| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1181 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1181 | | totalAiIsms | 39 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "dance" | | 6 | "mechanical" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "glint" | | 12 | "chilled" | | 13 | "dancing" | | 14 | "crystalline" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "tracing" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "wavered" | | 19 | "shimmered" | | 20 | "stomach" | | 21 | "echo" | | 22 | "footsteps" | | 23 | "flicked" | | 24 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 84.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1163 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 962 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 20 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Emerging | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae-Forged" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.46 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "something like electricity curled through th" | | 2 | "as if eavesdropping while the wildflowers pulsed brighter" | | 3 | "not quite heard" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.299 | | wordCount | 1163 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just any place in Richmond Park, but the hidden pocket Isolde had spoken of" | | 1 | "neither leaf nor" | | 2 | "Not mechanical, nor ordinary wind, but something like electricity curled through the leaves" | | 3 | "neither moon nor" | | 4 | "no trace but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 27.69 | | std | 16.61 | | cv | 0.6 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.089 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots barely made a sound on the ground—soft, almost like moss, yet shimmering faintly with a silver tint beneath her feet." | | 1 | "Rory glanced to the ancient oak standing stones encircling the clearing—gnarled and towering, their bark bleached white, etchings glowing faintly." | | 2 | "The air smelled of wildflowers, though the blossoms were unlike any she'd ever seen—petals shifting in colour, from deep indigo to silver-blue, pulsating softly, as if breathing." | | 3 | "Every sound outside—the distant call of a crow, the faint rustle of branches—died here, swallowed by a silence both heavy and alive." | | 4 | "The trees here seemed to bow slightly, branches arching in a protective canopy, but the light slipping through was wrong—neither moon nor sun, but an unearthly glow that painted everything in shifting shades of silver and moonlight blue." | | 5 | "Rory remembered Isolde's warning—that time moved differently here—an hour inside could stretch to days outside." | | 6 | "Ahead, the ground sloped down to a crystalline pool, shimmering with impossible colours—liquid opal, ever-shifting with faint faces that dissolved when stared through for too long." | | 7 | "The light around the pool coalesced into a shape — faint, flickering like a ghost of flame, revealing a small ornate box submerged halfway in the water." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 979 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.033707865168539325 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013278855975485188 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 12.92 | | std | 7.29 | | cv | 0.564 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 56.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots barely made a" | | 1 | "They were inside the Grove." | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 3 | "They moved deeper, stepping past" | | 4 | "Her pulse quickened, unease creeping" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes flickered like" | | 6 | "Her mind flickered to the" | | 7 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 8 | "She caught the pulse, the" | | 9 | "Their eyes flicked to Rory’s," | | 10 | "She stepped forward, the pendant’s" |
| | ratio | 0.153 | |
| 1.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thinned as Rory" | | 1 | "Her boots barely made a" | | 2 | "They were inside the Grove." | | 3 | "Nyx lingered close behind, their" | | 4 | "Rory could feel the faint" | | 5 | "Isolde, gliding ahead with a" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 7 | "Rory glanced to the ancient" | | 8 | "The air smelled of wildflowers," | | 9 | "Every sound outside—the distant call" | | 10 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent" | | 11 | "Rory breathed out, voice low" | | 12 | "Nyx whispered at her shoulder," | | 13 | "They moved deeper, stepping past" | | 14 | "The trees here seemed to" | | 15 | "Rory caught the subtle warmth" | | 16 | "The Heartstone pulsed, faint and" | | 17 | "Her pulse quickened, unease creeping" | | 18 | "Something moved beyond the edge" | | 19 | "Rory spun, hand instinctively going" |
| | ratio | 0.917 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx lingered close behind, their form a shifting silhouette darker than shadow itself, but somehow, here, even their presence hummed with a strange vitality, as…" | | 1 | "Isolde, gliding ahead with a grace that disturbed neither leaf nor twig, vanished and flickered at times, as if she struggled between corporeal forms." | | 2 | "The air smelled of wildflowers, though the blossoms were unlike any she'd ever seen—petals shifting in colour, from deep indigo to silver-blue, pulsating softly…" | | 3 | "They moved deeper, stepping past a ring of violet-purple wildflowers whose stems glimmered as if wired with starlight." | | 4 | "Ahead, the ground sloped down to a crystalline pool, shimmering with impossible colours—liquid opal, ever-shifting with faint faces that dissolved when stared t…" | | 5 | "She glanced at Nyx, who was watching the edges of the clearing, fading in and out like a flickering candle." | | 6 | "The trees seemed to lean closer, as if eavesdropping, while the wildflowers pulsed brighter." | | 7 | "The grove seemed to hold its breath with her, wildflowers pulsing brighter still, as if aware that something vital had finally been said aloud." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory breathed, voice low" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured, voice barely louder than a breeze" | | 2 | "Rory pointed, voice sharper now" | | 3 | "Isolde said, gaze measuring" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |