| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 41.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1187 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1187 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "resolved" | | 7 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1198 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 6 | | wordCount | 1197 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.504 | | wordCount | 1198 | | matches | | 0 | "not close, but not far" | | 1 | "not a single footstep but a continual, almost meditative shifting, as though something" | | 2 | "Not the soft patient pulse she'd felt earlier, but a sudden hard heat, almost painful against her sternum" |
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| 87.30% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "left that she" | | 1 | "was that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 30.72 | | std | 29.57 | | cv | 0.963 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 84 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 96 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 73 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 91 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 68 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 60 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 56 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 19 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "been made" | | 1 | "being redistributed" |
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| 65.32% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | 0 | "was eating" | | 1 | "were listening" | | 2 | "was imagining" | | 3 | "was beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been to the grove a dozen times now, enough to know its particular rhythms — the way the air cooled as she passed through the ring of oaks, the way the wildflowers held their colours even at night, luminous and slightly too vivid, like a painting attempting to describe a dream." | | 1 | "Not the layered, breathing nothing of the grove at rest, the cricket-hush and the distant owl and the soft percussion of her own heartbeat — but a flat, pressurised nothing, the nothing of a room after a sound has just been made and hasn't finished echoing yet." | | 2 | "Not cool — it was never quite cool — but still, the pulse suspended, as though it too were listening." | | 3 | "She'd checked before leaving — cloud cover all the way in, the forecast had said." | | 4 | "Behind her — not close, but not far — a twig snapped." | | 5 | "It helped the way cold water helped — not by solving anything, just by giving her something else to focus on." | | 6 | "Her eyes, tired from the staring, slid briefly sideways — only for a second, a reflexive adjustment — and when she looked back, the shape was in a slightly different position." | | 7 | "Whatever it was — optical, real, somewhere between the two — it saved itself for the corner of the eye." | | 8 | "Small ones, first — the sound of weight being redistributed on soft ground, not a single footstep but a continual, almost meditative shifting, as though something stood very close and rocked gently in place." |
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| 84.09% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1186 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 69 | | adverbRatio | 0.0581787521079258 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0193929173693086 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 14.26 | | std | 11.85 | | cv | 0.831 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 48.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Just different, the way an" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 55.90% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew the way sound" | | 1 | "She couldn't say exactly how." | | 2 | "They were still standing, still" | | 3 | "She stood still and listened." | | 4 | "She'd come because of the" | | 5 | "It had started pulsing at" | | 6 | "She'd pressed two fingers to" | | 7 | "She moved carefully, though." | | 8 | "She noticed that immediately, because" | | 9 | "She'd checked before leaving —" | | 10 | "She exhaled slowly." | | 11 | "She watched the gap she'd" | | 12 | "It helped the way cold" | | 13 | "She turned back to the" | | 14 | "She looked directly at it," | | 15 | "She stared at it for" | | 16 | "It did not move." | | 17 | "She reminded herself that the" | | 18 | "Her eyes, tired from the" | | 19 | "she said, because silence felt" |
| | ratio | 0.41 | |
| 68.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones were wrong." | | 1 | "Rory had been to the" | | 2 | "She knew the way sound" | | 3 | "Tonight, the stones were wrong." | | 4 | "She couldn't say exactly how." | | 5 | "They were still standing, still" | | 6 | "The boundary markers she'd memorised" | | 7 | "She stood still and listened." | | 8 | "That was the thing." | | 9 | "She'd come because of the" | | 10 | "It had started pulsing at" | | 11 | "A faint warmth against her" | | 12 | "She'd pressed two fingers to" | | 13 | "Rory moved deeper into the" | | 14 | "She moved carefully, though." | | 15 | "That was also the kind" | | 16 | "The wildflowers were open." | | 17 | "She noticed that immediately, because" | | 18 | "She'd checked before leaving —" | | 19 | "An empty patch of grass," |
| | ratio | 0.782 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the pendant was still." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 43.19% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "But as she stepped between the two easternmost oaks at half past eleven, her foot catching briefly on a root she always forgot about, there was a quality to the…" | | 1 | "Not cool — it was never quite cool — but still, the pulse suspended, as though it too were listening." | | 2 | "A shadow, roughly the dimensions of a large shrub, but too vertical, too articulated, too much like a suggestion of a person who did not wish to be perceived as…" | | 3 | "Small ones, first — the sound of weight being redistributed on soft ground, not a single footstep but a continual, almost meditative shifting, as though somethi…" | | 4 | "In the total silence that replaced them, Rory became aware of breathing that was not her own." | | 5 | "It came from her left, from below her eye level, from somewhere very close, and it had the slow cadence of something that had been there for quite a long time a…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |