Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT04EBGZK5RZMQVFMFQ65VG

Run Details

Duration:
27.1s
Cost:
$0.001043
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the portal, heart pounding as the familiar patter of raindrops gave way to alien sensations. Warm sun stroked her skin, and the scent of rich earth and ripe fruits filled her nose. She blinked in the sudden brightness and took a tentative step into the alien realm. Gently sloping mounds stretched before them, covered in a lush tapestry of vines and flowers, their exotic blooms emitting a sweet perfume.rique pastel fruits dangled from the branches, begging to be plucked and savored. "Blow me down," Stimpy breathed, eyes wide as he admired the vista. "The heavens, but this place is a feast fit for kings!" Nyx, still in shadow form, flitted about, darting into grottoes and emerging from behind boulders with ethereal grace. Every so often, their whispery chuckle drifted on the breeze. "This world... it sings to me," they purred, shadow solidifying into a tall, lithe form near Rory. "Such delicious, pulsing life." Rory shivered at the nearness of their cool presence but nodded. The land thrummed with an energy she felt to her core - a sense of pure, heedless indulgence. "This place... it's addiction in solid form. You can feel it, can't you? The sheer, unabashed hedonism." "Indeed," Nyx whispered, voice resonating with suppressed glee. "Can you hear it?" Rory closed her eyes, letting her senses expand. At first, there was only the susurrus of wind through leaves, the distant burble of hidden streams. But beneath those was a deeper sound, a pulsing, throbbing vibration nearly at the edge of hearing. It pounded almost in time with her heartbeat, and she felt it in her bones, an almost primal hunger. When she opened her eyes, Nyx was studying her, expression unreadable in the shadowy veiling their face. "It calls to your nature, doesn't it? The Heartstone, the core of your desire. You cannot escape who you are." Rory's cheeks flushed hot. She looked away, scanning the landscape. "What do you mean-" A sharp bark cut her off. Stimpy skidded to a halt at the edge of a grove, hands extended, staring at a toppled standing stone. "Lookit! Covered in these squiggly fucker marks!" Rory peered at the stone through the dense foliage. Ancient runes were carved into the weather-beaten surface. She squinted, trying to make sense of the alien script. Nyx drifted closer, shadow eyes narrowing. "Interesting. I sense a resonance..." They trailed off, drifting towards another moss-covered monument. Stimpy followed eagerly, tugging at trailing vines. "C'mon, it's like a fuckin' Lost treasure chore in here!" Rory followed hesitantly. Each stone seemed to whisper secrets, giving off an almost electrical tingle. She felt her unease growing with every step. The hunger gnawing at the edge of her senses intensified - but it was becoming... pointed. Focusing almost on... something. A sudden nicker made them all freeze. From a clearing ahead emerged a horse... no, something equine but also avian in shape. Glossy ebony plumage coated its long neck and legs, and a magnificent crest of feathers adorned its head. It regarded them with eyes like molten gold. "Aw fuck," Stimpy breathed. "That's a-" He was cut off as a second creature, its brother, sidled in behind them. The birds pinned them between the two with a calm, almost lazy panache. "Oh no," Rory whispered, recognizing the meaning of the silhouettes in Stimpy's words. "Those are not just Roc. Those are the Roc." The pair of birds made one eerie, guttural sound, the equine version of a growl. It chilled Rory to her bones. She remembered the stories too well... She glanced at Stimpy, trying to read his intentions, but his eyes were glazed with a fear she knew too well. "Steady on," she hissed. "Don't spook 'em." Nyx shifted, shadows resolving into solid form for a moment. "The Roc are said to carry their prey to their eyries... to consume them piece by piece. It is a slow death and a family pleasure..." "You're not helpin', mate," Stimpy snapped, eyes darting between birds as they began to creep forward. The roc in front opened their massive beak and belched a gust of wind, ruffling Stimpy's hair... ...which set his nose twitching... Rory's heart stuttered. She knew that look. It was inches from them shifting into... He quivered, hoof scraping at the ground. "Blow me down," Stimpy rasped... and then he was charging at the nearest Roc head-on, sending it scrambling backwards. The other hedge forward, eyes blazing. "Bollocks!" Rory hissed, heart pounding. "Nyx-" The shadow destabilized. "I cannot... I will not harm them." "Fine. Fine. Could you just... keep 'em distracted?" Rory shot back, already moving toward Stimpy. As she closed the distance, the Roc nearest her focused, beak parting, and a shriek tore from its throat... and Rory's mind fogged with a rush of intoxicating hunger. Delicious smells filled the air, the scent of within the Roc's beak, the flavor of the Roc's flesh and the weight of its meal in her belly....and something else... She stuttered to a halt, shaking her head. What the fuck? Overstimulated senses overwhelmed her; she stumbled, vision whiting out. Twinges shot from every nerve as phantom hunger cramped her insides... the taste of living flesh... so REAL... With a herculean effort, Rory shook it off. The hungry mirage parted, leaving the Roc shrieking and confused. They swept past her, their talons slicing through the air... Stimpy stood frozen, eyes glassy, shaking his head. Rory seized his arm, hauling him to the side... Incandescent pain exploding through her arm, spinning her around as the Roc's claws raked her suit. She fell, screaming as the bird loomed above her, its eyes burning into her flesh, shrieking in her mind... ...to feast... to devour... to... "ENOUGH!" The power in the Fae-blessed blade lashed out, slamming into the Roc's chest... jolting it back with a ragged, confused cry as the magic wove through its mind, clearing the mental fog. The Roc shrieked and clawed at the air as it stumbled back. Rory pressed herself up, weapon in front, breathing hard, her blood singing with the hungry adrenaline. Stimpy stood at her back, shaking his head in stark relief. "That's seven more years of bad luck," he croaked. "Let's just... get the fuck out of here," Rory prayed... and ran. They vaulted over the mounds, back through the trees, the Roc trilling in confusion below. Rory didn't stop until the portal was in sight by the stream... Stimpy collapsed behind her, gasping, as Nyx drifted beside her. They were smiling faintly, movement almost... blurry in places... "As you can see," Nyx rasped, that resonance in their voice stronger than ever. "DYMAS is... a formidable place." The realization jolted through Rory. She looked back at the darkening landscape... the translucent Roc outlined by the purpling sky as they drifted off... and the stand of standing stones... and she drew in a shuddering breath... and understood... That pulsing, that hunger, that overwhelming MISSING... grew from the ground... and its veins TERMINAL towards... an object in the grove... something... waiting...
