Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG5AJHQ4863CF8V7AS2356

Run Details

Duration:
7m 23s
Cost:
$0.001096
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after sunset was a different kind of cold. It wasn't the crisp, clean chill of a winter's night; it was damp, clinging, and carried the scent of wet earth and rotting leaves. Rory pulled her coat tighter, the fabric whispering against the silver chain around her neck. The Heartstone pendant lay against her sternum, a tiny, dormant coal. She hadn't felt its warmth since she’d crossed the park's boundary, which was either a good sign or a very, very bad one. She’d come to the Fae Grove because of a note, slipped under the door of her flat above Silas’ bar. The handwriting was elegant, archaic, and it bore a single sentence: *The veil thins at the waning moon. Come to the stones. He cannot follow you there.* It wasn’t signed, but the ‘he’ was underlined twice. Evan. It had to be. The thought of him, his possessive anger, was a colder chill than any the night could muster. The Grove, with its twisted time and ancient magic, seemed a logical refuge, a place to think, to breathe air he couldn’t poison. A place, the note implied, where she might be safe. Finding the standing stones was never a matter of navigation. It was a matter of acquiescence. You didn’t walk to the Grove; you let it find you. Rory moved off the main path, her boots sinking into the soft mulch beneath the ancient oaks. The world of streetlamps and distant traffic faded, swallowed by a silence so profound it felt like pressure in her ears. The wrongness started there, in that silence. Richmond Park was never silent. There were always foxes, the rustle of deer in the bracken, the wind in the high branches. Here, there was nothing. Then, a sound. Not an animal sound. A soft, rhythmic *shushing*, like silk being drawn across stone. It came from her left. She stopped, her bright blue eyes straining against the gloom. The black strands of her hair brushed her cheek. Nothing moved. The trees were sentinel-still. She walked on, her left hand instinctively going to the crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous habit from childhood. The note had said the stones would guide her. After ten more minutes of pushing through grasping undergrowth, she saw them. The oak standing stones weren't carved; they seemed to have grown that way, massive trunks bent into perfect, arches, forming a rough circle in a clearing. Wildflowers, impossible splashes of colour in the moonlight—vivid purples and yellows—bloomed defiantly around their bases. The Grove. A pocket between worlds. She stepped across the threshold between two stones. The air changed instantly. It was warmer, heavy with the perfume of those eternal blooms, but the warmth was cloying, like the breath of something sleeping. The silence inside the circle was even deeper. No insects hummed. No leaves fell. Rory moved to the center of the clearing, her reason for coming now feeling flimsy and naive. Wait for what? For a sign? For Evan to somehow be barred by magic? She touched the Heartstone again. Cold silver, inert gem. That’s when she saw the first movement. At the far edge of the clearing, just beyond the ring of stones, a shadow detached itself from a tree. It was tall, impossibly thin, and for a moment, it was just a darker patch of night. Then it was gone. Rory’s breath hitched. *A deer*, she told herself. *Just a tall stag moving through the trees*. But deer didn’t move like that. They didn’t slide. They didn’t vanish without a sound. She decided to sit, to ground herself. She found a relatively dry patch of moss-backed rock and lowered herself onto it, forcing her lawyer’s mind to engage. *Assess the facts. You are in a known anomalous location. Perceived threats are currently unconfirmed. Your exit is…* She looked back the way she came. The arch of the stones seemed narrower now, the path beyond swallowed by a mist that hadn't been there moments before. The *shushing* sound returned, closer this time. It seemed to circle the clearing, just outside the stone ring. Left to right. Then right to left. A slow, patient patrol. Rory’s fingers dug into the moss. She remained perfectly still, a tactic learned from childhood games of hide-and-seek, perfected under Evan’s volatile gaze. Don’t move. Don’t breathe. Become part of the scenery. From the corner of her eye, she caught another flicker. This one was within the circle. A patch of those vibrant yellow flowers, just at the periphery of her vision, seemed to wilt. Not slowly, as if from frost, but instantly. One second they were bright and full, the next they were blackened, crumpled husks. The blight spread in a small, deliberate circle before stopping. A low vibration began to thrum through the ground, a sub-audible hum that she felt in her teeth. The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her skin—not with warmth, but with a sharp, warning jolt of cold so intense it was almost a burn. She clapped a hand over it, stifling a gasp. *You are not alone.* The thought was not her own. It inserted itself into her mind, clear and cold as ice water. It was a statement, not a threat, which made it infinitely worse. The thing at the edge of the trees materialized again. It didn’t step into the moonlight; it simply became more *present* where it stood. Rory could make out the suggestion of long, spindly limbs, a head that seemed too small, a posture that was all wrong for a human or any animal she knew. It was watching her. She could feel the weight of its attention, a physical pressure on her skin. *He cannot follow,* the voice in her mind whispered, and this time it held a tracery of amusement. *But we were already here.