Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG4SKZF5DJWV9QRT5NB9HC

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Duration:
13.4s
Cost:
$0.000475
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelledof stale beer, ozone, and something faintly metallic beneath it all – the tang of old secrets and the polish of a bar that had seen too many deals go sour. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as she’d insisted on being called for the past five years, pushed through the heavy oak door, the green neon sign flickering a welcome that felt more like a warning. She’d lived above this place for two years, delivering dumplings to the regulars, her life a carefully constructed routine of anonymity and quiet observation. The bar itself hadn’t changed much – the walls still groaned under the weight of yellowed maps and faded photographs of faces she didn’t recognize, the air thick with the low murmur of voices and the clink of glasses. But the weight of seeing Silas Blackwood here, of all places, settled on her shoulders like a physical blow. Silas Blackwood, the Spymaster, the man who’d been her mentor, her anchor, her friend, sat hunched over a stool near the far end of the bar. He wasn’t hunched; he was simply… still. His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly trimmed, framed a face that held the deep lines of experience, the hazel eyes behind the thick lenses of his glasses sharp and assessing. The neatly trimmed beard, the silver signet ring catching the dim light on his right hand – all the markers of the man she’d known. But the slight limp, a subtle shift in his weight as he shifted on the stool, was a new detail, a testament to the passage of time and the cost of his past. He wasn’t the same boy who’d taught her to pick a lock or read a person’s intentions in a glance. He was older, harder, carrying the weight of Prague in his posture. She’d seen him once, years ago, in a crowded market in Marrakech, a fleeting glimpse of a tailored suit vanishing into a side alley. But this was different. This was him, sitting in his own bar, the bar he’d built as a front, the bar where he’d hidden, waiting. The air between them crackled with the electricity of years unspoken, of paths diverged. She’d left Cardiff, fled the abuse, found a new life in London, a life built on delivering food and keeping her head down. He’d retired from the shadows, opened this den of secrets, a place where old agents and new players met under the guise of a pub. The irony wasn’t lost on her. “Rory?” His voice, when he spoke, was low and gravelly, cutting through the ambient noise. It wasn’t the voice of the boy who’d shared her first real secrets. It was the voice of the man who’d seen too much. “Rory Carter. Or should I say Laila? Or Malphora?” He didn’t sound accusatory, just… knowing. “It’s been… a while.” She didn’t move from the threshold, the green light casting long shadows across her face. She’d changed, too. The sharp, almost reckless intelligence was still there, but it was tempered, honed by necessity. The quick, out-of-the-box thinking was now a survival instinct. She wore a faded hoodie pulled low over her head, dark jeans, practical boots. Her straight black hair, usually pulled back in a messy ponytail, fell loose around her shoulders, framing her face. The small crescent scar on her left wrist, a relic from a childhood accident, was visible where the cuff of her hoodie had ridden up. She looked older than twenty-five, worn by the weight of her own choices, the burden of leaving her past behind. “Silas,” she said, her voice flat, devoid of the warmth it once held. “Or should I call you Si? Or the Spymaster?” The aliases felt like armor, a shield against the vulnerability of seeing him again. “It’s been… long enough.” He nodded slowly, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. “Time has a way of doing that, doesn’t it? Stealing years, leaving scars.” He gestured towards the stool beside him. “Sit. Have a drink. It’s been… a while.” She hesitated, the scent of him – old leather, tobacco, something uniquely his – pulling her in. She took a step forward, the worn soles of her boots echoing on the polished wood floor. She slid onto the stool, the worn leather creaking beneath her. The bar was quiet now, the only sounds the distant hum of the neon sign and the soft scrape of Silas’s chair as he pushed it back slightly, creating a small, intimate space between them. “You look… different,” he said, his gaze sweeping over her, taking in the hoodie, the hair, the scar. “More… settled. Or perhaps just more… hidden.” “Settled,” she agreed, her eyes fixed on the condensation beading on the glass of amber liquid Silas pushed towards her. “I deliver dumplings. I live above a bar. It’s… stable.” The word tasted bitter on her tongue. Stable was a luxury she’d fought for, a fortress against the chaos she’d fled. “What about you? Still running the Nest? Still the Spymaster?” He took a slow sip of his own drink, the amber liquid disappearing into the depths of his glass. “The Nest is still here. The Spymaster title is retired, like my knee.” He tapped the side of his leg, the slight limp momentarily forgotten in the gesture. “Prague took its toll. But the contacts… they’re still there. The need for… information, persists.” “Information,” she echoed, the word tasting like dust. “Or just… shadows?” She looked away, staring at the green neon sign flickering above the door. “You built this place as a front. A place for secrets. Is that what you are now? Just a shadow?” He didn’t flinch. “A man adapts, Rory. We all do. The boy who taught you lock-picking doesn’t exist anymore. The man who walked into Prague didn’t come out the same.” His voice was quiet, intense, holding a weight that made the air in the small space feel thick. “What about you? The girl who fled Cardiff? The woman who delivers dumplings? Who is Rory Carter now?” The question hung between them, sharp and undeniable. The Rory she’d been – the quick-witted, fearless girl who’d trusted him implicitly – was buried under layers of caution, of survival. The woman she’d become was defined by the absence of her past, by the need to be invisible. “I’m Rory,” she said, the name feeling hollow. “The woman who delivers dumplings. The woman who lives above a bar. The woman who… doesn’t look back.” “Doesn’t look back,” he repeated, the ghost of a smile returning. “But you’re here. You came back. Why? To see the bar? To see me?” She didn’t answer immediately. She took a long drink of her own drink, the cool liquid a brief respite from the heat of his gaze. “I was in the area,” she finally said, the lie thin and transparent. “Just passing through. Needed a drink.” The truth was simpler, more painful: she’d seen his name in a ledger, a contact list she’d stumbled upon while delivering to a regular. She’d come to confirm he was still alive, still breathing, still a part of the world she’d left behind. But seeing him, seeing the limp, seeing the lines of age and experience etched deep into his face, it shattered the illusion of distance she’d carefully maintained. He was real, and he was here, and the years hadn’t just stolen his youth; they’d stolen the easy camaraderie they’d once shared. “Passing through,” he murmured, understanding dawning in his eyes. “Or running from something?” The question wasn’t accusatory, just… knowing. He saw the shadows under her eyes, the way she kept her shoulders tense, the slight tremor in her hand as she held the glass. He saw the woman she’d become, the fortress she’d built around herself. “Running,” she admitted, the word a whisper. “Always running.” She looked at him, really looked at him, the man who’d been her mentor, her friend, the man who’d seen her at her most vulnerable and still chosen to guide her. “I ran from Evan. I ran from Cardiff. I ran from… everything that felt too much.” She gestured vaguely around the bar, the familiar surroundings suddenly feeling alien. “This,” she said, her voice thick with emotion she couldn’t quite name, “this is my fortress. My quiet.” “And the fortress has walls,” he said softly, his gaze never leaving hers. “Walls that keep things out… and things in.” He paused, choosing his words carefully. “You left a part of yourself behind in Cardiff, Rory. A part that trusted, that was… open. That part is still here, sitting across from me, looking at the man who broke your trust once.” He leaned forward slightly, the signet ring catching the light. “The scar on your wrist… it’s a reminder. A reminder of the past you’re trying so hard to outrun.” The memory of Evan’s hands, the pain of the scar, flooded her. She clenched her fist under the table, the knuckles white. “It’s just a scar,” she said, her voice tight. “A reminder of a mistake. Of a life I don’t want anymore.” “A mistake,” he echoed, his voice gentle but insistent. “Or a wound that never truly healed? You built this fortress, Rory, but the walls are high, and the gates are locked tight. You’ve changed, yes. You’re smarter, more guarded. But the core… the core is still the same girl who trusted me, who believed in the possibility of a different path.” He took another sip, the silence stretching between them, filled only by the low murmur of the bar and the distant, mournful chime of the neon sign. “The weight of time, Rory. It doesn’t just steal years; it steals innocence, it steals easy answers. It leaves scars, both visible and invisible. It forces us to become people we never thought we’d be.” She looked down at her hands, the knuckles still white. The fortress felt suddenly cold, the walls closing in. The Rory she’d been, the girl who’d believed in easy answers and trusted her mentor implicitly, was buried beneath layers of caution and survival. The Rory she’d become was defined by the absence of that trust, by the need to be invisible. And seeing Silas, seeing the man he’d become, forced her to confront the ghost of who she’d been, the ghost of the trust she’d lost. The unspoken regret wasn’t just about the past; it was about the distance she’d put between them, the walls she’d built that even Silas couldn’t breach anymore. The years hadn’t just changed them; they’d changed the very nature of their connection, leaving a silence thick with what could have been, what was lost, and the heavy, undeniable weight of time itself.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
53.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"The aliases felt like [like]"
1"She looked away [away]"
2"she finally said [finally]"
3"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
4"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.634
leniency1
rawRatio0.192
effectiveRatio0.192
66.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1793
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count2
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
7
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
5"softly"
6"truly"
7"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1793
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"constructed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count8
2
word"testament"
count1
3
word"fleeting"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count3
14
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"constructed"
1"weight"
2"testament"
3"fleeting"
4"unspoken"
5"warmth"
6"echoing"
7"depths"
8"echoed"
9"etched"
10"shattered"
11"whisper"
12"familiar"
13"reminder"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen79
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1796
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1367
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory4
Silas6
Blackwood2
Spymaster1
Prague1
Marrakech1
Cardiff1
London1
Stable1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Evan"
places
0"Prague"
1"Marrakech"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like armor, a shield against the v"
1"quite name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1796
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean81.64
std40.85
cv0.5
sampleLengths
0150
1152
2117
358
4120
540
639
780
825
961
1062
1144
1266
1374
1425
15137
1656
1786
1891
1943
20123
21147
81.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences87
matches
0"being called"
1"was tempered"
2"was buried"
3"was defined"
4"was buried"
5"was defined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences100
ratio0.1
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelledof stale beer, ozone, and something faintly metallic beneath it all – the tang of old secrets and the polish of a bar that had seen too many deals go sour."
