Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02Z8EZ1Q1F7TN99N14X39

Run Details

Duration:
10.8s
Cost:
$0.000489
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The scene begins as it always seems to - with my front door getting battered by some drunken lout who couldn't find his way home if it was attached to his arm. Except this time, it's not tonight's pizza coming for a midnight snack. I swing open the door, still holding the cordless phone in one hand and nearly lose my balance as I stumble back into my flat. "Lucien! What the fuck are you doing here?" His golden eyes appraise me clinically, like I'm some specimen under the microscope. "Can I come in, Rory?" He offers me a faint smirk as he leans heavily on his ivory handled cane. "Or perhaps you'd like to continue this drama on your front stoop?" I flinch as the cool night air caresses my face. Shutting the door and flicking the deadbolt home, I turn back to face him. He hasn't moved an inch from where I left him glowering in the hallway, barring my entrance. The memory of his finely tailored suit clings to my mind, perhaps it's the way it accentuates his narrow waist and powerful thighs. Or maybe it's how it sets off his platinum blond hair, freshly slicked back. A stark contrast to those silvery eyes that bore into my soul like lasers. As I step closer, I can't help but notice the subtle changes in his scent. It's still all him - that spicy cologne mixed with gunpowder and male pheromones. But there's something else now. A hint of sulfur and brimstone. "What do you want, Luc?" I ask, trying to keep the tremor from my voice. "You could have died out there tonight. I thought I made it clear-" He cuts me off, slamming the door with his cane. I hear a dull click as the hidden blade springs out. "I'll not have your lecture, Rory. Not now." His words are clipped, vowels sharp. He moves with a quickness that belies his apparent weakness, pushing me back against the wall. My pulse thrums as his body melds to mine. Hard muscle pressing from chest to calves. I can feel every ridge of him through my thin sleep shirt. His voice drops to a husky growl as he boxes me in. "You know why I'm here, Rory. The only thing on my mind is fucking you until you scream my name like a prayer." I press my palms flat against his chest, shoving him back. "Not tonight, Lucien. I can't, not now-" "Don't." He presses a finger to my lips. "Don't give me this twisted view of martyrdom. Believing your sacrifice must come at the cost of pleasure." I can't help the breathy little laugh that escapes me. "A bit of a hypocrite, aren't you, Doctor Moreau? Trying to teach me self-control?" He grunts under his breath and takes a step back, releasing me from his heat. Crossing to the kitchen, he rummages through the cupboards before pulling out the bottle of whiskey I keep stashed away. "You don't want me to stay the night, I gather?" He sighs, turning to face me. I shake my head slowly. "Not until you're not hobbling up my steps, Lucien." He laughs then, short and bitter. "I'll make you regret how soon this night ends, Rory. Count on it."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:46:20.567Z" 2/19/2026, 3:46:20 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount547
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount547
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
53.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences32
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seems to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences41
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords548
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
n/a
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount548
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
59.68% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean32.24
std11.57
cv0.359
sampleLengths
044
133
245
341
451
540
628
751
828
935
1018
1126
1224
1335
1416
1514
1619
83.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences32
matches
0"was attached"
1"are clipped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs76
matches(empty)
3.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences41
ratio0.049
matches
0"The scene begins as it always seems to - with my front door getting battered by some drunken lout who couldn't find his way home if it was attached to his arm."
1"It's still all him - that spicy cologne mixed with gunpowder and male pheromones."
97.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount400
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.0425
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences41
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences41
mean13.37
std5.62
cv0.42
sampleLengths
032
112
225
38
413
520
612
710
814
917
1023
1114
1214
1315
1414
155
166
1715
1813
1910
2011
2114
2216
239
247
2512
2612
2723
2811
297
308
3118
3210
3314
3415
3520
3616
375
389
396
4013
76.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4878048780487805
totalSentences41
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences32
matches
0"I swing open the door,"
1"His golden eyes appraise me"
2"He offers me a faint"
3"I flinch as the cool"
4"He hasn't moved an inch"
5"It's still all him -"
6"I ask, trying to keep"
7"He cuts me off, slamming"
8"I hear a dull click"
9"His words are clipped, vowels"
10"He moves with a quickness"
11"My pulse thrums as his"
12"I can feel every ridge"
13"His voice drops to a"
14"I press my palms flat"
15"He presses a finger to"
16"I can't help the breathy"
17"He grunts under his breath"
18"He sighs, turning to face"
19"I shake my head slowly."
ratio0.656
69.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount25
totalSentences32
matches
0"The scene begins as it"
1"I swing open the door,"
2"His golden eyes appraise me"
3"He offers me a faint"
4"I flinch as the cool"
5"He hasn't moved an inch"
6"The memory of his finely"
7"A stark contrast to those"
8"It's still all him -"
9"A hint of sulfur and"
10"I ask, trying to keep"
11"He cuts me off, slamming"
12"I hear a dull click"
13"His words are clipped, vowels"
14"He moves with a quickness"
15"My pulse thrums as his"
16"I can feel every ridge"
17"His voice drops to a"
18"I press my palms flat"
19"He presses a finger to"
ratio0.781
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He moves with a quickness that belies his apparent weakness, pushing me back against the wall."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"I ask, trying to keep the tremor from my voice"
1"He sighs, turning to face me"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He presses (press)"
1"He sighs (sigh)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.286
74.1133%