Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0N1BMC44FJKHNAS07DXJR

Run Details

Duration:
29.7s
Cost:
$0.003156
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air changed the moment they stepped through the braided ring of ancient oak stones. The dull chill of early spring in Richmond Park surrendered to a deep, fragrant stillness, as if they had descended beneath the skin of the world itself. Bosky shadows braided with light twisted oddly, bending and swimming like waves on a dark sea. Aurora stepped forward, the small pulse of warmth from the Heartstone at her throat growing faint but certain. “This... isn’t the park anymore,” Rory said, her voice low, barely above a whisper. Nyx hovered beside her, shifting from corporeal shadow to near invisibility, the faint violet shimmer in their eye-slits flickering with interest. “Not quite,” they murmured, voice soft as wind threading through bare branches, “something old lives here still.” Isolde floated ahead, her silver hair catching dappled shafts of sun that fractured oddly in the shifting light. She left no prints on the mossy carpet below, and the wildflowers bloomed in impossible riotous hues around her feet—violets impossible to name, blues that winked in and out of focus like glimpses of dreams. The air thrummed, a quiet pulse not unlike the steady beat of a heart. Rory reached for the moonsilver dagger strapped at her side, the Fae-Forged Blade cool under her fingers. The grove breathed beneath their feet, shifting, sounding faintly as if it whispered secrets in a tongue only half-heard. “Time can be a trick here,” Isolde said softly, voice like wind-carved glass, “an hour inside may stretch; or vanish.” Rory blinked, scanning the strange convergence of colors and light that danced across a low-hanging branch. Leaves shimmered as though coated in dew made of starlight, each one vibrating slightly, as if alive with something beyond nature’s common ken. Nyx drifted forward until their form solidified beside a towering oak, its bark etched with spirals of runes that gleamed like moonlight carved in stone. Their fingers traced the marks reverently. “These runes,” Nyx whispered, voice fading like a sigh, “bind the Veil here. A threshold—strong, but old.” Rory swallowed, swallowing the familiar tightening in her chest. The Veil. That trembling, invisible membrane separating Earth from the realms beyond. They had chased its weakness before—fought shadows spilling through—but this place felt untouched by earthly decay, older than memory. As they walked deeper, the grove shifted subtly beneath their feet. The air thickened, carrying the warmth of distant hearths mingled with a faint tang of smoke—but no fire could be seen. Sounds of laughter echoed faintly, hollow and far away, as if carried from a revel beyond reach. “This place,” Rory muttered, “it feels alive. Hungry. Like it’s waiting.” Isolde’s pale lavender eyes regarded her carefully. “Gluttony’s touch, you mean. The hunger of Dymas folded in a slumbering peel.” She gestured near a cluster of vines dripping berries that glowed faintly amber in the dim air. “A taste of Hel masked beneath the sweet.” Rory’s gaze locked on the berries. Some pulsed faintly, others hung heavy with a dark, oily sheen. Her fingers twitched, resisting the urge to pluck one. “Could be poison,” she said flatly. Nyx shifted toward her side, shadow rippling like water. “Or a beckon. Both.” That word spiked her skin. The blind hunger of Dymas — Prince Belphegor’s realm of excess — had dragged souls into gyres of endless indulgence. The taste of its orchards, the scent of its vineyards echoed like a call that would never quit. They moved on, stepping over roots that writhed like slumbering serpents beneath the moss. The trees arced overhead, branches weaving a vaulted ceiling shot through with white-gold light. Somewhere unseen, water tinkled—something like a creek, though the sound shimmered oddly, as if flowing in a dream. “I hear it too,” Rory said. “Like water beneath ice.” Nyx melted briefly into a pool of darkness pressed against the bark. “Not everything here is settled,” Nyx said. “Some place between thoughts.” Isolde’s lips lifted in that faint, knowing smile without humour. “A crossroads is not always a welcome one.” Rory’s gaze fell on a carved stone beneath an ancient tree, worn smooth as river rock. The carving depicted a delicate balance: a figure with wings half-fledged, half-shadowed, holding scales that glimmered violet under Isolde’s gaze. “The Shadow and the Seer,” Rory breathed. “What tale is this place weaving?” “An old story,” Isolde said, voice like the rustle of silk, “and one not finished yet.” They pressed forward until the ground flattened into a wide clearing nestled beneath leafless oaks like a cathedral carved of living wood. In the center, a pool lay still as a mirror, utterly black and edged in wildflowers that pushed and burst like flames of blue and violet. Rory took a cautious step forward and saw her reflection shimmer and twist as if the water drew beneath the surface. “There’s something in there,” she said, her eyes narrowing. The pendant at her throat pulsed warm, steady, calling. Nyx’s shape coalesced beside her, faint glowing violet eye flickering. “Eyes shall see, but hearts may not welcome.” Isolde circled the pool, voice low and weaving, “Drink not, nor peer too deep. For what mirrors offer are riddles staring into you.” Rory knelt and reached out a trembling hand, feeling something almost magnetic beneath the water. Fingers brushed the surface and a ripple crawled outward, distorting their reflections into strange shapes: shadow-skinned figures, ghost-limned wings. The hair on Rory’s neck prickled. A shiver slipped through the clearing, and the wildflowers bowed like they sensed a storm rolling just out of sight. Nyx’s form grew solid and protective beside her. “The Veil breathes thinner here. A soft wound in the Boundary.” Isolde’s gaze returned to Rory. “A glimpse, chosen or forced—a passage.” Rory swallowed hard, heart thudding in her ears. Her scarred wrist itched beneath the sleeve, as though something beneath the skin pulsed in warning. “What happens if I reach in?” she asked, voice tight. Isolde smiled like a slanted moon. “Sometimes, what answers you already carry.” Below the surface, something stirred—a coil of darkness trembling and alive, pulling with cold urgency. Rory’s fingers hovered, trembling, thick with both hope and dread. Nyx’s shadow stretched protectively. “Don’t,” Nyx whispered, voice barely there, “some depths are better left untouched.” Rory jerked her hand back. The water stilled, the flowers lifting their heads once more as if nothing had changed. Yet the silence dragged—heavy as mourning. “This place chooses,” Rory said quietly, standing. “The Veil bends—but what waits beyond is always watching.” Isolde moved beside her, smoothing her silver hair. “One step inward shifts the balance. One step outward leaves questions burning.” The grove pulsed softly with ancient life. Somewhere, faint laughter echoed—warm, terrible. Rory bit back a shiver and took a breath. “Then let’s see how far the Boundary will let us go.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
12.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
1"she said flatly [flatly]"
2"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.552
leniency1
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.188
73.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count3
11
word"pulsed"
count4
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"magnetic"
count1
14
word"depths"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"whisper"
4"fractured"
5"scanning"
6"shimmered"
7"etched"
8"traced"
9"familiar"
10"echoed"
11"pulsed"
12"silk"
13"magnetic"
14"depths"
15"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1132
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount918
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Nyx10
Isolde10
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Rory18
Veil1
Earth1
Dymas1
Prince1
Belphegor1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Blade"
3"Rory"
4"Prince"
5"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.52
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if flowing in a dream"
1"something like a creek, though the sound shi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1132
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean25.16
std16.81
cv0.668
sampleLengths
076
114
238
384
419
520
639
731
817
940
1049
1111
1245
1332
1413
1543
1646
1710
1812
1911
2018
2136
2213
2316
2448
2521
2618
2718
2823
2934
306
3120
3219
3311
3424
3510
3612
3725
384
3912
4026
4116
4220
4312
4420
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences89
ratio0.101
matches
0"She left no prints on the mossy carpet below, and the wildflowers bloomed in impossible riotous hues around her feet—violets impossible to name, blues that winked in and out of focus like glimpses of dreams."
1"“Time can be a trick here,” Isolde said softly, voice like wind-carved glass, “an hour inside may stretch; or vanish.”"
2"They had chased its weakness before—fought shadows spilling through—but this place felt untouched by earthly decay, older than memory."
3"The air thickened, carrying the warmth of distant hearths mingled with a faint tang of smoke—but no fire could be seen."
4"The blind hunger of Dymas — Prince Belphegor’s realm of excess — had dragged souls into gyres of endless indulgence."
5"Somewhere unseen, water tinkled—something like a creek, though the sound shimmered oddly, as if flowing in a dream."
6"Below the surface, something stirred—a coil of darkness trembling and alive, pulling with cold urgency."
7"Yet the silence dragged—heavy as mourning."
8"Somewhere, faint laughter echoed—warm, terrible."
95.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03854389721627409
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.02569593147751606
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.72
std6.69
cv0.526
sampleLengths
015
127
216
318
414
521
617
718
835
914
1017
1119
1220
1316
1423
1525
166
1717
189
192
2010
2119
2211
2321
2417
2511
267
2730
288
296
3011
319
326
339
344
355
3620
3718
3814
3914
4018
416
424
4312
447
454
4610
478
4816
4920
67.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42696629213483145
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners38
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Somewhere unseen, water tinkled—something like"
1"Somewhere, faint laughter echoed—warm, terrible."
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences71
matches
0"they murmured, voice soft as"
1"She left no prints on"
2"Their fingers traced the marks"
3"They had chased its weakness"
4"She gestured near a cluster"
5"Her fingers twitched, resisting the"
6"she said flatly"
7"They moved on, stepping over"
8"They pressed forward until the"
9"she said, her eyes narrowing"
10"Her scarred wrist itched beneath"
11"she asked, voice tight"
ratio0.169
9.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air changed the moment"
1"The dull chill of early"
2"Aurora stepped forward, the small"
3"Rory said, her voice low,"
4"Nyx hovered beside her, shifting"
5"they murmured, voice soft as"
6"Isolde floated ahead, her silver"
7"She left no prints on"
8"The air thrummed, a quiet"
9"Rory reached for the moonsilver"
10"The grove breathed beneath their"
11"Isolde said softly, voice like"
12"Rory blinked, scanning the strange"
13"Leaves shimmered as though coated"
14"Nyx drifted forward until their"
15"Their fingers traced the marks"
16"Nyx whispered, voice fading like"
17"Rory swallowed, swallowing the familiar"
18"That trembling, invisible membrane separating"
19"They had chased its weakness"
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The dull chill of early spring in Richmond Park surrendered to a deep, fragrant stillness, as if they had descended beneath the skin of the world itself."
1"She left no prints on the mossy carpet below, and the wildflowers bloomed in impossible riotous hues around her feet—violets impossible to name, blues that wink…"
2"The grove breathed beneath their feet, shifting, sounding faintly as if it whispered secrets in a tongue only half-heard."
3"Leaves shimmered as though coated in dew made of starlight, each one vibrating slightly, as if alive with something beyond nature’s common ken."
4"The taste of its orchards, the scent of its vineyards echoed like a call that would never quit."
5"Somewhere unseen, water tinkled—something like a creek, though the sound shimmered oddly, as if flowing in a dream."
6"The carving depicted a delicate balance: a figure with wings half-fledged, half-shadowed, holding scales that glimmered violet under Isolde’s gaze."
7"In the center, a pool lay still as a mirror, utterly black and edged in wildflowers that pushed and burst like flames of blue and violet."
8"Rory took a cautious step forward and saw her reflection shimmer and twist as if the water drew beneath the surface."
9"Her scarred wrist itched beneath the sleeve, as though something beneath the skin pulsed in warning."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory said, her voice low, barely above a whisper"
1"they murmured, voice soft as wind threading through bare branches,"
2"Nyx whispered, voice fading like a sigh,"
3"she said, her eyes narrowing"
4"Isolde circled, voice low and weaving,"
5"she asked, voice tight"
6"Nyx whispered, voice barely there,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"Rory breathed (breathe)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.483
leniency0.966
rawRatio0.357
effectiveRatio0.345
69.5335%