| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1320 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "nervously" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1320 | | totalAiIsms | 45 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "quivered" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "palpable" | | 18 | "glinting" | | 19 | "desire" | | 20 | "trembled" | | 21 | "resolve" | | 22 | "chill" | | 23 | "spectral" | | 24 | "whisper" | | 25 | "echoed" | | 26 | "shattered" | | 27 | "echo" | | 28 | "wavered" | | 29 | "racing" | | 30 | "familiar" | | 31 | "unraveling" | | 32 | "beacon" | | 33 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 93.35% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "d with urgency" | | 1 | "d in fear" | | 2 | "t with dread" |
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| 52.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1300 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.99% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1111 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Boundary | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae-forged | 4 | | Isolde | 8 | | Nyx | 10 | | Seer | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Hel" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Boundary" |
| | globalScore | 0.78 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "warmth that seemed to confirm the grove’s proximity to the Boundary" | | 1 | "as if craving release through carnage" | | 2 | "as if cowering from the growing menace" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.769 | | wordCount | 1300 | | matches | | 0 | "not with birdsong or insect buzz, but something electric, alive" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 27.08 | | std | 18.65 | | cv | 0.689 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.137 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her boots felt lighter—almost buoyant—and the usual London grime faded into the scent of damp earth, wildflowers, and something older, almost forgotten." | | 1 | "The time here warped; Aurora could feel it pulsing, her short breaths punctuated by a silence so thick it swallowed the usual hum of the city." | | 2 | "Here, the ground hummed faintly—not with birdsong or insect buzz, but something electric, alive." | | 3 | "The air quivered with magic—a vivid pulse that seemed both an invitation and a warning." | | 4 | "“The Veil wears thin; hunger sharpens.”" | | 5 | "She hadn’t dared draw it yet—not here—but its cold touch promised defence against more than just worldly threats." | | 6 | "From the edge of the clearing, an unnatural chill spread—dense shadows seeping from the root knolls like spilled ink, twisting and writhing with a life of their own." | | 7 | "Aurora sliced through the nearest mist—a silver arc severing shadow from earth with a crack that echoed like shattered glass." | | 8 | "A voice – distant, breathless, and spectral – slipped through the gloom, carried on the wind like a fading echo." | | 9 | "She staggered, heart racing—the familiar crescent-shaped scar on her wrist burned with sudden heat." | | 10 | "The once soft rustle of leaves twisted into a howl—something vast descending unseen but felt in every shiver of air and pulse of earth." | | 11 | "The air snapped cold and thick with promise—or threat." | | 12 | "Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade closer, breath catching as the amber sky seemed to flicker through the trees in flashes of molten light—portals tearing open between worlds." |
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| 93.71% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1130 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "familiar crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03893805309734513 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020353982300884955 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.68 | | std | 7.77 | | cv | 0.568 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 40 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 64.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.42105263157894735 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the whispered winds cut" | | 1 | "Even the warm glow of" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "They whispered in tones barely" | | 1 | "Her skin prickled, and the" | | 2 | "she asked over her shoulder," | | 3 | "they said, voice like the" | | 4 | "she asked, glancing nervously back" | | 5 | "She hadn’t dared draw it" | | 6 | "she muttered, voice tight with" | | 7 | "She staggered, heart racing—the familiar" |
| | ratio | 0.103 | |
| 17.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as they" | | 1 | "Aurora’s heart thudded, caught somewhere" | | 2 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 3 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 4 | "Aurora’s blue eyes flicked from" | | 5 | "The time here warped; Aurora" | | 6 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes turned" | | 7 | "Carter kept her fingers tight" | | 8 | "Nyx drifted just behind, their" | | 9 | "They whispered in tones barely" | | 10 | "the Shade murmured, voice carried" | | 11 | "Aurora swallowed hard, scanning the" | | 12 | "The woods thickened unnaturally fast," | | 13 | "Here, the ground hummed faintly—not" | | 14 | "Her skin prickled, and the" | | 15 | "she asked over her shoulder," | | 16 | "Isolde’s smile was sly and" | | 17 | "The atmosphere thickened further when" | | 18 | "A low vibration thrummed beneath" | | 19 | "Aurora crouched, fingertips brushing the" |
| | ratio | 0.885 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as they stepped through the crooked arch of the ancient oaken standing stones, their edges glowing faintly violet in the fading light." | | 1 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight across the dark forest floor, silent and delicate as if the very soil refrained from clutchin…" | | 2 | "Carter kept her fingers tight around the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant, the deep crimson gem pulsing a steady warmth that seemed to confirm the grove’s…" | | 3 | "A low vibration thrummed beneath their feet, a resonance that tuned itself to the soft but insistent heartbeat pulsing from the pendant." | | 4 | "Isolde knelt at the opposite arc of stones, her delicate fingers tracing the runes in a silent chant that shimmered through the clearing like tremulous threads …" | | 5 | "The flowers surrounding them shuddered, wild petals blooming wider, dripping with a nectar-scented dew that gleamed iridescent." | | 6 | "The standing stones around them began to vibrate, a deep thrum growing louder, striking a discordant chord that stirred the wildflowers into a frenzy, petals sn…" | | 7 | "Aurora sliced through the nearest mist—a silver arc severing shadow from earth with a crack that echoed like shattered glass." | | 8 | "The forest around them twisted, the brilliant wildflowers folding into tight buds as if cowering from the growing menace." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "pale lavender eyes, her voice a hush woven with riddles" | | 1 | "the Shade murmured, voice carried on a cold breath" | | 2 | "she asked, voice low" | | 3 | "Rory pressed, voice marked with urgency" | | 4 | "she muttered, voice tight with dread and resolve both" | | 5 | "Rory whispered, unease settling like frost in her bones" | | 6 | "Isolde whispered, voice barely above the tremulous wind" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the Shade murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 3 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.321 | | leniency | 0.643 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |