| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 75.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1631 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "quickly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1631 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "lurching" | | 12 | "resolving" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 120 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 89 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1643 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1624 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.31 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | October | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Hearing | 1 | | London | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like something preserved under gla" | | 1 | "quite absence of sound" | | 2 | "ay that groves apparently could" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.609 | | wordCount | 1643 | | matches | | 0 | "no particular edges but" |
| |
| 83.33% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that it" | | 1 | "was that the" | | 2 | "know that stillness" |
| |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 36.51 | | std | 34.95 | | cv | 0.957 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 149 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 101 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 78 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 73 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 73 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 71 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 93 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 75 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 59 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 55 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 51 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 26 |
| |
| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "were made" | | 1 | "been wasted" |
| |
| 3.09% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 237 | | matches | | 0 | "was eating" | | 1 | "was pointing" | | 2 | "was being" | | 3 | "were bending" | | 4 | "was standing" | | 5 | "was telling" | | 6 | "was carrying" |
| |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd touched it through her shirt and felt the pulse of it — rhythmic, almost biological — and known without being able to explain how she knew that it was pointing her here." | | 1 | "That was the first thing she noticed as she stepped between the standing stones — the way there always were flowers here, regardless of season." | | 2 | "The grove was small — perhaps thirty metres across — and she could see the whole of it from where she stood." | | 3 | "She looked down at it where it lay against the front of her jacket — that faint inner glow, the deep crimson of the stone bleeding a dim rose-coloured light through the fabric." | | 4 | "Her left wrist rested against its edge, and she felt the crescent scar brush the stone's surface the way it always caught on things — cuffs, countertops, the corner of a page — a small habitual reminder." | | 5 | "It was a small sound, barely a sound at all, but she was certain of what it was — the kind of soft exhalation made by something that had been holding very still and had let a little of its held breath go." | | 6 | "That was the thing — the thing at the edge of her vision had a shape, a human-ish shape, taller than she would have liked, standing with the particular stillness of something that doesn't move because it doesn't need to." | | 7 | "Her heartbeat was measured and even — she was grateful for that." | | 8 | "The warmth in the stone flared sudden and sharp, bright heat against her palm, and the pendant lit through her fingers like a coal — the crimson of it visible even in her closed fist — and the shadow at the edge of her vision paused." | | 9 | "She kept backing up until her heel found the edge of the standing stone boundary and she felt the change in air against the back of her neck — the city returning, the faint smell of exhaust and damp leaves, the low murmur of the A316 resolving back into itself, London reaching in from the outside to claim her." | | 10 | "Eventually she put her phone torch away and turned and walked back toward the park gate through the dark, and the city came up around her gradually — the orange glow of street lamps, the sound of tyres on wet tarmac, someone's music from a passing car." |
| |
| 94.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1630 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 76 | | adverbRatio | 0.046625766871165646 | | lyAdverbCount | 24 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014723926380368098 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 13.69 | | std | 13.77 | | cv | 1.006 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 30 |
| |
| 52.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "More like something waiting for" | | 1 | "Then stillness again." | | 2 | "Somewhere to her left, something" | | 3 | "Almost uncomfortably hot, and she" | | 4 | "Eventually she put her phone" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 75.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She had told herself that" | | 1 | "She went in anyway." | | 2 | "It had started warming against" | | 3 | "She'd touched it through her" | | 4 | "She'd taken the tube and" | | 5 | "She breathed out slowly and" | | 6 | "she said quietly to no" | | 7 | "She walked toward the centre" | | 8 | "She looked down at it" | | 9 | "She hadn't zipped the jacket" | | 10 | "She hadn't thought to." | | 11 | "She stopped at the central" | | 12 | "She turned her torch toward" | | 13 | "She made herself look away." | | 14 | "She crouched by the flat" | | 15 | "Her left wrist rested against" | | 16 | "She didn't run the torch" | | 17 | "She wasn't sure she wanted" | | 18 | "She was not generally a" | | 19 | "She was generally a person" |
| | ratio | 0.362 | |
| 83.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak trees rose like" | | 1 | "Rory had been here twice" | | 2 | "She had told herself that" | | 3 | "She went in anyway." | | 4 | "The pendant was the reason." | | 5 | "It had started warming against" | | 6 | "She'd touched it through her" | | 7 | "She'd taken the tube and" | | 8 | "That was fine." | | 9 | "The wildflowers were still blooming." | | 10 | "That was the first thing" | | 11 | "Rory swept her phone torch" | | 12 | "The grove was small —" | | 13 | "She breathed out slowly and" | | 14 | "she said quietly to no" | | 15 | "She walked toward the centre" | | 16 | "The pendant pulsed again, stronger" | | 17 | "She looked down at it" | | 18 | "She hadn't zipped the jacket" | | 19 | "She hadn't thought to." |
| | ratio | 0.752 | |
| 95.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "To the grove." | | 1 | "Now it looked like something" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Ridiculous was better than the alternative, which was that the pendant meant what it seemed to mean, and that there was genuinely something waiting for her in t…" | | 1 | "She was generally a person who checked under the bed and opened the cupboard and said well, nothing there then, in a practical voice." | | 2 | "It was a small sound, barely a sound at all, but she was certain of what it was — the kind of soft exhalation made by something that had been holding very still…" | | 3 | "The sound was too controlled, too deliberate in its quietness, as if whatever had made it understood the value of silence and had only just failed." | | 4 | "That was the thing — the thing at the edge of her vision had a shape, a human-ish shape, taller than she would have liked, standing with the particular stillnes…" | | 5 | "An arrangement of tree trunks and darkness that formed nothing." | | 6 | "It moved the way fog moves, a slow decisive drift that crossed from the treeline toward the centre of the clearing, and when she turned her torch directly towar…" | | 7 | "Something that had noticed the same warmth she was carrying and had followed it into the grove, and had been watching her from the moment she crossed the standi…" |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |