| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 58.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "deliberately" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1094 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1079 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 3 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1094 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 27.35 | | std | 24.64 | | cv | 0.901 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 68 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 63 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 74 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 28 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "was marked" | | 1 | "been assured" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.143 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been to the grove a dozen times now, enough to know the particular way the ancient oaks arranged themselves at the boundary — the slight lean of the westernmost trunk, the moss that clung to the north-facing stone in a shape that, if you were tired or imaginative, resembled a sleeping face." | | 1 | "The clearing beyond them was full of wildflowers, pale and luminous in the October dark — moonflowers and something white she'd never learned the name of, blooming obliviously as they always did regardless of season." | | 2 | "Warm — warmer than it should have been from body heat alone, but not the pulse-and-flare she'd come to associate with something genuinely wrong." | | 3 | "Somewhere far outside the grove, a fox called — that sharp, almost human shriek that still made her flinch no matter how many times she heard it." | | 4 | "Or something that wore Isolde's handwriting had sent word — a note slipped under the flat door, the familiar looping script asking her to come to the grove tonight, that there was something Rory needed to see." | | 5 | "The heart of the grove was marked by a flat stone — a natural thing, she'd been assured, nothing placed — and she made for it now, using it as an anchor point in the dark." | | 6 | "Lower than low, really — less a sound she heard than a sound she felt, a subsonic tremor that moved up through the soles of her boots and settled somewhere behind her back teeth." | | 7 | "The grove's canopy was dense enough to block most of the ambient glow from the distant city, and what light reached her came from a partial moon and the flowers themselves — that faint, sourceless luminescence that she'd stopped trying to explain." | | 8 | "It might have been wind — would have been wind, if there had been any wind — a long, thin note that rose and then bent, like something trying to approximate a melody it had only heard once and only partially remembered." | | 9 | "A shadow separated slightly from the shadow of the hollow's edge — an inch, maybe two — and then was still again." | | 10 | "Still that unbearable almost-movement, the thing that was somehow worse than a charge or a lunge would have been — the patience of it." | | 11 | "The boundary she'd crossed to enter the grove was simply — absent." | | 12 | "The something in the hollow breathed out — long and slow, a sound like silk pulled across stone — and Rory made herself stand very still and think." |
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| 88.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1069 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.05332086061739944 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018709073900841908 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 12.02 | | std | 11.26 | | cv | 0.936 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 42 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 43.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3516483516483517 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 84.39% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far outside the grove," | | 1 | "Then, at the very periphery" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 73.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew the way the" | | 1 | "She knew all of it." | | 2 | "She'd catalogued it the way" | | 3 | "She couldn't have said precisely" | | 4 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 5 | "It was there." | | 6 | "She let out a slow" | | 7 | "She'd come because Isolde had" | | 8 | "She started across the clearing," | | 9 | "She was halfway across when" | | 10 | "It was low." | | 11 | "It lasted perhaps three seconds" | | 12 | "She turned a slow circle," | | 13 | "She turned back toward the" | | 14 | "It might have been wind" | | 15 | "It came from her left," | | 16 | "She already knew there was" | | 17 | "She reached the flat stone" | | 18 | "She kept her eyes at" | | 19 | "It was not a large" |
| | ratio | 0.367 | |
| 54.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones were wrong." | | 1 | "Rory had been to the" | | 2 | "She knew the way the" | | 3 | "She knew all of it." | | 4 | "She'd catalogued it the way" | | 5 | "She couldn't have said precisely" | | 6 | "The oaks stood where they" | | 7 | "The clearing beyond them was" | | 8 | "The air had done its" | | 9 | "Everything was exactly as it" | | 10 | "Everything was exactly as it" | | 11 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 12 | "It was there." | | 13 | "She let out a slow" | | 14 | "The wildflowers rustled around her" | | 15 | "Rory went still." | | 16 | "The flowers settled." | | 17 | "The sound died, and the" | | 18 | "She'd come because Isolde had" | | 19 | "Something about the pendant's origin." |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "As if something had leaned" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been to the grove a dozen times now, enough to know the particular way the ancient oaks arranged themselves at the boundary — the slight lean of the we…" | | 1 | "She'd catalogued it the way she catalogued everything that made her uneasy: methodically, thoroughly, until understanding blunted the edge of fear." | | 2 | "She started across the clearing, keeping her footfalls soft out of old habit, the habit of a person who had learned that quiet was usually safer." | | 3 | "Still that unbearable almost-movement, the thing that was somehow worse than a charge or a lunge would have been — the patience of it." | | 4 | "She became aware, with the particular cold clarity that came to her when fear burned itself down to something usable, that she could not see the boundary stones…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |