Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT1049GX9ZA19A81A829V6J

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.003200
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door slammed open before she could reach it. Aurora froze, the battered brass doorknob rattling in her palm as a figure slipped inside. Eyes narrowing, she took a step back and shoved the door closed, locking one deadbolt, then another. Her pulse had no intention of slowing. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, the faint scent of expensive cologne and leather drifting in with him. His tailored charcoal suit was impeccable, hair slicked back so severely it almost banished the platinum from his sharp features. One amber eye gleamed with something unreadable, the black one narrowing in that impossibly calculating way. His ivory-handled cane leaned against the wall, blade concealed, but she knew better than to let her guard down. He gave her a slow smile, the kind that promised storms. “Unannounced, as you wished.” Aurora’s jaw clenched. “Did I?” “You wouldn’t answer messages, calls. Silence was louder than words,” he said, voice low, almost amused. “I thought I might remind you there’s still a debt.” She crossed her arms, heart hammering against the cage of her ribs. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist twitched as if remembering all it had endured. “That debt’s long settled. Don’t mistake silence for surrender, Luc.” “Ah, but silence…is the loudest game of all.” He stepped closer, the shadow of the hallway light dancing on his face. “We were reckless with each other once—wasn’t it extraordinary, in its own ruinous way?” Aurora’s gaze dropped to the straw-coloured floorboards. “You called it destruction. I called it survival.” His grin twisted, sharp and predatory. “Then we’re both lost.” She could smell the tang of his cologne over the faint waft of curry from the kitchen downstairs. She took a slow breath, fighting the urge to shake, to run. Inside her head, the past churned: broken promises, bruised nights, words left hanging like broken chandeliers. “You don’t just walk back in after everything. Not like this.” Her voice was brittle but steady. “Why now? Why Eva’s flat?” She gestured sharply around the cramped room, cluttered with books and scrolls, the dim light catching the dust particles like tiny stars trapped in amber. Ptolemy, a tabby with golden fur and green eyes, watched both of them like a judge from the windowsill. His amber eye flickered as if weighing the cat’s judgment too. “She’s the key. And you, well, you’re the lock nobody else can pick.” Her lips pressed into a firm line. “Don’t drag her into this.” Lucien’s smile faded, replaced by something colder. “I never intended to.” He leaned forward, voice lowering, “But our histories are tangled. You, me, Eva—they all bleed into the same canvas. You’re damn well stuck with me, Malphora.” Aurora’s cool-headed intellect fought its way through the storm. She knew his type: half-demon, half-human, a creature carved in shadows and contracts. He dealt in secrets and whispers, and most of all, in debts. This wasn’t a reunion; it was a reckoning. “Then tell me why you’re really here before I call the police.” She stepped closer, blue eyes sharp. “I’m not the scared girl you left behind, Lucien.” He took a breath, the faintest hint of vulnerability threading through his tone. “Because I’m drowning, and you’re the only thing tethering me to the shore.” His black eye darkened, almost pleading. Aurora blinked, heart stuttering. That familiar pull flared—the attraction she’d fought to bury beneath layers of hurt and distrust. “You—” “Don’t.” His hand curled into a fist at his side, ivory-knuckled cane tapping the floor. “I’m not asking for forgiveness. I’m not offering explanations. I’m here because I have nowhere else to go.” Silence sprawled, thick and suffocating, as the city’s distant sounds filtered through the thin walls. Ptolemy leapt down and padded towards Lucien, weaving around his polished shoes. “You can’t just invade my life and expect me to cave.” Aurora’s voice dropped, but the anger simmered like a live coal. “I’ve rebuilt from the wreckage you left.” “Yet here you are, standing.” His amber eye locked on hers. “More stubborn than I remember.” Cold tension snapped between them, memories sparking in jagged shards: the promises of forever that dissolved into nights drowned in silence; the small kindnesses that felt like betrayals; the fierce grip of what-ifs. Lucien’s hand brushed a lock of her black hair behind her ear, fingers trembling despite the bravado. “I never stopped wanting you.” Pain wound up inside Aurora, tight and sharp. “Wanting isn’t enough.” Her wrist twitched, scar catching the light. “Not for me.” He swallowed hard, stepping back but not leaving. “Then what do you want, Rory?” The nickname cut deeper than a blade. Not ‘Aurora’ or ‘Malphora’—this was the past clawing back. “I want answers.” She crossed her arms again, voice firmer now. “About why you left. About the lies. About what I’m supposed to do with this mess you’ve made.” Lucien’s amber eye shimmered with something almost like regret. “I was running from my own demons, wrong footed in a war you never signed up for.” “Then why bring me into it now?” Her question hung between them, fragile and dangerous. “Because they’re coming for me. For you. For Eva.” He gestured vaguely. “The debts we thought buried. They’re clawing their way back.” Her pulse speeded. “Why tell me? Why not keep me safe and damn the rest?” He shook his head, bitter smile etched in silvered stubble. “Because you don’t know how to hide, Rory. You face things head-on. And if I’m to stand any chance, you have to stand with me.” Ptolemy meowed, breaking the charged silence. Aurora’s gaze flicked to her feline ally. Somehow, even the cat seemed to sense the razor-thin edge they balanced on. Lucien bent down, scratching behind the tabby’s ears gently. “They’ll tear this world apart before I let them take you.” Aurora swallowed, heart drumming a reckless beat. The past bled into the present, words unsaid clawing for release. Fear, hope, desire—there was no neat place to set them, no tidy resolution. Only this fracturing moment, sharp and relentless. “I’m not sure whether to trust you…or to push you back out that door.” His smile was slow, a predatory curve filled with promise and warning. “Good. Keeps this interesting.” She stepped back toward the door, but did not reach for the handle. The faint whisper of boots against wood above them startled them both—a third party, rising from the shadows. Lucien’s hand fell to his cane, grip tightening. “We’re not alone,” he murmured. The locks clicked into place. Aurora’s breath hitched. The night was just beginning.
created_at"2026-02-19T04:02:16.003Z" 2/19/2026, 4:02:16 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured sharply [sharply]"
1"black eye darkened almost [almost]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.15
86.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1110
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"silence"
count6
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"churned"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"flicked"
count1
14
word"desire"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"unreadable"
2"calculating"
3"jaw clenched"
4"silence"
5"dancing"
6"churned"
7"flickered"
8"familiar"
9"tension"
10"shimmered"
11"etched"
12"charged"
13"flicked"
14"desire"
15"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount726
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Aurora10
Ptolemy3
Silence1
Lucien7
Cold1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.811
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if remembering all it had endured"
1"as if weighing the cat’s judgment too"
2"felt like betrayals; the fierce grip of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1095
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean23.8
std14.69
cv0.617
sampleLengths
09
139
273
315
45
526
638
735
815
910
1046
1166
1224
1312
1437
1542
1627
1732
1820
1933
2027
2129
2216
2333
2422
2521
2614
2716
2829
2926
3015
3122
3215
3335
3426
3520
3638
3714
3816
3913
4018
418
425
435
443
455
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences94
ratio0.053
matches
0"This wasn’t a reunion; it was a reckoning."
1"That familiar pull flared—the attraction she’d fought to bury beneath layers of hurt and distrust."
2"Cold tension snapped between them, memories sparking in jagged shards: the promises of forever that dissolved into nights drowned in silence; the small kindnesses that felt like betrayals; the fierce grip of what-ifs."
3"Fear, hope, desire—there was no neat place to set them, no tidy resolution."
4"The faint whisper of boots against wood above them startled them both—a third party, rising from the shadows."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount665
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02706766917293233
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004511278195488722
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.65
std6.24
cv0.536
sampleLengths
09
115
217
37
418
520
616
719
811
94
103
112
1216
1310
1412
1516
1610
1721
1814
197
208
216
224
2318
2412
2516
2617
2730
2819
2911
3013
317
325
337
3430
359
3613
3712
388
3918
409
4113
4219
434
4415
451
4615
4718
4815
4912
62.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners36
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Somehow, even the cat seemed"
1"Only this fracturing moment, sharp"
ratio0.03
34.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her pulse had no intention"
1"His tailored charcoal suit was"
2"His ivory-handled cane leaned against"
3"He gave her a slow"
4"he said, voice low, almost"
5"She crossed her arms, heart"
6"He stepped closer, the shadow"
7"His grin twisted, sharp and"
8"She could smell the tang"
9"She took a slow breath,"
10"Her voice was brittle but"
11"She gestured sharply around the"
12"His amber eye flickered as"
13"Her lips pressed into a"
14"He leaned forward, voice lowering"
15"She knew his type: half-demon,"
16"He dealt in secrets and"
17"She stepped closer, blue eyes"
18"He took a breath, the"
19"His black eye darkened, almost"
ratio0.463
4.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences67
matches
0"The door slammed open before"
1"Aurora froze, the battered brass"
2"Eyes narrowing, she took a"
3"Her pulse had no intention"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"His tailored charcoal suit was"
6"His ivory-handled cane leaned against"
7"He gave her a slow"
8"Aurora’s jaw clenched."
9"he said, voice low, almost"
10"She crossed her arms, heart"
11"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
12"He stepped closer, the shadow"
13"Aurora’s gaze dropped to the"
14"His grin twisted, sharp and"
15"She could smell the tang"
16"She took a slow breath,"
17"Her voice was brittle but"
18"She gestured sharply around the"
19"Ptolemy, a tabby with golden"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He gave her a slow smile, the kind that promised storms."
1"The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist twitched as if remembering all it had endured."
2"His amber eye flickered as if weighing the cat’s judgment too."
3"Cold tension snapped between them, memories sparking in jagged shards: the promises of forever that dissolved into nights drowned in silence; the small kindness…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, voice low, almost amused"
1"He stepped, the shadow of the hallway light dancing on his face"
2"He leaned, voice lowering,"
3"Aurora’s voice dropped, but the anger simmered like a live coal"
4"She crossed, voice firmer now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.05
72.8329%