Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0SMZG559949V8QZ1KDY9G

Run Details

Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.001918
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s fingers froze on the stack of takeout menus when the knock echoed sharply against the front door of her flat. Three deadbolts stood between her and the visitor, but the sudden sound made her heart leap. It was almost midnight—no one came to this floor at this hour unless they had no regard for social niceties or happened to belong in her tangled past. She stepped forward, caught in a flicker of unease, and peered through the peephole. The latch clicked, and the heavy door swung open slowly. There stood Lucien Moreau—the Frenchman wrapped in the charcoal suit that always felt like a piece of some strange, untouchable world. His amber eye caught the dim light, shimmering with that unreadable calm, the other, jet black and unblinking. His posture was loose but deliberate, the ivory-handled cane resting casually against one hand, the blade hidden but never far from his sense. His scent drifted faintly—cedar, rain, something sharp beneath it all. “I was hoping you'd forget me already,” he remarked, voice a silky thread weaving tension into the air. She stared for a long breath. The scar on her left wrist itched—a crescent moon in her memory, a faded wound she kept beneath sleeves and reticence. “Lucien,” she said, voice flat and cool. “What the hell are you doing here?” The corner of his mouth twitched upward, a smirk that wasn’t quite a smile. “You’d think I’d show up with flowers or a better excuse.” Her eyes darted past him into the cramped familiarity of her flat—the cluttered kitchen counter, the worn couch sagging from endless nights of silent brooding, the single light swinging low from above. He hadn’t changed; neither had the flicker of a storm that swam in his gaze. “You don’t just turn up at someone’s door unannounced, not after...” she caught herself, biting down the shard of old pain. “Not after what?” His voice dropped, the edge sharper, and it pulled at something tangled in her chest. After everything that had exploded between them last time—the accusations, the silences that stretched like crevices too wide to bridge. Before she’d left without a word, the cold snap of goodbye still bruising. “I left because I needed to get away, Lucien,” she snapped, stepping inside, closing the door with a deliberate click that sounded like finality. “I didn’t want this.” Gesturing vaguely around at the stale dimness, “Whatever this is.” He followed, the sound of his steps smooth and measured, as if weighing the air between them. “And yet, here I am.” “You don’t come to London for the curry houses or the damp nights,” she said, voice rising enough to challenge but steady. “You come for me.” His amber eye caught the faint sheen of tears threatening to bloom in hers, but he hid nothing. “I came because you didn’t answer my calls. Because I’m tired of shadowboxing with memories and ghosts. Because I—” He stopped, the silence suddenly raw and sharp. She folded her arms, turning away, the want strangling the words from her throat. “Save it.” Lucien’s gaze flicked to her wrist, the crescent scar catching the lamplight. “That’s why you never left when I needed you.” Eyes dark and guarded, Aurora shook her head, pain and anger flaring past the surface. “It’s not that simple.” “Nothing about us ever was.” He stepped closer, the distance shrinking until the sharp scent of rain and earth mingled with the faint traces of her perfume. “Why now?” Her voice wavered despite herself, the walls closing in with old ache. He hesitated, cane tapping lightly but deliberate on the wooden floor. “Because I can’t untangle the mess without you. Because I’m tired of the lies we both told ourselves.” “Maybe we’re beyond fixing.” Her fingers brushed the scar beneath the sleeve again, as if grounding herself to reality. Lucien reached out, not touching, just holding his hand in the space between them, the silent offer hanging in the charged air. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” His voice was low, a threadbare confession. “Not to undo the past. Just to start the conversation we never had.” For a long moment, Aurora weighed the ghosts in his eyes against the memories spinning restless in her mind. “All right,” she said at last, the word a fragile bridge over the crackling silence. Lucien’s lips curved, softer now. “Then let’s not waste tonight.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount740
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount740
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flicker"
2"unreadable"
3"tension"
4"measured"
5"silence"
6"flicked"
7"wavered"
8"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences38
matches
0"a flicker of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords733
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount565
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien4
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Gesturing1
Aurora3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Frenchman"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a piece of some strange, unto"
1"quite a smile"
2"sounded like finality"
3"as if weighing the air between them"
4"as if grounding herself to reality"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount733
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean24.43
std14.12
cv0.578
sampleLengths
065
163
233
318
427
514
625
747
821
918
1033
1138
1217
135
1426
1537
168
1716
1821
1919
2027
2114
2229
2319
2422
257
2620
2719
2815
2910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences50
ratio0.14
matches
0"It was almost midnight—no one came to this floor at this hour unless they had no regard for social niceties or happened to belong in her tangled past."
1"There stood Lucien Moreau—the Frenchman wrapped in the charcoal suit that always felt like a piece of some strange, untouchable world."
2"His scent drifted faintly—cedar, rain, something sharp beneath it all."
3"The scar on her left wrist itched—a crescent moon in her memory, a faded wound she kept beneath sleeves and reticence."
4"Her eyes darted past him into the cramped familiarity of her flat—the cluttered kitchen counter, the worn couch sagging from endless nights of silent brooding, the single light swinging low from above."
5"He hadn’t changed; neither had the flicker of a storm that swam in his gaze."
6"After everything that had exploded between them last time—the accusations, the silences that stretched like crevices too wide to bridge."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount572
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03146853146853147
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.012237762237762238
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean14.66
std6.85
cv0.467
sampleLengths
021
116
228
314
410
521
618
723
810
918
106
1121
127
137
1414
1511
1632
1715
1821
1918
2020
2113
2224
2314
2417
255
2622
274
2818
2919
308
3114
322
3312
349
3515
364
3727
3814
3911
4018
4119
4222
437
447
4513
4619
4715
485
495
82.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.54
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences38
matches
0"It was almost midnight—no one"
1"She stepped forward, caught in"
2"His amber eye caught the"
3"His posture was loose but"
4"His scent drifted faintly—cedar, rain,"
5"he remarked, voice a silky"
6"She stared for a long"
7"she said, voice flat and"
8"Her eyes darted past him"
9"He hadn’t changed; neither had"
10"she caught herself, biting down"
11"His voice dropped, the edge"
12"she snapped, stepping inside, closing"
13"He followed, the sound of"
14"she said, voice rising enough"
15"His amber eye caught the"
16"He stopped, the silence suddenly"
17"She folded her arms, turning"
18"He stepped closer, the distance"
19"Her voice wavered despite herself,"
ratio0.632
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences38
matches
0"Aurora’s fingers froze on the"
1"It was almost midnight—no one"
2"She stepped forward, caught in"
3"The latch clicked, and the"
4"There stood Lucien Moreau—the Frenchman"
5"His amber eye caught the"
6"His posture was loose but"
7"His scent drifted faintly—cedar, rain,"
8"he remarked, voice a silky"
9"She stared for a long"
10"The scar on her left"
11"she said, voice flat and"
12"The corner of his mouth"
13"Her eyes darted past him"
14"He hadn’t changed; neither had"
15"she caught herself, biting down"
16"His voice dropped, the edge"
17"she snapped, stepping inside, closing"
18"He followed, the sound of"
19"she said, voice rising enough"
ratio0.868
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"Before she’d left without a"
ratio0.026
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"After everything that had exploded between them last time—the accusations, the silences that stretched like crevices too wide to bridge."
1"She folded her arms, turning away, the want strangling the words from her throat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, voice flat and cool"
1"she said, voice rising enough to challenge but steady"
2"Her voice wavered, the walls closing in with old ache"
3"Her fingers brushed, as if grounding herself to reality"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
76.2394%