Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG3BMA94AM20RJMN0CF3ZF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 21s
Cost:
$0.003428
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quieter than usual, the Tuesday night crowd thin enough that Aurora could hear the low murmur of a conversation at the far end of the bar and the occasional clink of glasses from behind the counter. She sat in her usual spot — third stool from the left, close enough to the door to watch it but far enough from the window to avoid the neon glow bleeding through — with a glass of something amber she hadn't touched in twenty minutes. Silas had left her to it after the first hour, reading her mood with that uncanny stillness he possessed. He'd brought her the drink, raised an eyebrow, and when she'd given nothing back but a tight smile, he'd retreated to the back room to do whatever it was spymasters did when they weren't being spymasters. She was grateful for the space. Some nights the walls of her flat above pressed in too close, and the bar below offered a different kind of silence — one filled with ambient noise that drowned out the particular frequency of her own thoughts. She was thinking about nothing in particular when the door opened and a woman walked in. Aurora noticed her the way she noticed everyone — a quick, assessing glance that catalogued height, gait, the set of the shoulders. The woman was perhaps thirty, perhaps a little more, with chestnut hair pulled back in a professional twist and a coat that cost more than Aurora made in a week. She stood in the doorway, letting her eyes adjust to the dimness, and that's when Aurora felt something clench in her chest. No. It couldn't be. The woman spotted the bar and walked toward it, her heels clicking against the worn floorboards, and as she came closer, her gaze drifted across the stools — across Aurora — and then stopped. The silence that followed was the kind that existed in its own universe, sealed off from the rest of the room. "Rory?" The voice was the same. Slightly lower now, steadier, but the same warm cadence that had once filled lecture halls and student pubs and the cramped flat Aurora had shared with Evan in their second year. Megan Whitmore. Megan who had sat next to her in Criminal Law and passed her notes when she'd been too exhausted from fighting with Evan to focus. Megan who had pulled her aside after one too many bruises covered by long sleeves and asked, very quietly, if she needed help. Megan who had watched Aurora lie about being fine and had said nothing, because what could anyone say? Aurora's mouth was dry. She reached for her glass and took a drink just to have something to do, the whiskey burning a familiar path down her throat. "Megan." Megan stood there, still wearing her expensive coat, her handbag clutched in front of her like a shield. She looked — God, she looked *good*. Put together in a way that spoke of stability, of a life that had continued on its proper track. Her hair was longer than Aurora remembered, her face sharper with age, but those dark eyes were the same. Concerned. Watching. "What are you —" Megan stopped, shook her head. "What are you doing in London?" "Working." Aurora heard her own voice, flat and guarded, and hated it. She tried to soften it. "I live here now. Above the bar, actually." She gestured vaguely at the ceiling, at the flat that was hers and wasn't, at the strange life she'd built in the years since Cardiff. Megan glanced around the bar — at the old maps on the walls, the faded photographs, the green neon casting strange shadows — and something shifted in her expression. Not judgment, exactly. Something closer to disbelief. "Here," she said. "You live *here*." "For about two years now." Aurora straightened on her stool, her shoulders settling into a line of defensiveness she didn't mean to show. "What about you? What brings you to Soho on a Tuesday?" The question came out sharper than intended, and Megan flinched slightly before recovering. A reflex, Aurora realized. She was remembering. Remembering the girl who'd snapped at everyone who'd tried to help. "I have a client dinner," Megan said. Her voice was careful now, measured. "At that new French place on Wardour. I saw the bar from the street and thought —" She stopped again. "I don't know what I thought. I didn't expect to find you." "No," Aurora said. "I suppose you didn't." They stared at each other across the gap of the barstool, the length of polished wood between them. Somewhere in the back room, a chair creaked. Silas, moving. The ordinary sounds of a Tuesday night in a bar that was also something else entirely. Megan exhaled slowly and moved to the stool beside Aurora, sitting down with the careful precision of someone who'd had enough wine at dinner to lower her inhibitions but not enough to impair her judgment. She placed her handbag on the bar and looked at Aurora fully, openly, in that way she'd always had — the way that had made Aurora feel seen in a way she hadn't wanted to be seen. "You look different," Megan said, quietly. "Different how?" "I don't know. Smaller, maybe. Or — no, not smaller.Quieter. You used to fill up every room you walked into, even when you didn't mean to. You were so *loud*, Rory. In a good way. You had all this energy, this fire, and you pretended you didn't but everyone could see it." Megan's voice caught. "You look tired now. But also — I don't know. Calmer, maybe." Aurora turned her glass slowly on the bar, watching the whiskey catch the low light. "I was tired then. I just didn't know it yet." The words hung in the air. Megan didn't respond, but Aurora felt the weight of everything they weren't saying — Evan, the bruises, the nights Aurora had shown up to lectures with sunglasses she claimed were for a headache. The conversations Megan had tried to start and Aurora had shut down. The last time they'd spoken, in the library, a week before Aurora had finally run — when Megan had pressed a piece of paper into her hand with a number for a women's shelter and Aurora had shoved it in her pocket and never called. "I tried to find you," Megan said. "After you left. I went to your flat and Evan said you'd gone to stay with family, but that didn't — that didn't sound right. And then you didn't come back for finals, and no one knew where you'd gone, and I—" She stopped, pressed her fingers to her lips briefly. "I thought the worst. For years, I thought the worst." "I'm sorry." The words came out rough. Aurora cleared her throat. "I should have — I know I should have told someone. But I couldn't. I couldn't think about it, let alone talk about it. I just needed to be somewhere else." "Away from him." "Yes." "And you're — you're safe now? You're okay?" Aurora looked at Megan then, really looked, and saw the fear beneath the composed exterior. This woman had worried about her for years. Had carried the weight of not knowing, of having watched and been unable to help. All that time, while Aurora had been rebuilding herself in London, delivering Chinese food to strangers and sleeping in a flat above a bar run by a former spy, Megan had been wondering if she was alive. "I'm okay," Aurora said. And meant it, for the first time in years. "I'm actually okay. I have a — I have a good life now. It's not what I thought it would be, but it's good." "What's it like? Working in a bar?" The question was gentle, curious, and Aurora felt something loosen in her chest. "I don't work in the bar. I deliver food for a restaurant around the corner. Chinese. Very good. Silas — that's the owner — he lets me live upstairs. We look out for each other." She paused. "He's kind of a mentor, I suppose. He teaches me things." "Things?" Aurora smiled, just slightly. "How to watch people. How to notice when something's wrong. How to get out of situations before they become problems." She shrugged. "It's useful." Megan stared at her for a long moment, and Aurora could see the questions she wasn't asking. Who was this man? What was this life? What had happened to the girl who was going to be a barrister, who was going to change the world? But Megan didn't ask any of them. Instead, she reached out and put her hand over Aurora's — gently, carefully, the way you'd approach a stray animal. "I'm glad," she said. "That you're okay. That you got out." Aurora's throat tightened. She turned her hand over and gripped Megan's fingers, holding on for a moment before letting go. "I should have called. I should have told you I was alive. I'm sorry I didn't." "You were busy surviving," Megan said. "That's allowed." The green neon from outside flickered through the window, casting the bar in pale light. Somewhere in the back, Silas was silent, giving them the privacy he somehow always knew how to provide. And in that moment, sitting beside a woman who had once watched her fall and had never stopped wondering if she'd hit bottom, Aurora felt something shift. Not forgiveness — not for herself, anyway. But something like release. "I'm here now," she said. "If you ever want to — I don't know. I have dinner breaks. Sometimes. If you wanted to —" "I'd like that," Megan said. "I'd like that very much." They sat like that for a while, not speaking, watching the empty bar fill with the particular kind of quiet that comes after a storm. Outside, the city continued its endless hum, indifferent to the small miracles happening in bars and flats and hidden rooms. But inside The Raven's Nest, two women who had once known each other in a different life sat together, and let the past be the past, and began the slow work of becoming something like friends again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.044
67.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1691
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"gently"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1691
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"uncanny"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"carried the weight"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"uncanny"
1"eyebrow"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"measured"
5"weight"
6"carried the weight"
7"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"was grateful"
65.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1714
ratio0.002
matches
0"good"
1"here"
2"loud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1282
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Tuesday2
Aurora32
Evan3
Whitmore1
Criminal1
Law1
God1
Cardiff1
Megan22
London1
Chinese1
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Aurora"
2"Evan"
3"Whitmore"
4"Megan"
5"Silas"
places
0"Criminal"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.252
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like friends again"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.583
wordCount1714
matches
0"not what I thought it would be, but it's good"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean34.98
std29.61
cv0.846
sampleLengths
086
199
216
374
44
534
621
71
8104
928
101
1165
1215
1350
1436
156
1634
1731
1845
197
2044
2172
226
232
2467
2525
2696
2768
2842
293
301
318
3275
3337
347
3513
3648
371
3828
3945
4027
4111
4220
4316
448
4571
4624
4710
4882
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
55.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs230
matches
0"weren't being"
1"was thinking"
2"was remembering"
3"weren't saying "
4"wasn't asking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences117
ratio0.094
matches
0"She sat in her usual spot — third stool from the left, close enough to the door to watch it but far enough from the window to avoid the neon glow bleeding through — with a glass of something amber she hadn't touched in twenty minutes."
1"Some nights the walls of her flat above pressed in too close, and the bar below offered a different kind of silence — one filled with ambient noise that drowned out the particular frequency of her own thoughts."
2"Aurora noticed her the way she noticed everyone — a quick, assessing glance that catalogued height, gait, the set of the shoulders."
3"The woman spotted the bar and walked toward it, her heels clicking against the worn floorboards, and as she came closer, her gaze drifted across the stools — across Aurora — and then stopped."
4"She looked — God, she looked *good*."
5"Megan glanced around the bar — at the old maps on the walls, the faded photographs, the green neon casting strange shadows — and something shifted in her expression."
6"She placed her handbag on the bar and looked at Aurora fully, openly, in that way she'd always had — the way that had made Aurora feel seen in a way she hadn't wanted to be seen."
7"Megan didn't respond, but Aurora felt the weight of everything they weren't saying — Evan, the bruises, the nights Aurora had shown up to lectures with sunglasses she claimed were for a headache."
8"The last time they'd spoken, in the library, a week before Aurora had finally run — when Megan had pressed a piece of paper into her hand with a number for a women's shelter and Aurora had shoved it in her pocket and never called."
9"Instead, she reached out and put her hand over Aurora's — gently, carefully, the way you'd approach a stray animal."
10"Not forgiveness — not for herself, anyway."
99.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1276
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.04075235109717868
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.013322884012539185
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean14.65
std12.47
cv0.851
sampleLengths
040
146
219
336
46
538
616
722
830
922
101
113
1234
1321
141
155
1631
172
1825
1923
2018
214
2224
231
2418
257
2619
2719
281
291
309
316
3212
335
3433
3529
363
374
383
393
4023
4111
4213
434
443
4511
467
476
4820
4912
54.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37606837606837606
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"Slightly lower now, steadier, but"
1"Somewhere in the back room,"
2"All that time, while Aurora"
3"Instead, she reached out and"
4"Somewhere in the back, Silas"
ratio0.068
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences74
matches
0"She sat in her usual"
1"He'd brought her the drink,"
2"She was grateful for the"
3"She was thinking about nothing"
4"She stood in the doorway,"
5"It couldn't be."
6"She reached for her glass"
7"She looked — God, she"
8"Her hair was longer than"
9"She tried to soften it."
10"She gestured vaguely at the"
11"She was remembering."
12"Her voice was careful now,"
13"They stared at each other"
14"She placed her handbag on"
15"She stopped, pressed her fingers"
16"She turned her hand over"
17"They sat like that for"
ratio0.243
88.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences74
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quieter"
1"She sat in her usual"
2"Silas had left her to"
3"He'd brought her the drink,"
4"She was grateful for the"
5"Some nights the walls of"
6"She was thinking about nothing"
7"Aurora noticed her the way"
8"The woman was perhaps thirty,"
9"She stood in the doorway,"
10"It couldn't be."
11"The woman spotted the bar"
12"The silence that followed was"
13"The voice was the same."
14"Megan who had sat next"
15"Megan who had pulled her"
16"Megan who had watched Aurora"
17"Aurora's mouth was dry."
18"She reached for her glass"
19"Megan stood there, still wearing"
ratio0.743
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Some nights the walls of her flat above pressed in too close, and the bar below offered a different kind of silence — one filled with ambient noise that drowned…"
1"Aurora noticed her the way she noticed everyone — a quick, assessing glance that catalogued height, gait, the set of the shoulders."
2"Slightly lower now, steadier, but the same warm cadence that had once filled lecture halls and student pubs and the cramped flat Aurora had shared with Evan in …"
3"Megan exhaled slowly and moved to the stool beside Aurora, sitting down with the careful precision of someone who'd had enough wine at dinner to lower her inhib…"
4"She turned her hand over and gripped Megan's fingers, holding on for a moment before letting go."
5"And in that moment, sitting beside a woman who had once watched her fall and had never stopped wondering if she'd hit bottom, Aurora felt something shift."
6"But inside The Raven's Nest, two women who had once known each other in a different life sat together, and let the past be the past, and began the slow work of …"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Megan said, quietly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.9816%