Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0TY5QNAA9E8Z7QJHKKNR9

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.003206
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thinned as Rory stepped across the threshold. Her boots barely made a sound on the ground—soft, almost like moss, yet shimmering faintly with a silver tint beneath her feet. They were inside the Grove. Not just any place in Richmond Park, but the hidden pocket Isolde had spoken of, where the veil between worlds thinned until it almost vanished. Nyx lingered close behind, their form a shifting silhouette darker than shadow itself, but somehow, here, even their presence hummed with a strange vitality, as if the dusk here fed on the half-lit air instead of devouring it. Rory could feel the faint pulse of the Heartstone pendant against her chest, a constant warmth bleeding through her shirt. Isolde, gliding ahead with a grace that disturbed neither leaf nor twig, vanished and flickered at times, as if she struggled between corporeal forms. Her pale lavender eyes scanned the surroundings, but spoke only through riddles. “Where winter’s breath and summer’s flame entwine in silent dance, the stones stand guard, the flowers bloom without name.” Rory glanced to the ancient oak standing stones encircling the clearing—gnarled and towering, their bark bleached white, etchings glowing faintly. The air smelled of wildflowers, though the blossoms were unlike any she'd ever seen—petals shifting in colour, from deep indigo to silver-blue, pulsating softly, as if breathing. There was a hum in the air. Not mechanical, nor ordinary wind, but something like electricity curled through the leaves. Every sound outside—the distant call of a crow, the faint rustle of branches—died here, swallowed by a silence both heavy and alive. Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent scar on her wrist, her quiet tether to a harsher past, grounding her. “This place...” Rory breathed out, voice low. Nyx whispered at her shoulder, voice like silk sliding through the dark. “Never seen light hold silence so tightly.” They moved deeper, stepping past a ring of violet-purple wildflowers whose stems glimmered as if wired with starlight. The trees here seemed to bow slightly, branches arching in a protective canopy, but the light slipping through was wrong—neither moon nor sun, but an unearthly glow that painted everything in shifting shades of silver and moonlight blue. Rory caught the subtle warmth of the pendant again. The Heartstone pulsed, faint and steady, like a heartbeat synced with the place itself. Her pulse quickened, unease creeping under the wonder. Something moved beyond the edge of the grove, a glint faster than eye could catch. Rory spun, hand instinctively going to the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt. The blade chilled her palm without fail. The rest of the group paused. Isolde’s voice drifted soft, cloaked in riddle as always. “Fear sits between the quieter breaths of still stones and dancing shadows.” Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying to six-foot-two of midnight and smoke. Their violet eyes flickered like distant stars. “This grove, it’s a threshold,” Nyx murmured, voice barely louder than a breeze. “Between realms, maybe. You can almost taste the Veil’s threads fraying here.” Rory remembered Isolde's warning—that time moved differently here—an hour inside could stretch to days outside. Her mind flickered to the stolen moments she’d traded away, living between shadows and obligations. All of it crystallised in the still air. Ahead, the ground sloped down to a crystalline pool, shimmering with impossible colours—liquid opal, ever-shifting with faint faces that dissolved when stared through for too long. Rory swallowed and bent to touch the water. The cold bit sharp, almost painful, and sudden images locked behind her eyelids: forest fires in slow motion, laughter bleeding through corridors wide and empty, a dozen names whispered in languages she never spoke. Isolde’s sudden quiet laugh broke the reverie. “Water remembers what the earth forgets, if you listen close. But it can mislead, as I do.” Rory sat back on her heels, feeling the weight of centuries press against the moment. She glanced at Nyx, who was watching the edges of the clearing, fading in and out like a flickering candle. “Think it’s safe?” Rory asked. Nyx’s smile was a curve in the dark. “Safe is a language mortals speak to slow the heart. Here, it means something else.” The trees seemed to lean closer, as if eavesdropping, while the wildflowers pulsed brighter. Rory’s breath hitched when a sudden rush of cold whipped past, brushing her hair and tracing fire along her skin. She caught the pulse, the same warmth from the pendant intensifying, flickering in time with the chill. “There,” Rory pointed, voice sharper now. Emerging from the mist, a figure half-formed crouched near the pool’s edge. A shimmer of silver hair, eyes the colour of pale clouds, and a step that made no sound. Isolde’s form wavered as she watched the newcomer. “You