* The note. It wasn’t a promise of safety. It was bait. Rory’s cool-headedness, her prized out-of-the-box thinking, screamed at her to move, but her body was locked in a primal freeze. The time-dilation of the Grove, once a potential shield, now felt like a trap. An hour here could be a minute outside… or a year. How long had she been sitting? How long did she have? The shadow-figure took a step forward. It didn’t walk. One moment it was ten yards beyond the stones, the next it was at the very threshold, its elongated form framed by the oak arch. It didn’t cross. It waited. The *shushing* sound was directly behind her now, just outside the stone ring at her back. She couldn’t turn. She couldn’t look. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drum against the creeping silence. A new smell cut through the floral perfume: the scent of ozone, of static, and beneath it, something organic and spoiled, like damp mushrooms and forgotten soil. The flowers near her began to blacken in a wider ring, the decay spreading silently outward from where she sat. The thing at the archway tilted its head. In the faint moonlight, she saw a sliver of reflected light where an eye should be. Not a glint. A flat, dark sheen, like wet stone. *Stay,* the voice suggested. It was gentle, reasonable. *The world outside is harsh. Full of angry men. Here, time is soft. Here, you could forget.* The promise was a seductive poison. Forget Evan’s rage, her father’s expectations, the gnawing uncertainty of her life. Forget it all in this quiet, eternal garden. All she had to do was stay. The Heartstone gave another vicious throb of cold, so sharp it broke through her paralysis. It was a shock, a slap. This wasn’t refuge. This was consumption. The thing wasn’t offering solace; it was offering a digestible eternity. With a gasp that tore at her throat, Rory forced herself to stand. Her legs were numb, tingling with pins and needles. She faced the archway, the entity now fully blocking it, though it made no move to enter. “I’m leaving,” she said. Her voice was a ragged thread in the thick air. The entity didn’t move. The *shushing* at her back ceased. The entire Grove seemed to hold its breath. *You came,* the voice murmured, a hint of petulance in its tone. *You were called. You do not answer the call and simply leave.* “Watch me,” Rory whispered, and she took a step forward. She expected a barrier, a wall of force. Instead, the entity simply… unfolded. It didn’t attack. It shifted, its impossible limbs rearranging, and suddenly the path through the arch was clear. It was a trick. It had to be. But the mist beyond the stones was parting, showing a glimpse of the normal, dark woodland of the park. The pendant was a lump of ice against her chest. Every instinct told her this was the trap, that stepping towards that exit was the wrong move. But the alternative was to stay in the clearing as the circle of decay reached her feet. She walked, each step an act of will. As she passed through the oak arch, she felt a subtle resistance, not physical but psychic, a dragging sorrow that tried to cling to her bones. The scent of rot and ozone was strongest as she brushed past the space where the entity stood. She didn’t look at it. She kept her bright blue eyes fixed on the path ahead. She crossed the boundary. The moment her second foot touched the earth outside the stone circle, the sounds of the night rushed back in—the distant cry of a bird, the wind. The clinging warmth vanished, replaced by the honest, damp cold of an English night. She stumbled forward, not daring to look back, and broke into a run. Only when the lights of a distant road glimmered through the trees did she slow, her lungs burning. She glanced down at the Heartstone. It was warm again, a faint, steady pulse of crimson light glowing in its depths, a tiny heartbeat against the dark. She looked back the way she came. The woods were just woods. There was no mist, no strange silence. But in her mind, the voice’s final words echoed, not as a threat, but as a simple, terrifying correction: *We are always here.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1725
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1725
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"silence"
count5
3
word"profound"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"sentinel"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"potential"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"throb"
count1
16
word"solace"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"depths"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"profound"
4"rhythmic"
5"silk"
6"gloom"
7"sentinel"
8"perfect"
9"flicker"
10"pulsed"
11"could feel"
12"weight"
13"potential"
14"glint"
15"throb"
16"solace"
17"pulse"
18"depths"
19"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences176
matches
0"t with warmth"
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences176
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences176
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
86.81% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans17
markdownWords97
totalWords1714
ratio0.057
matches
0"The veil thins at the waning moon. Come to the stones. He cannot follow you there."
1"shushing"
2"A deer"
3"Just a tall stag moving through the trees"
4"Assess the facts. You are in a known anomalous location. Perceived threats are currently unconfirmed. Your exit is…"
5"shushing"
6"You are not alone."