created_at"2026-02-19T03:47:08.793Z" 2/19/2026, 3:47:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"eagerly"
count1
2
adverb"hesitantly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"eagerly"
2"hesitantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pounding"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"sense of"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"desire"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"chilled"
count1
10
word"resolving"
count1
11
word"quivered"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"loomed"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"familiar"
2"tapestry"
3"sense of"
4"unreadable"
5"desire"
6"scanning"
7"resonance"
8"whisper"
9"chilled"
10"resolving"
11"quivered"
12"weight"
13"loomed"
14"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences106
matches
0"g in confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1174
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount987
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Stimpy"
discoveredNames
Nyx7
Rory19
Stimpy13
Roc10
Fae-blessed1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Stimpy"
3"Roc"
places
0"Fae-blessed"
globalScore0.537
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1174
matches(empty)
84.02% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"knew that look"
1"rasped, that resonance"
2"pulsing, that hunger"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean26.09
std13.95
cv0.535
sampleLengths
050
134
223
328
421
529
617
712
861
937
1014
1125
127
1327
1411
1515
1610
1743
1848
1933
2022
2127
2228
2336
2416
2517
265
2714
2832
296
3010
3115
3258
3338
3445
3535
365
3733
3839
399
4027
4131
4219
4339
4423
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"were carved"
1"were glazed"
95.29% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was studying"
1"was charging"
2"were smiling"
72.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences121
ratio0.025
matches
0"The land thrummed with an energy she felt to her core - a sense of pure, heedless indulgence."
1"The hunger gnawing at the edge of her senses intensified - but it was becoming..."
2"Overstimulated senses overwhelmed her; she stumbled, vision whiting out."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount989
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028311425682507583
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006066734074823054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean9.7
std6.23
cv0.642
sampleLengths
018
117
215
334
412
511
618
710
817
94
1011
1118
1217
138
144
158
1617
1717
1819
1917
2020
214
226
234
246
2519
267
279
288
2910
306
315
328
337
3410
353
3612
378
3815
391
403
411
427
437
448
4518
468
474
4816
4913
78.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.49586776859504134
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners60
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Gently sloping mounds stretched before"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences91
matches
0"She blinked in the sudden"
1"they purred, shadow solidifying into"
2"It pounded almost in time"
3"She looked away, scanning the"
4"She squinted, trying to make"
5"They trailed off, drifting towards"
6"She felt her unease growing"
7"It regarded them with eyes"
8"He was cut off as"
9"It chilled Rory to her"
10"She remembered the stories too"
11"She glanced at Stimpy, trying"
12"She knew that look."
13"It was inches from them"
14"He quivered, hoof scraping at"
15"She stuttered to a halt,"
16"They swept past her, their"
17"She fell, screaming as the"
18"They vaulted over the mounds,"
19"They were smiling faintly, movement"
ratio0.231
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rory stepped through the portal,"
1"She blinked in the sudden"
2"Nyx, still in shadow form,"
3"Every so often, their whispery"
4"they purred, shadow solidifying into"
5"Rory shivered at the nearness"
6"The land thrummed with an"
7"Nyx whispered, voice resonating with"
8"Rory closed her eyes, letting"
9"It pounded almost in time"
10"Rory's cheeks flushed hot."
11"She looked away, scanning the"
12"A sharp bark cut her"
13"Rory peered at the stone"
14"She squinted, trying to make"
15"Nyx drifted closer, shadow eyes"
16"They trailed off, drifting towards"
17"Rory followed hesitantly."
18"Each stone seemed to whisper"
19"She felt her unease growing"
ratio0.67
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Incandescent pain exploding through her arm, spinning her around as the Roc's claws raked her suit."
1"She fell, screaming as the bird loomed above her, its eyes burning into her flesh, shrieking in her mind..."
2"jolting it back with a ragged, confused cry as the magic wove through its mind, clearing the mental fog."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Stimpy breathed, eyes wide as he admired the vista"
1"they purred, shadow solidifying into a tall, lithe form near Rory"
2"Nyx whispered, voice resonating with suppressed glee"
3"Stimpy snapped, eyes darting between birds as they began to creep forward"
4"Rory hissed, heart pounding"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Stimpy breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Stimpy breathed (breathe)"
3"Rory whispered (whisper)"
4"she hissed (hiss)"
5"Stimpy snapped (snap)"
6"Rory hissed (hiss)"
7"he croaked (croak)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.533
80.4580%