are more than expected,” Isolde said, gaze measuring. The figure unmoved, as if carved from mist and memory. “Not always the case,” the voice replied in a cadence older than the stones. Nyx shifted into a crouch, darker tendrils stretching from their hands like liquid ink. “You’re not at home here, are you?” The newcomer’s eyes shimmered with sadness and amusement. “Hel’s hunger reaches farther than you know, shadow-bearer.” Rory’s fingers gripped the pendant tighter. The warmth became fierce, spreading through her chest. The light around the pool coalesced into a shape — faint, flickering like a ghost of flame, revealing a small ornate box submerged halfway in the water. “Is that...” Rory asked. Isolde nodded, voice distant. “A bound relic from Dymas. Gluttony’s signature. Not to be taken lightly.” The thought of Prince Belphegor’s realm, with its endless feasting and snares, twisted Rory’s stomach. The pendant’s pulse turned urgent. “Why here?” Rory demanded, standing. “Why bring this into the Grove?” A silence stretched, broken only by an echo of infinite footsteps not quite heard. The figure clasped their hands around a silver chain trailing from their neck. Their eyes flicked to Rory’s, scanning, weighing. “The Veil trembles as always. Such relics shift the thread, lure the pieces apart—” Nyx’s hand snapped out, the shadows swirling around their fingers into a blade of darkened silk. “Then it’s a wound waiting to be torn.” The stranger nodded slowly. “So, you will bind it, or watch the fracture spread?” Isolde’s gaze turned sharp, almost fierce. “The balance is delicate. Even we do not decide lightly.” Rory felt her heart hammer. The Fae blade at her waist pulsed cold fire. This world slipped between moments, fragile as ice on a wind. Every breath deepened the sense that the Grove was both cradle and cage. She stepped forward, the pendant’s glow steady at her throat. “If we’re here, we fix it,” Rory said without turning to anyone else. “Or die trying.” The grove seemed to hold its breath with her, wildflowers pulsing brighter still, as if aware that something vital had finally been said aloud. “Then follow the stones,” Isolde murmured, already melting into the half-light, footsteps silent on the silvered moss. “And leave no trace but whispered tales.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"tightly"
2"slightly"
3"lightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"could feel"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count4
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"flickered"
count3
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"dance"
count1
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"silk"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count3
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"glint"
count1
12
word"chilled"
count1
13
word"dancing"
count1
14
word"crystalline"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"wavered"
count1
19
word"shimmered"
count1
20
word"stomach"
count1
21
word"echo"
count1
22
word"footsteps"
count2
23
word"flicked"
count1
24
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"could feel"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"flickered"
4"scanned"
5"dance"
6"mechanical"
7"silence"
8"silk"
9"pulsed"
10"quickened"
11"glint"
12"chilled"
13"dancing"
14"crystalline"
15"weight"
16"tracing"
17"chill"
18"wavered"
19"shimmered"
20"stomach"
21"echo"
22"footsteps"
23"flicked"
24"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"d with sadness"
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount962
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory20
Grove2
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde10
Heartstone2
Nyx8
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Emerging1
Prince1
Belphegor1
Fae2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Prince"
4"Belphegor"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae-Forged"
4"Fae"
globalScore0.46
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"something like electricity curled through th"
2"as if eavesdropping while the wildflowers pulsed brighter"
3"not quite heard"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords4.299
wordCount1163
matches
0"Not just any place in Richmond Park, but the hidden pocket Isolde had spoken of"
1"neither leaf nor"
2"Not mechanical, nor ordinary wind, but something like electricity curled through the leaves"
3"neither moon nor"
4"no trace but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"warning—that time"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean27.69
std16.61
cv0.6
sampleLengths
061
158
236
319
447
560
67
719
856
931
1034
116
1221
1319
1425
1538
1668
1724
1835
195
2023
2151
2244
239
2424
2521
2616
2741
284
2916
3020
3111
3234
3314
3424
3514
3616
3738
3810
3916
4024
4124
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"been said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences90
ratio0.089
matches
0"Her boots barely made a sound on the ground—soft, almost like moss, yet shimmering faintly with a silver tint beneath her feet."