7"present"
8"He cannot follow,"
9"But we were already here."
10"shushing"
11"Stay,"
12"The world outside is harsh. Full of angry men. Here, time is soft. Here, you could forget."
13"shushing"
14"You came,"
15"You were called. You do not answer the call and simply leave."
16"We are always here."
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"*A deer*, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1704
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone5
Fae1
Grove6
Evan4
Rory9
English1
You6
persons
0"Evan"
1"Rory"
2"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
83.04% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like pressure in her ears"
1"seemed narrower now, the path beyond swallowed by a mist that hadn't been there moments before"
2"felt like a trap"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.334
wordCount1714
matches
0"Not slowly, as if from frost, but instantly"
1"not with warmth, but with a sharp, warning jolt of cold so intense it was almost"
2"not physical but psychic, a dragging sorrow"
3"not as a threat, but as a simple, terrifying correction"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean43.95
std26.4
cv0.601
sampleLengths
086
1111
298
347
488
548
640
77
872
973
1061
1165
1251
134
1430
1572
1623
1711
1856
1939
2035
2147
2234
2325
2433
2538
2639
2714
2818
2924
3010
3158
3244
3368
344
3554
3645
3738
384
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences176
matches
0"was underlined"
1"being drawn"
2"was gone"
3"were blackened"
4"was locked"
5"were called"
79.66% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs277
matches
0"was cloying"
1"was watching"
2"was offering"
3"was parting"
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences176
ratio0.045
matches
0"It wasn't the crisp, clean chill of a winter's night; it was damp, clinging, and carried the scent of wet earth and rotting leaves."
1"You didn’t walk to the Grove; you let it find you."
2"The oak standing stones weren't carved; they seemed to have grown that way, massive trunks bent into perfect, arches, forming a rough circle in a clearing."
3"Wildflowers, impossible splashes of colour in the moonlight—vivid purples and yellows—bloomed defiantly around their bases."
4"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her skin—not with warmth, but with a sharp, warning jolt of cold so intense it was almost a burn."
5"It didn’t step into the moonlight; it simply became more *present* where it stood."
6"The thing wasn’t offering solace; it was offering a digestible eternity."
7"The moment her second foot touched the earth outside the stone circle, the sounds of the night rushed back in—the distant cry of a bird, the wind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1721
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.03602556653108658
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.011040092969203951
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences176
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences176
mean9.74
std6.69
cv0.687
sampleLengths
013
124
215
311
423
520
618
74
814
91
104
1117
1223
1310
1410
156
1611
1717
1821
197
205
2117
224
233
244
2510
265
2710
289
292
304
3120
329
3312
3426
3515
362
374
388
394
4022
418
423
433
4417
453
463
478
485
494
35.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.3068181818181818
totalSentences176
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences167
matches
0"Then, a sound."
1"Then it was gone."
2"*Just a tall stag moving"
3"Then right to left."
4"Instead, the entity simply…"
5"Only when the lights of"
ratio0.036
78.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences167
matches
0"It wasn't the crisp, clean"
1"She hadn't felt its warmth"
2"She’d come to the Fae"
3"He cannot follow you there.*"
4"It had to be."
5"It was a matter of"
6"You didn’t walk to the"
7"It came from her left."
8"She stopped, her bright blue"
9"She walked on, her left"
10"She stepped across the threshold"
11"It was warmer, heavy with"
12"She touched the Heartstone again."
13"It was tall, impossibly thin,"
14"They didn’t slide."
15"They didn’t vanish without a"
16"She decided to sit, to"
17"She found a relatively dry"
18"You are in a known"
19"Your exit is…* She looked"
ratio0.353
88.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences167
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"It wasn't the crisp, clean"
2"Rory pulled her coat tighter,"
3"The Heartstone pendant lay against"
4"She hadn't felt its warmth"
5"She’d come to the Fae"
6"The handwriting was elegant, archaic,"
7"He cannot follow you there.*"
8"It had to be."
9"The thought of him, his"
10"The Grove, with its twisted"
11"A place, the note implied,"
12"It was a matter of"
13"You didn’t walk to the"
14"Rory moved off the main"
15"The world of streetlamps and"
16"The wrongness started there, in"
17"Richmond Park was never silent."
18"Here, there was nothing."
19"A soft, rhythmic *shushing*, like"
ratio0.743
29.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences167
matches
0"*But we were already here.*"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory could make out the suggestion of long, spindly limbs, a head that seemed too small, a posture that was all wrong for a human or any animal she knew."
1"As she passed through the oak arch, she felt a subtle resistance, not physical but psychic, a dragging sorrow that tried to cling to her bones."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
78.0922%