1"The bar itself hadn’t changed much – the walls still groaned under the weight of yellowed maps and faded photographs of faces she didn’t recognize, the air thick with the low murmur of voices and the clink of glasses."
2"He wasn’t hunched; he was simply…"
3"The neatly trimmed beard, the silver signet ring catching the dim light on his right hand – all the markers of the man she’d known."
4"She hesitated, the scent of him – old leather, tobacco, something uniquely his – pulling her in."
5"The Rory she’d been – the quick-witted, fearless girl who’d trusted him implicitly – was buried under layers of caution, of survival."
6"He was real, and he was here, and the years hadn’t just stolen his youth; they’d stolen the easy camaraderie they’d once shared."
7"“The weight of time, Rory. It doesn’t just steal years; it steals innocence, it steals easy answers. It leaves scars, both visible and invisible. It forces us to become people we never thought we’d be.”"
8"The unspoken regret wasn’t just about the past; it was about the distance she’d put between them, the walls she’d built that even Silas couldn’t breach anymore."
9"The years hadn’t just changed them; they’d changed the very nature of their connection, leaving a silence thick with what could have been, what was lost, and the heavy, undeniable weight of time itself."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1363
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.03888481291269259
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.018341892883345562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean17.96
std11.35
cv0.632
sampleLengths
034
134
224
339
419
526
66
71
829
925
1033
1120
1212
1324
144
1521
1614
1723
1825
196
2015
2113
2211
2314
241
254
2615
273
2815
299
3014
3119
3225
3320
3413
3523
364
3711
3820
398
4017
4117
4211
4335
4418
457
4620
4717
4814
4910
38.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.32
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences84
matches
0"She’d lived above this place"
1"He wasn’t hunched; he was"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly"
3"He wasn’t the same boy"
4"He was older, harder, carrying"
5"She’d seen him once, years"
6"She’d left Cardiff, fled the"
7"He’d retired from the shadows,"
8"His voice, when he spoke,"
9"It wasn’t the voice of"
10"It was the voice of"
11"He didn’t sound accusatory, just…"
12"She didn’t move from the"
13"She’d changed, too."
14"She wore a faded hoodie"
15"Her straight black hair, usually"
16"She looked older than twenty-five,"
17"she said, her voice flat,"
18"He nodded slowly, a ghost"
19"He gestured towards the stool"
ratio0.631
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelledof stale"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"She’d lived above this place"
3"The bar itself hadn’t changed"
4"Silas Blackwood, the Spymaster, the"
5"He wasn’t hunched; he was"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly"
7"The neatly trimmed beard, the"
8"He wasn’t the same boy"
9"He was older, harder, carrying"
10"She’d seen him once, years"
11"This was him, sitting in"
12"The air between them crackled"
13"She’d left Cardiff, fled the"
14"He’d retired from the shadows,"
15"The irony wasn’t lost on"
16"His voice, when he spoke,"
17"It wasn’t the voice of"
18"It was the voice of"
19"He didn’t sound accusatory, just…"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelledof stale beer, ozone, and something faintly metallic beneath it all – the tang of old secrets and the polish of a bar that had seen too …"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as she’d insisted on being called for the past five years, pushed through the heavy oak door, the green neon sign flickering a welcome t…"
2"Silas Blackwood, the Spymaster, the man who’d been her mentor, her anchor, her friend, sat hunched over a stool near the far end of the bar."
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly trimmed, framed a face that held the deep lines of experience, the hazel eyes behind the thick lenses of his glasses sharp…"
4"The Rory she’d been – the quick-witted, fearless girl who’d trusted him implicitly – was buried under layers of caution, of survival."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"He didn’t, just…"
1"she said, her voice flat, devoid of the warmth it once held"
2"she said, the name feeling hollow"
3"he repeated, the ghost of a smile returning"
4"he murmured, understanding dawning in his eyes"
5"she admitted, the word a whisper"
6"She gestured vaguely, the familiar surroundings suddenly feeling alien"
7"she said, her voice thick with emotion she couldn’t quite name,"
8"He leaned, the signet ring catching the light"
9"she said, her voice tight"
10"he echoed, his voice gentle but insistent"
28.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he spoke (speak)"
1"she agreed (agree)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.293
leniency0.585
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.244
68.1490%