1"Rory glanced to the ancient oak standing stones encircling the clearing—gnarled and towering, their bark bleached white, etchings glowing faintly."
2"The air smelled of wildflowers, though the blossoms were unlike any she'd ever seen—petals shifting in colour, from deep indigo to silver-blue, pulsating softly, as if breathing."
3"Every sound outside—the distant call of a crow, the faint rustle of branches—died here, swallowed by a silence both heavy and alive."
4"The trees here seemed to bow slightly, branches arching in a protective canopy, but the light slipping through was wrong—neither moon nor sun, but an unearthly glow that painted everything in shifting shades of silver and moonlight blue."
5"Rory remembered Isolde's warning—that time moved differently here—an hour inside could stretch to days outside."
6"Ahead, the ground sloped down to a crystalline pool, shimmering with impossible colours—liquid opal, ever-shifting with faint faces that dissolved when stared through for too long."
7"The light around the pool coalesced into a shape — faint, flickering like a ghost of flame, revealing a small ornate box submerged halfway in the water."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount979
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.033707865168539325
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013278855975485188
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean12.92
std7.29
cv0.564
sampleLengths
09
122
25
325
438
520
624
712
819
920
1027
117
1213
1322
1418
157
1612
177
1818
1938
209
2114
228
2315
2412
257
266
279
2812
2912
307
3113
3212
3315
3415
358
3626
378
3834
397
4017
4115
4220
435
448
4515
4614
4720
4817
496
56.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her boots barely made a"
1"They were inside the Grove."
2"Her pale lavender eyes scanned"
3"They moved deeper, stepping past"
4"Her pulse quickened, unease creeping"
5"Their violet eyes flickered like"
6"Her mind flickered to the"
7"She glanced at Nyx, who"
8"She caught the pulse, the"
9"Their eyes flicked to Rory’s,"
10"She stepped forward, the pendant’s"
ratio0.153
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences72
matches
0"The air thinned as Rory"
1"Her boots barely made a"
2"They were inside the Grove."
3"Nyx lingered close behind, their"
4"Rory could feel the faint"
5"Isolde, gliding ahead with a"
6"Her pale lavender eyes scanned"
7"Rory glanced to the ancient"
8"The air smelled of wildflowers,"
9"Every sound outside—the distant call"
10"Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent"
11"Rory breathed out, voice low"
12"Nyx whispered at her shoulder,"
13"They moved deeper, stepping past"
14"The trees here seemed to"
15"Rory caught the subtle warmth"
16"The Heartstone pulsed, faint and"
17"Her pulse quickened, unease creeping"
18"Something moved beyond the edge"
19"Rory spun, hand instinctively going"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Nyx lingered close behind, their form a shifting silhouette darker than shadow itself, but somehow, here, even their presence hummed with a strange vitality, as…"
1"Isolde, gliding ahead with a grace that disturbed neither leaf nor twig, vanished and flickered at times, as if she struggled between corporeal forms."
2"The air smelled of wildflowers, though the blossoms were unlike any she'd ever seen—petals shifting in colour, from deep indigo to silver-blue, pulsating softly…"
3"They moved deeper, stepping past a ring of violet-purple wildflowers whose stems glimmered as if wired with starlight."
4"Ahead, the ground sloped down to a crystalline pool, shimmering with impossible colours—liquid opal, ever-shifting with faint faces that dissolved when stared t…"
5"She glanced at Nyx, who was watching the edges of the clearing, fading in and out like a flickering candle."
6"The trees seemed to lean closer, as if eavesdropping, while the wildflowers pulsed brighter."
7"The grove seemed to hold its breath with her, wildflowers pulsing brighter still, as if aware that something vital had finally been said aloud."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory breathed, voice low"
1"Nyx murmured, voice barely louder than a breeze"
2"Rory pointed, voice sharper now"
3"Isolde said, gaze measuring"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory demanded (demand)"
3"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.308
62.1308%