Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG2MTQRVQXSEB2F1A164KW

Run Details

Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Rory's chest as she pushed through the overgrown undergrowth of Richmond Park. Night had fallen hours ago, but the darkness here felt different—thicker, as if it had substance rather than absence. The moon hung low and bloated above the treeline, casting everything in an eerie silver glow that made the shadows seem to writhe. She'd been walking for what felt like hours, though her phone insisted it had only been thirty minutes. Time behaved strangely in this part of the park, or perhaps it was just her imagination. The pendant had grown warm the moment she'd entered the park boundaries, a steady heat that reminded her of a fever. It was supposed to guide her to the portal, but the path twisted and turned in ways that defied logic. A twig snapped behind her, and Rory whirled around, heart hammering against her ribs. Nothing but darkness and trees. She'd been hearing sounds like that for the past twenty minutes—footsteps, whispers, the occasional giggle that sounded far too childlike for comfort. Each time she turned, there was nothing there. "Just nerves," she muttered to herself, trying to sound braver than she felt. "You've dealt with worse than this." The words rang hollow even to her own ears. What had she gotten herself into? The pendant had been a gift from a mysterious benefactor, delivered to her flat with no return address and a note that simply read: "When you're ready to find the truth, follow where this leads." Well, she'd been ready. Ready to uncover what had happened to her parents, ready to understand why they'd vanished without a trace when she was just a child. Ready to stop feeling like she was living in a half-life, always wondering, always searching. The pendant pulsed more urgently, and Rory quickened her pace. The trees were thinning ahead, and she caught glimpses of something that looked like... stones? Yes, there were stones ahead, arranged in a circle. Her breath caught in her throat. This had to be it—the portal to the Fae realm her parents had spoken of in their journals. As she stepped into the clearing, the standing stones loomed before her, ancient oak weathered by centuries. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, blooming despite the late hour and the wrong season. Rory's footsteps slowed as she approached the circle. The air felt different here, charged with an energy that made her skin prickle. "Hello?" she called out, her voice sounding small and fragile in the vast darkness. "Is anyone here?" Silence. Then, from the far side of the clearing, came the sound of laughter. Childlike, innocent, but carrying an edge that made Rory's blood run cold. She turned toward the sound, but saw nothing. Just shadows and flowers and the massive stones standing sentinel. The pendant was burning now, a steady heat against her skin that bordered on painful. Rory reached up to touch it, and her fingers brushed something wet. She pulled her hand back and stared in horror at the dark substance coating her fingertips. Blood. Fresh blood. A scream built in her throat, but before she could release it, the laughter came again—closer this time. Rory spun around, and this time she saw it. A figure, small and childlike, standing between two of the standing stones. It was too dark to make out details, but she could see the outline of a dress, the suggestion of long hair. "Who are you?" Rory demanded, trying to keep her voice steady. "What do you want?" The figure didn't answer. Instead, it began to move—not walking, but gliding, as if its feet never quite touched the ground. It circled the stone circle, always keeping the stones between itself and Rory. With each pass, Rory caught glimpses of its face—pale, too pale, with eyes that reflected the moonlight like a cat's. And then she saw the blood. Dripping from its fingers, staining the wildflowers as it passed. The same blood that now coated her own hand. Rory backed away, her heart thundering in her ears. This wasn't right. This wasn't what was supposed to happen. The portal was supposed to be a gateway, a way to find answers. Not... whatever this was. The figure stopped moving and turned to face her fully. In the moonlight, Rory could see its features clearly now, and she wished she couldn't. Its face was too perfect, too symmetrical, like a doll's face. And its mouth—when it smiled, its mouth was far too wide, filled with far too many teeth. "Little girl lost," it sang, its voice high and sweet and utterly wrong. "Looking for what's been taken, but what's been taken wants to stay lost." "What do you mean?" Rory asked, though every instinct screamed at her to run, to get out of this clearing, to never come back. "My parents—I'm looking for my parents." The figure tilted its head, birdlike, studying her. "Your parents made their choice. They chose to stay. You could too, little girl. Stay with us. Stay forever." Rory's mind raced. Her parents had vanished when she was eight years old, leaving no trace except for a few cryptic journal entries about a realm of magic and wonder. She'd always assumed they were dead, that something had happened to them in their search for the portal. But what if they'd chosen to leave? What if they'd chosen to stay in this... place? "No," she said firmly, though her voice trembled. "I'm not staying. I'm going to find them and bring them home." The figure's smile widened, impossibly wide, and it began to laugh. The sound started soft but grew louder and louder, filling the clearing until it seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere all at once. Other voices joined in—more laughter, more singing, more whispers that brushed against Rory's ears like cobwebs. She turned and ran, crashing through the undergrowth, branches tearing at her clothes and skin. Behind her, the laughter followed, always just a little too close, always just a little too far. The pendant burned against her chest, a brand of her foolishness, her arrogance in thinking she could control this. The trees seemed to reach for her as she ran, roots tripping her, branches catching at her hair. She could see the edge of the park now, the distant glow of streetlights that marked the boundary between this place and the real world. Just a little further, she told herself. Just a little further and she'd be safe. But as she burst from the treeline, something grabbed her ankle. She fell hard, the breath knocked from her lungs, and looked back to see the figure crouched over her, its face split in that terrible smile. "Stay," it whispered, and its breath smelled of rot and honey. "Stay with us, little girl. We'll keep you safe. We'll keep you forever." Rory kicked out, hard, and connected with something solid. The figure hissed and released her, and she scrambled to her feet, running the final few yards to the street. Behind her, the laughter faded, but she could still feel eyes watching her, still feel the weight of the pendant against her chest. She didn't stop running until she reached her flat, didn't stop shaking until she'd triple-locked the door and collapsed on the floor, gasping for breath. The pendant still burned against her skin, but now it felt less like guidance and more like a brand—a mark that something in that clearing had noticed her, had chosen her. And she had a terrible feeling it wouldn't let her go so easily next time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
87.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
96.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"sentinel"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"footsteps"
2"quickened"
3"loomed"
4"charged"
5"silence"
6"sentinel"
7"perfect"
8"raced"
9"firmly"
10"trembled"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"d in horror"
31.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"happened to"
2"began to"
3"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1267
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Just a little further, she told herself."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1165
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Rory16
Richmond1
Park1
Well1
Fae1
Silence1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.813
windowScore0.667
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like hours, though her phone insis"
1"looked like"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.789
wordCount1267
matches
0"not walking, but gliding, as if its feet never quite touched the ground"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
79.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean40.87
std17.55
cv0.43
sampleLengths
059
175
249
319
450
543
658
752
817
944
1043
113
1261
1315
1454
1525
1636
1753
1826
1930
2027
2164
2220
2351
2451
2558
2637
2724
2852
2956
3015
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was supposed"
2"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs216
matches
0"were thinning"
1"was burning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences98
ratio0.092
matches
0"Night had fallen hours ago, but the darkness here felt different—thicker, as if it had substance rather than absence."
1"She'd been hearing sounds like that for the past twenty minutes—footsteps, whispers, the occasional giggle that sounded far too childlike for comfort."
2"This had to be it—the portal to the Fae realm her parents had spoken of in their journals."
3"A scream built in her throat, but before she could release it, the laughter came again—closer this time."
4"Instead, it began to move—not walking, but gliding, as if its feet never quite touched the ground."
5"With each pass, Rory caught glimpses of its face—pale, too pale, with eyes that reflected the moonlight like a cat's."
6"And its mouth—when it smiled, its mouth was far too wide, filled with far too many teeth."
7"Other voices joined in—more laughter, more singing, more whispers that brushed against Rory's ears like cobwebs."
8"The pendant still burned against her skin, but now it felt less like guidance and more like a brand—a mark that something in that clearing had noticed her, had chosen her."
91.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1176
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.04931972789115646
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008503401360544218
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean12.93
std7.14
cv0.552
sampleLengths
017
119
223
318
416
521
620
714
85
922
108
1113
126
139
146
1535
164
1724
1815
1910
2014
211
229
236
2418
2517
2613
278
2814
2914
303
311
3213
3312
348
3510
3615
3712
3816
391
402
4118
429
4312
4422
4511
464
474
4817
4913
72.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.47959183673469385
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then, from the far side"
1"Just shadows and flowers and"
2"Instead, it began to move—not"
3"Just a little further, she"
4"Just a little further and"
ratio0.06
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences84
matches
0"She'd been walking for what"
1"It was supposed to guide"
2"She'd been hearing sounds like"
3"she muttered to herself, trying"
4"Her breath caught in her"
5"she called out, her voice"
6"She turned toward the sound,"
7"She pulled her hand back"
8"It was too dark to"
9"It circled the stone circle,"
10"Its face was too perfect,"
11"it sang, its voice high"
12"Her parents had vanished when"
13"She'd always assumed they were"
14"she said firmly, though her"
15"She turned and ran, crashing"
16"She could see the edge"
17"She fell hard, the breath"
18"it whispered, and its breath"
19"She didn't stop running until"
ratio0.238
96.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences84
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
1"Night had fallen hours ago,"
2"The moon hung low and"
3"She'd been walking for what"
4"Time behaved strangely in this"
5"The pendant had grown warm"
6"It was supposed to guide"
7"A twig snapped behind her,"
8"Nothing but darkness and trees."
9"She'd been hearing sounds like"
10"Each time she turned, there"
11"she muttered to herself, trying"
12"The words rang hollow even"
13"The pendant had been a"
14"The pendant pulsed more urgently,"
15"The trees were thinning ahead,"
16"Her breath caught in her"
17"This had to be it—the"
18"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, blooming"
19"Rory's footsteps slowed as she"
ratio0.726
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Night had fallen hours ago, but the darkness here felt different—thicker, as if it had substance rather than absence."
1"The moon hung low and bloated above the treeline, casting everything in an eerie silver glow that made the shadows seem to writhe."
2"She'd been hearing sounds like that for the past twenty minutes—footsteps, whispers, the occasional giggle that sounded far too childlike for comfort."
3"The air felt different here, charged with an energy that made her skin prickle."
4"Childlike, innocent, but carrying an edge that made Rory's blood run cold."
5"The pendant was burning now, a steady heat against her skin that bordered on painful."
6"With each pass, Rory caught glimpses of its face—pale, too pale, with eyes that reflected the moonlight like a cat's."
7"Dripping from its fingers, staining the wildflowers as it passed."
8"Other voices joined in—more laughter, more singing, more whispers that brushed against Rory's ears like cobwebs."
9"The trees seemed to reach for her as she ran, roots tripping her, branches catching at her hair."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she muttered, trying to sound braver than she felt"
1"she called out, her voice sounding small and fragile in the vast darkness"
2"Rory demanded, trying to keep her voice steady"
3"it sang, its voice high and sweet and utterly wrong"
4"Rory asked, though every instinct screamed at her to run, to get out of this clearing, to never come back"
5"she said firmly, though her voice trembled"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"Rory demanded (demand)"
3"it sang (sing)"
4"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.625
75.1212%