Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT07Q9X6X4EA2AADWTYG60B

Run Details

Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.001289
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora froze, her hand still poised to knock on Eva's door. A jumble of emotions swirled inside her, from anticipation to dread. It had been months since she'd last seen her old friend. Months since everything had gone sideways between them. She drew a deep breath, steeling herself. She needed Eva's help, so it was time face the music. Scowling at her own hesitation, Aurora knocked decisively. The door swung open in a flash. Perched on the threshold, Eva glared up at Rory, her stance rigid. "What the hell, Carter? It's 3 AM. I expect better on my doorstep." Rory tried to suppress a wince at the harsh greeting, but her smile felt wobbly on her face. "I know, I know. I'm sorry, I should have called first. But it couldn't wait." Eva pursed her lips, her gaze narrowing but drifting over Rory. "You look like you've been through the wringer." Rory couldn't stifle a bitter laugh. If she was wearing her exhaustion on her face, that was nothing compared to how ragged she felt inside. "Would you believe '-Hungover in London and Trying Not to Panic Attack?'" Eva quirked one slender brow. "Bad as all that, is it?" Rory nodded mutely. She swallowed hard and her voice emerged in a hoarse whisper. "I need somewhere to bunker down, Eva. Formally petition for sanctuary, if you'll have me." Eva's dark eyes flashed. "Fuck. Alright, get in here." She turned on her heel and stomped towards the back of the cramped flat. Rory followed, an old ache softly thumping against her ribs. This place hadn't changed. It still reeked of incense, cats, and... danger. Eva herself looked much the same too, her skin the color of polished wood and her dreads a tangle of curls. With a sense of priced Championnats, Rory closed the door shut and clicked the three locks. Eva had already parked herself in the armchair, one shapely leg crossed over the other. Rory noticed the way the threads of Eva's dress stretched taut across her thighs and across her chest. Rory swallowed hard. "Hello, my darling." Eva pursed her lips, looking up at Rory with perhaps more than a hint of irritation. "Hello, Aurora." Eva leaned forward, her elbows propped on her knees, as if preparing for a confession. "It's an awful hour to drop by out of the blue, but..." She trailed off, glancing down. Aurora waited, hating the weight of the pause, what it meant. Eva was the first to crack a line, answering Rory's plea for sanctuary. "You declared. I tested. All to find this passion hot and growing, Prisoners by other fates disjoined." Rory exhaled hard, throat tight. "Eva, you aren't..." She shook her head. "...exactly what I expected. If I said I never thought of you, I'd be lying. There was always something between us." Eva kept eyeing the rivulet of sweat beading down Rory's neck. Finally, managing a strained smile, she spoke. "You're in luck, Carter. Sanctuary crashes are my day job. We'll get you patched up good as new." Rory exhaled a wry chuckle. "Sorry for the short notice. I'm not usually one for dramatic entrances." Eva raised one skeptical eyebrow. "This definitely qualifies. Though I gotta say, I never pegged you for a stuntwoman. You sure you're alright?" Rory's wince of physical discomfort was plain. "I've been in fights that were less of a fight, to be honest. Definitely been in cleaner gullets." "I can see that. What happened to you, Rory?" Rory drew in a slow, careful breath. Her hesitation gave her away, unsure how to even begin to explain herself. Eva looked her over, taking in the disheveled state of Rory. She frowned slightly, concerned. "Listen, I'll play nice. I'll ignore your heartbreak and your death riddle. But you should rest." Rory bit back a pained moan as she gingerly lowered herself into the armchair. "I have to admit, as tempting as the pity-party sounds, there's a lot on the line for me." She paused, eyeing Eva solemnly. "You've got real potential." Eva raised an eyebrow. "Oh, have I now?" She paused, looking from Rory to the bottle in her hand and back again. "Drink?" Rory held up a hand. "No thanks. I'm in a bad way today. Maybe another time." She paused, seeing the look on Eva's face. "What about you? You look like you're doing all right." Eva raised her hips in silent confirmation. "Boredom is the only poison I've encountered. I've had almost too much since then. But you?" Rory scrambled to respond in kind. "No, no, work's been great!" Eva leaned forward, young and interested. "Yeah? Good. I'll tell you more." She gestured to Rory's shifting appetites. "What do you think? As for myself, this obsession has caught me, meat." Rory plunged forward, desperate to keep something going with Eva. "That work?" Eva smiled up at Rory's body, careful and precise. She tilted her head, motion still in her hands. "Not finished." Rory held out her hands helplessly. "But I'm..." "Can I be honest? That doesn't sound so bad." Rory frowned. "But you're going to need someone to talk you through it." Eva stared at Rory for a long moment. "You haven't slept a wink, have you?" Rory shook his head. "Not in ages." "Walk me through the worst of what happened to you." Rory took a deep, shuddering breath. "I split with Lucien last night. He caught wind of my -- my moonlight initiative." Eva raised an eyebrow. "So that's what had you preoccupied lately?" "And panicking?" Rory concluded. "More than you can possibly imagine. Though, if I'm being honest, it was always a forgone conclusion. It was only a matter of time before he crossed paths with Runt." "You should pick one fight at a time." Eva reached forward, her hand briefly, almost accidentally brushing Rory's wrist. "Any chance you came here to tell me about it?" Rory froze as the name left her mouth, realizing how that sounded. She backpedaled weakly. "I came here for help, sure, but I..." Eva just gazed at her steadily, as if waiting for Rory to say her piece. Rory flagged her hands. "I don't normally take up space in this kind of hard-road narrative. I mean, I still know what I've lost. What it is to feel whole first, before I understand what is broken -- and then I know the price of a loss, love, that doesn't last forever." "When you say your moonlit activities led to a break-up, what exactly did you - and Runt - get up to?" Rory shivered, trying to run a hair through her fingers and coming up empty. "We... spirited people away to a safe place off grid. Helped avoid a digital surveillance state." Eva paused, an eyebrow raised. "To enable that kind of escape requires a significant network." Rory nodded. "I can get theState to look away." "What does theState give up in exchange?" Biting my lip, I had to think. "I... try not to think about that pa-" Eva sighed, slumping back in her chair. "Fuck. I thought I was done with this. With you." Rory swallowed hard and kept her gaze fixed on the old books piled by Eva's elbows. "I know it seems like I leave a trail of chaos everywhere I go. That I chase trouble like it's a love potion I can't get enough of..." Eva snorted. "Doesn't stop you from drinkin' it down like a cheap shot." She rose slowly, old bones creaking, and padded over to lean against Rory's knee, tilting her head to look up at Rory's face. "You're a walking apology for the fact I haven't found a steady away, yeah. But it's not the same thing - not for me." Rory pouted. "I'm not chasing problems. I'm chasing solutions. And maybe sometimes those problems are solutions too." Eva rolled her eyes. "You're not wrong. But you're also not right." She jabbed a thumb over her shoulder at the door. "I love you because you won't settle for easy answers. But that doesn't mean you won't waltz out of here into danger's arms again." Rory closed the space between them, her hands moving automatically, soothing, massage. "But my dangers and yours are different." Eva cringed. "Right. Because you're the only one whose heart's entirely in the hunt. The game. The prize." She leaned back, studying Rory closely. "You know, there was a time that the only problem in the world was our backs butting heads over something." Rory pursed her lips ruefully, resuming its massage of her chest. "Much as I appreciate the reference, I think I can manage my affections without it." "You don't want to hear what I think about what you've been up to?" "No. Not now, at least. Not until I have more information. More evidence of an outcome." "Fuck. Well, okay. But I reserve the right to give you shit when you get back." "I'd look forward to it." Eva paused for a moment before nodding sharply. "Alright. Let's do this. Fair warning though - it's gonna get weird before it gets better." Rory smiled wryly. "I'd expect nothing less from you." Eva smiled and poured out the drink she abandoned, the wine glinting in the low light. She took a long sip, the two women gazing over each other. "You think we're good to go?" Eva nodded, handing Rory a glass of wine. "Cheers." "One more thing. Tomorrow we'll go back to the restaurant and put everything back in order. I'll be right beside you. We'll rebuild the web together" "Yeah. You saved my ass. I'll return the favor." She turned, the effort of the conversation visibly wearing on her. Rory reached forward, clasping her hands. "I don't know what it is about you," she said, "but the whole thing was your idea. It's you who cooked it. It's your equation." Eva gazed at Rory suspiciously. "Oh? What equation?" "You know the one. The 'if I can do a thing, I might do them along the way' equation." Eva snickered, tapping her on the nose. "Right, it's all my fault." She snorted. "But you're not wrong. You and your schemes do seem to show up no matter how big or small I need 'em to be. Still, even with an equation as complex as that, you know what counts most on the track?" "A steady wager?" Rory winked. "I pay my way." "I knew you'd have the answer." Eva refilled their glasses. "Um. After all, I'd be sorry not to have you at my side. Just listen to the stillness of your heartbeat. Your intimacy." Rory eyes catching her. "I know it all comes down to you, mine." "Good. No matter what comes, we get through it together. No matter the riddles or demons or dangers." Eva's gaze hit Rory's eyeful of a kind, an undeniable understanding. "Things certainly didn't get too easy between us last time we talked. It's on me, so I'll work that field first. Then we talk."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:48:56.262Z" 2/19/2026, 3:48:56 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1838
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"helplessly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"helplessly"
3"slowly"
4"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1838
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"anticipation"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count3
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count4
6
word"potential"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
highlights
0"anticipation"
1"whisper"
2"sanctuary"
3"sense of"
4"weight"
5"eyebrow"
6"potential"
7"glinting"
8"complex"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1840
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, managing a strained smile, she spoke."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions93
wordCount815
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity6.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity10
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva39
Aurora3
Rory50
Championnats1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if preparing for a confession"
1"as if waiting for Rory to say her piece"
2"e conversation visibly wearing on her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1840
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean21.65
std11.01
cv0.509
sampleLengths
041
126
232
333
419
537
611
729
823
943
1016
1133
126
1318
1427
1516
1613
1717
188
1925
2018
2118
2217
2323
2425
259
2620
2731
2841
2923
3034
3123
3211
3331
3412
3520
368
3722
3815
397
4010
4121
4211
4334
4429
4523
4615
4752
4821
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was wearing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences168
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.45% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount815
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04539877300613497
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.026993865030674847
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean10.95
std7.46
cv0.681
sampleLengths
011
111
211
38
47
511
68
77
812
913
1018
1115
1211
138
146
1519
1612
175
186
193
2011
2115
224
2319
2410
254
267
271
2821
2916
3015
3118
323
333
3416
352
3615
3712
385
3911
4013
4117
425
433
444
4521
4611
477
4818
495
50.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.31547619047619047
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners53
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Finally, managing a strained smile,"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences88
matches
0"It had been months since"
1"She drew a deep breath,"
2"She needed Eva's help, so"
3"She swallowed hard and her"
4"She turned on her heel"
5"It still reeked of incense,"
6"She trailed off, glancing down."
7"She shook her head."
8"Her hesitation gave her away,"
9"She frowned slightly, concerned."
10"She paused, eyeing Eva solemnly"
11"She paused, looking from Rory"
12"She paused, seeing the look"
13"She gestured to Rory's shifting"
14"She tilted her head, motion"
15"She backpedaled weakly."
16"She rose slowly, old bones"
17"She jabbed a thumb over"
18"She leaned back, studying Rory"
19"She took a long sip,"
ratio0.239
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences88
matches
0"Aurora froze, her hand still"
1"A jumble of emotions swirled"
2"It had been months since"
3"Months since everything had gone"
4"She drew a deep breath,"
5"She needed Eva's help, so"
6"The door swung open in"
7"Rory tried to suppress a"
8"Eva pursed her lips, her"
9"Rory couldn't stifle a bitter"
10"Eva quirked one slender brow."
11"Rory nodded mutely."
12"She swallowed hard and her"
13"Eva's dark eyes flashed."
14"She turned on her heel"
15"Rory followed, an old ache"
16"This place hadn't changed."
17"It still reeked of incense,"
18"Eva herself looked much the"
19"Eva had already parked herself"
ratio0.932
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"If she was wearing her"
ratio0.011
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"If she was wearing her exhaustion on her face, that was nothing compared to how ragged she felt inside."
1"Eva leaned forward, her elbows propped on her knees, as if preparing for a confession."
2"Rory closed the space between them, her hands moving automatically, soothing, massage."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva reached, her hand briefly, almost accidentally brushing Rory's wrist"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory concluded (conclude)"
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.024
82.7559%