Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0R2EWX4K6AFVQVRHNTYJV

Run Details

Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.002002
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open with a hesitant groan, swinging inward before Rory could brace herself. Her breath caught as the figure filled the frame—Lucien, impeccably dressed in his usual charcoal suit, the ivory cane tucked neatly under one arm, eyes sharp and unblinking. The amber and black of his gaze burned with the same intensity she remembered, the shadows of their last meeting lurking behind them. She hadn’t expected him, not here, not now, not like this. “Lucien,” she said, voice clipped but steady. She stepped back, the small space between them charged with tension. “What are you doing here?” He closed the door with a soft click, no urgency but no apology either. He didn’t bother to move past the threshold, letting the shadows cling to him like a second skin. “I’m here because you ignored every other door I knocked on,” he said, voice smooth but edged with something sharper. “And because there are things we left tangled up.” Rory’s hands twitched at her sides, fingers itching to reach for the scar on her left wrist. She swallowed hard and fought to keep her expression neutral. “I’m busy,” she said, but the words felt hollow. The cramped room—books, scrolls, the faint waft of curry still clinging to the air—it was her sanctuary, and suddenly it felt too exposed. “You’ve always hidden in busy,” he returned, a ghost of a bitter smile curving his lips. “That’s what made you such a puzzle. And now you shut me out.” She flinched. His words scraped against an old bruise—one she’d tried to cover in layers of carefully maintained distance since their last, fractured goodbye. “Why now?” Rory asked, stepping around him to move further into the flat. She barely acknowledged Ptolemy curled up on the windowsill, watching Lucien with green eyes that seemed to judge. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the cat then back to her. “Because time’s running out. And because,” he hesitated, voice lowering, “I still care.” The room seemed to shrink. Rory’s heartbeat thundered, a tempest she refused to name. Her eyes dropped to the floor, refusing to meet his. “You don’t get to say that. Not after everything.” His jaw tightened, and he shifted his weight on the balls of his feet, the ivory handle of the cane catching the low light. “No, I don’t. But this isn’t about the past, Rory. It’s about what’s in front of us.” She swallowed past the lump rising in her throat. “You don’t know what’s in front of me. You left—” “And I thought I was saving you,” he interrupted with a breath that sounded like regret. “I was wrong.” The vulnerability was something she hadn’t expected from the Frenchman. It made the ache bloom hotter, louder. “Why come now? Why not call? Send a message?” His lips pressed into a straight line. “Because words aren’t enough. I need you to see me. To hear what I’ve kept hidden.” He took the first step inside, collapsing the space Rory had tried to maintain between them. Her breath caught again, and she pressed her back against the kitchen counter. “Don’t,” she warned, voice harder than she intended. Lucien raised his hands slightly, holding the fragile truce between them. “I’m not here to hurt you.” “Then why are you here? To remind me?” “No.” He took another step closer, careful, deliberate. “To ask for a chance. For us to speak. Without the walls we built.” The texture of his words, the drawl of his accent, the way his amber eye softened—it all pushed against every brick she’d laid to guard her heart. Her voice trembled, barely audible. “You made your choice.” His fingers brushed a stray lock of black hair away from her face, thumb ghosting over the sore scar on her wrist. The gesture held years of pain and longing, unspoken apologies woven through. “Not all choices are set in stone.” She pulled back, retreating behind years of cool detachment. “So this is about you? About fixing what broke when you walked away?” “It’s about fixing what could break if we don’t try.” Rory stared at him, the man who haunted her dreams and her daylight hours, for whom the line between ally and threat had always blurred. The flat’s cluttered confines echoed with the silence that neither had dared to breach before. Lucien’s voice softened, edged with a rare tenderness. “Let me stay. Just for tonight.” Her throat tightened. The past hovered between them like a spectre, but part of her wanted to reach out, to close the distance, to let the fractured pieces find shape again. She stepped aside. “One night.” He nodded once, sharply. “One night.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount782
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount782
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"fractured"
count2
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"thundered"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"tenderness"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"charged"
2"tension"
3"sanctuary"
4"fractured"
5"flicked"
6"thundered"
7"weight"
8"trembled"
9"unspoken"
10"echoed"
11"silence"
12"tenderness"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
18.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords777
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount575
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Lucien5
Ptolemy1
Frenchman1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"Frenchman"
globalScore0.978
windowScore1
21.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"eyes that seemed to judge"
1"sounded like regret"
71.30% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.287
wordCount777
matches
0"no urgency but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean24.28
std14.22
cv0.586
sampleLengths
066
111
223
332
429
559
629
724
831
923
1033
1141
1219
1319
1417
159
1639
1721
1817
198
2022
2127
229
2334
247
2522
2610
2740
2814
2931
305
316
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences64
ratio0.063
matches
0"Her breath caught as the figure filled the frame—Lucien, impeccably dressed in his usual charcoal suit, the ivory cane tucked neatly under one arm, eyes sharp and unblinking."
1"The cramped room—books, scrolls, the faint waft of curry still clinging to the air—it was her sanctuary, and suddenly it felt too exposed."
2"His words scraped against an old bruise—one she’d tried to cover in layers of carefully maintained distance since their last, fractured goodbye."
3"The texture of his words, the drawl of his accent, the way his amber eye softened—it all pushed against every brick she’d laid to guard her heart."
98.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount580
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.041379310344827586
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.015517241379310345
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean12.14
std7.16
cv0.59
sampleLengths
015
128
223
311
47
511
65
714
818
920
109
1117
1210
139
1423
1516
1613
172
1822
1913
2018
2110
2213
235
249
2510
269
2724
2817
299
3010
3116
323
3310
347
359
367
3732
3813
398
4011
416
428
438
4414
4527
465
474
4822
4912
58.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.359375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences45
matches
0"Her breath caught as the"
1"She hadn’t expected him, not"
2"she said, voice clipped but"
3"She stepped back, the small"
4"He closed the door with"
5"He didn’t bother to move"
6"he said, voice smooth but"
7"She swallowed hard and fought"
8"she said, but the words"
9"he returned, a ghost of"
10"His words scraped against an"
11"She barely acknowledged Ptolemy curled"
12"he hesitated, voice lowering"
13"Her eyes dropped to the"
14"His jaw tightened, and he"
15"She swallowed past the lump"
16"he interrupted with a breath"
17"It made the ache bloom"
18"His lips pressed into a"
19"He took the first step"
ratio0.644
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences45
matches
0"The door creaked open with"
1"Her breath caught as the"
2"The amber and black of"
3"She hadn’t expected him, not"
4"she said, voice clipped but"
5"She stepped back, the small"
6"He closed the door with"
7"He didn’t bother to move"
8"he said, voice smooth but"
9"Rory’s hands twitched at her"
10"She swallowed hard and fought"
11"she said, but the words"
12"The cramped room—books, scrolls, the"
13"he returned, a ghost of"
14"His words scraped against an"
15"Rory asked, stepping around him"
16"She barely acknowledged Ptolemy curled"
17"Lucien’s gaze flicked to the"
18"he hesitated, voice lowering"
19"The room seemed to shrink."
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She barely acknowledged Ptolemy curled up on the windowsill, watching Lucien with green eyes that seemed to judge."
1"Rory stared at him, the man who haunted her dreams and her daylight hours, for whom the line between ally and threat had always blurred."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, voice clipped but steady"
1"he said, voice smooth but edged with something sharper"
2"she said, but the words felt hollow"
3"he returned, a ghost of a bitter smile curving his lips"
4"he hesitated, voice lowering,"
5"she warned, voice harder than she intended"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he interrupted (interrupt)"
1"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.143
67.1165%