| 87.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 96.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1279 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1279 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "sentinel" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "firmly" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 31.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "happened to" | | 2 | "began to" | | 3 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1267 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a little further, she told herself." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1165 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Well | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.813 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like hours, though her phone insis" | | 1 | "looked like" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.789 | | wordCount | 1267 | | matches | | 0 | "not walking, but gliding, as if its feet never quite touched the ground" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.86% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 40.87 | | std | 17.55 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 64 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 15 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "were thinning" | | 1 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Night had fallen hours ago, but the darkness here felt different—thicker, as if it had substance rather than absence." | | 1 | "She'd been hearing sounds like that for the past twenty minutes—footsteps, whispers, the occasional giggle that sounded far too childlike for comfort." | | 2 | "This had to be it—the portal to the Fae realm her parents had spoken of in their journals." | | 3 | "A scream built in her throat, but before she could release it, the laughter came again—closer this time." | | 4 | "Instead, it began to move—not walking, but gliding, as if its feet never quite touched the ground." | | 5 | "With each pass, Rory caught glimpses of its face—pale, too pale, with eyes that reflected the moonlight like a cat's." | | 6 | "And its mouth—when it smiled, its mouth was far too wide, filled with far too many teeth." | | 7 | "Other voices joined in—more laughter, more singing, more whispers that brushed against Rory's ears like cobwebs." | | 8 | "The pendant still burned against her skin, but now it felt less like guidance and more like a brand—a mark that something in that clearing had noticed her, had chosen her." |
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| 91.85% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1176 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.04931972789115646 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008503401360544218 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 12.93 | | std | 7.14 | | cv | 0.552 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 72.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.47959183673469385 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from the far side" | | 1 | "Just shadows and flowers and" | | 2 | "Instead, it began to move—not" | | 3 | "Just a little further, she" | | 4 | "Just a little further and" |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been walking for what" | | 1 | "It was supposed to guide" | | 2 | "She'd been hearing sounds like" | | 3 | "she muttered to herself, trying" | | 4 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 5 | "she called out, her voice" | | 6 | "She turned toward the sound," | | 7 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 8 | "It was too dark to" | | 9 | "It circled the stone circle," | | 10 | "Its face was too perfect," | | 11 | "it sang, its voice high" | | 12 | "Her parents had vanished when" | | 13 | "She'd always assumed they were" | | 14 | "she said firmly, though her" | | 15 | "She turned and ran, crashing" | | 16 | "She could see the edge" | | 17 | "She fell hard, the breath" | | 18 | "it whispered, and its breath" | | 19 | "She didn't stop running until" |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 96.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "Night had fallen hours ago," | | 2 | "The moon hung low and" | | 3 | "She'd been walking for what" | | 4 | "Time behaved strangely in this" | | 5 | "The pendant had grown warm" | | 6 | "It was supposed to guide" | | 7 | "A twig snapped behind her," | | 8 | "Nothing but darkness and trees." | | 9 | "She'd been hearing sounds like" | | 10 | "Each time she turned, there" | | 11 | "she muttered to herself, trying" | | 12 | "The words rang hollow even" | | 13 | "The pendant had been a" | | 14 | "The pendant pulsed more urgently," | | 15 | "The trees were thinning ahead," | | 16 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 17 | "This had to be it—the" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, blooming" | | 19 | "Rory's footsteps slowed as she" |
| | ratio | 0.726 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 5.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Night had fallen hours ago, but the darkness here felt different—thicker, as if it had substance rather than absence." | | 1 | "The moon hung low and bloated above the treeline, casting everything in an eerie silver glow that made the shadows seem to writhe." | | 2 | "She'd been hearing sounds like that for the past twenty minutes—footsteps, whispers, the occasional giggle that sounded far too childlike for comfort." | | 3 | "The air felt different here, charged with an energy that made her skin prickle." | | 4 | "Childlike, innocent, but carrying an edge that made Rory's blood run cold." | | 5 | "The pendant was burning now, a steady heat against her skin that bordered on painful." | | 6 | "With each pass, Rory caught glimpses of its face—pale, too pale, with eyes that reflected the moonlight like a cat's." | | 7 | "Dripping from its fingers, staining the wildflowers as it passed." | | 8 | "Other voices joined in—more laughter, more singing, more whispers that brushed against Rory's ears like cobwebs." | | 9 | "The trees seemed to reach for her as she ran, roots tripping her, branches catching at her hair." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, trying to sound braver than she felt" | | 1 | "she called out, her voice sounding small and fragile in the vast darkness" | | 2 | "Rory demanded, trying to keep her voice steady" | | 3 | "it sang, its voice high and sweet and utterly wrong" | | 4 | "Rory asked, though every instinct screamed at her to run, to get out of this clearing, to never come back" | | 5 | "she said firmly, though her voice trembled" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "it sang (sing)" | | 4 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.625 | |