| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.696 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gleaming" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "wavering" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "velvet" | | 15 | "scanning" | | 16 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.79% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1124 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 912 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Nyx | 7 | | Cautiously | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.787 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 5.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to leak from the shadows themselves" | | 1 | "patterns that seemed to writhe like living flames" | | 2 | "as if breathing had become heavier, every inhale filled with the weight of something ancient and watching" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.89 | | wordCount | 1124 | | matches | | 0 | "Not hostile, but never indifferent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.36% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 35.13 | | std | 17.11 | | cv | 0.487 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers, blooming despite the season, ignited colors impossible in the mundane world—violets that sang with silver, and blues so bright they hurt the eyes when stared at too long." | | 1 | "She caught a glimpse of herself in a puddle there—the reflection distorted, the edges of her black hair melted like smudged ink, her blue eyes pulsating with something unnatural." | | 2 | "The trees arched taller, their branches twisting high into a roiling sky of shifting mists faintly tinged with amber—the warm shade of dusk bleeding into an unseen fire." | | 3 | "The heavy scent of fermented fruit hung faintly, sweet yet rotten beneath it; the place exhaled gluttony, excess, but not cruelly." | | 4 | "For a sliver of a second, she tasted something—sour, metallic, the lingering sting of blood." | | 5 | "From the underbrush, a sound rose—soft, guttural sighs weaving through the branches, almost like voices begging or warning." | | 6 | "She glimpsed shapes—creatures more imagined than real, their outlines slipping beyond the reach of light." | | 7 | "The group passed into a clearing unlike the rest—a circle of twisted vines hung heavy with fruit its colour shifting fluidly between rich golds and deep purples, glowing faintly against the dim world." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 923 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03791982665222102 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015167930660888408 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 15.19 | | std | 7.24 | | cv | 0.477 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 72.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.47297297297297297 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Cautiously, Rory stepped between the" | | 1 | "More a suffocating invitation, an" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught." | | 1 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 2 | "They moved deeper." | | 3 | "It hummed against her leg," | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 5 | "she murmured without preamble" | | 6 | "She clenched her fist." | | 7 | "She glimpsed shapes—creatures more imagined" |
| | ratio | 0.136 | |
| 44.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Dusk settled cold and quick" | | 1 | "A subtle vibration hummed through" | | 2 | "The air changed as Rory" | | 3 | "The usual scent of damp" | | 4 | "Wildflowers, blooming despite the season," | | 5 | "Her breath caught." | | 6 | "Nyx floated there, their silhouette" | | 7 | "Rory flicked her gaze over" | | 8 | "Nyx twisted their fingers, which" | | 9 | "The ground fell away suddenly," | | 10 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 11 | "Nyx hovered beside her, voice" | | 12 | "Rory growled, the small crescent-shaped" | | 13 | "The Heartstone pendant around her" | | 14 | "They moved deeper." | | 15 | "The trees arched taller, their" | | 16 | "The heavy scent of fermented" | | 17 | "Rory fingered the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 18 | "The slender moonsilver dagger was" | | 19 | "It hummed against her leg," |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Isolde could answer, the" | | 1 | "If the relic pulsed this" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Dusk settled cold and quick across the trees as Aurora Carter pressed forward, her boots muffled by moss that seemed too soft, almost liquid underfoot." | | 1 | "Ahead, the ancient oaks of Richmond Park thickened into a ring of standing stones, their gnarled surfaces gleaming faintly with a sheen that caught what little …" | | 2 | "A subtle vibration hummed through the ground, low and constant, as if the earth beneath them throbbed with its own breath." | | 3 | "Wildflowers, blooming despite the season, ignited colors impossible in the mundane world—violets that sang with silver, and blues so bright they hurt the eyes w…" | | 4 | "The ground fell away suddenly, revealing a shallow hollow where wildflowers thrived in impossible abundance, petals reflecting light that didn’t belong to the s…" | | 5 | "The trees arched taller, their branches twisting high into a roiling sky of shifting mists faintly tinged with amber—the warm shade of dusk bleeding into an uns…" | | 6 | "The slender moonsilver dagger was ice-cold, the metal faintly luminescent in moonlight, which lingered here and there like gentle flickers trapped between branc…" | | 7 | "The atmosphere thickened, as if breathing had become heavier, every inhale filled with the weight of something ancient and watching." | | 8 | "The group passed into a clearing unlike the rest—a circle of twisted vines hung heavy with fruit its colour shifting fluidly between rich golds and deep purples…" | | 9 | "Isolde’s gaze flickered toward the amber sky above, lips curving in something that might have been a warning or a blessing." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory whispered, eyes wide" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory growled (growl)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Rory ordered (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.217 | | leniency | 0.435 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.435 | |