| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |
| 67.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1691 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1691 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "uncanny" | | 1 | "eyebrow" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "carried the weight" | | 7 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 65.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "happened to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1714 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 73 | | wordCount | 1282 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Tuesday | 2 | | Aurora | 32 | | Evan | 3 | | Whitmore | 1 | | Criminal | 1 | | Law | 1 | | God | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Megan | 22 | | London | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | Silas | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Whitmore" | | 4 | "Megan" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Criminal" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.252 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like friends again" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.583 | | wordCount | 1714 | | matches | | 0 | "not what I thought it would be, but it's good" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 34.98 | | std | 29.61 | | cv | 0.846 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 104 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 72 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 96 | | 27 | 68 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 75 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 48 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 71 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 82 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.07% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 230 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't being" | | 1 | "was thinking" | | 2 | "was remembering" | | 3 | "weren't saying " | | 4 | "wasn't asking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "She sat in her usual spot — third stool from the left, close enough to the door to watch it but far enough from the window to avoid the neon glow bleeding through — with a glass of something amber she hadn't touched in twenty minutes." | | 1 | "Some nights the walls of her flat above pressed in too close, and the bar below offered a different kind of silence — one filled with ambient noise that drowned out the particular frequency of her own thoughts." | | 2 | "Aurora noticed her the way she noticed everyone — a quick, assessing glance that catalogued height, gait, the set of the shoulders." | | 3 | "The woman spotted the bar and walked toward it, her heels clicking against the worn floorboards, and as she came closer, her gaze drifted across the stools — across Aurora — and then stopped." | | 4 | "She looked — God, she looked *good*." | | 5 | "Megan glanced around the bar — at the old maps on the walls, the faded photographs, the green neon casting strange shadows — and something shifted in her expression." | | 6 | "She placed her handbag on the bar and looked at Aurora fully, openly, in that way she'd always had — the way that had made Aurora feel seen in a way she hadn't wanted to be seen." | | 7 | "Megan didn't respond, but Aurora felt the weight of everything they weren't saying — Evan, the bruises, the nights Aurora had shown up to lectures with sunglasses she claimed were for a headache." | | 8 | "The last time they'd spoken, in the library, a week before Aurora had finally run — when Megan had pressed a piece of paper into her hand with a number for a women's shelter and Aurora had shoved it in her pocket and never called." | | 9 | "Instead, she reached out and put her hand over Aurora's — gently, carefully, the way you'd approach a stray animal." | | 10 | "Not forgiveness — not for herself, anyway." |
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| 99.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1276 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.04075235109717868 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013322884012539185 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 14.65 | | std | 12.47 | | cv | 0.851 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 54.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.37606837606837606 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Slightly lower now, steadier, but" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the back room," | | 2 | "All that time, while Aurora" | | 3 | "Instead, she reached out and" | | 4 | "Somewhere in the back, Silas" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She sat in her usual" | | 1 | "He'd brought her the drink," | | 2 | "She was grateful for the" | | 3 | "She was thinking about nothing" | | 4 | "She stood in the doorway," | | 5 | "It couldn't be." | | 6 | "She reached for her glass" | | 7 | "She looked — God, she" | | 8 | "Her hair was longer than" | | 9 | "She tried to soften it." | | 10 | "She gestured vaguely at the" | | 11 | "She was remembering." | | 12 | "Her voice was careful now," | | 13 | "They stared at each other" | | 14 | "She placed her handbag on" | | 15 | "She stopped, pressed her fingers" | | 16 | "She turned her hand over" | | 17 | "They sat like that for" |
| | ratio | 0.243 | |
| 88.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was quieter" | | 1 | "She sat in her usual" | | 2 | "Silas had left her to" | | 3 | "He'd brought her the drink," | | 4 | "She was grateful for the" | | 5 | "Some nights the walls of" | | 6 | "She was thinking about nothing" | | 7 | "Aurora noticed her the way" | | 8 | "The woman was perhaps thirty," | | 9 | "She stood in the doorway," | | 10 | "It couldn't be." | | 11 | "The woman spotted the bar" | | 12 | "The silence that followed was" | | 13 | "The voice was the same." | | 14 | "Megan who had sat next" | | 15 | "Megan who had pulled her" | | 16 | "Megan who had watched Aurora" | | 17 | "Aurora's mouth was dry." | | 18 | "She reached for her glass" | | 19 | "Megan stood there, still wearing" |
| | ratio | 0.743 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Some nights the walls of her flat above pressed in too close, and the bar below offered a different kind of silence — one filled with ambient noise that drowned…" | | 1 | "Aurora noticed her the way she noticed everyone — a quick, assessing glance that catalogued height, gait, the set of the shoulders." | | 2 | "Slightly lower now, steadier, but the same warm cadence that had once filled lecture halls and student pubs and the cramped flat Aurora had shared with Evan in …" | | 3 | "Megan exhaled slowly and moved to the stool beside Aurora, sitting down with the careful precision of someone who'd had enough wine at dinner to lower her inhib…" | | 4 | "She turned her hand over and gripped Megan's fingers, holding on for a moment before letting go." | | 5 | "And in that moment, sitting beside a woman who had once watched her fall and had never stopped wondering if she'd hit bottom, Aurora felt something shift." | | 6 | "But inside The Raven's Nest, two women who had once known each other in a different life sat together, and let the past be the past, and began the slow work of …" |
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| 97.22% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |