Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0TY168YH8KHZKFJD9PJHF

Run Details

Duration:
13.1s
Cost:
$0.002371
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora frowned at the sharp knock on the door, glancing down at Ptolemy who had nestled into a sunbeam by the window, untouched by the commotion. Three sharp raps again. She rolled her eyes, weirdly reminded of knocks on courtroom doors from her law days—urgent, impatient, recklessly confident. No one ever knocked like that here in Eva’s flat. She crossed the room with slow steps, knuckles lifting the chain lock and swinging the door open. The face that greeted her was the last person she expected. Lucien. The faintest smirk curled on his lips, but it didn’t quite reach that splitting amber-black gaze. His tailored charcoal suit clung sharply to the frame of a man who rarely wasted time on trivial visits. “Rory.” His voice was silk wrapped around something darker. “Mind if I come in?” Something tightened inside her chest. She let her eyes drift over his figure, the cane resting against the doorframe with its ivory handle glinting like a ready weapon. “You knew where to find me.” The words fell blunt, none of the warmth circles around them used to hide the awkward ache that lingered. Lucien’s gaze flickered briefly to the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, barely visible beneath the sleeve pushed up, before he stepped past her, closing the door behind with a soft click. “I never forgot where.” His voice lowered, smooth but tense. “You always disappear before I can finish things.” Aurora didn’t move to close the door fully; the three deadbolts stayed out of sight behind the frame as she led the way into the flat. Ptolemy lifted his head, eyes blinking slowly, unimpressed. Somewhere in all this tension, the normalcy of a cat’s disregard made her breath hit a little easier. Lucien took the smallest pause by the cluttered kitchen counter, eyes skimming piles of scrolls and books. “Eva’s been keeping you busy.” “Same as ever.” Rory’s glance flicked to the window where London’s restless sky pressed grey, heavy with rain waiting to fall. “I’m not sure why you’re here, Lucien. Last time we talked, you left with a half-promise and a sharp goodbye.” A flicker of pain trembled through his features, then a shadow folded itself into anger. “You don’t make it easy to come back.” His fingers tightened around the handle of the cane as if drawing strength from the weight. Her hands curved into fists at her sides. “Maybe I didn’t want you coming back.” The words cracked out rougher than she planned. “You left. You walked away when things got messy.” He smiled, dangerously close to something cruel. “I didn’t walk. I was pushed. By you.” His amber eye caught the light, sharp as a blade. “You pushed me away.” “I pushed you because I was scared,” she snapped, stepping forward so the space between them shrank, thick with everything neither had said. “Scared you’d use me like all the others.” The scar on her wrist itched like it had a memory of hurt. “You were supposed to be different.” Lucien’s jaw clenched hard. “You don’t get to choose the damage people leave behind.” She inhaled sharply. “Neither do you.” The silence stretched until the distant sound of footsteps on the street below pierced through—the chaotic symphony of Brick Lane lunch hour. Ptolemy yawned and stretched, unbothered by the storm growing between them. “I’m not here to fight, Rory.” Lucien’s voice dipped, softer but no less intense. “I’m here because you called me last night. The text said urgent. You know I don’t ignore that.” She swallowed the lie trembling on her tongue, the words she hadn’t sent, but should have. “It wasn’t just a simple call,” she admitted with a reluctant nod. “Eva found something — something dangerous. I didn’t want to drag you into it.” He studied her with a careful patience that sliced through the anger. “You always dragged me in the moment I cared enough to stay close.” Her throat seized, but she pressed on. “I’m not that person anymore, Lucien. I don’t trust easily.” A wry chuckle escaped him, and he leaned against the counter, the ivory of the cane tapping softly on the tile. “Trust is a currency I’m willing to gamble with if the stakes are right. Are they?” His gaze pinned her. Rory forced her fingers to unclench and brushed a loose curl back behind her ear. “More than you can imagine. Eva—she’s chased down a lead on something tying to the realm of Avaros.” Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes sharpened immediately. “Demons and London’s back alleys again. You’re right to be wary.” “And you’re right to care if you ever did,” she shot back, bitter. “But unlike you, I have to survive every day pretending there’s no other world while living in the middle of it.” He stepped closer, voice dropping to a near whisper. “What does survival mean if it’s alone?” The air thickened, charged with the weight of that unspoken history—the nights spent tangled in shadows and whispered secrets, the fights that nearly broke them, the almost love that had crackled between two very different worlds. “I don’t want to be alone,” she admitted, voice trembling against the edge of fierce. “But trusting you again means risking everything. I still don’t know if I can.” Lucien’s smile was genuine now, slower, softer. “Then let’s take it slow. Starting with this.” He offered his hand, steady. “One step at a time.” She hesitated, the years of hurt and hesitation warring with the flicker of something she’d almost forgotten—hope. After a breath, her hand found his. Solid, warm. The first promise between them in a long time. “Alright, Lucien. We start with this.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
28.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"silk wrapped around [around]"
1"His fingers tightened around [around]"
2"her wrist itched like [like]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.171
73.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"normalcy"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"jaw clenched"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"symphony"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"charged"
count1
17
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"glinting"
2"warmth"
3"flickered"
4"tension"
5"normalcy"
6"flicked"
7"flicker"
8"trembled"
9"weight"
10"jaw clenched"
11"silence"
12"footsteps"
13"chaotic"
14"symphony"
15"whisper"
16"charged"
17"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords943
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount633
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Eva1
Lucien7
Aurora2
London1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.947
windowScore1
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach that splitting amber-black gaze"
1"as if drawing strength from the weight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount943
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
85.01% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30.42
std13.61
cv0.448
sampleLengths
058
129
235
314
453
549
652
722
841
939
1032
1129
1250
1314
146
1533
1632
1742
1825
1917
2037
2137
2216
2334
2416
2536
2629
2725
2817
2918
306
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs104
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences72
ratio0.069
matches
0"She rolled her eyes, weirdly reminded of knocks on courtroom doors from her law days—urgent, impatient, recklessly confident."
1"Aurora didn’t move to close the door fully; the three deadbolts stayed out of sight behind the frame as she led the way into the flat."
2"The silence stretched until the distant sound of footsteps on the street below pierced through—the chaotic symphony of Brick Lane lunch hour."
3"The air thickened, charged with the weight of that unspoken history—the nights spent tangled in shadows and whispered secrets, the fights that nearly broke them, the almost love that had crackled between two very different worlds."
4"She hesitated, the years of hurt and hesitation warring with the flicker of something she’d almost forgotten—hope."
86.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount639
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"splitting amber-black gaze."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.048513302034428794
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.02034428794992175
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean13.1
std7.33
cv0.56
sampleLengths
026
14
218
310
417
511
61
716
819
99
105
115
1223
1325
1431
1510
168
1726
188
1918
2017
215
2221
2320
2415
2524
268
2715
289
297
3018
314
3223
3321
346
354
3610
373
383
3922
4011
4114
4218
4316
4412
4514
4612
4713
487
4910
77.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4722222222222222
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners34
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Somewhere in all this tension,"
ratio0.02
40.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences49
matches
0"She rolled her eyes, weirdly"
1"She crossed the room with"
2"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
3"His voice was silk wrapped"
4"She let her eyes drift"
5"His voice lowered, smooth but"
6"His fingers tightened around the"
7"Her hands curved into fists"
8"He smiled, dangerously close to"
9"His amber eye caught the"
10"she snapped, stepping forward so"
11"She inhaled sharply."
12"She swallowed the lie trembling"
13"she admitted with a reluctant"
14"He studied her with a"
15"Her throat seized, but she"
16"His gaze pinned her."
17"she shot back, bitter"
18"He stepped closer, voice dropping"
19"she admitted, voice trembling against"
ratio0.449
0.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences49
matches
0"Aurora frowned at the sharp"
1"She rolled her eyes, weirdly"
2"She crossed the room with"
3"The face that greeted her"
4"The faintest smirk curled on"
5"His tailored charcoal suit clung"
6"His voice was silk wrapped"
7"Something tightened inside her chest."
8"She let her eyes drift"
9"The words fell blunt, none"
10"Lucien’s gaze flickered briefly to"
11"His voice lowered, smooth but"
12"Aurora didn’t move to close"
13"Ptolemy lifted his head, eyes"
14"Lucien took the smallest pause"
15"Rory’s glance flicked to the"
16"A flicker of pain trembled"
17"His fingers tightened around the"
18"Her hands curved into fists"
19"The words cracked out rougher"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora frowned at the sharp knock on the door, glancing down at Ptolemy who had nestled into a sunbeam by the window, untouched by the commotion."
1"The face that greeted her was the last person she expected."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"His voice lowered, smooth but tense"
1"she shot back, bitter"
2"she admitted, voice trembling against the edge of fierce"
3"He offered, steady"
35.71% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory’s glance flicked (flick)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.229
69.7800%