| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn asked aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.326 | | leniency | 0.651 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |
| 87.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1206 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1206 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "quivered" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "maw" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "clenching" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1210 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 742 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.83 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 21 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Compass | 2 | | Eva | 19 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Moving | 1 | | Scrawled | 1 | | Steeling | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Compass" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.085 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 51.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if rippling heat" | | 1 | "not quite human" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 28.81 | | std | 22.76 | | cv | 0.79 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 111 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 89 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 131 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "She took in the place with a hard glance — the scent of damp concrete and something metallic filled the air." | | 1 | "The little brass instrument didn’t move now — its needle quivered, lingering on some invisible point beneath her feet." | | 2 | "Scrawled there in chipped paint was a sigil — a circle with intersecting lines, half-faded but unmistakable to her trained eye." | | 3 | "A sudden clatter came from the opposite side of the platform — a metal can rolling, stuttering to a stop." | | 4 | "“I found something.” She held up a small bone token, twisted and carved — the kind needed for Market entry, she explained breathlessly." | | 5 | "A faint shimmer began in the dark—edges of the air flickered as if rippling heat." | | 6 | "The wall behind them suddenly erupted — the faint shimmer cracked open like a mirror breaking, revealing a warped, flickering space beyond." | | 7 | "Whatever hunted in the tunnel had made its move — and it was waiting." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 739 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sharp behind round glasses," |
| | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.016238159675236806 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010825439783491205 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 12.35 | | std | 7.69 | | cv | 0.622 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 67.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.40816326530612246 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 51.28% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she crouched beside a" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She took in the place" | | 1 | "It was rare for her" | | 2 | "She clipped the patina-green Veil" | | 3 | "Her hands gripped her worn" | | 4 | "Her fingers brushed a splintered" | | 5 | "She wrenched the worn leather" | | 6 | "Her eyes caught a fresh" | | 7 | "She swallowed dry." | | 8 | "She held up a small" | | 9 | "She gripped her baton and" |
| | ratio | 0.154 | |
| 13.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn clicked her" | | 1 | "The sickly yellow flicker of" | | 2 | "She took in the place" | | 3 | "It was rare for her" | | 4 | "She clipped the patina-green Veil" | | 5 | "The little brass instrument didn’t" | | 6 | "The voice came from her" | | 7 | "Eva Kowalski stood a few" | | 8 | "Her hands gripped her worn" | | 9 | "Quinn didn’t look at Eva." | | 10 | "The blood didn’t pool or" | | 11 | "The victim’s coat had no" | | 12 | "Her fingers brushed a splintered" | | 13 | "Eva shifted closer, lowering her" | | 14 | "Quinn’s eyes flicked to the" | | 15 | "Eva’s lips twitched." | | 16 | "Quinn interrupted, straightening" | | 17 | "She wrenched the worn leather" | | 18 | "Time stretched thin like a" | | 19 | "Quinn felt the rough brass" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 81.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hands gripped her worn leather satchel as if it held all the answers." | | 1 | "Quinn folded her arms, her eyes scanning for anything that didn’t belong." | | 2 | "A faint shimmer began in the dark—edges of the air flickered as if rippling heat." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn’s eyes flicked, a yawning maw leading into blackness" | | 1 | "Quinn barked, voice low and rough" | | 2 | "Quinn said, voice steady" |
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| 33.72% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Quinn interrupted (interrupt)" | | 2 | "Quinn whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "Quinn barked (bark)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.186 | | leniency | 0.372 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.233 | |