I can't." Silas nodded, understanding in his eyes. "It's okay. These things take time." As she made her way out of the bar, she couldn't resist one last look back. Declan was still in the back booth, still looking at his phone. But now he was smiling, a small private smile that transformed his whole face. Rory pushed open the door and stepped out into the Soho night. The air was cool against her skin, smelling of rain and exhaust and distant cooking spices from the Chinese restaurants lining the street. She started walking, not sure where she was going but knowing she needed to move. Behind her, through the green neon glow of The Raven's Nest's sign, she could see Declan's silhouette in the window. For a moment, just a moment, she let herself wonder. What if people could change? What if the monsters of our past could become something else entirely? What if, given enough time and enough distance, we could all become strangers to our worst selves? The questions swirled in her mind as she walked, each step taking her further from the bar and closer to whatever came next. Tomorrow, she knew, she would still wake up with the weight of memory on her chest. Tomorrow, she would still flinch at certain sounds, still check over her shoulder in empty streets. But maybe - just maybe - tomorrow she would also remember that laugh. Not the cruel echo of her nightmares, but the warm, genuine sound of someone who had become something new. And maybe that would be enough to keep walking forward, into whatever came next.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
44.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.211
79.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1202
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"tightly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1202
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"intricate"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"weight"
count5
4
word"echo"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"intricate"
1"calculating"
2"warmth"
3"weight"
4"echo"
5"traced"
6"furrowed"
7"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
92.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"look "
1"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1217
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1056
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Thursday1
Soho2
Silas13
Golden1
Empress1
Evan5
Rory9
Declan5
Chinese1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Declan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Chinese"
globalScore0.884
windowScore0.833
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite remember now"
1"looked like he'd stepped out of her worst"
2"as if reading her thoughts"
3"looked like her nightmares made flesh cou"
35.66% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.643
wordCount1217
matches
0"not sure where she was going but knowing she needed to move"
1"Not the cruel echo of her nightmares, but the warm, genuine sound of someone who had become something"
27.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences96
matches
0"say that some changed, that monsters"
1"believe that redemption"
2"remember that laugh"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean32.89
std18.02
cv0.548
sampleLengths
071
134
276
341
419
527
69
75
828
972
1021
1114
1264
1325
1412
1528
1650
1725
1852
1921
2023
2120
2240
2339
2411
2533
2636
2736
2816
2912
3042
3135
3245
3334
3455
3532
3614
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
53.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was studying"
1"was looking"
2"was smiling"
3"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences96
ratio0.094
matches
0"She'd come to see Silas about something - what it was, she couldn't quite remember now."
1"She was studying the intricate pattern of water rings on the dark wood when she heard it - that laugh."
2"The face was similar enough - the same strong jawline, the same dark hair - but everything else was wrong."
3"The name meant nothing to her, but the way Silas said it - carefully, like testing the weight of each syllable - told her this was important."
4"But looking at Declan - really looking - she saw the differences."
5"But the weight of it all - the memories, the fear, the constant looking over her shoulder - sat heavy in her chest."
6"The impossible - to go back and change everything that had happened?"
7"Just a quick, assessing look - the kind any man might give an attractive woman in a bar - before he turned back to his phone."
8"But maybe - just maybe - tomorrow she would also remember that laugh."
95.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.04471931493815414
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007611798287345386
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.68
std7.09
cv0.559
sampleLengths
018
119
216
315
43
520
610
74
819
91
104
1120
1212
1320
146
1512
1623
1713
186
199
2014
212
222
239
243
252
2611
2717
2827
2917
302
3126
3221
336
348
3515
3612
378
3816
3913
4012
4113
428
434
4420
458
4620
4730
4825
495
56.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3958333333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners38
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Just a quick, assessing look"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences78
matches
0"She'd come to see Silas"
1"Her feet ached."
2"She was studying the intricate"
3"Her head snapped up."
4"She hadn't even heard him"
5"She shook her head, not"
6"he asked, already knowing the"
7"She watched as Declan threw"
8"It was the same laugh"
9"she said finally, and even"
10"She wanted to argue, to"
11"She thought about the crescent-shaped"
12"she said finally, forcing her"
13"He nodded toward the hidden"
14"He was looking at his"
15"She wanted to believe him."
16"she said, setting the untouched"
17"She started walking, not sure"
ratio0.231
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences78
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quiet"
1"Rory sat at the end"
2"She'd come to see Silas"
3"The day had been long,"
4"Her feet ached."
5"She was studying the intricate"
6"Her head snapped up."
7"There, in the back corner"
8"The face was similar enough"
9"Rory's hand tightened around her"
10"The conversation she'd come to"
11"She hadn't even heard him"
12"She shook her head, not"
13"Silas followed her gaze to"
14"he asked, already knowing the"
15"Rory swallowed hard."
16"Silas studied her for a"
17"The name meant nothing to"
18"She watched as Declan threw"
19"It was the same laugh"
ratio0.628
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"There, in the back corner booth, sat a man who looked like he'd stepped out of her worst memories."
1"It was the same laugh that used to echo through her apartment at all hours, the laugh that had turned cold and cruel in the end."
2"Wanted to believe that seeing this man who looked like her nightmares made flesh could be anything other than a cruel trick of fate."
3"But now he was smiling, a small private smile that transformed his whole face."
4"The air was cool against her skin, smelling of rain and exhaust and distant cooking spices from the Chinese restaurants lining the street."
5"Not the cruel echo of her nightmares, but the warm, genuine sound of someone who had become something new."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas continued, as if reading her thoughts"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.105
72.4543%